Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was really sweet part
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i hv updated my reserved post for part 9 on pg 18...gdmrng!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow so sam studied so much 4 d 1st tym in his life!!! n dat 2 seriously!!! 🤣 😆 dis was realy funny yaar... pyar ke liye bechara kitna papad bel raha hain!!! 😆

anyways d story is also proceeding very nicely dear...but do include mayur too..plzzzzzzz... 🤔

luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Jasmine.. nice part.. i wonder if Sam stayed up all night teaching himself so he can teach Gunjan. 😆
Plz could u put a lil bit more of Mayur in plz? 😳
Continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update.........i loved it........cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute update! luved sajan scenes!
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Posted: 15 years ago
simply awesome
mayur were so cute
and sajan were great too
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute part.....samrat calling gunjan chashmish!
his dialogues were good....
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Eternal rain drops Part 10



Music show...
Gunjan is sweating.Nupur is pushing her to the stage.Samrat sees it.
S:Gunjan is participating in the music show?
N:Yes.But she is nervous.
S:Don't be nervous Chashmish.
N:Chashmish?
S:I call her chashmish.
Nupur laughs:Funny.
S:I never knew that Gunjan can sing.I thought she is just a book worm.
Gunjan on the stage.The spot light is on her.Samrat's eyes are fixed on her.
She sings:Yeh dil sun raha hai mere dil ki zubaan
Aye mere humsafar main yahan tu vahan
Yeh dil sun raha hai mere dil ki zubaan..{Khamoshi}.
Samrat is engrossed in the song.He dreams of playing guitar while Gunjan is singing.
After the song,Nupur goes and hugs her.
N:It was so nice.
Samrat runs to her:Hey..Chashmish...you stole my heart through your beautiful voice.
In the first meeting itself i felt that your voice is magical.But i did'nt know that you can sing like this.Great.
G:Thanks.
N:Samrat...did she really steal your heart?
Samrat is embarassed.He thinks:Nupur is taking advantage of my loose talk.
S:Why?
N:I pity you for standing like this without a heart.You may die soon if you have lost your heart.Beware.
Nupur laughs.Nupur and Gunjan walk together.Gunjan turns back and looks at Samrat.He smiles.
G:Why did you ask him like this?
N:Simply.I feel that Samrat is having a soft corner towards you.
G:Oh just stop it Nupur.How can you make fun of me?
N:Gunjan...don't be serious.I was just joking.
G:But this is too much.Afterall you know what has happene to me.
N:I know..but you have started smiling again.Can you deny that Samrat is healing the wound in your heart?
Gunjan keeps silent.

Gunjan and Nupur are going out.
Mayank:Are you guys going by bus?
N:Ya..as usual.
M:Then i will also join you guys.
N:You also?
M:Why not?I want to have fun by travelling in the bus.
Nupur smiles:Ok..
"If you all are going by bus..why should i go by car?I don't want to be isolated".
They turn back.They see Samrat smiling.
N:Ok..you too.Join us.

Nupur and Mayank sit together.Gunjan sits.Samrat sits close to her.Gunjan becomes uncomfortable.She becomes conscious.She removes her glasses and wears it again.
S:Chashmish!You look better with your glasses.
He can't take his eyes off her eyes.
He calls her in a soft voice:Chashmish!
Gunjan looks at Samrat and the bus stops in a hurry.Gunjan's and Samrat's forehead hits each other.
They both say:Sorry.
Samrat smiles.She smiles slightly.
Mayank is holding Nupur's arms.
N:What are you doing?Others will see it.
M:I don't care.
He keeps his arms around her shoulders.Nupur and Mayank smile at each other.

Mayank is sitting close to Nupur:Nupur..i will wait for you at the Prom night party.
N:I'm waiting for the party.
Samrat overhears it and he goes to Gunjan.
G:What is the matter Samrat?
S:Nothing.
G:Ok bye...
She is about to step out of the room.
S:Chashmish.
She turns back.
S:See you at the prom night party.
G:I will not come for the party.
Samrat is shocked:But why?
G:I don't like parties.
S:But please come Chashmish.Otherwise I will get bored.
Gunjan asks in her mind:I was not here before.Did you get bored?
S:Yes,now i realise how boring my life was before your arrival.
Gunjan walks away without saying anything.Samrat becomes dull.

Nupur wears a reddish majenda frock.
She looks at Gunjan:Are you not ready yet?
G:Me?I'm not coming.
N:Why?
G:You know that i don't like parties.
N:But you have to attend tonight's party.
G:No Nupur.
N:You will like the party.You will have a lot of fun in the college party.Trust me.

Prom night...
Nupur enters the party hall.
Mayank is happy.He holds her arm and takes her to the dance floor.
The song 'Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan..'{Khamoshi} is going on in the background.
Mayank and Nupur sway to the enchanting music.
Samrat's eyes long to see Gunjan.His eyes search for Gunjan.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow it was cool
par chota sa thaa
i want moreso update soon
lov it

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