do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142 - Page 89

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow sehr

ur update made my day

haayyee marjawaaan

maja hi aaaa gaya

update kitna perfect tha

fallen head over heels for ur ff all over again

the song sequence was so magical

i loved it a lot

1 wekk mein shaddi... wow

mayur ek week tak mil nahi sakte.... poor mayur

but secret meeeting ka idea rocking hai

mayur terrace scene was so damn cute and romantic

samrat's entry was gr8

nupur-armaan were cute

i loved sajan too

precap sounds exciting

update soon

mahima

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Oye meri Sehr!!!

Meri beti!!

Kaisi ho?

It's been a while since we have talked

Loved the part to the core

From this part, I can tell that you have greatly improved in your writing from the first part till now (not that you weren't amazing in the beginning anyways 😳)

Anyways, beautifully written

Love you jaan!

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Character Sketch- Wow, there's a lot of characters 😆 So Nupur's an orphan? =( Awww that's soo sad. Gunjan and Mayank are twins? LOL I can't imagine them being twins, but Gunjan loves to do pranks, just like me! Excited!.......awww shukriyaa maasi

Part 1- Amazing start! But it was a little short. Haha I know, I write short parts too. Like maasi like niece 😆 But I loved it a lot. It was short, yet sweet. *Smiles* Awww Nupur misses her dad =( but Armaan's there with her [and so will Mayank ;) ].............. i knw it was short first try tha na wo bhi mere exam nyt pe😉

Part 2- Yay!!!! Mayank's intro! Loved it whole lots! Again short but your exams were going on so I understand. I love this sweet and pyaara Mayu. Too good yaar, and I loved the intro. Brilliant!................ shukriyaa maasi 😳

Part 3A- Yay!!! This was longer! OMG accident!?! And yet they still fight 😆 Oh god, these two are hilarious. But I can't believe they were that bad of a condition! I love the Majan scene; that was so cute! But where's Samrat? LOL, his intro is still need to be done. Yes! Mayank is feeling bad about Nupur! Well he should! 😆 Great job in writing it!................yup it was hilariousfter all they were our mayur na😆😆..........

Part 3B- Wow' just wow! Loved it loads and loads! And who said it was boring! It was too good! And I loved their fights! They're so adorable and cute! And you portrayed them perfectly! Loved it too much! Ahh! Amazing yaar!................. i thot so na but ya u said to it must b goood thn

Part 3C- Okay, it's official, I am loving your ff right now. And I think it's too funny that they don't even know that they both work here. LOL. But glad that they're going to be discharged soon! And today I saw the caring side of Mayank. Awww that was so cute! Once again, brilliant!............... yup mayu is caringgggg also else thn sadu😉😆😆

Part 4- Awww I love Sanu! It's my favorite after Mayur! And I love their bonding! It's sooo cute! I had a huge smile after this! And it was just adorable. And AMAZING job in writing the part, you made it realistic!............... i too love sanu.

Part 5- Oh no! Is Gunjan evil? But hope she finds out that Samrat and Nupur are just friends. Hope Gunur become friends too. Oh gosh, what are Sanu doing? Hopefully Mayank doesn't get mad..............well i knw gunjan evil but till end she wudld b changed

Part 6- Haha oh I love Mayank! He's so mischievous! Again, short, so can't say much but loved the part................ yup he is . i knw it was short yrrrrr😕😳😳

Part 7a- Jaan, it was fantastic! I loved it a lot. Poor Nupur, I wished Mayank picked her up' oh god, this Gunjan, she better not be becoming evil. Awww Samrat is so sweet. I love Sanu in this! I hope Nupur's okay!............. she will b and yup i to wanted mayu but thn sanu frndship is also loved by me

Part 7b- OMG!! I can't believe the matter got this worse! I feel so sorry for Nupur but how you described the whole scenario, that was amazing. Too good yaar and you did such a brilliant job describing Samrat. Amazing job hun!.................... shukryaaaaaaaa🤗🤗🤗

Part 8- Awww now they're friends! Finally he apologized! I'm running out of words :Syesssss😆😉

Part 9- Yes! Mayur are alone now! Happy! =)😉😉😉

Part 10- Finally! Now Mayank knows that they consider each other brother-sister. And I loved the very first scene, right off the bat she falls into his arms. *Smiles* ..................😆😆😆😆😆

Part 11- Sehr' this is defiantly the longest, most romantic and cutest update you have done. I was thinking "oh god what's Mayank doing" at the end. But it was his imagination; silly me 😆 You did such a FANTASTIC job. I am loving your ff like no other!...............🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗. awww so shweet of u

Part 12- Oh god, this Gunjan. I hate her now 😆 Why does she have to interfere in Sanu? By god, hope she doesn't do anything bad..its her job naaaa

Part 13- Yeh Gunjan! I'm going to punch her right now! Poor Samrat and Nupur! It's all her fault. I hate her!yesss yrrrrrrrrrr😕😕😕

Part 14- Nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nupur kyun jaa rehi hai? Sirf uss Gunjan ke liye!?! I hate that Gunjan! X( She's going to be a goner! Oh no! No precap? Yeh kya hai? ye mera ff hai maasi😆😆

Part 15- Yes! A big thappar! Woo-hoo. *Me Partying* Finally Gunjan figured it out. Now Nupur is the cupid for Sajan and Samrat from Mayur. Me loving it! oh u partying wo bhi alone 😆😆😆😆

Part 16- Awwww' but isn't Diya going out with Sid? LOL, just wondering' But this was such a cute part I loved it too much jaan! And you made it brilliant! (Hmm I think I need to start using different words other than brilliant and amazing)okie change ur words nowwww😆😆😆

Part 17- *Smiles* This was a rocking part (see I used rocking, not amazing this time around)oh ya i noticed tht

Wow new thread congrats!

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Part 18- Sehr I'm going to jump up in the air! Why? Because you are totally making this ff addicting for me to read!...oh realllllyyyyyyyy

Part 19- Sehr I'm jumping up and down! Woo-hoo!!!! Nupur loves Mayank!!! *Screams* I love you Sehr!! My niece, I never knew you were such an excellent writer! Beta, I love you soooo much! This whole Sanu part was too good yaar!......................i love you maasi🤗🤗🤗🤗

Part 20- Sehr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG ahhh!!! *Faints* Trust me, this is a totally filmy type of confession (you probably got that from your mom 😆 )but I loved it. This is the best update by far. And the Bahom ki Dharmiyan! Ahhh I love it! I'm jumping on my sofa. Love you!!i knw yrr it was filmyyyyyyyy as nupur loves filmy naaaaa😆😆😆

Part 21- I think if I say anymore, you're going to think, oh god, yeh larki kitni baat karti hai...linas sister ho tou must naaaaa😳😆😆

Part 22- Ahh I love Gunjan and Samrat right now! 'And their advice for Mayur. Aww Mayank coming to Nup's house was so cute. I wish guys like that were in real life. ohh me toooo

Okay, I need to go now, I've been reading for 4 hours now! Love you Sehr!

Part 34

Just 7 more days to go . for mayur marriage

But in these 7 days they cant c each other

Even they cant meet each other,

But after they are mayur how culd they live without seeing each otherj just for a moment ..

Friendz now journey of this ff starts with 7 days of marriage

Day 1 morning

Both huse people were engaged in marriage works

And here nupur was sitting on her .thinking of her new life.

The life which is for her like a dream cum true

She was remembering .

The first day they met an got accident . then their fights.their nokjhok.

The moment she remembered and laughed over it.how differentthey were before.simply opposite feelling they possess for each other. When they were cruel enemy .always ready to fight . Always ready to defeat other. Then their cute jealousy. Then their night at jungle. Then how their enmity turned into friendship. Then slowly slowly they started faling for each other. The filmy confession. The firstdate. Then one year seoaration as mayank went out of town. Then cumback . then caught by Armaan. Then sum sad memoris.

Then the armaans shart, terrorist attack . mayank in danger. Armaan realization . mayur reunion .all problems end

She was lost in all previous memory. Soon it got disturbed by a call.

Don't try to guess as its obviously by mayank

She came out of thought and quickly picked it up

N: hello!!!!!!!

M: hey meri nupur !!! kaise ho ?????

N: mein thk hu mayu!!!!

M: nupur tum kahi lost lag rhe ho.is everthing okie?

N: ha jaan sab thik hai . me to kuch beete hue pal ko yaad karhe thi. K jab hum miley the tab hum kya the aur aj hum kiya hai.

M: ha u knw jab maine tumhe first tym dekha to I thot u r really egoistic and so much mean. On first meet I started hating you.

Listening this nupur face smile went off

M: haye tum silent mode pe kyu chali gaye . meri puri baat to suno. Thn as days progressed I start liking u . and more I was jealous of samrat

N: wht!!!!! but smart is lyk my bro?

M: haa I know it but at that tym I didn't knew abt it . I always feel jealous when I see you with him .doing fun and all . I never liked it. But one day when you said abt u and samrat friendship I got to know from then my love for you was increasing day by day.

N: oh sach me

M: ha janu!!!! From that days I was deeply madly in love andu remember when I went for a year away from you

N: yup !! I do. That year was more than a hell for me . I was really missing you. Please don't leave me again lyk that. Promise me

M: I promise you that I will never leave you again in my entire life. You are mmy part of life and I cant live without you

N: me 2.

M: I love you

N: I lov you too

Sumone from back

S: I love you three

Nupur turned around and found sam

N: mayank me phone rakhti hu baad me bt karege bye!!!

M: are meri baa'..

( more he could say nupur disconnect the call)

N: sam tu yaha

S: ha socha apni pyari dost se mil lu phir to wo hume chor k chali jayegi

N: sam tu aisa mat bol yrrr..

S: sach to keh raha hu . ek week baad to tu humein chor k chali jaye gi phir tera ye dost akela reh jayega.

( sayinf this a tear dropped from samrat eyes and land on nupurs hand)

N: ye kiya sam. Tu rorha hai !!!!

( saying this nupurs tear too started flowing she quickly hugged him tightly and samrat responded)

S: tu nhe jaanti the me ktna miss karuga . tu mere liye buhat khaas hai

N: aur tu mere liyeee. Mjhe aj bhi wo bachpan k har pal yaad hai. Jab hum saath the. Wo har pal jot ere saath bitaya mere liye anmol hai

While breaking hug

S: ha!! Yad hai hum school me jab ek saath bunk kya karte the . kitna maza ata tha aur phir jab hum pakre jaate aur teacher maa ko shikayat karti to maa humein daantne ati thi to

Nupur interrupted

N: ha aur pphir dono ko ek hi room me band kardeti thi. BY GOD unko kya pta tha k hum waha kitni masti karte the.unhe lagta tha k hum ko punish kiya hai but inreal it didn't happened .wo to humare life gift hota tha. Kia din the y wo ,I really miss those days .har pal haste rehna , kabhi juda na hone ka darr . but aj kyu hai yeh darr . aj pehli baar is shaadi se na khush hu mein

S: nupur jaana to tumhein hoga,har larki ko jana hota hai but tum yaad buhat aoge.

N: tum bhi sam the me kbhi nhe bhul sakte

S: Me bhi to chal aj ek waada kar mjh se

N: kaisa waada

S: yhe k hum apne dosti ko rishtedari me badle ge. Tere and mere bache ki hum shaadi karayege

N: done. aur usi se humari dosti new turn le gi

S: aur ye dosti kabhi mat torna ye khas hai

N: buhat khaas . tu mere liye buhat important hai . u are my bestfrien who was there every tym I was in trouble. U were there when bro was away from me. You were always with me

S: but ab se mayank hoga ,aur you know why me more happy

N: kyu???

S: kyu k mayank will take care of you. That's y m relieved more this tym.

N: I know that but we will be friendz forver,

S: so high five

N: yup

Both then hug again

S: chal breakfast karne?

N: ha chal buhat bhu lagi hai

And samrat left and nupur smiled and also go down to have breakfast

Armaan and ridhimma were waiting for them to cum

As nupur came down she hugged Armaan and ridhimma

A: meri angel aja!! Akhri din hai ap ter , nere saath breakfast karle

N: bro aisa mat bolo na

A: okie baba nhe bolta bis chale breakfast kare

R: ha angel aj tumhare pasand ka bnaya hai

N: wow French toast too gud . bhabhi you are th best yr

R: I know angel wo to me hu.

R: apki buhat yaad ayegi

R: tumhari bhi buhat yaad ayegi

Then all had group hug And all silently had their breakfasts as all have to rush for preparation of marriage

But bechari nupur had nothing to do so she silently again went to room and was getting bored

Soon she heard voice from window and she started scream

She was frightened as she was alone in home

She closed her eyes.

As person cum closer to her she started screaming more loudly.

M: shhhh''''. nupur chup hojao me hun

But nupur wasn't ready to listen

So mayank quickly placed his lips with her so as to make her silent

Soon both get lost into each other but then as do lost in deep kiss nupur came back to senses. And nupur was angry like hell.

N: tum buhat bure ho mjhe tum se koi baat nhe karni yrr.

M: kyuu!!!!!!!

N: kiya kyun ye kya kya tum ne.

M: acha kya kya mjhe bhi btao zara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Asked naughtily)

N: tum ne na

M: ha kyaa!!!!!

Nupur understood what he wanna ask

N: jao byee mjhe tum se koi bt nhe karne wali BY GOD!!!!!!!!!! And went out of her room

M: oh God!! Ye to zyada naraz hogyeeee

Precap

Mayank manaofying nupur

Mehndi sequence

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