MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11 - Page 2

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

another RN fic..............will be waiting for u to continue. i'm also unhappy the way the cv's ended the the 1st season. plzz can u pm me when u update?

Originally posted by: ~~~~

hii sweetie.. 😃 thanks for the pm.. 😃 heyyy.......no problem yaar

the prologue was awesome 👏 Thank u.....

i loved Major Rajveer singh Shekhavat..☺️ 😆 Hmmm..vo toh hum sab karthe hai😉

tumne to starting hi shadi se ki hai.. aur pata nahi kyu mujhe lagg raha hai bride naina nahi koi aur hai.. 😕 i hope am wrong.. 😊 I too hope...but dekhthe hai kya hotha hai......

last para padh ke darr lagg raha hai.. arre daro math yaar.....Rajveer ki army kisise nahi darthi.....

pls continue soon.. 😊 yeah I will........


love
Nandini 😃

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!! helllllllllllooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!😆

Aakhir tumne mujhe jhatka de hi diya !! so toh hai..................😉

main toh Weekend ke bharose baithi thi....! ab maine thodi naa kahaa tha Weekend tak rukungi!!!!!!

Khair...I am more than happy to see it's today !! 😃 n I'm much more than nervous

Ab apna Weekend ka promise toh tumhe poora karna hi padega? right? toh aisa karo, uss din first part post kardo !😛 Manaa......tu bohuth laalchi hothi jaa rahi hai yaar............😲

LRL fic !! Wow !! LRL after season 1 !! Double wow !!😃 tujhe pasand aayaa!!!Triple wow!!!😆😆😆

Aur yeh start hua hai Rajveer ke marraige se.... haa aakhir kuch toh dhamaakaa honaa chaahiye na.......😛

ab tune pandit bankar kisse uski shaadi karvayi...yeh toh tune bataya nahi...😛 arre pandit ko kya pataa hogaa kaun kisse shaadi kar rahaa hai.... usskaa kaam sirf shaadi karwaanaa hai.........bas!!😆

Par do baatein hamesha yaad rakhna....😊 ji firmaaiye..........

first....agar woh Naina huyi...(jo ki lag nahi raha hai, but mujhe phir bhi lag raha hai 😆 ki wahi hai..) toh tumhe bahot saare hugs, claps, kisses.etc etc milenge.... Okay.....we'll reserve this one for later usage agar ye hua toh........😆😆😆

second....agar woh Naina nahi huyi toh....phir do baatein hogi...😆 ( darr mat...tujhe koi kuch nahi karega...arrey agar tujhe kuch hogaya,toh fic kaun continue karega?? 😆 ) wow how considerate Doc......!!

ek...woh jo koi bhi " X " character hai...ya toh usse tumhe maarna padega... Docs maarthe nahi hai yaar bachaathe hai........aur tu mujhse khoon kawaane pe tuli hui hai..........😭

Do...ya uss "X" ka dil todna padega ! jab dekho tab ya toh maarne ki ya fir todne ki baatein karthi hai........😲

Kyunki Raj toh Naina ka hai...😛 and i hope tumhare RN fic mein N matlab Naina hai...NAndini nahi...🤢 hmm....ab ye N ka ya matlab hai......... kaun kahe?

par main yeh sab bakwaas kyun kar rahi hoon... sach mein tu ne realize ki......itni jaldi........😆😆😆

I know tum aisa nahi karogi...you must have something really interesting in store for us ! Over-confidence Doc........😉

Issliye go ahead buddy !! vo toh jaanaa hi padegaa.......ye raastha jo chun liyaa hai ab.......

Will be waiting for next part... WEEKEND pe...yaad rakhna ! Bhulna mat ! 😆

Do... yeah I knw u'll be waiting.........lalchi dost........😆😆

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Esha.... Hi Yogi........

Wow!!!! a new fic on RN n that too u r starting at the point of ending of season 1...superb Thank u.........

Awesome prologue 👏 👏 👏 ..Raj is Major in this fic...loved it Thanks again dear.......I'm glad u liked it..........

u described the shaadi so beautifully ....par ye kya yaar prologue main hi hum sab ko itna badha jhatka de diya tune ... raj ke shaadi kiske saath hua...kya wo bride naina hain ya koi aur..i am so eager to know this.... eager toh main bhi hu.....par dekhthe hai kab pataa chalegaa ki aakhir shaadi hui kisse aur kyun????

agar wo naina nahin koi aur nikli to ... tab tujhe meri haaton se kaun bachayega dear......mujhe bachchaane ke liye meri PARI hai naa😉.......

but i think mujhe itna wild hone ki jarrorat nahin ..main jaanthi hun tu aise galat kaam nahin karegi ..sahi kaha na maine sahi ya galath ka faislaa waqt par chod de yaar.....tu bas fic padh......

raj kaunsa mission par jaa raha hain...wo bhi batade haa jaroor...

ab tu jaldi se first part post karde yaaaaaa...........

love

yogitha

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Thank u sooo much Esha for starting a new RN fic !! Thank u sooo much Dhara for reading it !!!😛

You have started it very beautifully !! Thanx again yaar..........

Lekin yeh kya ? Major Rajveer ki shaadi ho gayi !! Mujhe aise lagta hai ke d bride is not Naina bt since you havent linked Rajveer's sadness to losing Naina, so I m hoping that the bride is Naina only !! very smart Dhara.........par Rajveer apni sadness kabhi sab ko nahi dikhaatha......if u remember...........😉

And 1 more thing, I cudnt press the like button coz its nt working 4 me !! no problem...i got that u liked it..........😛

Pls update soon as I m really eager to read d next part !! 😃sure ma'am

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear Hey Suhana

How r u??? I'm fine..........

So finally u decided to write a fiction on RN..😛 Yeah.....finally........

Nice prologue😊 Thanks yaar........

This story continue from post season 1..gr8 but who is Raj getting married to???

I dont think its Naina coz agar woh hoti to woh six cadets ko miss kyun karta?? Who is she???
ab isskaa jawaab jaanne ke liye dekhthe rahiye aglaa updates........😆😆

Continue soon sure..........

Bye

Originally posted by: mayadika11

new RN fiction wow..
amazing.........
awesooooooooooome........
just too good....
loved the prologue........ Thanks Yaar
plzzzzz cont soon.....
and add me in ur pm list.......... U r already in my list dear........
would love to read it..........
RN ff any time.......
and yes plzzzz next time mujhe hyper link mein apne FF ka link send karna ok.........
i will be waiting eagerly.......

Originally posted by: sunaina02

GreaT Start !!