MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30) - Page 21

Hello people.. I hope you all are going great..
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Originally posted by: arunabehere

First one to comment and feeling really great

mere pas comment karne ke liye shabd hi nahi hai

Very well written

Tremendous

Fantabulous

Sweetest

Cutest

And many more words ................................

I do not think i will find in the dictionary 😛Thanx dear.. I am so glad that you liked it..

I am sad because this SS came to end but now again hope is there to have more OS and FF and SS from you Yeah.. will try my best to write a new one.. I am a little busy these days..

I am totally speechless after this update,

It touched my heart and my soul

Amazing Akansha

Loved it to the core

Each word had a meaning with the emotion in it

Thanx dear.. I am seriously humbled to receive your comment on my work..
Love,
Akansha

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Akansha hey Nidzy I hope you are doing well...

I read your last 2 parts in a stretch ....sorry couldnt comment for the earlier parts was very busy....... Its kk.. I understand... there is absolutely no need to be sorry..

Amazing ......Mindblowing & Outstanding parts ......you have written it very well.......Thanx

Loved the way Arjun had planned everything to unite his parents

And I loved Arjun & his dad's convo when he forgives him .....it was really sweet

The song was Amazing.............the lyrics toushed my heart ....I had tears in my eyes I love the song too..

Beautiful ending to an Amazing Story........I'm gonna miss this SS I am gonna miss writing this one..

do write more on Mayur dear Will do

luv
Nidzy
LOve,
Akansha

Originally posted by: achoose

what an ending yaar??????????? truly awesome and outstanding...and dont worry dear...contrary to my previous comment....in this part..i juz loved mayank like nything......................am so sad that this ss ended...but i know u will b back with an another mayur ff...am i rite dear???????? pls dear..its a request............

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi akshi Hi di..
well i think now my all confusion is clear........
well ya divya was right ....there is somemistake from nups side tooooooo......Glad you considered my and divya di's viewpoint too. That absolutely doesn't mean you were wrong.. Everyone can have different interpretations, a different way to look at things and you know what that makes life beautiful and worth living..
everythins arjun did was ......i am speechless what word i write here........i don't know
ya the sone was actually fit the whole situation and sam's word too right the word is so short so we don't hold grague against any one.......

and forgivness is bigger than anything.........Its peaceful.. Imagine how would the world be if everybody could forgive everybody.. But thats it.. Its just an imagination.. its easier said than done..
and maynk also feel pain too the three years of loneless ya it was enough too........
nupur has arjun but he was alone i understand now........
and ye i love the ending..........nupur resting in maynk's lap
lovley ss.........
love the core of my heart Thanx di..
I am so glad that you liked it.. It was always a pleasure to write for you people..
Love,
Akansha

Originally posted by: kulsumd

wow..,..wow.....wow....wow.....wow...

Awwesomee update....

I lykd each n every scenes of d update....

Arjun z such a sweetheart....

Im so sad dat this ss z ended...but i knw u wil cum bck wid more mayur os ss n ff....do write more n more..

Thanx 4 d pm.

Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva

hey D.. Going gr8?.. I know you are..
of course u did justice to each character specially to our MAYANK "AND" NUPUR *grinning ear to ear* Ah! mayank AND nupur...!!!..Who will lead me back to earth? Your grin did..
ok the best part was the song itself
i loved the song and its point of application too That song has the amazing ability to give me goosebumps each time i hear it...
yes, arjun should behave little RATI-ish and un-arjunish sumtimes
it looks fab... blooming love in arti is quite visible in this part and i love u for that.. a dream come true arjun and rati as COUPLE in REAL!!! *dreamy eyes* Knock knock.. Come out of the dream Please give them the privacy..

ok let me stop my rambling I guess i'll stop too..

continue with the ending part.... maybe epilogue this time...Epilogue will come but a little late.Its having a little bumps in its way....
so sweetheart... let the creativity flow!! may god bless u Thanx god's blessings needed badly..
love u jaana❤️ Love you too...

*tight hugs* Uh Uh UH... lemme breathe.. A tight hug back to you..😃

mwaah
Love,
crazy sis,
Akansha...

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

Kya update thi akanksha I was literally becumin senti no probe u ended this ff but surely illl misss this ff to the core do write more ff's in future

Originally posted by: mina_18secret

Hey Akansha... Hey mina

Excellent work dear! Thanx

I'm was so happy when Arjun accepted his Dad.... Loved the Dad and son bionding and Arjun's nautanki in the morning of not going to school!

Mayank, Nupur and Arjun having breakfast together... Loved it!

And the song was so nice that Nupur couldn't hold back her emotions!

The Kiss, Promise and Mayank teasing Nupur as to how shamelessly she kissed him! Really adorable!

The last scene was so nice where Arjun goes and hugs his parents...

May god bless their family!

Thanks for such a beautiful story! Thanx for reading this. I am so happy you liked it..

Do write many such stories! Will do..

Love ya loads... Love ya too..

Mina

Akansha

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

I was touched with this update AK

It was simply beautiful.

Loved it to very cores

Thank you so much for writing this dear 🤗

Will always remail close to my heart :)

Love you always

ZoaH

x x

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i absolutely LOVED arjun-mayank scene......

i loved what arjun did for mayank!

loved what all arjun did to unite mayur.........

arjun kitni jaldi woh sab bol leta hai!

wow...i loved when he dragged mayank to sing.....

i loved the description of the song!

i loved how they reunited!

but i truly loved how he donated that money into orphanage!

it was a beautiful update1 Thanx mahak.. I am tremendously happy that you liked it..

Tremendous

Fabulously written

mind blowing

Cutest

Amazing

Heart whelming

Touching

Sweetest

i am gonna miss this ss......

loved it completely!

Your comment was heart warming too.. i am falling short of words.. just want to say that thanx for reading this..

love,

Mahak

Love,

Akansha

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Akansha
amazing update
loved mayu and arjun convo
song was nice
cute ending
loved it

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Akshi Hi!!

wonderful ending sweety.

just too good

awesome

amazing

mind-blowing

fantastic. Thanx.. glad it came out well..

loved arjun a lot

he is the perfect son of mayur.

he helped mayur to reunited again

And my favorite part was-

'You donated all your three years savings in the orphanage? Why Mayank? Wasn't it your dream to live a luxurious life?' Nupur asked him. She had accepted him with his dream and so, she was truly shocked.

'My every dream begins and ends with you and Arjun. I don't want the money that took me away from you and Arjun. More importantly, the money would help another Mayank Sharma to grow up in decent conditions so that one day, he doesn't leave his family like I did.' Mayank said looking in her tear filled eyes.

My anger on mayank vanishes after reading this part. Glad to hear that..

u r fabulous writer Akshi.

my expectation from u growing day by day.

i m totally fida over ur writing Thanx your comments inspire me towards betterment..

plzzzzzzzzz do write more. Will do..

love u

Love you too,

Akansha

Originally posted by: ghtk1

dunno what to say hun.i m feeling a huge lump in my throat as it finally ended.....but must say what a perfect ending........the end couldnt be more perfect than ur descripted one.....can i request u 4 something dear?can u plzzzzzz write more on mayur?ffs,OS,SS anything....but plzzz do write more on them.it feels heavenly after reading ur creation.God bless u dear.🤗

Originally posted by: shaaranya

awesome akanksha!!

loved the end!!

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

so sad that this ss ended

i totally enjoyed reading it

the song idea was so cool

do write more ss

Originally posted by: kiran_artifan

awesome ...superb just luved it

plzz do write another ss on mn ..

u write v well

Originally posted by: myownarea

Hey akansha :) Hey DI..

Loved ur SS :) It ended beautifully : in gr8 style actually!!
it was an absolute pleasure reading this one.. It was absolute pleasure writing this one for you people..
Like I said before (nah I m not doubting ur age 🤣Thanx😳) u write very deeply for ur age and infact the whole set of events were real n believable and there was no definite right or wrong...just circumstances that get people to do things and the consequences that cause people tp realise their mistakes, understand their limitations and know the importance love /loved ones.
Loved Arjun going the rati way to get his parents together:)
it was brilliant!! Thanx di..
keep writing :) Will do..
I want to thank you for being an awesome critic.. I cant tell you how pleased i am to receive your take on this story.. It has always helped me towards betterment and i hope i will be guided in future too..
Love You Di..
love
Divya
Akansha

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

loved the part to the core........ i will never forget this ss.... Thanx parii..

truely arjun is such a dear child....

rati was nowhere in the part but her presence was always there...Rati is one of those who can never be ignored..

and my eyes widened when i read arjun sayin if mayur were going on a date.... i was lyk WAT,,,,,,,

i tell you i loved arjun in this part............ aweeee he is so mature and understanding,,,, thanx to rati.......... the part was of complete happiness and excitement........

waiting for the epilogue.................It will come in a little while.. Kinda busy..

muaah......... love this ff and will always love it...Muah!! I love you...

pari..

Akansha

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

Hey akansha!!!!😭 Hey pebo..
im just cryin out all i can I would never want to be the cause of your tears..I am so sorry..


this ws the most beautifull story writtern

t was just soo good Thanx ..

and its ending😭

i know it would be dragging

but i just love your ss!!!!! And i love you.. I hope i'd compensate with the epilogue..

about this part -

it was the most amazing part

i hlf expected arjun to forgive mayank first!!!

and he called him dad!!!

just love the bonding between mayank and arjun

they were just too good

and that song

it has srsly bcum one of my favourites now Great to hear that.. I am like the official promoter of the song..

and it truly defines his stste

finally nupur forgave

abnd the hug and kiss were sooooooooooo magical

it was just soo good

akansha im goin to miss this terribly I am going to miss writing this..

and u have to write a eplogue

igf u dont..................................
.............................................

i wont talk to u Sweet blackmail,eh? Will surely write it.. gimme a little time..

sp plll sssssssssssss do update soon Will do asap..

love pebbzzyyy Love, Akansha

Originally posted by: pagli91

Hey Akansha Hey!

was a lovely ending... better than i imagined... was so sweet... loved the song and imagining Mayu singing too that...

And Arjun being unArjunish was fabulous 😆Glad you liked it..

was a very cute end, wish it wasn't the end but oh well.. It is not the end.. Its a new beginning.. For mayank and nupur it is.. And for me as a writer.. it is more than that... was wonderfully written throughout...enjoyed it a lot...

plz do write more soon and pm me... thanks.. 😃 Will do..Take care..

Originally posted by: parvatisrikant

Hey Akansha...why did this end soo soooon.....was truly enjoying reading this..... I didn't want to drag it.. Sorry to have disappointed you..
The last part was awesome and was amazingly written.... 👏 Thanx

I was getting kind a senti and emotional while reading the part till the end....

Great work.....do write more of these and please PM whenever you write ss / ffs on MAYUR... Ofcourse.. will surely try to write more.. Take care..[/QUOTE]

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Will write more.. thanx for the comment..

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Thanx tasnim.. Glad you liked it..

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Thanx dear.. I am pleased to hear that you liked it... It was a pleasure writing this SS..

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Thanx.. I am glad you liked it..Take care

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Thanx dear.. Happy to hear from you.. Take care..

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So, people.. Forgive Me came to an end.. I can't tell you how i feel right now cause my vocabulary is ditching me right now..
Just to tell all the readers.. A big thank you.. It was a complete pleasure writing this for you people..
This was my first full fledged short story...And it will always remain very close to my heart.. I have made some awesome friends here and i can't thank you all enough for your support..

And and.. before i forget.. pebo, pari, deepika... Epilogue will be coming.. i just need a little time.. have written half of it.. but the other half will possibly take some time..

And a special mention to Divya di.. Thanx a ton di for your valuable insights.. Will always remember them and i hope to get more in future..

Once again guys.. Thanx a ton.. Love you people...

Love
Akansha

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ak12

Hello people.. I hope you all are going great..
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I am sorry for making you sad dear.. But, ill surely try to write more and more... Thanx for liking this SS. tae care....

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So, people.. Forgive Me came to an end.. I can't tell you how i feel right now cause my vocabulary is ditching me right now..
Just to tell all the readers.. A big thank you.. It was a complete pleasure writing this for you people..
This was my first full fledged short story...And it will always remain very close to my heart.. I have made some awesome friends here and i can't thank you all enough for your support..

And and.. before i forget.. pebo, pari, deepika... Epilogue will be coming.. i just need a little time.. have written half of it.. but the other half will possibly take some time..

And a special mention to Divya di.. Thanx a ton di for your valuable insights.. Will always remember them and i hope to get more in future..

Once again guys.. Thanx a ton.. Love you people...

Love
Akansha

awee......

yur busy,,,,,,

but kkk........

waiting for the epilogue lyk hell...........

take care

pari

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy akansha
Amazing update
But ended it so soon
Loved the song
N when r u updating we will be
Thanx for pm