Zindagi RN ff upd pg 8 note onpg 11 25.7.10

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Shona91

@Shona91

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello guys i am new on india forums and i want to write something.As i am big fan of rn iwould love to write a fiction on them and here goes the first chapter of my fiction zindagi

After the accident of rajveer,naina ne ko to jaise kisi bhi cheej ka hosh na raha ho par phir bhi usne umeed ka daman nahi chora tha abhi tak aur ab uski zindagi ke sirf do missions the pehla apne bhai ko shaheed sabit karna aur dusra apne mentor rajveer sir ko innocent prove karna.uska maanna tha bhale hi uske rajveer sir ab iss duniya main na rahe ho lekin vo unki best cadet jaroor ban kar dhikhayegi.sabhi cadets major nair ki drill ke baad canteen main baithe huye the jab naina ko ek orderly aake kehta hai ke uske liye phone aaya hai naina-hello,naina singh speaking person-hey moti pehchaana naina- oh my god reyan,reyan kapoor reyan-thank god you remember me naina- yaad kaise na rakhti main apne pyaare dost ki aawaz ko kabhi nahi bhool sakti reyan-i know now listen main india aaya hua hoon aur precisely kahoon to ambala ab bol mujhse kab mil rahi ha naina-tum ambala main ho what a surprise ab batao tum kis hotel main ruke ho main tumse milne aati hoon reyan-good hotel legacy room no.453 aur tumhe ek khush khabri bhi deni hai jo milkar hi main tumhe dunga so see yo soon naina- sure bye reyan-bye naina call attend karke waapis mess main aati hai aur coffee pene lagti hai sab usse ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahehote hai jab aalekh bolta hai aalekh-kiska phone tha naina-ek purane dost ka tha ambala aaya hua hai aur milna chahta hai pooja-tune kabhi bataya nahi apne purane dostan ke baaremain naina-bohut kuch aisa hai jo tum log mere baare main nahi jaante phir kabhi detail main bataongi ok guys abhi mujhe bc ki permission leke usse milne jaana hai bye yudi-wait naina apne dost ka naam to batati jao ya wo bhi phir kabhi detail main bataogi naina-uska naam hai reyan and dont worry main jald tum logon ko milwaongi usse phir naina bc ki permission leke reyan se milne chali jaati hai
ok guys agar apko achcha laga ho to hi i will continue so please tell me how it is

index

part-1 pg-1
part-2 pg-2
part-3 pg-2
part-4 pg-3
part-5 pg-5
part-6 pg-8

Edited by Shona91 - 15 years ago

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Rani

@rajeev_myfriend

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow shona bohot aacha fic likha haai tumne but rajveer sir maar gaye haai very sad plz isse tum us manhus dj ke lrl ke tara mat baanna plzzzzzzzzzzzz just bring back rajeev waise yeh reyan kon haai naina dost laagta haai ek aur baat kya yeh rajeev ke tara toh nahin dekhta

anyways i loved the part plz jaldi se cont kar na and send me a pm ok as i am the frist one to post a comment

love u dear (rani)

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Shona91

@Shona91

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Posted: 15 years ago

😭😭😭 sirf ek comment kya itna bura likha hai please batato do main improve karne ki koshish karongi

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Shona91

@Shona91

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev_myfriend
wow shona bohot aacha fic likha thanks haai tumne but rajveer sir maar gayearre nahin yaar agar vo mar gaye o meri fic ka kya hoga😉 haai very sad plz isse tum us manhus dj ke lrl ke tara mat baanna plzzzzzzzzzzzzbilkul nahin banaongi just bring back rajeevsure waise yeh reyan kon haai naina dost laagta haai ek aur baat kya yeh rajeev ke tara toh nahin dekhta nahin bilkul nahin dikhta yeh hamare rajveer sa

anyways i loved the part plz jaldi se cont kar na and send me a pm ok as i am the frist one to post a comment thanks it means a lot to me and i will post the next part soon

love u dear (rani)

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hinal

@hinal60

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Posted: 15 years ago

really nice fic

please continue soon

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Dear

How r u??

This was really gud...But pls bring back Raj soon.

Who is Reyan...???

can u pm me whenever u update..??

Bye

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Shona..........very nice beginning 👏 👏 👏

so who is this Reyan???iss character ke liye tumne kise chuna hai???aur Rajveer ko kab waapas laa rahi ho???pls jaldi continue karo......and if possible pls PM me next time u update......I'm sending u a buddy request........ accept that.

aur pls upset mat ho ki itne kam responses mile hai.........ek hi din toh hua hai...........abhi tak shaayad sab ne dekha nahi hoga ki yaha ek nayi dost shaamil hui hai hamaare beech.......jald hi tumhe bohuth saare comments milenge.........just have a little patience..........yaha ke RN fans unnke fics ke peeche paagal hai...........meri tarah...........so don't worry............and do continue soon...........

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi shona !!!

Nice start...

but who s this rayan???

And wen is Raj gonna come back?/?

and dont worry dear...you'll get responses soon...

And plz send me a pm wen u UD next time...

I'l send you a buddy request , plz accept that....

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Shona91

@Shona91

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Posted: 15 years ago

part-2

Naina hotel legacy pohunchti hai aur reyan ke room ke door pe knock karti hai aur reyan jaise hi door open karta hai naina ekdam se usse jor se hug karti hai

Reyan-naina maarna hai mujhe

Naina- kyon

Reyan – agar tum itni jor se hug karogi to main mar nahi jaonga

Naina-tum bhi na reyan

Reyan- chalo andar aayo aur naina jaake sofe pe baith jaati hai aur reyan paani lakar naina ko deta hai aur naina ke saath sofe pe baith jaata hai aur side hug karta hai

Naina-bohut achcha lag raha hai tumse milke takreeban 2 saal baad hum mil rahe hain kyon

Reyan- haan naina aur mujhe kabhi nahin laga tha ke main India kabhi auonga

Naina-hmm main jaanti hoon tum India kyon nahi aana chahte the kyonki shayad tumhe

Reyan- okkkkkk lets not talk about it I don't want you to become sad

Naina- theek hai aur sunao mummy papa kaise hain

Reyan- bilkul thek hain tumhe bohut miss karte hain

Naina-main bhi unhe bohut miss karti haan

Thodi der ke liye dono chup ho jaate hai aur phir naina ko yaad aata hai ke reyan koi surprise dene waala tha usse aur wo reyan se pochti hai

Naina-so dr.reyan aap mujhe koi surprise dene waale the uska kya hua

Reyan- hmmm ok so surprise yeh hai ki maine aur jass ne engagement karne ka faisla le liya hai finally

Naina-oh my god I cant believe this ultimately tum dono ko akal aa hi gayi congrats

Reyan-yes aur engagemaent Mumbai main hogi aur aur issi mahine ki 4 tarikh matlab 5 din baad hogi aur tum aa rahi ho

naina-lekin reyan main kaise aa sakti hoon ttum to jaante ho mujhe chutti milni mushkil hai aur vo bhi itni jaldi

reyan-tum apne dost se bilkul pyar nahi karti na

naina- aisa nahi haimain

reyan-to tum kuch dino ke liye koi bahana banakar chutti le lena please moti mummy papa and mom dad bhi tumse milna chahte hai naina 2saal ho chuke hain unhe tumse mile hue please unke liye hi aa jao

naina- ok ok baba main aongi aur tum kag ja rahe ho waapis Mumbai

reyan-aaj shaam ko yahan se nainitaal uncle aunty se milne ke baad bas waapis jaaonga

naina-hun ek din aur ruk jaate

rehan- ruk to jaata naina agar Mumbai main mere ek patient ko meri jaroorat na hoti to

naina- jahan bhi patient

reyan-jass chahti thi ke humari engagement Mumbai main ho to main India aaya varna tumhe to pata hai na mera fir kuch din pehle bhi main ambala aaya tha lekin tumse mil nahi paaya kyuonki raaste main mujhe ek insaan mila shayad uska accident hua tha vo bohut buri haalat main tha main usse jahan ke ospital main leke gaya tha lekin operation ke turant baad vo coma main chala gaya

naina- oh I c bohut bura hua uske saath tumhe pata laga ki vo kaun hai

reyan-nahin naina mujhe nahi pata vo kaun hai lekin phir maine usse akela chorna munasig nahin samjha aur maine hospital main baat karke usse Mumbai hospital main shift karwa diya wahan usska better ilaaj hoga

naina- tumne bilkul theek kiya bhagwan kare usse jaldi hosh aa jaye aur vo apni family se mil paaye

reyan-bilkul sahi to bas ab tum Mumbai aa jao bohut masti karenge

naina-sure main aaj hi bc se iss bare main baat karongi

reyan bc

naina-oh sorry brigadier chandok hum unnhe bc bulate hain

reyan-oh achcha waise naam achcha diya hai

naina-ok reyan fir milte hain Mumbai main main late ho rahi hoon

reyan- theek hai jao

reyan naina ke forehead pe kiss karta hai aur naina usse hug karti hai aur chali jaati hai lekin vo yeh nahin jaanti ke zindagi ne usske liye kuch aur soch rakha hai…….

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Shona91

@Shona91

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hello guys maine second part post kar diya hai enjoy 😉mere id confirm nahi ho pa rahi kisi problem ki wajah se jis karan main pm nahi kar pa rahi so please guys i am sorry for this par jaise hi theek hogi yeh problem main pm jaroor kardoongi😭

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