Dil Ke Rishtey (AR/AN) EPISODE 3 PG 21(JUNE 13TH)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: kashrocks
heyy!

thanks for d pm..n continue soon..!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

congrats for neww ff n pm me toooooooooooooooooooooooo😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: riddhan
congrats for neww ff n pm me toooooooooooooooooooooooo😃

THX
WE ARE GLAD U LIKE IT
WE WILL PM U FOR SURE😃

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ammyridzyfan

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hey maryam can u add me to ur pm list. plz

really luv the concept

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Originally posted by: kash-kasu-kajen
hey maryam can u add me to ur pm list. plz
really luv the concept

SURE JIA
U R IN😃

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Nikki

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow man awesome, awesome, awesome concept.

continue soon and update faster.

plz pm me too.

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Mary/ Penname: Zoe

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey Guys Thx For The lovely comments..i am really very happy that u like my idea...so sorry for the delays but i am back with the first part...plz comment....

AAJ HAI PHELE JANUARY... AAJ AEK NAYA SAAL START HO RAHA HAI.. KUCH NAI RISHTEY...KUCH NAYE BAATE HO RAHI HAI... KUCH NAYE LOG MIL RAHA HAI.... KUCH NEW TECHNOLOGY DISCOVER HO RAHI HAI... KUCH NAI DOST BAN RAHA HAI...

ISSE NAYE SAAL KA PHELE DIN KO AEK LARKI KO SUBHA KA SAATH BAJE UTHAI JATA HAI.... USSE BOHOT GUSSA ATA HAI BUT WO KUCH NAHI KAH PATA APNI DI KI WAJASE...

ACTUALLY WO AEK APARTMENT RAHTI HAI AUR USKI DI NAI USSE ISSE LIA UTHAI HOTA HAI KYUNKA USKA NEECHA WALA NEIGHBOR KO KAHI JANA HOTA HAI THORI DAR KALIA SO WO CHAHTI HAI KA UTNI DAR KALIA UNKI BETI KO KOI DHEK LIA

ISSE LIA USSE USKI DI USSE UTHATI HAI AS WO NAHI JA SAKTI THI
SO USSE SUBHA KA SAATH BAJE JAKE USSE BACHI KO DHEKA HOTA HAI...USSE MO DHONA KA BHI MOKA NAHI MILA THA😆 AUR WO BECHAR KO KUCH SAMAJ HI NAHI ATA KA USKA SAATH KYA HO RAHA HAI AUR JAB USSE LOG BOLTA HAI TU HAAN KAH DATI HAI..

SO WO JATI HAI AUR USSE BACHI KO ADHA GHANTA SAY AEK GHANTA THAK DHEKNA THA... WO BACHI BHI BOHOT ANNOYING THI... WO BIGRA HOI BACHO KI TARAAH.... AUR KAHNA LAGA MUJHE KUCH KAHNA HAI... USSE LARKI NAI KISSE BHI TARAAH SAY USSE SAMAL LIYE BUT I CAN KAH RAHI THI KA KASH WO ABHI SO RAHI HOTI....

ADHA TO AEK GHANTA BAAD

AUNTY ATI HAI(WO UNNE AUNTY BOLATI HAI). WO LARKI DARWAAZA KHULTI HAI AUR WO WAHA HOTI HAI...WO MAAFI CHATI HAI KYUNKA WO LATE HOTI HAI...BUT IN RETURN WO USSE AEK FULL BOX OF MUFFINS DATI HAI AUR WO UNNE THX KARKA GHAR CHALI JATI HAI...

WO GHAR JAB ATI HAI TU WO PHELE APNI DI SAY BOHOT NARAAZ HOTI HAI BUT THEN USSE KI DI USSE KAHTI HAI KA AAJ SAAL KA NAYA DIN HAI AUR TUMNE USSE SHURWAT MEIN HI KUCH ACHA KIYA HAI SO ITS GUD... TUMHARE NAYA SAAL BHI ACHA GAYEGA... AUR DHEKO MUFFINS BHI MILA😆

"YA RIGHT KHAYE MERE MEHNAAT KI MUFFINS MEIN SONA JA RAHI HI," SAID THE GIRL AND GIVE THE BOX TO HER DI

(GUYS THIS SAME THING HAPPEN WITH ME, MUJHE YE FIRST JAN KO KARA THA ISSE SAAL MEIN... WO BACHI BOHOT ANNOYING HAI😆)

WO JA HI RAHI THI KA USKI DI USSE BOLATI HAI

"RIDDHIMA HAPPY NEW YEAR," SAID DI HAAT KHULKA BOLTI HAI

RIDDHIMA DURTA HOI JATI HAI AUR UNNE HUG KARTI HAI

"HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U TOO," SAID RIDDHIMA

"ACHA JAO AB TUM SOJAO THORI DAR KA LIA AUR AGAR NEEND NAHI AYE TU HUM NASHTA KARLAGA," SAID DI

"OK DI," SAID RIDDHIMA

"ABE OYE KYA TU POORI RAAT YAHI THA?, KYA TU SOYA NAHI," ASKED ADITIYA

"NAHI SOYA, SORRY NA MUJHE KUCH VMS BANNI THI," SAID A GUY IN SHORTS WITH HAIR UP AND ALL MESSY

"OKIEEEEEE, KISSE KA LIA BANA RAHA HAI?," ASKED ADITIYA

"KIRNI KA LIA...USSE MEINA PROMISE KIYA THA ISSE LIA..," SAID THAT GUY

"OK ADHA GHANTA MEIN TU NASHTA MEIN AJANA..I AM WAITING.. THEEK HAI," SAID ADITIYA

WO JA RAHA THA TAB USSE WAPAS BOLA

"THEEK HAI!!!," ZORSA

"HAAN HAAN THEEK HAI," SAID THAT GUY IRRITATEDLY

ADHA GHANTA BAAD

"HELLLOOO, ARMAAN FORAN NASHTA PAY ABHI KA ABHI AO WARNA I WILL BAN THE NET FOR U," SAID ADITIYA

"ARGHHHHHHHHH... AYA BHAI...," SAID ARMAAN AS HE CLOSE THE LAPPY AND WENT TO GET FRESH AUR PHIR NASTA KA LIA

"HEY CHIKKI CAN U PLZ STOP CHEATING," SAID RAJ

"STOP CALLING ME CHIKKI BHAI," SAID CHIKKI

"YA STOP CALLING HER CHIKKI RAJ," SAID SIMRAN

"PLZ BHABHI AAP TU BHAI KA SAATH MAT DA," SAID CHIKKI

"ACHA MEIN HARA TUM JEETI NIKKI NOW LETS COMPLETE THE GAME," SAID RAJ

"YA MEIN HAR RAHI HO AUR AAP JEET RAHA HAI," SAID NIKKI IN A SAD WAY

"WELL U KNOW MERE KISMAT KAAFI ACHI HAI MONOPOLY MEIN SO MEIN KYA KAR SAKTA HO," SAID RAJ PRAISING HIMSELF

"HAAN PATA HAI BUT HUM BHI KOI LOSERS NAHI HAI," SAID SIMRAN TAKING NIKKI'S SID

"CORRECT BHABHI... HUM INNE HARA DAGE," SAID NIKKI

"HEY ABHI PLZ PASS THE BALL TO ME," SAID JACK

"YA U CAN DO IT...U CANT JUST LET A FRACTURE MAKE U FORGET UR PASSION, UR FAV. SPORT," SAID EVERYONE ENCOURAGING HIM

AND THERE HE GOES AND HE DID A GOAL

"YIPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEE, I DID," SAID ABHI

"WE WERE SURE U CAN DO IT, AND SEE U DID IT," SAID THE COACH

"THX COACH," SAID ABHI

"NOW JACK TAKE HIM HOME, HE NEEDS TO REST, HIS LEG CANT BARE SO MUCH STRESS," SAID COACH

"YES COACH," SAID JACK AS HE TAKE HIM HOME

PRECAP

IF FORUM
KUCH BAATI
AUR KUCH MUAKAATA

HEY GUYS THATS IT FOR TODAY
I KNOW CHOTA HAI BUT KYA KARO
SCHOOL CHAL RAHA HAI NA SO ZAADA TIME NAHI MILTA
SORRY NEXT TIME LAMBA LIKHNA KI KOSHISH KAROGE
I KNOW ITS BORING KYUNKA SHORWAD HAI
NEXT PART KA INTAZAAR KARO

I HOPE U LIKE IT
MARYAM<3

Edited by armaankashridz - 15 years ago