MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30) - Page 19

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi akshi well i think now my all confusion is clear........
well ya divya was right ....there is somemistake from nups side tooooooo......
everythins arjun did was ......i am speechless what word i write here........i don't know
ya the sone was actually fit the whole situation and sam's word too right the word is so short so we don't hold grague against any one.........

and forgivness is bigger than anything.........
and maynk also feel pain too the three years of loneless ya it was enough too........
nupur has arjun but he was alone i understand now........
and ye i love the ending..........nupur resting in maynk's lap
lovley ss.........
love the core of my heart
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow..,..wow.....wow....wow.....wow...

Awwesomee update....

I lykd each n every scenes of d update....

Arjun z such a sweetheart....

Im so sad dat this ss z ended...but i knw u wil cum bck wid more mayur os ss n ff....do write more n more..

Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
of course u did justice to each character specially to our MAYANK "AND" NUPUR *grinning ear to ear*
ok the best part was the song itself
i loved the song and its point of application too
yes, arjun should behave little RATI-ish and un-arjunish sumtimes
it looks fab... blooming love in arti is quite visible in this part and i love u for that.. a dream come true arjun and rati as COUPLE in REAL!!! *dreamy eyes*

ok let me stop my rambling

continue with the ending part.... maybe epilogue this time...
so sweetheart... let the creativity flow!! may god bless u
love u jaana❤️
*tight hugs*
mwaah
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kya update thi akanksha I was literally becumin senti no probe u ended this ff but surely illl misss this ff to the core do write more ff's in future
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Akansha...
Excellent work dear!
I'm was so happy when Arjun accepted his Dad.... Loved the Dad and son bionding and Arjun's nautanki in the morning of not going to school!
Mayank, Nupur and Arjun having breakfast together... Loved it!
And the song was so nice that Nupur couldn't hold back her emotions!
The Kiss, Promise and Mayank teasing Nupur as to how shamelessly she kissed him! Really adorable!
The last scene was so nice where Arjun goes and hugs his parents...
May god bless their family!
Thanks for such a beautiful story!
Do write many such stories!
Love ya loads...
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
I was touched with this update AK
It was simply beautiful.
Loved it to very cores
Thank you so much for writing this dear 🤗
Will always remail close to my heart :)
Love you always
ZoaH
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Posted: 15 years ago
i absolutely LOVED arjun-mayank scene......

i loved what arjun did for mayank!

loved what all arjun did to unite mayur.........

arjun kitni jaldi woh sab bol leta hai!

wow...i loved when he dragged mayank to sing.....

i loved the description of the song!

i loved how they reunited!

but i truly loved how he donated that money into orphanage!

it was a beautiful update1

Tremendous

Fabulously written

mind blowing

Cutest

Amazing

Heart whelming

Touching

Sweetest

i am gonna miss this ss......

loved it completely!


love,

Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Akansha
amazing update
loved mayu and arjun convo
song was nice
cute ending
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Akshi

wonderful ending sweety.

just too good

awesome

amazing

mind-blowing

fantastic.

loved arjun a lot

he is the perfect son of mayur.

he helped mayur to reunited again

And my favorite part was-

'You donated all your three years savings in the orphanage? Why Mayank? Wasn't it your dream to live a luxurious life?' Nupur asked him. She had accepted him with his dream and so, she was truly shocked.

'My every dream begins and ends with you and Arjun. I don't want the money that took me away from you and Arjun. More importantly, the money would help another Mayank Sharma to grow up in decent conditions so that one day, he doesn't leave his family like I did.' Mayank said looking in her tear filled eyes.


My anger on mayank vanishes after reading this part.

u r fabulous writer Akshi.

my expectation from u growing day by day.

i m totally fida over ur writing

plzzzzzzzzz do write more.

love u






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Posted: 15 years ago
dunno what to say hun.i m feeling a huge lump in my throat as it finally ended.....but must say what a perfect ending........the end couldnt be more perfect than ur descripted one.....can i request u 4 something dear?can u plzzzzzz write more on mayur?ffs,OS,SS anything....but plzzz do write more on them.it feels heavenly after reading ur creation.God bless u dear.🤗

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