Kitni Ajeeb Hai Zindagi RajeevFF-Link pg 153 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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super part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey purnima.......................
wow another Raj ff....................am very happy.................very interesting start.....................and i liked the prologue very much................well i will imagine the female lead as Aamna.....................missed raj in this part...............thanks for the pm and cont soon dear......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Puri_2711


🤗............ thanks 4 liking.................. Rajeev will definately come soon.............. he is busy getting engaged 😆 😆 😆.................. will make an entry soon...........😳 😳.........
😳my first attempt................. so thanx.........😃 😃..............
next time may be a little longer part coz it will be updated late.............
😃 😃
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this line "hes busy getting engaged" is reminding me of our Rajeev Khandelwal.................................😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
very nice part but i want to know that its a ra fic rn fic plz clear it and thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Puri...nice part....and nice and a very nice intro...of course Raj k entry k bina mujhe achha nahi lagta....yet intezaar ka fal mitha hota hai na...and yeah....I am glad u r writing an FF on Rajeev....and guess tumse bhi heroine choose nahi hua....hehe. Doesnt matter....will be w8ing for the next part....though I donno bina laptop k reply kaise dungi...hehe.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Part--2


When her cell rings'''.. brings an instant smile on her face'.she picks it'. & even before she can say hello''voice over phone asks'..

Voice--tum abhi tak soyi nahi???

Nandini--I can say same thing to u''

Voice--uska koi fayda nahi'.

Nandini--kyu??

Voice--hello madam , agar aap bhul gayi hai'to kal humari sagai hai'

Nandini--(just to tease) toh?? Ab neend ka sagai se kya connection hai??

Voice'come on nandu'..thoda to romantic answer deti'.. aakhir tumhara fiance adhi raat ko tumhe phone kar raha hai..

Nandini--ah ah! Correction Raj'''abhi fiance huye nahi hone wale ho' aur rahi baat romantic hone ki..toh'sorry to disappoint'kya karu experience nahi hai na'its my first time na'..mujhe nahi pata romantic baatein kaise karte hain'.

Raj--koi baat nahi''humare saath rehkar aap sikh jayengi''.

Nandini--oh! Matlab aapko bahut experience hai'.. ab tak kitno ke saath ki hai???

Ra--bahuto ke sath''tumhe nahi pata..is handsome, smart ladke pe bahut ladkiyan marti hai'''

Nandini--acha.. toh tumhe shadi bhi unhi se karni chaiye' mujhse kyu kar rahe ho?? Tumhe mujse kahi achi ladkiyan mil jayengi''.

Raj--hey'.. meri choice ko kuch mat kehna'.meri choice humesha best hoti hai'..aur haan bahut ladkiyan mil jayengi''.. par tum jaisi nahi milegi''jise main pyar karta hoon'. Aur use bhi zyada tum mujhse pyaar karti ho'.mujhe achi tarah samajhti ho'.

Nandini--it's the other way round Raj'.tum mujhe samajhte ho''.tumhare aane se puri zindagi badal gayi'yeh sab kuch ek sapna sa lagta hai'''

Raj--yeh sapna nahi haqeqqat hai'.aur haan'. Pehle apne aansu poch lo...

Nandini--kya'aansu main nahi ro rahi'.

Raj--tumhe maine kabhi bataya hai'..tumhe jooth bolna nahi aata'

Nandini'sach mein main nahi ro rahi'. (actually she had tears in her eyes as she was feeling emotional)''.she wiped her tears'.

Raj--waise its hard to believe'tum nahi ro rahi''..tum keh rahi ho to maan leta hoon'..khair''maine tumhe''.emotional aur serious baat karne ke liye phone nahi kiya tha'' tumse kuch sun na tha

Nandini--kya?

Raj--tumhe pata hai'..the three golden words''

Nandini (blushes)--mujhe nahi pata'..& mujhe neend aa rahi main phone rakh rahi hoon''

Raj--soch lo''tumne abhi nahi kaha toh'.

Nandini--toh?

Raj--toh....toh'.main abhi waha aa jayunga'

Nandini'tum aisa kuch nahi karoge'

Raj--u know me''main aisa kar sakta hoon'..after all tumhara ghar ground floor pe hai'mujhe hindi film hero ki tarah pipe bhi nahi chadna padega''

Nandini--raj'' u are too much'.. main phone rakh rahi hoon'.

Raj--par sirf ek baar'sirf 3 words'.aisa nahi hai its gonna b ur first time''tumne pehle bhi kaha hai''..

Nandini--'.ok tum 3 words sun na chahte ho''

Raj--haan

Nandini--Go To Sleep'

Raj--dats not fair'nandu '.come on'.

Nandini--everything is fair'' good night Raj''.

Nandini disconnects the call'' & says to herself--main tumhe kabhi shabdon mein nahi keh payungi''ki main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon''''tum mere liye kya ho?......yeh tum khud bhi nahi jante''..really love u'''.

When she hears a voice behind'Love u too'.

'''''.to be continued'..

Here second part ends'.hope u like it'

As always comments are welcome'..appreciation, criticism, suggestions''..whatever, but comments are necessary'''.

Njoy reading 😃

Ok just wanted to know'''. Shall I write flashback scenes'.before showing wedding'.ya''..pehle wedding''then Nandini can go back in flashback & tells how she first met Raj''..fell in love'' & all'..

will try to update two more parts before i take one week break 4 my exams......😃....Next part will be updated hopefully on 25 ya 26 may 😃

after my MBA exams'.updates will be more regular......😃

so till then bye 4m me''

Cya'''.

Love purnima'

Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very sweet convo................but the last line surprised me................was Raj really outside her room????????????????cont soon and all the best for ur exams.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
wow puri its so sweet raj aur nandini's convo plz jaldi post karo dusre up
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
Just finished reading all the three updates.
The story is very interesting
looking forward to reading it.
Can you please send me a PM when you update next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
nice part dear,
pls show some romance in wedding and after wedding then after u can show the flasback.
its my wish .its totally depend on u
pls cont soon

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