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Posted: 15 years ago
HI SANU HI DOLLY
U R TOO ROCKING
I LOVED THIS UPDT A LOTT
ROCKING UPDT
IM HAPPY THAT MAYU N DIA
STARTED REALISING SOME THING
BUT I THINK 4 SAJAN IS A LILL EARLY?
OR U GUYS R PLANNING SOMETHING BIG
4 THEM N OTHER 2 COUPLES?
LETS SEE
LOVE YAAA
MUUAHH
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys
here comes my update
after a long time
i hope u guys like it
dolly my twin this update is only for u
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
update>>

Mohabaatein>>>>>>>>>

(shimla)

Mayur+benji

Benji came running towards mayur

B:hey guys

Nupur is still totally shocked with that half sentence she was abt to say..

What was she thinking

Was it somekind of confession??

M:hi benji kya hua tu itna bhaga bhaga kyun aa raha hai?

B:phir kya dhere dhere aaun ??agar tum logh mera saath issi taraha bhag bhag ke wapis nahi chale na toh yahi rehna ,who logh humain chodh kar hotel akele pahunch jayainga samjhe

M:kya matlab

B:matlab yeh ki gadi bas nikal na hi wali hain

M:kya????????

B:han chalo

Mayank n benji were running but just than mayank notices that nupur was nowhere in his sight

M:ab yeh nupur kahan gayi (he thinks abt her n turn)

M:who rahi (he said to himself, seeing her standing)par yeh wahi kyun khadi hain jahan khadi thi hamare saath bhaag kyun nahi rahi (he ran back to her)

M:nupur tum bhaag kyun nahi rahi?? bhago (he took hold of her hand n started running)

They were running nupur was in her own world thinking what she is feeling what is it'?????? Is she alright n y mayank is looking ultra cute to her..????????

Mayank was still blabbering something which is she not getting at all..

They reached to jeep where sajan n dia where already there'

Just than raj sir came

R:ok students tum sab jeep main aao main dosri car main aa raha hoon hotel ok

All said together :ok sir

Raj sir went off

M:ok maina uus side bathunga samrat ka saath mein aur merasaath nupur bathegi ok

B:kya main kya tere sir par bhatunga

D:tum mera saath baith jao benji

B:hmm nahi thanks

D:kyun nahi bathoge baitho

A:nahi main baithunga waha ,ye suhani bahut paka rahi hain mujhe

Su:kya bola bhai dekhiye nah

S:kya bola adhiraj tune??? mayank tu khada khada kya kar raha hain ek maar adhi ko

Mayank gave him tight slap on his left shoulder

A:ouch mayank main tumhain

M:kya karega (mayank said showing him his biceps)

A:kuch nahi, kar hi kya saktahoon kaha phas gaya main(he said under his breath)

Su:bhai ab main baithungi aap ka saath

M:nahi main aur nupur baith rahe hain samrat ka saath

Su:nahi main

M:nahi maina

Su:main

M:main

Su:main

M:nupur tum kuch kyun nahi bolti

Nupur was still in daze of that confession scene n was smiling to herself

She just shaked her head in negative

M:ok koi baat nahi main hi tumhare taraf sa lad lunga

Sajan notice this

G:di ko kya hua hain

M:yeh mayank kab se nupur ka liye ladne laga???

They said to themselves'

The fight was going worse by every passing second

N sajan were just hearing their fight as if they were watching some comedy film laughing like anything

Just than mayank pushedbenji on dia n dia got pushed into gunji n gunji directly fell in sam arms n they were having cute eye lock

While this was going on'.the other side suhani was beating up adhi like dhobisn he cant do anything as if he say one word the two body gaurds of suhani(her brothers) will make his life heller than suhani is making right now so he was begging for forgiveness

N dia n benji were going on n on

D:tum mera saath kyun nahi baithna chate

B:kyun ki pata nahi

D:kya pata nahi

B:yeh hi ki kyun nahi baithna chata

D:tum baithna nahi chate aur tumha hi pata nahi

B:nahi

D:urrgh u r disgusting tum mera saath baith rahe ho

B:kyun

D:pata nahi

B:what

N they were just going on n on (lolz)

Mayank was hell confuse seeing how silent nupur is n gazing at her continously

M:mnupur kya hua

N:lagta hain kuch kuch hona shuru ho gaya hain

M:kuch kuch'???????

N:haan kuch kuch'!!!!!!!!(she smiled widely)

M:yeh kuch kuch kya hain

N:tum nahi samjhoga

M:par

Before he could say anything she went n sat a little far away from samrat

Mayank was about to say something to her when he notice sajan

He went n sat beside samrat mean in btw saNU

N was seeing to them continuously

N sajan were seeing each other continuously

M:samrat (he said patting at his back)

S:kya hain mayank

He said still seeing gunji

M:yeh tu kya kar raha hain

S:gunji ko dekh rha hoon

Everyone stood on their spot

Adhi n su stopped fighting with benai

N mayank notice that

M:twin sab tuyjhe dekh rahe hain

S:dekhna do

M:sab galth samjhainga

S:samjh na do

M:yeh gunjan ka liye thik nahi hoga

S:mujhe pata hain uska liye kya thik hain

M:kya thik hain'????????(he asked shocked n confuse)

S:meri bahon main rehna

M:shhhhhhhhhhh nupur nah sun liya toh tujhe maar degi

S:marna do

M:shut up samrat aur chodh gunjan ko

S:nahi chodh paunga

M:samrat

He bet him hand on his left check

S:ouch mayank kya kar raha hain awwww (he said in dam anger)

G:main dekhun

Sam just nodded

M:hey bhagwaan yeh logh kya kar rahe hain (he said to himself)

M:samrat princi

S:dad

Shouting so heturned around to see that everyone is seeing him n he left gunji causing her fall in jeep near his foot

G:ouch'

S:im sorry chashmish main who main

He turned to look at mayank n said from his eyes that plz save me

N mayank got that

He just gave a nod

While he(mayank) was taking care of benia n adi su who witness something really fishy going in btw sajan..

Sam made gunji sit on her seat who blushing like anything n said quietly

S:im sorry

G:its ok

N they immidately strted doing something

Gunji started reading book

N sam started humming

All got settle in jeep

On left were sitting samrat mayank n nupur suhani

On right were sitting gunjan benia n adi

G:yeh kya ho raha tha shit yeh kya ho raha hain mujhe'?????????

S:maina kya kya bol diya oh no yeh kya ho raha hain mujhe'???????

M:yeh nupur ko ho kyagaya hain but main uskabare main itna kyun soch raha hoon mujhe kya ho raha hain'?????????

N:mujhe mujhe kuc kuch omg yeh mujhe kya hone lag gaya hain'????????

B:yeh dia ko kya hogaya but main kyun dia ka pass baitha hoon mujhe kya hone laga hain..??????

D:main benji ko apna pass kyun baiuthai mujhe yeh kya honalaga hain'??????

Su:adi I hate u yeh pyaar mujhe kyun hua..????????

A:I know tum mujhe man hi man khos rahi ho su I hate u too n I know tum bol rahi hogi ki tumna pyaar kyun kiya main bhiyehi bol raha hoon maina pyaar kyun kiya..???????

These things r going in their mind while whole journey'..!!!!!

Scene 2>>

They reach hotel

All came out of jeep one by one

N went into the hotel

Raj sir gave 5 room keys to mayank

R:tum logh fresh ho jao n meet me at dinner at this hotel restaurant ok bye

M:ek min sir

R:kya hua

M:sir 5 keys hum toh 8 hain

R:oh tum logh ko ek room ko share karna hain 2 people in each room

M:ok sir

Raj was about to go

M:ek min

R:now what

M:sir hum 8 hain

R:I know agge bolo

M:aur keys 5

R:toh'.. oh I got it 1 key extra hain nah

M:kyun sir

Stranger:kyun ki woh room mera hain

All turned in that direction

Su:a:b:uday(they said in dam shock)

D:dodo(she said happily)

Nu:g:uday bhaiya (they said over happily)

M:s:uday (they sighed)

R:well he is the player of bb team instead of sam

M:s:what????????????/

N their turn to be in shock

G:wao uday bhaiya zarur ab humari team ko jita dainga

sam looked at gunji like is she ok uday aur kehlna ka door door tak wasta nahi hain

but he was not able to continue his thought seeing gunjan dam happy

n she was looking too januable to him

uday came running towards gunur n hugged them tightly

just than mayank said to sam

m:agar yeh uday candi ka bhai na hota to aaj yeh zinda na bachta mere hathon

s:u r right gunji ko koi mer alava hug kare I cant stand it

m:kya

s:hmm mhhh who tumna kya kaha

m:kuch nahi

N than dia said

D:dodo

U:diz tum thik toh ho nah

D:kyun

U:nahi pehli baar tum itna pyaar sa mujhe bula rahi ho

N benji started laughing like hell but dia one anger stare stop him

B:im sorry

N dia just smiled

Uday was too confuse to get anything

Just after that all got apart after they got their rooms key

Mayank nsam one room

Gunur in one room

Su n dia in one room

Adi n benji in one room

Uday alone in one room

Every one went except sayank they were about to go when they crahed into someone

Stranger:im sorry

S:its ok

Sayank were about to go when they shouted

M:s:nikkieeeeeeeeee

The girl got stop on the spot

N:mayank samrat

N they hugged each other

N:what surprise yaar

S:yeh toh humain bola chaiye tum yahan kaise

N:arry yaar main yahan ek college meet main judge hoon mera chodo yeh batao tum logh yahan kaise

M:jis meet ko judge kar rahi ho nah tum usi main hamara college hissa le raha hain

N:really wow im shock

m:oh I missed u

mayu said hugging her

s:I missed u too

From far away nupur saw them hugging

N freez

loads n loads n loads n loads of love
dolly n sanu😉
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res

OMG the best part was Uday's entry!!
Gosh i was missing him in the gang, now he's here too....simply FAB!:D:D

Coming to the whole chap.
I LoVeD the Jeep Scene😆 it was damn funny!
So now we have Nikki in the story...n nupur misunderstanding the situation😆
Oh well i wud like to see her all riled up n jealous😉

I can imagine a confused mayank already😆 but u may surprise me as always..!

An awesome Matilicious update!
LoVeD every bit of it!

Hats Off to u Sanu n dolly👏👏
U guys rock!

Agli baar pls jaldi update karna😳 By God bohut intezaar karwate ho!😆

Thanks for the PM

Lots of Luv
ZJ :D
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg............main?????????????????????????????sayank ki frnd??????????????upar se i huggd sayank??????????????😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍...................

i cant believe.....mera mooh khula ke khula reh gaya....tht ws such a shockin rockin sweetest surprise yaar.....finally my dream come true...to be sayank's frnd in ny ff.....whos idea is this??????whoevr it is...i thank u both sanu n dolly frm d bottom of my heart.....srsly..i cant tell u hw much happy i am readin this update....thnxxxxx a zillion ton jaanis....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh forgt to tell...i lovd reaction of nups on my scene wid sayank....hehe.....thnxx a spl ton for tht....😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki028

omg............main?????????????????????????????sayank ki frnd??????????????upar se i huggd sayank??????????????😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍...................

i cant believe.....mera mooh khula ke khula reh gaya....tht ws such a shockin rockin sweetest surprise yaar.....finally my dream come true...to be sayank's frnd in ny ff.....whos idea is this??????whoevr it is...i thank u both sanu n dolly frm d bottom of my heart.....srsly..i cant tell u hw much happy i am readin this update....thnxxxxx a zillion ton jaanis....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

oh meri bhulakadd dii it was ur idea onlyyyy hee hee hee
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing fantastic mindblowing
finally itne days k baad aap ne ud to kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

waiting 4 nxt..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwww zee u r damm sweet yaar
n yup our dodo has entered ab dekhna k vo kya kya karta haii
n mayankkk hmm wait n read
is baar update hum dono jaldi karenge pakaaaaa
@nikki di
hi dii hmmmm to aap ab happy happy ho na
this was for u na
lov u diii
@preety i am glad girl that u liked the update yaar loved uu
@radhika di
lovvvvvvvvvvvv u di n kaan pakad k sorry for late update is baar aisa nahi hoga paka paka
loads of lov
dolly n sanu
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update guys loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Girls really cute update. Loved the part in the jeep, was samrat in his senses, LOLs
Then everyone in teir cute little fights and Mayank and Samrat being possesive for Suhani, Poor adhiraj.
And then the Uday part, it was so funny whe everyone said his name in their own way, especially SaYank.
Continue soon.
@ Sana, sweety yor back missed you like sooooooooo much. btw i changed my username but i am resshu AKA sayankgunur

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