~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt - Page 86

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Posted: 15 years ago
neelu loved the part thanks 4 gettin them married cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Are yeh kaise ho gaya....ek dum se saari baat Sujal ko Fast forward mein samaj mein aa gayi.
Sujal and Kashish have got married...and Sujal is in a hurry for his Suhag Raat. please continue soon/
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
aaj kal sujal jaayada fast hoga .......finally sk are married
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Posted: 15 years ago
wah ! wah ! wah ! sab readers ne to aaj dhamaka kar diya..sab ke bilkul phodu comments ! main khush hoke uchal gai...i was so bimaar with fever & all..comments dekh ke meri adhi bimaari chali gai..so i can help but write a part..so here i go....

love u all ..muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah !!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg neelu mindblowing update. hope they didnt get separate again
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Posted: 15 years ago
oMggggggg this guy is really unbelievable and unpredictable lolz seedhay shaadi kar dali wow aur now suhaag raat ki itni jaldi hai maine tou socha tha k is shadai mein he'll decide to get marry her as woh haar kaam soch soch k karta hai slow slow lolz any ways awesome puri ff mein ab tak mujhe sujal yahin acha lag hai lolzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

part 70

She opens her eyes as the morning light falls on her face.

She could feel the warmth of his arms around her & the nuzzle of his cheek on her skin.

She looks at his face & smiles seeing him rest in a deep slumber.

She couldn't believe that she is no married to him, she is his wife now.

She is the wife of captain sujal garewal, she is not Miss kashish sinha anymore..she is Mrs Kashish Sujal Garewal now.

She is gently moving her fingers around his hair.

He opens his eyes slowly & smiles seeing his beloved's face so close to him.

He wraps his arms around her & gives a kiss on her cheek.

k-sujal main kuch soch rahi thi

he was busy cuddling around her neck.

s-tum bass sochti raho

k-suno naa !...we have to inform our parents naa..humne itna bada decision le liya aur…phone karna chahie naa..

s-haan kar lenge.

k-nahi abhi karenge..bass abhi !

s-ok fine

he has to get up now.

k-pehle mumma ko phone karun?

s-haan karlo.

Kashish looks tensed.

s-kya hua tumhe?

k-pata nahi kya kahenge..ye sab..

s-why are you getting tensed? Humne shaadi hi to ki hai, koi gunaah to nahi kiya naa.

k-hmm

she dials the number.

k-hello mumma

k mom-arre kashish kaisi hai? Banglore thik se pohinch gai naa.

K mom-haan maa thik hoon..aap aur papa kaise hain?

K mom-hum dono hi thik hai beta…shaadi kaisi rahi?

k-wo..shaadi maa..wo shaadi..

sujal whispers to her.

s-come to the point

k-haan maa wo main…main..aur…main..aur…main yahan…

s-just say it !

k-wo..maa..maine shaadi karli hai…

k mom-kya????????? Kisse??????? aise….shaadi??????

k-wo..maa..wo…sujal se..captain sujal garewal yaad hai naa aapko..wo..i..i am sorry maa

k-kashish aise koi…pehle tune chiraag ko…

kashish's face is guilt laden.

Sujal snatches the phone from her.

s-good morning, mam !

kashish sujal ko ankhen dikhaati hai.

She whispers.

k-maa bolo aur ashirvaad mango.

K mom-emm…good morning

s-main sujal bol raha hoon..emm..ab shaadi to gai hai..emm..m..ma….wo..ashirwaad dijie..

k mom-emm…haan..khush raho..

s-ok thanks..will see you soon..ok then.

He hangs the phone.

Kashish is looking at him with full surprise.

s-what?

k-aise koi baat karta hai kya..she is your mother in law now not some army officer.

s-to kya karun? Tv seriel ki heroines ki tarah sar pe ghunghat odh ke ghumun?

She giggles imagining him like that.

k-ab mummyji ko bhi to phone karna hai naa.

s-abhi kiya to

k-tumhareeeeeee ! karo phone !

s-okkkkkkk ! I am calling !

s-hello mumma, maine shaadi karli hai kashish se

kashish ne sar pakad liya

k-ufffffff ! tumhe kuch nahi aata ! aise nahi bolte

s mom- kya? Shaadi? Kashish se? sujal sunn naa…

kashish takes the phone from him.

k-namaste mummyji..main kashish bol rahi hoon

s mom-arre kashish, kaisi hai beti?

k-main thik hoon..aap kaisi hain mumma?..mumma main jaanti hoon jo hua jaldbaazi mein hua..uske lie maafi chahti hoon..par bado ke aashirwaad bina koi bhi rishtaa sampunn nahi hota.

S mom smiles.

S mom-mera aashirwaad hamesha tum logon ke saath hai

K- maa, hum jald hi aa jayenge ghar…main phone rakhun

S mom-haan beta

K mom-bye mumma

S mom–bye beta

Kashish smiles after the conversation with her mother-in-law.

k-arre ! tum phir se so gaye !

s-aur kya kal raat kitna late soye the.

k-ab you should also inform brigadier usmani & chiraag also naa.

s-main nahi kar raha tum karo

k-nahi

s-i am not doing it

k-fine tum brigadier ko phone karo main chiraag ko karti hoon

s-fine

he dials the no.

s-hello brigadier

brig-hello my son

s-i have a good news son. I married her.

Brig-kashish huh !!!!!!!! that's such a good news, this calls for a celebration

s-so it does, we are in banglore we will celebrate together sir

brig-congratulations & best wishes to the newly wed

s-thank you sir

brig- I am happy that you finally made the right decision

s-thanks sir, bye sir

brig-ok..bye !

he throws the phone towards her

s-your turn

she dials chirag's no.

k-hello..emm..chiraag ..emm..main kashish bol rahi hoon

ch-hi kashish..how are you?

k-i am fine..emm..thanks..tumse ek baat..

ch-I knew this..u thought about your decision & you want to accept my proposal naa.

k-emm..no..actually…I got married..

all the enthusiasm in chirag's voice die out

ch-married? To?

k-sujal

suddenly thephone gets cut & kashish's face looks tensed.

s-kya hua?

k-pata nahi phone kaat diya

he also looks slightly tensed

s-hmm

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Posted: 15 years ago
ye kya jis tarah sujal express ki tarah nikla tum bhi express ki tarah update kar di with the scenes....................socha that sujal will get jealous and possessive when kashish said she will talk to chirag par nahi he was too cool..................now whats chirag's problem??????????? does he really have feelings for kashish??????????????kashish saas ke saath aaram se baat karthi hai par apni mumma se bohut darti hai...............and sujal tho robot nikla..................cont soon dear.......take care..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey u fully censored the suhaag raat but the morning was was sweet and yeh sujal na sach mein baat aise he kar raha tah k ki mom se like koi officer hon lolz this guy can't be change and on the other side kashish did it so beautifully nice part but yeh chirag?
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
neelu😊
the up is good😊 but yaar neelu tune na mujhe ek dam dukhi kar diya yaar i was waiting to see the romance between sujal and kashish but u just didnt write anything about it 😡😭😭😭
sujal aur kashish bas litte litte phone kar rahe haai aapne aapne relatives aur parents ko 😊
anyways cont soon and pm me 😊

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