Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update hun...enjoyed it.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

actually i finished writing this story long ago..i don't like causing more probs in MaYur's life.So i decided 2 put probs in SaJan's life




😆 okk....but still i say giv equal mayur...coz i read it for them 😔
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow i loveeeeeee da sajan meet loveeeeee how sammy is mesmerized wid dat beauty of gunji awesome start for sajan add me in ur pm list will read sajan part
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Posted: 15 years ago
res....
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hey jasmine....m realy so so so sorry 4 late commenting dear... 😭 pardon my late latifness...

ok chalo ab i will comment abt d part...wow yaar..i luvd d way nups too confessed her feelings to mayu..n mayu so maturedly made her understnd 2 face d reality.. 👏 dat was d strongest part!!! ⭐️ n lyked gunji's entry... 😊

though m a mayurian but like sajan too...so continue dis ff 4 sure yaar..n try 2 give equal space 2 both d couples...i hope u will.. 😊

luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
Edited by AngelArTi1988 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Eternal rain drops Part 9


She asks in a soft voice:Why are you staring at me like this?
Samrat comes to his senses.He smiles:Nothing.
Nupur and Mayank come.
N:Gunjan...you came?
She hugs Gunjan.
S:You know her?
N:She is my sister Gunjan.
Samrat is surprised.
S:She is your sister Gunjan?
N:Ya.
He thinks:Nupur used to talk a lot about Gunjan.But i never knew that she is a fairy.
S:Why did Gunjan come alone?
N:It's her first day in college.Right?So she went to the temple for some puja.I came early to collect some notes.
S:Nupur..introduce me to your sister.
N:Oh sorry.This is Samrat.
S:Hi.
He extends his hand to shake her hand.
G:Namasteji.
That is unexpected by Samrat.He thinks:She is even worse than Nupur.
Samrat grins:Namaste.
N:This is..
G:Mayank.You gave me a clear picture about Mayank.So i understood that it's him.
Mayank and Nupur smile.
N:Today Professor Anand is coming early.It's already 8.30.Let us go.
Samrat..as usual you may be bunking class today also.Right?
Samrat is embarassed.He thinks:This Nupur!She is putting me down in front of Gunjan.Oh!
N:Can you please show the class room to Gunjan?
S:Sure.It's my pleasure.
He takes her to the class room.
G:Thanks.
S:You are always welcome.If you need any help you please contact me.I'm ready to help you always.
Gunjan smiles.

Gunjan can't grasp the lecture properly.
He thinks about Samrat's words.
She goes to Samrat:Can you help me?
Samrat is excited:Sure.
Gunjan shows her text book:Can you please explain this portion?
Samrat is shocked.
He thinks:My God!I never attend classes or study.How will i teach her?If i don't...what will she think about me?
Samrat pretends to have head ache:Ah!
G:What happened?
S:A slight head ache.
G:Oh God!
S:It's ok.Tomorrow morning i will teach you.You please come early to college tomorrow.
G:Ok..thanks.Take care of your health.
She gives BAM to him:Put it on you forehead.Your head ache will go.
Samrat smiles.He is happy as Gunjan cares for his health.
He takes it from her.

Samrat is studying very hard.His mother Satya comes:Samrat!For the first time i'm seeing you working hard like this.hat happened suddenly?Suddenly how did you get interest in studies?
Samrat smiles.He thinks:To impress a girl i have to study mom.I have not studied like this in my life.

Samrat teaches Gunjan.Mayank and Nupur come.They are surprised to see it.They laugh.
M:Gunjan..he does'nt know anything written in the text book.And you asked his help?Very funny.
Samrat is embarassed.He is angry with Mayank:Mayank!
G:No Mayank.He explained it very nicely to me.
Mayank keeps laughing:What?
Nupur:Samrat and studies...no match.
G:Whatever it is..Samrat took the effort to teach me.I'm grateful to him.Thanks a lot Samrat.
Samrat is happy.
S:Who said i don't know anything about this theory?
He explains it to them.
Mayank and Nupur can't believe it.
M:It is a wonder yaar.
N:Really a wonder.When did you start studying?
Samrat smiles:Samrat is always a wonder.
N:You both carry on.
Mayank and Nupur go.Samrat continues teaching.
G:Thanks a lot Samrat.
Samrat smiles:Welcome Chashmish.
G:What?
S:Do you know what makes you attractive?Your spectacles.So i will call you chashmish.
Gunjan smiles.She goes away.Her straight hair is flying in the air.
Samrat tells himself:Well done Samrat.Well done.You have done it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
where is mayur dear?// nyways nice update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
add me to your pm list
i'll comment wen i read it:)

lil busy nowadays!
hope u don't mind:)

will pakka read within 2-3 days...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey jasmine thats a nice update. Samrat is turning out to be all rounder, that sounds good! Keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow an awsome update
sammy is already falling for her
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update jasmine......luved it....😃

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