Eternal rain drops Last prt SaJan Mayur FF - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
hmm so nupur has realised her luv for mayank....lovely part...😛
Edited by mayur.forever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Awww...that was such a cute update ....Nupur getting jealous & she relised her feelings for Mayank

do cont soon dear

luv
Nidzy~
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
oooooh.....nupur is in love......
contineu soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Hop the one who touches her sholder is Mayu
Nups atlast got it
She was really jealous of Naina😆😆
Nups really judges th book frm the cover yaar
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Heyyyyy jasmine
Nice update
Lived jealous nupur
Waiting for confession
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Eternal rain drops Part 7


Nupur looks at that person.
N:Mayank?
She turns back and wipes her tears.
N:Why are you here Mayank?You are supposed to be with Naina at the party.
M:No,i'm supposed to be here.Because you are here.You seem to be upset.When you are upset can i enjoy the party?
N:Why are you worried about my worries?
M:Because ever since i love you,your worries are mine.
Mayank's love is making Nupur weak.
She asks in a low voice:What about Naina?
M:She is my good friend.That's all.I love only you Nupur.
She replies in a soft tone:But i don't love you Mayank.
M:For how long will you lie that you don't love me?
Nupur is hunting for words.
M:I heard everything.
N:That was a lie.
Mayank smiles:You can lie to me.But you can't lie to yourself.Right?
Nupur is numb.She feels deafeated.Her pretence is broken by Mayank.She is caught redhanded.
Mayank keeps his arms on her shoulders.
M:Look at my face and tell me what you told yourself a few minutes back.
Her lips shiver.
His ears thirst to hear it from her.
N:I love you Mayank.
He is on the top of the world.
M:Will you marry me Nupur?
N:No.
Mayank is shocked.
M:You love me.But you can't marry me?
N:Yes.Because i don't deserve you.
M:Why do you think like that?
N:Mayank...you don't know anything about me.Do you know to which family i belong ?Do you know who my parents are?
M:No.I don't know.But..
N:Even i dont know anything about that.
Mayank is shocked:What?
Nupur goes away without saying anything.Mayank runs after her and holds her hand.
She removes his hand from her's and goes away.
Rain drops are poured on them.Nupur walks simply in the rain.She does'nt feel the rain.Mayank stands steady in the rain.
All the friends come.
Samrat:What happened Mayank?Where is Nupur?
Mayank's lips are numb.His lips don't move.
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

wow......

fantastic update
really loved it
finally nupur confessed her love
mayank proposed for marriage...... wow
let's see wat happens next
wonder why nupur said so
continue soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Heyyyy jasmine
Nice part
Finally nupur confessed
But itna Chota sa part
Do continue soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

amazing part

so finally mayur confessed
waiting for past to completely reaveled reason behind nups no
cont soon
luv Marium
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

nice one......so nupur confessed......and mayank proposed too!

waiting for the next part.....contineu soon!

and with a longer part please!

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