Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 3

Heyyyy sonam
It's a really amazing ff
I'm seriously loving this ff
This ff reminds me of an animated show I used to watch ie, winx club
Though the ff is completely different still it it reminds me of that
Do continue soon
N plzzzz add me to ur pm

a short glimpse of what is going to happen in the coming 3 updates .....

Glimpse : Vivaan and Nisha finally face each other, Grace helps Nisha, Football Match, Adam getting friendly with Nisha and Fresher's Ball - a surprise!!!

Beginning

Slowly the sun woke up from the blanket of the dark and spread his light all over the sky ... through the window, the light fell on Nisha who was asleep peacefully after a long time ...... she woke up to the morning with a smile ...
Someone knocked on her door ... she got and went to see who it was .... she slowly opened the door and was surprised to see Grace there ....
Grace - Good morning sweetie ... (and hugged Nisha)
Nisha - Good morning, how did you know i stay in this room?
Grace - Come i'll tell you ....
Both the girls entered the room ....
Grace - Nisha, first you go and get ready ... we'll go for a walk and then breakfast ....
Nisha - Okay, i'll be back in a minute .....

Nisha had a bath and came out in a black knee-length skirt with a black balloon-sleeved top ... and her hair all open ....
Grace - Oh, you look so cute ...
Nisha (playfully) - Thanks ... so tell me how do you know my room number?
Grace (smiling) - Well, i am the member of the administrative staff ... so i know all about you Ms. Nisha Mehra ...
Nisha's jaw-dropped .... Grace shut it .... both the girls started laughing and moved out of the room ...

As they were walking in the ground ....
Grace - You reached safe in your room yesterday?
Nisha - Ahm ... well i didn't remember in which building was my room ... and to top it ... the lights went off ... i was so damn scared ....
Grace (worried) -Oh,i am so sorry ... then how did you manage?
Nisha - A guy helped me ... he took me to my room ... but i couldn't see his face and before i would thank him ... he went away ... (Nisha's face was sad)
Grace (noticing it) - Don't worry ... we'll find him .... so how was the last night ...
Nisha (remembering her dream and her feelings) - Ahm ..
But before she could speak ... Adam came and hugged her out of blue .... Grace was equally shocked like Nisha ...
Adam - Hey, Nisha ... how are you this morning?
Nisha - Uhh .. i am fine, how are you?
Adam - After meeting you, well feeling very happy ...
Grace rolled her eyes ....
Mr. Daniel - Grace, i need to talk to you ...
Grace - Yup, (to Nisha) you go for breakfast, i'll join you there ... bye ...
Adam - Hmm ... let's go for breakfast ....
On the same time, Clare and Sara entered the scene .....
Clare - Hey, Nisha .. come let's go for breakfast ...
Adam - Hello, she is going with me ....
Sara - But she is our friend ....
Adam - So what, i asked her first ...
Nisha was noticing their stupid childish discussion and was getting irritated ....
Nisha - Guys, cool down ... we all can have it together ...
Adam,Sara&Clare - NO
Nisha - Fine! You guys carry on with your fight ... i'll go and have my breakfast alone .. and don't follow me ....

Adam, Sara and Clare were shocked with her sudden outburst ... she started walking looking down, hugging herself .... when she bumped into a guy who was standing with his back towards her ... he was walking backwards and she didn't notice him ... she lost her balance and was about to fall ... but he held her in his brawny hands .... her small hands on his bare and sweaty chest ... she kept staring in his eyes .... his touch made her feel that he is the guy who was with her last night .... Adam, Sara and Clare were looking at the scene; their eyes popping and their jaws dropped ... with a jerk, he made her stand on her feet and without saying anything went from there .... she kept looking at him going away from her ... she wanted to stop him but words didn't come out of her mouth ... her voice scared to come out .....
Adam came near her ...
Adam (concerned) - Are you alright?
Nisha didn't respond .....

The guy, turned to look at her and looked at her with disgust in hi eyes ..... she felt hurt ...
Adam - Nisha, are you listening to me? Come, let's go for breakfast ....
Adam pulled her with him .....

Nisha was still lost in the guy's thoughts when Grace came and hugged her from behind ... Nisha came out of her thoughts and finally felt relieved as she was feeling very uncomfortable with Adam ....
Grace - Hey, you had your breakfast?
Nisha - No, i was waiting for you ....
Grace - Nisha, i am so sorry ... you are so sweet .... come i'm hungry ....
Adam left as his friends called him ....

Both were having their pancakes and juice when suddenly Nisha's heartbeats increased .... she saw the same guy entering the hall ...
Nisha (anxiously)- Grace, who is he?
Grace (looked up and smirked) - So you too drooling over him, hmm?
Nisha - No! he is the one who helped me last night and even today?
Grace - How are you so sure? You didn't see his face yesterday? And what happened today?
Nisha told her about the morning - I can't forget his warmth on my skin ... i can recognise him by his touch ... now tell me who is he?
Grace - Okay ... he is Vivaan Kapoor ... football team's captain ... sarcastic, witty, studious, angry young man .... he is famous all over the campus for his rage ....
Nisha - Oh ... come let's go for our classes ....

Grace in the corridor told Nisha to stay away from some people as they were not good, Nisha understood and nodded ..... Grace dropped Nisha to her class and told her she'll meet here after an hour .. as they have the next class together .... Nisha agreed and smiled ....
As she entered the room ... only a pair of seats was vacant ... she went and sat there .... it was the last row corner seat .... Vivaan entered the classroom ... Nisha felt his presence and looked up .... he walking towards her .... she started shivering ... he came and sat near her ... but didn't even look at her once ..... she started looking somewhere else ..... she tried to build up the courage to talk to him .... finally ....
Nisha - Thank you ....
Vivaan (startled & irritated) - Excuse me? Are you talking to me?
Nisha nodded ...
Vivaan - For what?
Nisha (stammering) - Kal meri help ke liye aur aaj mujhe bachaane ke liye ....
Vivaan (coldly) - Welcome .....

They started making the notes when their hands brushed with each other .... she felt shy and a chill went through her spine ...... her face flushing .... with the corner of her eyes .... she looked at him .. but he didn't show any signs of discomfort ... she started concentrating on her notes .....

Feelings

She knew her eyes, her heart were out of control ... every second from the corner of her eyes she would gaze at him and herself would end it feeling ashamed of her doing ... but something in him was so alluring that she couldn't stop herself ....

In her nervousness, her sheets fell ... both bend together to gather them .... her soft and small hand in lose grip of his rough and big hand ... the touch of his, on her skin made her shiver ....their eyes met ... his magnetic eyes held hers and she just couldn't stop herself from looking in his deep eyes .... they were as an old book which she craved to read ....

He roughly got up .... and continued working .... she felt embarrassed of what she was doing ....

Nisha (thinking) - Stupid! Duffer! kya kar rahi thi .... wo kya soch raha hoga?

And again she looked at him, who was engrossed in his work ... she felt bad seeing him like that ...
Soon the lecture got over and he got up from the chair and swiftly moved outside ...... she slowly gathered not just her things but also herself and started moving outside ....

Grace - So, madam ... how was your first lecture?
Nisha (sweating) - Good ...
Grace - Ya ...
Nisha - Hmm ... come on let's go ....
Grace - So who were you sitting with?
Nisha - Ahm ... Vi..vaa..n ...
Grace - Oh! great ... so did you thank him?
Nisha nodded ....
Grace - So .... what did he say?
Nisha - Nothing ....
Grace saw her disappointment but ignored it for time being ....

Adam apparently was too with the girls for the lecture .... he noticed Grace and Nisha sitting on the third bench and came and sat on the first bench right in front of the girls ....
Adam - Hey Nisha, how was your first class?
Nisha - It was good .....
Adam - Are you angry with me for some reason?
Nisha (attentively) - No ... of course not ... why will i be angry with you?
Adam (mildly) - No i thought .... never mind ... i am happy that we are friends ....
Nisha (assuringly) - Me too ... i am glad i met you ....

Sara came and sat with Adam ...
Sara - Stop flirting ...
Adam - Stop poking ...
Sara - Idiot ...
Adam - Dumbo ...
Sara - Shut up!
Adam - You too ...

Nisha kept her hand on her forehead disbelieving that they were fighting like small kids .... but their fights reminded her of Benji and Dia ... as she found their fights to be adorable but Adam and Sara were too much .....

Grace came after helping a student with his account .....
Grace - Hey ... are you alright?
Nisha pointed towards Adam and Sara who were still having a cold war .... both Nisha and Grace started giggling .....

During the rest of the class, Nisha's mind again and again shifted towards those mysterious, magnetic blue eyes ..... she had to constantly shake the thought of being in his arms from her mind .... as soon as the class got over .... Adam and Sara moved out talking like old buddies ....Nisha was astonished at the scene ....
Grace - Nisha, you are free right now, but i have a class ....
Nisha - Don't worry, i will go and sit in the library ....
Grace - Okey bye ...

Nisha started moving towards the library .... the corridors were empty which were symbolising her full yet empty life ..... she entered the library ... the smell of the old books allured her .... she loved reading specially classics or old books ..... whenever she was upset books made her feelings subside ..... she kept her things on the table and moved towards the books .... their company was giving her a different kind of peace ... she never felt lonely surrounded by books ... she totally adhered to the statement that - Books Are Your Best Friends ....
As she was running her hand on the shelf .... the shelf started shaking and was about to fall on her but yet again she was saved by Vivaan .... he was holding the shelf by one of his hands ... but the other he was holding Nisha who lying beside him ... he eyes tightly shut with fear all on her face ... the books were lying on the floor ... he slowly stood up and made her stand on her feet .... both were staring in each others' eyes .... but it was different from either of the side .... she was lost in him but he was fuming ....
Nisha - Thanks ....

Befor he could say anything, the librarian who was raged asked them to clear the mess they had created ....
Nisha - I am sorry, wo meri wajah se ...
Vivaan (interrupting) - Shut up! what's your problem? Tumhi ke saath ye sab hota hai ... problems tumhe dhundti hai ya tum unhe .....
Nisha - I am sorry ...
Tears started rolling down from her eyes ....he felt guilty for talking to her in such a harsh manner ...
Vivaan came closer to her and alowly brushed away her tears with his fingers ..... his touch was making her go weak on her knees ....
Vivaan - Look, i am sorry ....
Nisha - It's okay .... (wiping her tears)
Vivaan - Now come on let's clean this mess ....

Vivaan first with his brawny arms put the shelf on its feet ... Both slowly picked up the books .... Vivaan held the books in his hands while Nisha was placing them .... she enjoyed every moment with him and why even she didn't know ..... as they kept the last book .... Vivaan unknowingly was too close to her as she turned, she got scared and started falling ... he held her ... his hands wrapped around her tiny waist ... she clutched his shirt tightly ..... her eyes which were already bug widened at their closeness ..... she could feel his warm breath on her face .... both of them were looking into each other's eyes .... Vivaan slowly made her stand and without saying anything went out .... Nisha's heartbeats were fastening ... she thought her heartbeats were echoing in the silence of the library .... she slowly closed her eyes and felt his rough and warm touch which made her shiver from the roots of her hair to the tips of her feet ..... she couldn't understand why she would become so clumsy around him ......

Precap- Football Match, Vivaan's rage over Nisha, Adam growing closer to Nisha and Nisha's dream ....

fabulous part dear...oh.mayank felt sorry 4 shouting with nupur...that was so sweet.....hmm..he is changing....but again the precap??? loved it to the core...pls continue soon.........

This story is amazing..

i am dying to read it further....

Please can you pm me...

i also have a suggestion, why don't you write the name of mayank and nupur as mayank and nupur only.. Its easier to imagine you see...

But its just a suggestion.. I don't mind vivaan and nisha...

And yeah please do continue soon...

Love,
Akansha( sorry i forgot to mention my name before..)

Originally posted by: sonam961986

Sania, Aswathy, adi_gupta, afshanafreen, gopi06, salma009, farrda01, charming.angel, prerana_mjht, fariaa70, sakura_mayur, Pooja, mjhtnupurmayank and Akanksha 😃

for liking the story and commenting .... when you guys like my updates and comment it feels good and encourages me to write even better the next time .... thank you so much guys ....

Okay, I would mention again ... i know it's difficult to imagine mayank and nupur with different names but the names Vivaan and Nisha signify something which would come as the story proceeds .... their names would signify some incidence and that is why i can't name them Mayank and Nupur ... i am really sorry for disappointing ... i hope you guys understand ...

One more thing which i wish to tell you is that till now and after this maybe more 6 to 7 parts ... you may notice that it is more of Nisha than Vivaan ... it is beacuse the story is right now from her perspective ... it is how she sees things .... but after these portions there are 3 to 4 parts which would show Vivaan's perspective on all what happened previously after which the story would be a third person narrative ... so enjoy Nisha's thoughts and await Vivan .... and later see how the story unfolds .....

I am happy we could inspire you..

I have no problem with the names.. Its alright... I told you before it was just a suggestion and not important too..

I am enjoying the story and would love to read about vivaan too..

Continue soon...
Love,
akansha

Originally posted by: sonam961986

<font size="4">Sania, Aswathy, adi_gupta, afshanafreen, gopi06, salma009, farrda01, charming.angel, prerana_mjht, fariaa70, sakura_mayur, Pooja, mjhtnupurmayank and Akanksha 😃

for liking the story and commenting .... when you guys like my updates and comment it feels good and encourages me to write even better the next time .... thank you so much guys ....

Okay, I would mention again ... i know it's difficult to imagine mayank and nupur with different names but the names Vivaan and Nisha signify something which would come as the story proceeds .... their names would signify some incidence and that is why i can't name them Mayank and Nupur ... i am really sorry for disappointing ... i hope you guys understand ...

One more thing which i wish to tell you is that till now and after this maybe more 6 to 7 parts ... you may notice that it is more of Nisha than Vivaan ... it is beacuse the story is right now from her perspective ... it is how she sees things .... but after these portions there are 3 to 4 parts which would show Vivaan's perspective on all what happened previously after which the story would be a third person narrative ... so enjoy Nisha's thoughts and await Vivan .... and later see how the story unfolds ..... </font>

Its the story that matters than the name... Your story is really awesome...
Pls continue soon...
Waiting for your updates....

( P.S. I do like the name 'Vivaan')


- Pooja