Laksh, RN fic updated 13.09.10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

amazing update dear

raj naina ko zabardasti lejana drop karna sab kuch accha laga...loved it

even raj and shalini's convo everything was awesome.......

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

nice, lovely part.loved it,
continue soon

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Arre haan yaar.....ye bahut jaldi UD kiya....chalo hum at least jaldi comment nahi karte...wat say?? 😡 Huh....nautanki!! Jai hok....ekhon dhong dhang bondho kora jak....mujhe comment dena hai....I cant w8 to praise Raj yaar!! I love his characterization....here as well. Ab main kya kahu....u make him soooooooooooooo awesum, adorable...and yeah...respectful!! I love him....and guess I admire him just as much. His convo wid Yudi....phir Chinu pe gussa karna....loved the dialogues....there!! Phir Peepli Live ki baatein....havnt seen the movie though....I'm sure its gr8...hehe. Aur phir Raj ne kaha hai....gr8 to hoga hi....hehe.

Then at Shalini's clinic...Raj got Naina a job...and Shalini n Buaji....sensed sumthing fishy....cool. Waise bhi...janab photo leke baithe hai.....😉

Then Raj ka authorative tone on naina....which Naina seems to follow just like that....cool!! Loved it all yaar....continue soon...this one as well....mujhe RT ke saath saath ye bhi achha lagne laga hai....hehe.

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

nice part dear...

raj's Awesome yaar...!!! us ka aur Yudi ka scene...n phir chinu ka scene sab kuch baht hi sweet tha...

raj ne naina ko job dila diya...!!! par bua jee n shalini ko thoda baht shaq toh ho hi gaya hai...n raj photo le kar kyoun baitha hai...ha ha ha...!!! mujhe pata hai kyoun baitha hai...par.......

cont soon

ek req hai plz RT ko bhi cont karo.

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Nisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Nice part

Raj wants to help naina. And Yudi is a little surprised to see Raj's concern for naina and her family.

The scene at Raj's home with his buaji and chinu was too good. With buaji worrying about Raj and Raj being concered about her health.

Raj ne Shalini ke clinic par receptionist ki job ke liye naina ki shifarish kar bhi li aur Shalini se uski salary bhi negotiate kar li.

Raj ko itna concerned dekh kar buaji aur shalini ko koi kichdi pakti hui lagta hai.

At first Naina cannot believe that Raj is genuinely trying to help her. But after meeting Shalini is thankful to him. Raj ka itni authority se usse baat karne par bhi who uski baat sun leti hai.

please continue soon