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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Jasmine,
Great part.. so glad she admitted it.. and Mayank is fast.. marriage proposal already.. wow.. but Nupur ne mana kar diya? 😔 So she is an orphan... but i dnt think this will make any difference to Mayank will it? 🤔 I hope not anyways... feeling bad for them both..
Continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

MaYur fans...sorry to tell you guys that from the next part onwards the focus will be on SaJan.But MaYur will also be there.Is there anyone interested to continue reading it?If so,plz let me know.

Eternal rain drops part 8




The next day in College...
Nupur does'nt look at Mayank.But Mayank's eye balls are alawys rolling on Nupur.

Mayank is in the canteen.He is only looking at the juice.He is not drinking it.Naina comes and sits there:I thought my childhood friend Mayank is very smart.But you are not.Why did you leave Nupur even after knowing that she loves you?Just to be another Devdas?Go and get her back man.
Mayank stares at her.
N:Go man.

Mayank goes to the classroom.He sees Nupur reading something.He and grabs Nupur's hand.
Nu:What are you doing?
He keeps her closer to the wall.He stands very close to her.
N:Mayank!
M:You thought i will leave you alone?Never.Because you are my life.You are my breath.I will go mad if i lose you.So don't avoid me like this Nupur.I love you so much that i can't lose you.
Nupur's eyes are full of tears.It looks as if her eyes are adorned with pearls.
N:But you will hare me if you know who i am.You will hate me Mayank.If you hate me...no..i can't bear that pain.
M:How did you think that i will hate you?You don't trust me.You have no faith in me.You are disgusting Nupur.
He leaves her and walks forward.He holds his hand.
He looks at her.
N:You want to know who i am?I am a bas***d.I don't know to which family i belong to.I dont know anything about my origin.
Mayank is shocked:Then..your sister Gunjan..?
Nupur's tears fall down like rain drops.
N:She is not my real sister.I'm the adopted daughter of a sweet couple.They love me like their own daughter.They don't differentiate between me and Gunjan.Gunjan also loves me a lot.But everyone else hates me.Because...i'm a...
M:Don't use that word Nupur.It does'nt suit you.Yiu have lovely parents.Then why do you say that you don't know anything about your family.I'm angry with you for thinking like that.
N:But in the eyes of society..
M:Forget about the society.Your parents and sister love you.They don't care about what society says.Even i don't care about what you are in the eyes of society.For me you are an Angel.I don't care about your origin.
Nupur can't believe it:Mayank!
M:Nupur...for the first time i have fallen in love.That is with you Nupur.For the last time i have fallen in love.That is with you Nupur.You are my first and last love.For me love is you Nupur.
Tears dwelled in Nupur's eyes.She surrenders to his arms.
N:I love you Mayank.I want you always.
Mayank wipes her tears.
His eyes touch her eyes.She becomes shy.Her eyes are fluttering.
Their heart's romantic music is flowing out through their lovely eyes.
'Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai..'{Kaminey}.
Their friends clap their hands.Mayank and Nupur are shy.

Mayank and Nupur walk holding hands together.They smile at each other.
N:Mayank..i want to tell you a happy news.My sister Gunjan is back.she is joining our college.
M:That's nice.
N:I missed her so much.Now i am so happy.She will be in the same college as my junior.So nice.

The next morning...
Samrat sees Mayank and Nupur laughing and chatting with each other.
S:Lucky guy.Mayank got his love.When will i meet my girl?
He walks carelessly with his guitar.He hits someone by mistake.That person's books fall down.They both kneel down to take it up.
S:Oh sorry.
That person takes the book and says in a sweet soft voice:Sorry.
That voice is soothing to his ears.He looks at that person.
It is an extremely fair girl who is very slim.She has worn a bright blue short salwar.She looks soft and calm.Innocence is displayed on her face.Her spectacles do not hide the beauty of her eyes.Her eyes are beautiful like a pure ocean.He looks at her forgetting himself.Her twinkling eyes attract him more and more.Only in dolls he has seen such beautiful eyes.She becomes conscious.
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.....so you introduced sajan too...
waiting for their love story now!
continue soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow... amazing part...

luvd Mayur .... cnt soon... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
the update was too good mayur,s part was fabuloussssssssss😊and sajan,s first meet is tooooooo goood

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Posted: 15 years ago
finally mayur are together
wow.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part yaar..but yaar pls give equal imp to mayur along with sajan as u said u r gona focus sajan now....juz a suggestion
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Posted: 15 years ago
actually i finished writing this story long ago..i don't like causing more probs in MaYur's life.So i decided 2 put probs in SaJan's life
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

actually i finished writing this story long ago..i don't like causing more probs in MaYur's life.So i decided 2 put probs in SaJan's life

wow..... i love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
is there anyone who is interested in SaJan?

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