MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey esha Hi Sur........

great starting...ye kya, Raj ki shadi hai aur vo khush nahi? very sad so toh hai....

do something abt it hmmm.....ab shaadi toh ussne ki hai.....main kya kar sakthi hu

this seems diff

i really like it

plz cont asap Thanks for liking it yaar.......

sur

Originally posted by: candyfloss

agar raj ki shadi kisi or se hui hai toe.......i will never read this fic.

Originally posted by: esha143

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE TITLE SIGGY YOGITHA...............ITS BEAUTIFUL


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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Interesting prologue!!!!! Thanx Shaina.........😊

Raj is getting married in a temple in Delhi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah.....typical shaadi...... isn't it?

The bride is very hppy but he is not as he had wished the circumstances had been different!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 Hmmm.......he is worried u see........

Who has Raj gotten married to??😕 😕 😕 😕 ab ye toh abhi pataa nahi..........

I am sure it is Naina kyunki Raj ki shaadi sirf aur sirf Naina se hi ho sakti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 hmmm.......dekhthe hai...........

Raj had wanted his favourite cadets and Abhimanyu to attend his wedding!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 ya he is missing them all ,u see.............

Raj is now leaving for his new mission on his wedding day itself!!!! That is sad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 haa,par duty hai nibhaanaa toh padegaa naa.............

He is thinking about his favourite cadets and his best friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah,Navin ki toh yaad aayegi hi naa...........

He is worried how will Naina cope up when her mentor is not there to protect her!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

ab jab ki vo KMA mein nahi hai toh usse chintha toh hogi hi........esp.Naina ki.........

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

keshariyaaaaaa....balam....aavo riiiiii padharo...maahre desh...(maahre desh...bole toh yahan par main RN fic writers palace ki baat karr rahi hun😆)
Ohho........shukriyaa......shukriyaa.........shukriyaa o mere Priyaa.....😆itne lambe comment deke dil khush kar diyaa..........😆

ab imagine karr ki main aarti ki thali liye....widout any ghunghat....(garmi hai yaar😆)...teri aarti utaar rahi hun...aur dil hi dil me khush ho rahi hun ki 'ab aaya oont pahad k niche😆'...ab meri baari...main bhi tujhe dhamki dungi...he he he... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Hmm...ruk karthi hu.....achchaa hai tu ne sirf ghunghat hi hataayaa hai........warnaa garmi keh ke agar tu kuch aur karthi toh mera kya hotha............😲😲😆😆😆😆😆
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Ud ki suruwat hui raj ki shaadi se...😛!!! matlab khushiyon se suruwat hui...😃!!! lekin dulhan koun hai...??? naam kyoun nahi bataya...aur kitna confusion creat karr diya...dulhan ko le kar... aur raj sab ko miss bhi karr raha hai... jab poori kahaani hi iss pe based hai toh aise kaise bataadu ki dulhan koun hai???ab thoda dheeraj rakh.........aage kuch 10-15 parts ke baad pataa chal hi jaayegaa ki dulhan hai kaun.......😆......kyun tab tak yahaa rehne ka iraada toh hai na😉?

dekh yaar...agar naina dulhan hui toh...merawala NIMBU PAANI tujhe milega😛...varna agar koi aur hui...toh tere bare me mujhe seriously sochna padega...!!! u know...jab koi A1 type ka pagal seriously kuch sochta hai toh...toh jis k bare me sochta hai na...use baht kuch mehengi paddnewali hoti hai...😆

ha ye baat sach kahi tu ne.....ki tu A1 type ki pagal hai.......aur uss mein bhi last stage par hai........jiskaa ilaaz Doc.Manaa toh kya duniyaa ka koi bhi doc nahi kar sakthaa.......ab mujhe hi apne baare mein kuch sochnaa padegaa.........🤔

okkkk...toh ab raj kisi mission par ja raha hai...😃!!! ab tumne raj ko koun si MANZIL di hai...yeh toh mujhe pata nahi...!!! par main hamesha yahi chahungi ki raj ki MANZIL hamare earth ki tarah gol hi ho...taki voh ghum phir kar ek hi jagah par atke...bole toh NAINA...😃 ab Raj ki mission gol hai ya square hai ye toh nahi pataa par shaayad itnaa dangerous jaroor hai ki.........tu toh hai hi samajdaar.......toh ishaara kafi hai naa😉?

dushre RN fic writer ki tarah late mat hona...aur jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii UD karna...ok😃
dekho bhai koun keh rahaa hai late mat honaa.........😲...khud toh late latif ki badi behen hai aur mujhse keh rahi hai.....Priya darling main naa tum sab se bohuth inspired hu fic ke maamle mein bhi aur UDs ke maamle mein bhi..........

....ab bata...mera NIMBU PAANI kahan hai...??? 😆
kyun tujhe abhi tak kisine nahi diyaa??????arre koi hai wahaa.....HER LIONESS ko jaraa NIMBU PAANI toh pilaavo yaar!!!bechaari itni lambi comment de ke thak gayi hogi!!!!!!!