Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
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In the next class, Nisha was with Grace while Vivaan with Sam ....
Sam - Dude, what's going on between you and her?
Vivaan - Who? Grace?
Sam - Grace! No, you and Nisha?
Vivaan - What is between you and Grace ... hmm?
Sam (nervous) - Ahm .... nothing, concentrate on the subject ....
Vivaan giggled, he knew he was answerable to his best friend but first he needed to talk to Nisha about it .... He was just waiting for the class to get over ....
Vivaan (thinking) - Pehle, main wait karta tha ki kab class start hogi aur ab ....
And he started smiling, Sam noticed and was getting worried ....
Sam (thinking) - Something's definitely wrong with this guy .... need to talk Grace .....

In the next class, Sam and Grace sat together ... Grace was paying no attention to what the teacher said as she was confused about Nisha ... Sam was surprised to see Grace like that ....
Sam - What happened? Something bothering?
Grace - I am thinking about .....
Sam (completing) - Nisha and Vivaan .....
Grace - Yes ... why are they behaving so weird ....
Sam - Are they .... you know what, right?
Grace - You mean .... even I think so ... hmm ... we need to find out ....
Sam - Seriously, if this is true then its 8th wonder of the world .....
Teacher - Sam, Grace ... move out ....
Grace - Yes sir ... come on Sam .....
Sam was shocked but was loving it ....

Vivaan was sitting alone, he had his class with Sara ...
Sara - Hmm ... someone's looking dashing ....
Vivaan (smiling) - Someone's looking ravishing .....
Sara raised her eyebrows .....
Sara - So, you know how to flirt, I didn't know that .....
Vivaan (smirked) - You don't know much more .....
Clare entered the scene ....
Clare - Ha, as usual, you guys together ... so what did I miss?
Sara - Vivaan flirting!
Clare - What? I am shocked!
The teacher entered, all of them settled ... today Vivaan had a different charm with him .... something different ... even the air had something different in it ......

During lunch, Nisha asked Vivaan to meet at their secret place .... Vivaan agreed, he was trying so hard to get an opportunity to talk to her .....
Nisha was standing near the lake ... the wind blowing her hair ... she had her back towards Vivaan ... But before he could say anything, Nisha turned, he was shocked ... she was red not due to blushing but with anger ... tears were stagnant in her eyes ....
Vivaan - Nisha! Kya hua? Ro kyun rahi ho?
He moved towards her, his hand moved towards her face in reflex ... but she moved back; pushing his hand ... Vivaan was trying to understand, what was bothering her ... he couldn't see her in pain and tears ....
Nisha - Mat chuo mujhe! Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai!
Vivaan - Par .....
Nisha - Tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho? Tum samajhte ho ki mujhe kuch dikhaayi nahi deta, kuch sunaayi nahi deta ... I hate you!
She said that and ran away; before he could even even react to what she said .....
He didn't know what to do .....
Vivaan - Maine aisa kya kiya hai .... par kuch to hai .... use bahut chot pahunchi hai .....

At night, he didn't wish to have dinner and was standing in his room thinking about his life .....
Vivaan - Kabhi kuch theek nahi ho sakta ... isi kaaran nahi chaahta tha ki tum meri zindagi mein aao ... par naa tum maani aur na hi mera khud par kaabu raha ...

He remembered his blazing past ...

At the age of 10, he was abandoned in the wild roads of Mumbai and soon he was among the underworld gangs ... a child lost in fire of the big bad world ..... at the age of 14 he murdered people with no fear .... he was learning the tactics really fast ... the innocence decaying and the monster was growing inside .... the sweet child had turned into the devil .... but one judge still had faith in the golden heart .... and decided not to punish him but instead bring his life on track ... by financing his education first in a London school where children like him were 'cured' and then in the Oracle .... but his blazing past was always with him .... even now when he has turned 20 .... he was still being haunted by the cruel childhood he experienced .... he still feels that his hands are drenched with blood .... he still feels the criminal inside him - growling ..... wounds cannot be filled easily ... likewise the fire inside him could not extinguished so easily ....

But he had madly fallen in love with her ... he tried to change ... to amend his bloody path ... he was not bad at heart .... just the circumstances in which he was stuck ... those he faced were ugly .... but his heart was purely in love with her .... for the first time in his life, he had loved someone so much that he could give away his life without any qualms .... her smile would make his day .... her tears would pierce his heart .... he could do anything for her even if that meant crucifying himself .... her happiness was the only important thing for him .... his love, his longing was pure ...... only thing in his life which he felt good about ......

But the blazing Cyclops - like sun was ruining and burning Vivaan's life .......

Vivaan - Nisha, main tumse bahut pyaar karta hun .... tumhaare bina main nahi jee sakta .... par tumhaare saath rehkar tumhaari zindagi mein aag bhi to nahi laga sakta .... main kya karun kuch samajh nahi aa raha ......

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Guys ... after this there are 3 more chapters which are short but reveal many things which till now were hidden ..... i am sure you guys would love it .....
P.S. - It's my birthday today .. i.e 9th June ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey excellent update i am yet to read all the earlier update(s) properly but man you are doing a great job! keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its ur bday today

Many Many happy returns of the day
May u get all the happiness in the world 😊




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Posted: 15 years ago
Happy B'day Sonam.... 🤗
nice update...!!
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wishing u a vey happy birthday dear........
awwesome part
luved it to d core
eagerly waiting nxt part
tnx fr pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part!!!......never thought vivaan's childhood to be so!!.....anyways happy tht he realized tht he loves her....hope he confesses soon......wonder y was nisha angry with him??.....wish everything will b f9 soon!!!......can't wait for the next part......plzzzz update soon.........
and ya.......happy b'day dear!!!!......wish u lots of happiness n success in ur life!!!......njoy ur day!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 part yaar
and happy birthday
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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome!!

Happy Birthday pleaseeeeeeeee update sooooooon! can't wait to read more! -Jassi
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb part
loved it
plz plz update soon
Marium
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Posted: 15 years ago
1st of all, Happy birthday Sonam!🤗
hope u have a gr8 future ahead....

coming 2 the update, wow! so many things revealed in the 2nd update abt Vivaan's past.....
Vivaan wants 2 change 4 his love Nisha...
but he also fears that the monster inside him wud prevent him from doing so....
but y did Nisha run away from him?
did she again catch him with Sara or is it Adam's revenge?
gosh! i'm soooo eager 2 read more!
do cont. soon.....

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