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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
awesooooome......
superb....
rocking........
wonderful upd.
loved it to the core......
thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
nice part
Naina and her family has suffered a lot. But she is willing to fight for her brother and family's honour. And now she will have Raj to help achieve her aim
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
hi 😊
madhu
the up is sweet and emotional 😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😃😃😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
i felt bad for naina's family😭😭😭😭 but raj aa gaya haai😃😃😃😃😃
plz jaldi se cont karo and pm karna mujhe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy.....am glad u updated....and I knw I myself am late...hehe. Anyways....Raj pe Naina aise hi bharosa kar rahi thi....ye dekh kar achha laga.....and now Raj will help her wid Navin's case....too gud!! And I havto say....now the title suits perfectly.....lovely Madhu. Akhon amar next part porte ichha hochhe.....so u better try to UD soon....waise aaj kal mone hoi onek busy achho....so I just hope u can take out sumt ym for updating......valo theko...
Luv,
Sumi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Sorry For late..
Amar Computer Kharap chilo re...
Anyways..Coming to the Update...
Its Awesome and Superb...
I Loved Raj's Character...But felt sad for Naina's Family and his Brother..
But Naina r Bhai er ghatonata theek clear holona..mane hotat office e oirom Dosh chapato keno?
I mean Dushmani Kya thi usse?
But Now Raj will solve all these I think..And ei baparta tui explain nischoi korbi...
Great Update..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey.....mujhe lagta hai maine page 4 wala part miss kar diya tha....and so I wanna say....mujhe Raj-Naina ki dosti wali portion bahuuuut achhi lagi....and Raj sach me bahut achhi baatein karta hai....and by now I knw he is a dhasu character!! Even that was a very nice part Madhu....and u knw wat.....RT ki tarah iss fic ke liye bhi main rah taakne wali hu....hehe.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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At evening, in Press club,Raj & Yudi ek saath betha hai.

Yudi- Raj tune Naina se jo bhi kaha kya uss baat ko le kar tu serious hai??

Raj- tujhe kya laga Yudi main mazak kar raha hu??

Yudi- Raj main seriously puch raha hu.

Raj- to main kya joke kar rahi hu?Tujhe kya laga Yudi uss tute hue family ke samne khada hoke main show off kar raha hu. Dil & Ethics naam ki dono chiz hai mere paas.

Yudi- lekin hum kaise help karenge?police ne to haath dho liya hai.

Raj- tu maanta hai naa Yudi uss family ke saath naainsaafi hui hai.Aise baato ko loogo ke samne laana hamara kaam hai.Police kya kiya hai isse mujhe koi fark nahin parega.

Yudi- lekin Nair sir manenge??

Raj- Yudi maine to sirf Naina se Kya hua hai yeh sun ke aa raha hu, abhi to humhe details main jaana hai, proof collect karna hai, phir aise report banake sir ke samne launga ki woh naa nahin kar payenge, aur ek baar public ne yeh news le liya to saari channels, wow, hamare channel ke saath saath hamare career bhi chamakne lagenge, Naina ki family ko bhi insaaf mil jaayega

Yudi- kya tujhe lagta hai ke oh ladki sach bol rahi hai??

Raj- isme koi doubt nahin hai Naina sach bol rahi hai, main insaan samajta hu, aur uske andar uske bhai ko lekar jo pakka vishwas hai naa, dil aur dimak dono se soch kar bhi main inkaar nahin kar sakta.By the way main chalta hu, sun kal subah main nahin aaunga Buaji ka routine check up karana hai, kal main Shalini ki nursing home jaunga subah, ok.

Yudi- ok, phir shyam ko milte hai.bye, goodnight.

Raj- goodnight

Raj ghar aata hai, as usual Chinu usse dekh kar bhokta hai, Raj usse buiscuit khilata hai.

Raj(in mind)- iss kutte ki toh main,,,aapne hi ghar main bribe dekar ghusna padhta hai, ek din buiscuit ke saath zaher mila kar khila dunga, naa rahegi baas, naa bajegi basuri.

Andar se Buaji- Raj tu hai naa??

Raj- haa Buaji, main hi hu, aapki Chinu ka bhokna nahin suna aapne, agar chor ghar main ghus kar aa jaata, tab yeh kuch nahin kahega, oh, I hate dogs. Yaksssss!

Chinu aur bhi zor se bhokne lag jaata hai.

Raj(gusse se)- chup ho jaa, varna gala daba dunga.

Buaji- tu chup kar, mere Chinu se ucchi awaz main baat mat karna,

Yeh keh kar Buaji Chinu ke sar par pyaar se haath pherti hai.

Raj- buaji aapko yaad hai aapne kab last mere sar par itne pyaar se haath phera tha??

Buaji- tu meri baat sunta hai, jo main tujhe pyaar karungi??

Raj- main aapki kaun si baat nahin maani??

Buaji- tu aapna khayal bilkul nahin rakhta. Aaj dopohar ko ghar kyun nahin aaya?pata hai maine kitna intezar kiya.

Raj- ohh, itni choti si baat ke liye meri Buaji mujhse naraz ho gayi, main kaam main fas gaaya tha,isliye nahin aa paaya, ab hum saath saath khayenge naa, chaliye, main fresh ho kar aata hu.aur haa khana main garam kar lunga, aap serial dekhiye.

Raj fresh ho kar, microwoven main khana garam karta hai, phir dono ek saath khana khane bethte hai.

Raj- Buaji kal subah 9 baje taiyaar rehna, aapki check up ke liye jaana hai.ok.

Buaji- tu mera khayal rakhna nahin bhulta, par aapne bare main to soch

Raj- aapki aur meri umar main fark hai, main buddha thori naa hu, aap meri tension mat lo.

Khana khatam karke Raj aapne kamre main jaata hai,Peepli Live ka CD aaj Ali ne usse diya hai, Raj film ko dekhta hai.After watching the film,Raj Ali ko phone karta hai.

Raj- arre media ki sirf burai kiya?uski positive side nahin dikhaya??oh God, yeh film makers politicians ko chor kar hum mediawalo ke peeche padh gaaya, God save us, but I must admit, nice film, maza aaya dekh kar.

Ali- mujhe bhi film accha laga, accha main abhi rakhta hu, abhi bhi main office main kaam kar raha hu,

Raj- ok, tu kaam kar, main rakhta hu.

Raj Buaji ki kamre main jaata hai, dekhta hai Buaji so chuki hai.Raj aapne kamre main aata hai.woh aapna mobile nikalta hai.Aaj usne chupke se Naina ka ek photo li hai, Raj kuch der photo ko dekhta hai, bohut khubsurat hai tumari aankhen, lekin ismain nirasha kyun hai?Tumhari zindagi main umeed ki kiran main leke aunga, tumhe phir se jeena sikhana hoga Naina.

Raj khud samaj nahin paa raha tha ki woh ek anjaan ladki ke baare main kyun sooch raha hai itna??Kya khich raha hai usse uski taraf??kaisa lagav hai yeh??Raj muh main jitna bhi kahe woh Naina ki madad aapne fayde ke liye kar raha hai, par Raj ka dil to kuch aur hi keh raha hai,

Yeh sab sochte sochte kab Raj ka aankh lag gaaya usse pata hi nahin chala.

Next day morning,

Raj Buaji ko le kar Shalini ke hospital main aati hai.Shalini Raj ki bohut acchi dost hai, unn dono ki dosti hui thi Buaji ke through, Raj Buaji ko check up keliye Shalini ke paas le kar jaata tha.Shalini ke dad bhi doctor the, unke khud ka nursing home tha, unke gujar jaane ke baad Shalini nursing home chalati hai.

Raj taxi main buaji ko Nursing home le aata hai, Raj kabhi Buaji ko bike main nahin bethta, kyuki uske Buaji ko pressure ka problem hai, uski bajah se unhe kabhi kabhi chakkar aa jaati hai.

Raj Buaji ko lekar seedhe Shalini ke cabin main ghusta hai.

Raj- hiii Shalu.I hope u are fine

Shalu- yes Raj, of course I am fine, ab sabko fine rakhna hamara kaam hai, khud hi agar fine naa rahu to kaise chalega??

Raj- absolutely, ab chal, jaldi se buaji ki checking kar de, main Buaji ko ghar drop karke office jaunga.

Buaji- tujhe agar itna jaldi tha to tu mere saath aaya kyun??main khud chali aati.

Raj- aap acchi tarah se jante ho main aapko akela nahin chorunga, to aap aisi baatein kar kyun rahe ho??

Shalini- offo jhagra bandh, abhi aap chalo anuty,pehle aapki check up kar lu.

Shalini aur Buaji andar jaate hai. Raj bahar intezar kar raha hai.Kuch der baad dono bahar aate hai,

Shalini- Raj aunty ki tabiyat abhi bilkul thik hai, lekin medicine abhi bhi continue karna parega, ek mahine baad phir se check up ke liye laana ok, aur most importantly, aunty plz aap tension mat ligiyega.

Buaji- yeh tu Raj ko bol iske bajah se mujhe tension hota hai??

Raj- Buaji plz phirse shuru mat ho jao.By the way Shalu tu itni tension main kyun hai??

Shalini- tune reseption desk dekha, khali padha hai,jo ladki kaam karti thi, usne kaam chor diya bina bataye, ab tu bol main itni jaldi ek receptionist kaha se lau??Nursing home ki kaam main pata hai kitne problems aa rahe hai.itni jaldi ek ladki ko recuit karna…

Raj- hmm.

Kuch der sochne ke baad,

Raj- Shalu tujhe receptionist mil gaayi samaj le, jo honest hai, aur efficient hai, main gurantee deta hu, main insaan pechanne main galti nahin karta, tu trust kar sakti hai.

Shalini- yeh to bohut acchi baat hai, kaun hai??

Raj- Naina naam hai uska,Buaji ko drop karke main usse le kar aata hu, u know Shalu usse bhi ek job ki bohut jarurat hai.

Shalini- thik hai, tum le aao.

Raj- le kar aata hu, pehle bol Salary kitna degi??

Shalini- woh baat tu main usse karungi naa.

Raj- nahin mujhse kar.

Shalini- ok, 10,000

Raj- What??sara din kaam karne ke baad mahine main 10,000??

Shalini- ok baba, 15,000, lekin isse zyada nahin kar sakti.

Raj- thik hai,thik hai, kanjus kaahi ki, Nursing home se kitna fyada hota hai, sab khud lut leti hai.Tu doctor se pakki buisness woman banti jaa rahi hai.

Shalini- kaam nahin dungi uss ladki main,,,

Raj- to hamari dosti ka The End samaj le tu.

In between,

Buaji- Raj woh ladki kaun hai??

Raj- bataya naa naam maine, Naina. Aur aap itna interested kyun hai??aapki kaam ki baat nahin hai, aap chaliye, bohut kaam hai mujhe.

Buaji- woh to waqt hi batayega, woh ladki ko le kar mujhe interested hona parega yaa nahin??

Yeh keh kar Shalini aur Buaji dono muskurate hai.

Raj- What??

Buaji- kuch nahin.

Raj- tu hass kyun rahe hai aap??chaliye.

Buaji- ab tujhse puch kar hasna parega kya??chal.main chalti hu Shalini.

Shalini- Bye aunty, aapna khayal rakhna.

Raj Buaji ko ghar drop karta hai, phir aapni bike le kar nikal jaata hai. Raj Naina ke ghar aata hai.Raj knock karta hai, Naina aa kar darwaja khulta hai.Naina Raj ko dekh kar ek dum hairaan reh jaati hai.

Naina- Tum??

Raj- haa main, kyun nahin aana chayiye tha kya??hum dost bana kar bhul nahin jaate.khair abhi ready ho jao, tumhe mere saath jaana hai.

Naina- what??tum iss tarah mere ghar main aakar mujhe order de rahe ho??

Raj- le order kaha de raha hu?? Main to sirf bol raha hu, mere saath chalo tumhara hi fyada hai.

Naina- tum mere peeche kyun padhe ho?

Raj- uffo, baat badao mat, chalo naa plz, I want to help you.

Naina- kyun karna chate ho tum mere help??kya fyada hai tumhaara??

Raj- tum khud dekh paogi, tum mujhe dost to samaj nahin sakti, help word main use nahin karunga, dost help kar raha hai, iss baat ke upar se tumhara bhorosa uth chuka hai, haa tumhari halat hi aisi hai, main tumhe dosh nahin dunga,isliye soch lo main tumhare upar ehsaan kar raha hu, tarash aa gaaya hai mujhe tum par, yehi sunna chati ho naa tum? Ab khush??ab chalo.

Naina- main nahin chalungi.

Raj(ab irriate ho kar, Naina ka haath pakad leta hai)- tum mere saath chal rahi ho, thats it, now get ready, be quick.

Naina Raj ki taraf dekhti hai.

Raj(khud ko samalte hue, Naina ka haath chod deta hai)- trust me Naina.

Naina- tum rukho, main ready ho kar aur maa ko bol kar aati hu.

Raj- hmm.

Raj Naina ko le kar Shalini ke nursing home paunchta hai,Naina confused hai Raj usse Nursing home kyun le kar aaya hai, par Raj se kuch puch bhi nahin paa rahi hai.

Raj Naina ko le kar seedhe Shalini ki cabin main jaata hai.

Raj- Shalu yeh hai Naina, iske baare main maine tumhe bataya tha.

Shalini- oh, hii Naina, betho.

Naina- hello.

Naina confused ho kar beth jaati hai.

Raj- Naina yeh hai Dr. Shalini Singhal, yeh Nursing home iski hai.isse yaha par ek receptionist chayiye, iss job ke liye maine tumhe yaha laaya.

Naina surprised ho jaati hai.

Shalini- maine dekh liya hai Raj, yeh perfect hai iss job ke liye, tum kal se join kar sakti ho.Nitin tumhe kaam samjha dega.

Yeh keh kar Shalini Nitin ko bulata hai, Naina Nitin ke saath chali jaati hai.

Raj- thanks Shalu, Naina ko yeh kaam dene ke liye, usse iski bohut zarurat hai.

Shalini- Thanks mat kaho Raj, maine iss ladki ko study kar liya hai, yeh honest hai, hard-working hai, iss job ke liye perfect hai.

Phir Raj Shalini ko Naina ke baare main sab kuch batata hai.

Shalini- main daabe ke saath keh sakti hu Raj yeh ladki honest hai

Iss beech Naina cabin main aati hai.Raj usse dekh kar khada ho jaata hai.

Raj- accha Shalu main chalta hu, chalo Naina.

Naina- Thanks mam.

Shalini- its ok, kal subah aa jaana, ok.time maintain karna, iss baare main bohut sakt hu.

Naina sar hila kar haa kehti hai.phir woh Raj ke saath baahar aati hai.

Naina- Main auto pakad kar chali jaungi.

Raj- haa tum to bus pakad kar bhi jaa sakti ho,kuch pakadne ki kya zarurat tum to paidaal bhi jaa sakti ho.But unfortunately tumhe last option lena parega coz shayad tumne notice nahin kiya tum aapne purse laana bhul gaayi ho.main tumhe ghar se pick kiya hai, main tumhe wohi deop karunga, so bina aapna muh khole bike pe beeth jao, kyuki main tumhare saath bahes karne ke mood main nahin hu.

Naina chupchap Raj ki bike par beth jaati hai.Raj bike start karti hai.

Naina sochti hai, kyun usne Raj ki help li??Raj jab usse order karne ke tone main kaha chalne ko, kyun woh bina kisi sawal ke uske peeche chal diya, job paabe ke baad kyun usne raj ko Thanks nahin kaha??Naina jitna bhi manmani kare iss baat woh inkaar nahin kar sakti, usne iss ajnabi par bhorosa karna shuru kar diya hai.

Raj Naina ko ghar drop karke sirf bye karke chala jaata hai.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maine kuch zyada jaldi update nahin kar diya, khair woh sab choro, update kaisa hai yeh batao, & next update Red Triangle ka hoga.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi
madhu
the up is as usuaal very nice
raj is helping naina
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiiii

nice update
Raj is helping Naina
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina

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