mjht ss by sanu n dolly{MOHABATEIN(part1,pg81)new!

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heya guys me n sanu finally decided to write a ss together ... its going to be on mjht nn out three jodies , basically sajan , mayur n beniašŸ˜‰...
sanu still doesn't know abt benia partšŸ˜†..
n i wanted her to post this topic but vo maharani abhi tak online ni aayi.. n i was free for the evening .. actually my dad picked all my books away from me n locked them in my cupboard. he was frustrated that i was still studying(i tell u i love daady)..
kk soo i was free n the update was already ready so mm posting this topic.. guys doo read nn comment k??? n critisize too..
this is our first attempt together nn we hope u guys will like it..
n well for the poster of our ss i didnt do anything new(my paintshop just got expired so....)
so i made our banner of the old favourites of mine......
k sanu this one for our long lasting friendship lov ya jaan😳
INDEX>>
PART 1 ..{PAGE1}
PART 2 ..{PAGE9}
PART 3 ..{PAGE18}
PART 4 ..{PAGE27}
PART 5 ..{PAGE35}
PART 6 ..PART A={PAGE44}
PART B={PAGE45}
PART 7 ..{PAGE55}
PAGE 8 ..{PAGE65}
PART 9 ..{PAGE71}
PART 10 ..{PAGE81}
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update1>>
PREFACE>>

Samrat n mayank r two hottest dudes of excel colledge Mumbai.. samrat is principal's son while mayu is his chuddy buddyn son of shilpa sharma , cousin sister of princy.. they both 4 completely different in personalities n yet they call each other twin'

Because both of them are always able to judge what the other is thinking,,, none of them had ever been able to lie to each other' ever'...

samrat calls mayank by mayu,twin or mob(my opposite brother)
n mayu calls sim as samrat, twin or msb(my s--y brother,, though sammy thinks mayu is more s--y then him .. still)
N now they have to go to a national colledge meet,, (in shimla) to represent their college'. What is this journey going to bring in there life???????? 😳

N then there are gunur ,, the morena sisters'. No one likes them much .. but they r highly talented even though being completely behenji types as diya would say it'

They too make a part of the team going to shimla'

Mat be this journey changes their lives fore ever ttoo

Who knows???????šŸ˜‰

benia>> last but certainly not the least .. benia these two can never stand each other,, n have completely contrasting personalities.. benji is very close friend of saynk n dodo(dia's twin brother) so he knows dia too.. dia is by the way the diva of the college ,, a breadth taking beauty.. n completely out of leagur for benji ....
n yet still
this trip changes things for them toooo..
may be they'll like it.....n may be not😳
.....
UPDATE 1>>
SCENE 1>>
(BY SANU)>>

We see a girl is in kitchen preparing breakfast and humming as well .

her voice is sweet as honey and just than a girl wearing night dress came in really irritated with her voice

D:gunjan just stop it .my ears r aching hearing ur so called song(yes guys the girl was non other than gunjan now girl turned around smiling at her cousion who is too irritated with her song but what can she do "unhain uthana ka liye kuch toh karna hi padta"but she never want to disturb them with her song but what ever she is doing is it all for them)

G:dia mai toh bas tumhain uthana ka liye hi

D:oh plz gunjan now stop giving me all proof on ur own innocenes(well its daily routine of dia to let her frustuation out on gunji of anything as till now u all got that dia does not like gunji as she think she is too down market and behenji type girl as they came from morena and they r true an INDIA type girls belive in all bloody traditions)

G:dia mai toh bas

D:gunjan I mean my words (just than uday entered inn )

U:gunjan mujhe kuch prathon ki zabardast khosboo aa rahi hai kya mujhe kuch parathe mil sakte hain

G:ha kyun nahi uday bhaiya yeh lijiye(she said handing him 2 parathas with dahi in a cup in plate)

U:bas 2 hi(gunjan smiled and gaved more 2 but uday took more 2 from the hot pot from where gunji is giving parathas and ran out of kitchen .during the time uday and gunji were talking ,dia left from there .after both went away gunji too went into her di's room..i mean THEIR room)

G:di di diiiiiiiiiii uteya nah (she said shaking her slightly)

N:do min gunjan plz sona dena plz

G:di plz utiye nah hum lateho jayainga

N:gunjan aaj toh Sunday haina phir kyun mujhe utha rahi hai

G:di tum bhool gayi aaj humain Indian level college meet ka liye jaana hain

N:hai par train toh 11 baja ki haina

G:aur 10 already baj rahe hai

N:KYA (nupur shouted top of her lungs as she sat on bed we can see her face she looking like an anghel in her night suit)

She ran into washroom taking her clothes on which gunji smiled in 10 mins she was on breakfast table she came running and got irritated seeing gunjan eatig happily when they have so less time to go station

N:arry gunjan tu kya aram sa kha rahi hai chalna nahi hai kya hum late ho jayainga

U:nupur abhi train jane kafi time

N:kaise abhi toh (she turn to see clock)8 BAJ rahe hai(she shouted)gunjan tuna toh kaha tha ki(gunji said cutting her off)

G:sorry di tumhain uthana ka liye jhoot bolna paa(she said holding her ears)agar jhoot nahi bolti toh aap late uthti aur aap ko bina breakfast ka jana pada(hearing the reason the on which lieied nupur full anger melted in a sec)

N:thik hai thik hai maaf kiya(she said still showing fake anger in her eyes gunji just smiled knowing her di very well nupur noticed her smile)

N:ab hasna bandh kar hum late ho jayainga chal jaldi breakfast kar ka nikalte hai

They had their breakfast and left in hurry as it is 9 but before leaving it was a cute bidaai of them as uday was not leaving them saying he will miss them every sec and dia was as usall irritated with this stuff and did not bid bye to them and left.

On road gunji and nupur not getting single tax but they got nearly after 10 to 20 mins which occurs to late them to reach station

SCENE 2>>
(BY DOLLY)
(BY MAYANK)

My head was really pounding so hard.. n I looked sheepishly at mom as she placed another glass of nimbu pani in front of me in full anger'.

'maa sorry..'

'mayu chup bilkul chup.. haalat dekh apni.. kisne kaha tha tujhe itna peene ko??'

'benji ne''

'usne kaha aur tune maan liya' aaj se pehle to benji ki koi baat nahi maani tune mayu'

'maa.. usne kaha fruit juice hai''

'hadd hai' mujhe to samrat ki haalat k bare mein soch soch kar kuch hota hai'

Just then my cell phone beeped.. n picked it up lazily from the dinning table'

It was a message from samrat'

'dude..pls just pls help me finding some corner in my own house where I can find some sleep'.plss'

I smiled..poor samrat'..

'ab daant kyun nikl raha hai????,'.. vaise mayu aaj tune brush kiya???'

'maaaaaa..'

'kya maa' tum dono ko pata hai agar kal principal sir ko pata chal jaata to kya hota tum dono ka????'

I shuddered'.

Even the thought that prince uncle might have cum to knw abt what we did yesterday after drinking so much made me cringe'.

I hardly remembered what had happened yesterday ' but mom had known everything.. last night when banji n uday had come to drop me here.. they told her thn' mom said they were laughing soo hard that it was getting really difficult for them tooo support the fainted me on their shoulders'.

Yesterday's night's story had been like this

Apparently after getting high both me n samrat climbed college's terrace n had sung songs standing n dancing there for about 2 hours b4 adhiraj n benji finally manged to get us both downnn'

Bnji had even said that I enacted the scene from sholey where viru had climbed paani ki tanky in order to get basanti from mausi ji'.

The only difference between the two scenes was..

That my mausi ji was with me up on the paani ki tunky'

Yup samrat played the role of mausi ji'..

I hit my forehead hard with my fist..

This was going to be embarrassing.. how the hell were we going to face out gang today in colledge???? They all will be laughing their heads out at us'.

I was so so going to strangle benji..

My cell beaped again..

It was samrat again..

'dude I think I tol;d u to help remember????'

I sighed b4 text messaging him back..

'how about in bathroom??'

I waited just for few seconds b4 getting the reply'

'twin subha se vahin pe to so raha tha .. ab tere princy n mere daddy ne mujhe laat mar ke vahan se nikal diya' currently mm sleeping in my store room over the washing machine.. n my haed is hurting like hell why though???'

'yeh samrat bhi na.. ise yeh tak yaad ni k ise hangover kis cheez se hua hai..'

I flinched on hearing mum's vioce cmg from my back'..

She had read the message over my shoulder''

'mayu tujhe station nahin pahunchana aaj tumhari team shimla k liye ja rahi thi remember??'

'mom .. 11 baje ki train hai..'

'acha beta '. Zarra time piece to dekho!!!'

I heart fluttered a little at the tone she had used' n my heart came to a complete stop when I fixed my eyes on the clock'''.

It was 10.00 clock already

'oh freak''''

I ran towards the door,, but fell down just a few meters away from it .. because my laces were open'

'mayu kya kar raha hai'

My mom bend down as I tried to get up n tie my laces..

She made me move my hands away n tied my laces back for me'

What was I going to do without her???

Then she got up n handed my my back pack(which she must have packed for me)

N kissed me good bye..

'ab jaldi ja .. aur pehle jaake apne us dost ko tyaar karwa' agar aaj vo phir late hua to princy tum dono ko maar daalenge' aur beta mujhe apna budhapa bin b'te k nahin guzaarna ok????'

She smiled n ruffled my hair..

I so so hated this action of hers ,,, so I scowled back.. but then on seeing her lovely smile my scowl changed to a grin n I hugged her back b4 rushing outside ''.

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loads of lov to you all guys
sanu n dolly😳
PLACE RESERVED FOR SANU'S REPLY...
SANU U POST UR REPLY ANYWHERE I'LL COPE PASTE IT HEREšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!!!! i loved the ss... specially the pic

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fantastic ff....
great concept......
do i need to say that add me to your pm list
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awesomeeee SS guyzz..
its mindblowingggg..
do cont soon..
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hi dear
awesome
mind blowing update.
loved it.
waiting 4 next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome ss.
you guys are amazing writers.
m just loving sayank.😳
continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww
guys thanku alll of uu guys for liking the ss
damm it i forgot to reserve the place for sanu
vo to mujhe maar hi daalegi by god
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sana and dolly loved it dear..
concept is very nice..
waiting the gang to go to shimla..
update soon..waiting for it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Haha Bechara Samrat šŸ˜†
Loving This Yaar Your Too Good Its Brilliant
Cannot Wait Till The Nxt Part
Pm Ok Im Desperate To Know Wat Happens Next !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb loved it....
do continue soon!!

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