Laksh, RN fic updated 13.09.10 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Nice part
Raj ne naina ko dhond hi liya.
Aur dono mein freindship bhi kar li.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Lovely part

So finally raj ko naina milgayi..aur donon ke bich main dosti bhi hogayi

Eager to know what happens next,plz continue soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Hi Madhu

Read ur fic n different concept

Its awesome yaar

Raj is journalists in this story n Naina is chashmish

Raj ne Naina ko dhund hi liya aur unki friendship bhi ho gayi

Waiting eagerly for next part

Do cont soon

Plz add me in ur pm list n pm me next tym

Luv

Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Raj(halka sa muskurata hai)- don't worry tumhe promise karne ki koi zarurat nahin, tumhari aankhe mujhse sab kuch bayan kar rahi hai.

Naina- matlab??

Raj- matlab kuch nahin , chodo yeh sab baatein, tum hi to keh rahi thi ki tumhe jaldi hai, tumhari mummy wait kar rahi hai.chalo.

Naina Raj ke peeche chal deti hai.Usse to yeh bhi samaj main nahin aa rahi thi woh kyun Raj ko trust kar rahi hai.Usse khud hi ajeeb lag raha tha.

Raj, Yudi, Naina teeno gaari main bethte hai, gaadi main koi baatein nahin hoti, Naina Raj ko raasta bata rahi hai.Kuch der baad Naina Raj ko gaari rokne ko kehti hai.

Naina- bas yehi ruk jaayiye,yeh raha mera ghar.

Raj dekhta hai ek chota sa ghar,Naina gaari se bahar nikalti hai, aur Raj & Yudi dono ko ghar main bulati hain.

Raj & Yudi gaadi lock karke Naina ke saath ghar ke andar jaata hai, dono dekhti hai ek old Lady bed par soyi hui hai.Dekh kar lag raha tha woh Lady bohut beemar hai.

Naina- maa

Maa- Naina tu aa gayi??aaj itni der kaise ho gaaya??(phir unki nazar Raj & Yudi par padhta hai) yeh dono kaun hai beti??

Naina- maa Yeh Rajveer , aur yeh Yudi hai, dono journalist hai,meri aaj sadak par thora tabiyat kharab ho gaayi thi, yeh dono meri madad ki.

Maa- kya???kya hua tujhe meri bacchi, tu thik to hai naa??

Naina- haa maa plz aap pareshan mat ho.

Ab Raj aa kar bilkul Naina ke maa ke paas beth jaata hai.aur kehta hai

Raj- jee aunty aap bilkul pareshan mat hoiye, varna aapki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi.

Yeh keh kar woh Naina ki maa ki paiyar(legs) chuta hai.

Maa- arre kya kar rahe ho beta??tumne meri Naina ki madad ki pata nahin tumhara sukriya kaise aada karu?

Raj- bete ko Thanks nahin bolte, khair aap aaram kijiye hum chalte hai.

Maa- nahin suno, tumlog chai zaroor pee kar jaana, pehli baar aaye ho.Naina

Naina- jee maa

Raj- nahin aunty rehne dijiye, phir kabhi…

Maa- plzz

Raj- thik hai, aap yaha aaram kijiye, hum bahar bethte hai.

Raj & Yudi bahar aakar bethta hai, thori der baad Naina unke liye chai laati hai, woh bhi unke saath bethti hai.Achanak Raj bol padhta hai,

Raj- Andar tumhara bhai ka photo tha naa??

Naina thora chonk jaati hai.

Naina- kya??

Raj- andar jis aadmi ka photo laga hua tha woh tumhara bhai tha naa??

Naina- aapko kaise pata??

Raj- kal raakhi tha, uss picture ke paas ek rakhi rakha hua tha, isliye…

Naina ke aankho main aasu aa jaati hai.

Raj- kaise hua yeh sab batana chahehge??

Naina………..

Raj- kisise tum agar aapna dukh batti hao to dil halka hota hai, kab tak aapne dil ke khone main dard chupaoge??shayad yehi tumhare police station jaane ki bajah hai??

Raj- humse share kar sakte ho tum??shayad hum tumhare kuch madad kar sake??

Naina- aap kya madad karoge??

Raj(thora muskurake)- tum yeh sawal puch rahi ho?aaj kal to baccha baccha janta hai media ki power.

After sometimes,

Naina- woh Photograph Navin Bhaiya ka tha.Bhaiya M.com complete karne ke baad unhe MN enterprise main job mila, accountant ka, sab kuch thik thak chal raha tha, six months aaram se guzar gaaya, Company ke flat main hum shift ho gaaye the,tab main aapna graduation complete kar rahi thi, mera final year chal raha tha.Six months ke baad Bhaiya achanak se late aane lage,kaafi pareshan lagte the, hamesha chira hua rehte the,puchne par bolte the, Office main bohut kaam hai, humse zyada baat bhi nahin karte the.Phir ek din achanak Bhaiya ke office se phone aaya, Bhaiya ne suicide kiya hai,company ke terrance se jump karke, Company ne unn par illzam lagaya, unnhone company ka paisa chori karte the, income tax ka raid honewala hai, pakde jane ke darrse suicide kiya.Hum police ke paas gaaye, case file kiya, coz humhe zaakin tha bhaiya aisa kar hi nahin sakte, phir pata nahin kya hua uss case ka, bandh kar diya gaya uss case ko.Company se koi compensation nahin mila, flat khali karna padha,phir bhi case ko lekar kohsish kiya par dhamkiya milne lagi, phir pata chala mummy ko cancer hai, paiso ki bohut zarurat thi mujhe, qualification hone ki bawajud, meri family background ki bajah se koi job nahin mila, phir salesgirl ki kaam karne lagi.pata nahin aaj maine aapko kyun yeh sab bataya??insaano par bhorasa karna to maine chor diya hai.

Raj- kyuki aapke dil main kisi kone main abhi bhi umeed hai.

Naina- kuch nahin ho sakta ab, humhe to aisa hi jeena hai.

Raj- agar main aapki madad karna chau to??

Naina- koi bina kisi maksad ke kisike madad nahin karta,sirf haath badha dene se dosti nahin ho jaati.

Raj- humdardi samaj lijiye, aur rahi baat bina kisi maksad ke tumhare madad karne ki to woh bhi sun lo, iss main bhi mera fyada hai, breaking news, aise news public bohut khaati hai, hamare channel ki TRP bilkul high hoga, so tumhara fyada, aur mera bhi, ab khush.

Main pauchanga tumhe tumhari manzil par, tumhari laksh par, tumhari bhai, aur tumhari family ko insaaf zaroor milega.i promise.

Vaise chai ke liye thanks, yeh lo mera no., vaise bohut jaldi hum milenge, bye.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
sorry guys, main phir se late ho gaayi, par kya karu, bohut busy hu, upar se tabiyat bhi kharab hai, khair update kiya hai, kaise hai plz batana, phir main continue karungi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
nice, lovely part. too good.loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Hi Madhu

update was awesome
loved RN scenes........so Raj Naina ki help karega uske Laksh tak pahuchne main
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry double post
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii Madhu..
Amazing part dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 lekin bahut chota sa part post kiya hain yaar tune
Naina ki family ke saath kitna bura hua haina .....ab to raj haina uske saath ..he will help her
waiting eagerly for the nextpart ..plz coninue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiiii Madhu...

nice ud dear...par baht chota tha...
naina aur us k family k sath baht bura hua hai....!!! par fiqar not...ab raj aa gaya hai na...us ki life bhi set ho jayegi...
cont soon.

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