Sajan - Jaane - Epilogue Pg96 (06-26-11) - No PM - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani

nice CS and contd .. PM me



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stupendo.....................................cont soon



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Originally posted by: Shafoo

i really love your CS



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Originally posted by: disco_diva

Awesome countinue soon
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Warm thank you to these people... saduf, aarthi.ramani, LOVEBARBIE, preety88, yasri, marisol45, ght_sajan, aamirkhanfan, kweetrockstar, Shafoo, dmgmjht4ever, sana_sajan.... I hope you guys will like this part... its sort of boring but next part is action-pack thriller...

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Chapter 1
Laaga Chunari Mein Daag

Two madly in love couple returned from their daily actives of the morning. One of them leaves to get fresh while the other one tiptoes into a room where young gal lays in her bed... hugging her teddy bear. The person who tiptoed into her room... smoothly touches her forehead and places a kiss on her forehead too afterwards whisper into her ear "Happy Birthday Gunjan"

Gunjan twist and turns in her bed "Bhabhi let me sleep" Shunya smiled before touching Gunjan's face with tenderly "I would mind letting you sleep in today since its your birthday, but who's gonna convince your brother"

Gunjan's eyes open up widely "Bhaiyya" jumps out of bed "Bhabhi i'll be down in two minutes"

Shunya just smiles before leaving Gunjan's room into her room and the minute she opens her room pair of shirt come flying into her face "Shlok"

Person who throwing clothes backward froze "Shunya finally you find time to check on your husband" Shunya couldn't even fake her anger "Shlok what are you looking for?" Shunya asked while she picked up Shlok shirts from the floor.

Shlok: Can't find my lucky shirt the one Gunjan gave me on my birthday? Did you see it?

Shlok move aside for Shunya and she looks for his shirt while Shlok wrap his arms around her waist.

Shunya: What are you doing?

Shunya moving by his touch...

Shlok: In the mood of romancing with my dearest wifey (enjoys tickling her)

Shunya laughing hard due trickles feeling crawling up her skin "Shlok stop it" finally break free from his hold and gave him his shirt before entering the bathroom.

Gunjan comes out dressed in simple red glass tissue shiny heavy embroidered anarkali suit with zardosi work on it. Gunjan smiled at her mirror reflection before heading downstairs. Quickly seek blessing from god and her parents photo than touches her Bhaiyya's feet "god bless you on this special day of yours and many happiness come into your life" Gunjan hugged her brother afterwards touch her Bhabhi's feet "I hope today will bring so much happiness into your life that you will not forget this day in your life" Shunya hugged Gunjan after kissing her forehead again.

Gunjan takes deep breathe...

Shlok: What happened? You should be happy today since its your birthday than why are you frowning?

Gunjan: I know its my b-day, but my birthday wishes are incomplete without Rohan Bhai.

Shunya: Woh to hai... without Rohan the house is so empty.

Gunjan: Bhaiyya when is Bhai's medical camp over cause I miss him?

Shlok: Hopefully soon

Gunjan: Hope so or else like Bhabhi said the house is so deadly without him.

While they are busy chatting away Rohan is sitting alone from his friends looking unhappy since its his Gunjan's birthday and he's at some stupid medical camp.

"Kya hua" asked by one of his friend Isha

Rohan looked at her "nothing" Isha isn't gonna fall for his looks lately "cough it up or else you ain't gonna enjoy your stay in the camp. I know you since internship's first day so tell me what's bothering you" Rohan takes deep breathe.

Rohan: Its my sister's birthday and I've never been this far from her.

Isha smiled "you love her a-lot"

Rohan: She's my life. You know when we were little Mom and Dad passed away afterwards Shlok Bhai always been there for us and Shunya Bhabhi from the day she entered our house. Our little world was filled with happiness and Gunjan makes these moments for special in my life. I love her so much that being far away scares me.

Isha: Why it scares you?

Rohan: What if something terrible happens behind my back and I won't be there to protect her. I know she can protect herself, but still I am overprotective of her.

Isha completely lost herself into Rohan's eyes "why are you looking at me like this?"

Isha break away from the eye contact...

Isha: I never knew how sweet and lovable person you are from what I observed from the minute we met.

Rohan: I know I might be spoiled by nature, but I know my limit as a brother and believe me if you meet my sister Gunjan you will fall in love with her like me. She's everything for me and my Bhai-Bhabhi.

Shlok and Shunya dropped Gunjan at her college...

Gunjan: Bye Bhaiyya... Bhabhi

Shunya: Bye and if anything happen (Gunjan interrupts)

Gunjan: Please don't hesitate in calling us. I know Bhabhi because everyday you tell me the same thing and i'll always repeat myself.

Shunya smiled...

Gunjan: I know I am the lucky girl cause my Bhaiyya and Bhabhi are the best of the best.

Shlok: Take Care sweetie

Gunjan: Don't worry Bhaiyya I can take care of myself. Love you guys and Bhaiyya can I please have the contact number of Rohan Bhai's camp cause I wanna talk with him.

Shlok: You couldn't wait until he returns back... right

Gunjan: Come' on its my birthday and without talking to Rohan Bhai its harmful to my health.

Shunya: Shlok give her the number it won't harm a fly

Shlok: I can't believe it!

Gunjan-Shunya: Why?

Shlok: Shunya you should be on my side since I am your husband but you always team up with my siblings. Its so unfair.

Shlok becomes unhappy "Bhaiyya carry on your mini fights for hospital... right now can I have the number please"

Shlok gives her the number afterwards drive away with Shunya looking sad from what Shlok said about her always siding with his sibling than being on his side.

To be continued...

Preview: After talking with Rohan Gunjan decides to catch the bus home when speeding van comes and pulls her inside.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start into the story
aww it's Gunjan's birthday :)
the precap scares me
what's going to happen to Gunjan?!?!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Very good start.........waiting for your next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Nice start.....u didnt pmed me....then also i read it....;)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
awesome concept and update loved it it was superb
do contineu soon
n thanx 4 the pm me

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