Dooriyon ka sargam - OS - MN

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Hey Guys.

My second OS on MN. Do read and comment




Mayank went on a trip for 2 days leaving Nupur alone at home. Pehle din mayank ne nupur ko bahut miss kiya. Magar usne call nahin kiya.

Idhar bhi nupur mayank ko bahut miss kar rahin hein. Magar usne bhi Mayank ko call nahin kiya, Who dekhna chahthi thi ki mayank call kartha hein ki nahin, Donon ne ek dusre ko call nahin kiya.

Dusra Din:

Ab Mayank se raha nahin gaya. Magar woh nupur se baath nahin karna chaahtha.

Baahon ki Darmiya ''..

--------------------- Mayank Calling -----------------

Nupur Phone utathi hein

Nup: Hello Mayank. Kaise ho

May : ------- Silent --------

Nup: Mayank kuch bolo na . Silent kyon ho

May : Idhar bhi, udhar bhi

Yahan bhi, vahan bhi

Dono taraf lagi yeh aag

Dono taraf jagi yeh pyaas
Hum tum

Hum tum kitne door door door, kitne paas

Kitne door, kitne paas

Door door, paas paas

Woh ye gana sunake call end kartha hein.

Nupur still lost in the song

Nup : haan mayank chahe hum donon ke beech kitne bhi meelon ki
doori ho magar hamesha tum mere dil ke kareeb ho.

Nup: Magar mayank ne baat kyon nahin ki.

Woh sochti rehthi hi hein ki phir se cell bajtha hein,

Baahon ki Darmiya ''..

--------------------- Mayank Calling -----------------

Nupur Phone utathi hein

Nup: Mayank tumne baath kyon nahin ki. Kitna accha song hein na.

May : ------ Silent ------

Nup: Mayank kuch kaho na.
May
: raat din tere khayal aane lage
haule haule mujh ko yun satane lage
mujhe ye kya hua hai kuchh pata nahi
hua hai kuchh magar jo dil yahaan nahi
aahaa aahaa aahaa o aahaa aahaa aahaa

raat din tere khayaal ...

Phir se call cut kardeta hein

Nup: Mujhe bhi tumhare khayal satate hein mayank. Kisi bhi kone mein dekhun tum hi nazar aate ho.

Abhi bhi aisa lagtha hein tum mere baaju mein baithe ho aur mujhe dekh rahe ho'

Baahon ki Darmiya ''..

--------------------- Mayank Calling -----------------

Nup: Mayank ( She slowly whispers his name)

May : ---------- Silent ----------

Nup: Mayank

May: Aur aahista kijiye baatein, dhadakane koi sun raha hoga - 2
Labj girane na paaye honton se, waqt ke haath inako chun lenge


Kaan rakhate hain ye darodiva, raaj ki saari baat sun lenge


Aur aahista kijiye baatein

Aise bolo ki dil ka afasaana, dil sune aur nigaah doharaaye - 2

Apane chaaro taraf ki ye duniya


Saans ka shor bhi na sun paaye, na sun paaye

Nup has a small smile playing on her lips dreaming in her mayankland.

It slowly starts drizzling outside. She stood near the window playing with rain drops.

Baahon ki Darmiya ''..

--------------------- Mayank Calling -----------------

Nup: -------- Silent ---------

May : ---------- Silent--------

Nup: -------- Silent ---------

May: bheegi bheegi (raaton)-(3echo)
aishi barshaton mein
kaisha (lagta hai)-(2echo)


bheegi bheegi raaton mein meethi meethi baaton mein

aishi barshaton mein kaisa lagta hai


Nup: (aisha lagta hai tum banke badal
mere badan ko bhigo ke mujhe (Ched rahe ho)-2 )-2


------------ Call Ended -------------

Nupur ran into garden and felt the rain. She felt the touch of mayank all over her body.She came back and changed her clothes.

Baahon ki Darmiya ''..

--------------------- Mayank Calling -----------------

Nup: --------- Silent --------

May : ----------- Silent --------

Nup: pal pal pal pal har pal har pal
kaise katega pal har pal har pal

pal pal pal pal har pal har pal

kaise katega pal har pal har pal

dil dil dil dil mein machi hain machi

machi hain hulchul hulchul hulchul

kaise katega pal har pal har pal - 2

pal pal pal pal har pal har pal

kaise katega pal har pal har pal

ha ha ha ha haha haha..

la la la la lala lala..


o humsafar lagta hai darr

raat kate na kabhi ho sehar

iss pal mein simte umar

raat kate na kabhi ho sehar

May: I LOVE U Nupur

Nup: I LOVE U too Mayank



Note : Its upto u to think ki gaana mayank ne gaaya hein ya song sunaya hein.

Do comment and criticize.


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lovely OS! do pm me........nxt time nd btw evn I wrote my 2nd OS today on MN.......gr8! itefaak!
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nice OS dear!
do pm me next time
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nice OS and thx alot for the pm
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Lovely OS...
Pls pm when you write next time....
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very nice os
plz pm me nxt tyme u write
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lovely OS prerna ..........do pm me wen you write more ...........
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heyyy dear,
sweet & nice shot
do write more

love
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perfect yaar
it is so cute
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nice one prerana...........
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