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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

hey thanks for tHAT lyna n dona part

cute of u
will ask sanu tu choose one
thanks 4 liking the part
loads of love
dolly😳

yaar ab hum koi actor actress hain kya joh ab humare bhi naam hongah lol if u want to can keep it
lyna or dona😆
lol humara bahut funny name ho raha hain
its better we dont keep it😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dolly just read all replies n now i get y every one r so eagerto read our update
anyways i too got many pm today regrading this update to update soon
so where r u update the next part soon
muuhhhhhhhhhh
lov yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ur's sanu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey yaar sana
wonderful updates.
sorry for such late reply. actually i was buzy in my entrance exams.
sorry
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Posted: 15 years ago
dolly u pm box is full yaar
erase some message
main tujhe kab sa pm kar nah ki koshish kar rahi hi hoon u know that
im really anger right god mera sr phat jayega gussa sa lagta hain
tu pm box jitna jaldi ho sake khali kar plz
im not able to send u single pm my bad luck
im missing u terribly
hope u be ol soon
me going bye
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Posted: 15 years ago

hy guys sorry for the late update

but this one is longgg

guys this update is mostly by me but the next one will be completely by sanu n well i read her scenes n they r simply shimply awsome blosssoooommm

will update those scenes soon

do comment n critisize guys

loads of lov

dolly n sanu

n ps== saanu meri jaan sorry again for pm box.. pls pls meri princess ab gussa thuk de

tere guisse se mujhe bahut darr magta hai yaaar

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
part a>>>

update 6>>>>>>

(by gunjan)

I backed off a little

Rv:- kya hua princess???tum his highness se door kyun jaa rahi ho??tumhe pata nahin hai ke ladkiyan ranvijay k sirf kareeb aati hain us se duur nahin bhagti…..

Saying so he took a step forward towards me, terrified I looked behind towards samrat..

He was still standing in front of the chemist shop talking to the shopkeeper.

N wasn't even looking towards me…

A chilling wave of fear engulfed me then.. being with samrat had meant being safe…

But now I no longer felt safe..

I should have shrieked then..

The boy can't possible do anything nasty with me since we were standing in such a crowded station with my friends n samrat being just few hundread meters away from me..

I sucked in air in an attempt to build a decent scream…

But my throat felt to dry….

That had always been the case with me..

Fear made me freeze over, completely numbing n disabling me….

N also making it completely difficult for me to react…

Rv:- kya hua gunjan????? Humare paas nahin aaogi kya..

Oh no how did he knew my name???

The things just kept on changing from bad to worst..

Ranvijay used his hand to tuck back a loose strand of my hair behind my ear

NOOOOOO???

No this cant be happening with me

Scream gunjan , run from there do something anything….

I could feel faint trails of my moist tears running down my cheeks ..

G:=pls… pls.. mujhe jaane dijiye..

I was right abt the dry throat ,, no volume was there in my pleading..

Rv:-- oh pls princess .. let me enjoy… don't disturb k!!!!

Aur yeh dupatta kyun liya hai tumne??? Iske bina tum zyaada achi lagogi .. belive me..

Saying so he moved ahead , inching his arm forward to reach my shoulder..

I closed my eyes…I would scream.. yes I would .. I wont let this guy molest me so publicly

Scream ,,, I should scream…I wont let this person molest me so publically

I would scream yes

But me throat felt too dry n limbs felt locked in as I stood freezed with fear on the spot…

I waited for rv to wrench off my dupaata n sure enough the move came..

I felt his nasty touch on the side of my neck as in one fast n swift moment he took hold of my dupatta..

i opened my eyes..

no this couldn't be happening to me …..

I blinked.. several times to make sure that whatever I was seeing was correct..

A bandaged hand had caught hold of ranvijay's hand tightly..

I looked besides me n saw samrat standing there..

As he took my dupaata back from rv's hands ..i could feel my self calming down..

Samrat was here he wont let anything happen to me no he wont…

As I stared at him I noticed his features..

He was damm angry n that scared me to no ends

Never b4 had I seen such expression on anger on someone's face whole of my life..

This made him look even more deadly n angelic…

.

(by samrat)

I glared at the boy.. I remembered him, he was the one I had beaten up b4 ,, but I think that dose wasn't enough for him ..

How dare he touch chashmish..

An anger I have never known before seethed through me at super speed.. my right hand clenched in a fist n without even thnking twice I stuck it on his stupid face..

Ranvijay staggered backwards n fell on the floor over his butt..

I moved towards him ..

Completely sure that this ime I would commit his murder..

But someone caught hold of my arm

I turned to see gunjan standing besides me , completely terrified.. she was holding me back..

G:- pls samrat chalo yahan se plsss.. chodo use..

I looked at her,, seeing her in tears n terrified that way pained me a lot…

In I didn't understand these feelings at all..

I wanted to beat rv but seeing gunjan soo afraid made me think that may be I should leave him ..

I moved towards her ,..

She was still sobbing silently holding my arm..

I took the duppata n draped it back over her shoulders..

by now a small crowd had gathered around us

N this was freaking gunjn even more…

I put my arm across her shoulders n I wanted to make her turn n get the hell out of their..

Around us people had started muttering , s some stupid ladies were openly pionting at me n gunjan..

How rude..

Rv:- tum his highness se aise behave karke bach nahin sakte mr samrat ..

I wont leave u

Anger surged throough me again..

I turned towards him ,, rv was standing now

S:= really ranvijay… I don't think soo.. n vaise bhi aaj meine his highness ki lowness ko bahut ache tareeke se dekh liya hai..

Rv:- abhi kahan samrat …

Abhi to game shuru hui hai.. ranvijay par haath uthaya hai tumne .. tumko aur us ladki ko is baat ki kimat to chukani hi padegi….

S:- just shut up ranvijay.. apni bakwas band karo n jao yahan se..

I stopped then ..

Few boys had sorrounded me n gunjan,,

They were rv's college mates..

He really wanted to fight with me..

Ok then

Time for pay up

Mr lowness…

(mayur, benia, adhani n cj .. they r standing outside the train compartment)

Suhanni:- oh god yeh bhai ab tak aaya kyun nahin .. unka number bhi nahin lag raha..

Pata nahin kahan reh gaya hai..

Nupur:- yeh gunjan bhi pata nahin kahan reh gayi hai n yeh samrat k saath kya kar rahi hai.. hey bhagwan meri behan ko jaldi bhej do..

This behaviour of nupur was really irritating mayank like hell .

Yet still whenever he looked at her , her eyes held him soo captive that he forgot everything about his irritation ..

B:- vaise mayank ,,, mausi ne tumhein tumhari basanti di k nahin???

Saying so benji started laughing out aloud n was soon jioned in by adhani n cj n dia..

This sentence of benji also destroyed mayank's i-have-drowned-in -nupur's-eyes situation..

M:- teri to mein..

Mayank advanced towards benji who backed a little in fright..

B:- dekh mayank tu mujh se duur reh ok .. agar tune mer saath kuch kiya na to tujhe phaansi ki sazza ho jayegi nn mera bhoot tere ghar mein tere bed k upar tandav karega..

M:- tandav k bache kal teri vajha se meri aur samrat ki itni kharab haalat ho gayi..

Adi:- kharab kahan mayank .. tum dono to seriously bahut enjoy kar rahe the .. maine dekha , college ki chat par jaise tum dono dance kar rahe the ajeeb ajeeb se gaane gaate huye…

I am damm sure u were really enjoying ur self..

This makes everyone laugh even more

MLturning too adi) == just because u r going to marry my cousin sister doesn't mean that I cant kiill u k??

Adi—k sorry saale sahab

Mayank again starts advancing towards benji ,, who backs off ..

Dia cums in between them at last moment

D:- chill mayank .. raat gayi baat gayi.. leave benji alone..

M(startled at dia's behaviour,,,, actually as shocked as benji himself was…)== u r taking benji's side in this candy?????

D==NOOO I mean yes .. I mean no…. ughh what ever we should find gunjan n sammy don't u think???

M== haan .. I'll call him up again..

N== mayank vo dekho.. vahan itni bheed kyun jamma hai??

M== kahan???

N== us chemist shop k aage..

M== dunno.. kuch hua hoga…

B== chodo na yaar humein kya karna hai.. yeh india hai yahan k railway stations par normally kuch na kuch hota rehta hai.. lets try finding gunjan n samrat…

Adi== dammed .. mayank is that samrat?????

Cj== haan lekin samrat vahan kya kar raha hai???

Suhani== what the hell …. Bhai kisi se fight kar raha hai hana???

N== gunjan… gunjan kahan hai???

M== vo rahi … usi bheed mein ….

N mayank runs towards the crowd

Everyone else follows him…

Cj goes inside the compartment n notifies their two profs that had cum to accompany them in the trip

(fight scene …. By narrator)

Samrat makes gunjan stand to one side n then stands in front of her making it sure that none of the idiotic guys have easy access to her…

He gets ready ;;

he knows

That this confrontation was surely going to convert in a nasty fight

N If it did he would make sure that rv has all his teeth broken

He would look really cool then

His highness with broken teeth ….

The boy standing on right side of samrat advances to him n in a very swift moment n tries to stuck a blow at samrat's face..

Samrat holds his hand .. turns him around n pushes him forward

The boy staggers n falls face down on the floor…

In no time all the boys litterally gather around samrat n the fight starts ..

They try hard but they r no match for samrat

Not even a single bit…

In the crowd someone goes to notify the station master while most of the others were enjoying the free show..

Samrat doesn't realise when rv cums behind him ..

Rv has a broken bench bar in his hand…

Samrat is busy fighting the other guys so he doesn't even notice rv..

Gunjan sees him at the last second

G:= SAMMMMMMMMMMMMMRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTT

She rushes forward ..towards sammy ,As rv lifts of the bar to hit samm with it, squarely on his head ….

Samrat turns around..

N he sees mayank standing there between him n rv , holding the bar with one of his hands..

M:== how dare u?????

He stucks his fist up rv's nose , just like samrat had done a litte while befor..

This causes rv to fall n land on his butt

Again..

Both mayank n samrat laugh at him ..

In the background benji n adi take care of the rest of the stupid boys…..

One of them slips past them n tries to lunge for gunjan from behind

But nupur stucks him with her sandle just in time n he too staggers on the floor along side rv

N this makes both mayank n samrat n everyone else gathered around them roll out in laughter…..

Ran vijay stands on his feet again n looks completely embarresed n mad in anger..

He move forward towards sayank with the bench bar still in his hand when some one gets hold on his hand..

He stops n looks behind to see ….

Raj

Gys he is one of the two profs who is accompaning the students to the acdemic meet

N well meet mr rajveer singh shekhawat)

Raj:== itni jaldi bhi kya hai ??? may I know who u r .. n why the hell r u attacking my students..

Raj's entry shuts everyone up ..

Seeing him samart approaches him

S:= sir yeh virus college k students hain ,, we know them ,har national meet pe yeh log humeshan excell college k students k saath bateemeezi karne ki koshish karte hain ..

Lekin is baar to in hone hadd hi kar di ….

Ranvijay n uske kuch saathiyon ne chashmish k saath bat meezi ki

Raj== chash what???

Samart== I mean gunjan sir..

Raj really gets angry thenn , first to know that his students were attcked without any provocation n now that he knew that one of his girl students was m isbehaved with he was so not going to leave those rascals…

Raj== I need to speak to ur teachers.. r their any professers accompaning u???

There was such power in raj's words that it made ranvijay feel even more calastrophobic then before.. he was about to answer when he was interrupted by the shrill vioce of the station master…

St m== kya ho raha hain yahan pe??? Kaun ho tum log aur yeh kya tamashaa laga rakha hai..

Raj moved forward towards the station master n motioned mayank n samrat to jion him

They talked with the station master n told him collectively about what had happened there..

Then when station master understood everything he agreed to not take any action against excel students as they had not been the one who had instigated the fight..

So instead he moved towards ranvijay n his gang n asked them to follow hi to his office n bring there tickets along with them …

Station master didn't want to allow the virus boys to carry on their journey forward n wanted to call in the police , to have a case of misconduct n molestation registered against them

Rv(literaaly begging with the station master)== pls sir hum mein maaf kar dijiye .. humara shimla pahunchana bahut zaruri hai.. pls aap hum mein

St m== yeh sab aisi harkatein karne se pehle soch lena chahiye tha bachu ,, ab jo kiya hai uski saza to tum logon ko bhugatni hi padegi…

Rv was really feeling angry …. He wanted to take the station master to a corner n bribe his way out of this mess though he knew for sure that samrat n his gang n specifically his teacher wont allow this to happen..

So the only way left for him was to beg n plead his way outt of this mess..

That would be seriously embareessing but then once they were in shimla he would show mayank n samrat what he was….

Rv== pls sir hum sorry keh rahe hain na hum sab apni galti mante hain

Samrat was really getting pissed off at the act rv was putting up n was about to speak when mayank caught hold of his shoulder n whispered to him..

M== no samrat let him do whatever he wants .. the station master wont leave him n twin it seriously feels good to see him pleading like that

S== right again twin I think I will shut up n enjoy the free show???

M(still whispering) = r u fine??

S==(samrat smiled while replying though he hid his injured hand behind his back) yup I am great don't worry

M== you know u really cant lie to me..

S= huh??

M== u always bite ur lips nervously when u lie so tell me what is so not fine with you???

S=(?sighing heavily) ok here is what is not ifne with me,, but mob pls don't over react ok I am fine..

Saying so he brings his hand(bandaged one in front, samrat hadn't realised but his hand had started bleeding again.. may be that was because he had faught with the guys)

Now that samrat was looking at his bandaged hands he could feel the nasty throbbing pain it was causing ….

M(not whispering this time)== DAMM SAMMRAT WHO DID THAT

Samrat n raj in unison==shhhhhhhhhhh

Raj== what happened??

M= sir see his hand

R== oh god samrat what happened to you??

S(immediately shoving the bleeding again hand behind his back , afraid that gunjan would see it)= nothing sir I am fine..

M== ranvijay did this right??

S== right n don't worry bro we r soo not going to leave him

M== yes twin I agree no one is going to leave that nasty prick unless he gets all his teeth boxed in

S== hee hee that's what I thought .. we r alike twin

M== that's why we r called twins stupid

Raj== will the two of u shut up n remeber that we all r in middle of a damm drama

N that.. its because of us that a whole train is getting delayed???

S n m in unison== sorry sir

Raj== its alright…… vaise I am with u guys too.. in not leaving that nasty prick alone part

Both s n m smile at their beloved sir…

Rv== dekhiye sir agar aap chahete hain to mein gunjan ji se sabke samne maafi bhi mang sakta hun .. pls hummein jaane di jiye…

(rv doesn't even wait for station master to react to his request n moves forward towards gunjan, who immediately backs a little. Nupur moves closer to her sister n glares at rv ….)

Rv== dekhiye gunjan ji hum aapse ki gayi bat ta meezi k liye sharminda hain..

S(advancing towards rv in pure anger) = get away from her ranvijay..NOW…

There was such n intensity in samrat's comaand that rv automatically staggered back . n looked at samrat ,, everyone else was looking at samrat shocked tooo ..

S=tumhari bakwas sun ne k mood mein yahan pe koi bhi nahin hai rv … so it would be really better if u will just shut up….

Then samrat turns to the station master

S== aapki duty hai k is ladke aur iske colledge k group ko aap is station se agli train board na karne dein .. n u should make sure ki rv shimla na pahunch paye do u get it???

Station master feels really intimidated at samrat's anger just simply nods his head in agreement…

Raj== samrat calm down pls…

S== no sir .. ranvijay is baar apni galti ki sazza bhugte bina nahin jayega..

G== samrat pls let him goo

Samrat is shocked to hear this n turns to look at gunjan confusedly..

S== gunjan tum yeh ky keh rahi ho???

G== haan samrat ,, ranvijay bura hai lekin agar hum log bhi iske saath vahi karenge jo isne mere saath kiya

To ism ein aur hum logon mein farak kya reh jayega???

Raj== gunjan u r trying to protect the boy who molested u???

G== no sir I am not protecting him , just forgiving him..

Sir mujhe lagta hai humein is baat ko yahin pe khatam kar dena chahiye .. aur hummein ab chalna chahiye kaafi tamaasha ho gaya hai .. lets go

M== gunjan tum..

G== nahin mayank pls believe me ,this is what we need to do

Then gunjan turns to staion master

G== sir pls I will request u to leave these boya ,, inhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai..

St m== ok miss if u want this so.. ranvijay u r frree.. but mind itr this is ur last warning .. tumne dubaara kabhi koi aisi befkufi mi to bahut badi problem mein fas jaoge..

Slowly everyone departs from there peoplestart boarding the train ..

Ranvijay n his group goes from their too muttering their sorry n thanks to gunjan..

Samrat stands their looking at gunjan

His face is completely emotion less n this scares gunjan too no extent…

She is afraid that with her little gesture of forgivness towards rv she might have reallu hurted samrat…

She moves forward towards samrat slowly..

Everyone else is standing around them , watching them silently

Nupur is really tensed for not only her sister but for samrat too..

With whatever samrat did today for his sister made her realise that the guy was not bad at all…

Mayank too is tensed about samrat but he is also worried abt gunja,,, all this must not have been really easy for her …

Dia was feeling unexplainable anger towards ranvijay n his gang..

Not only because they had injured samrat badly but also because they had tried to do in her sister…

For the first time in her life , dia realised that her sisters werent that bad n that she really loved them

At that second she was really happy that gunjan was safe…

Benji was angry at rv n also was amazed as he saw the expressions of worry n happiness crossing dia's face for her sister..

This side of dia , he had never seen ..

Strange it may sound but in those seconds those 6 students

Samrat , mayank , benji , gunjan , nupur n dia got bound to each other in an un explainable bond of love ..

Who new this journey would start changing their lives so early???????????

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part b>>
SCENE 2>>>>

In the train compartment>>

During journey samrat tells everyone about the happenings with rv's gang..

Gunjan had really been silent n samrat hasn't looked at her even once ..

Mayank redid the bandage for samrat n raj decided that the first thing that they were going to do at the next station was to get samrat's stiches done..

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M== samrat tu theek hai na??

S== haan mayank I am fine..

M(sneaking a glance at gunjan who was sitting silently between dia n nupur,, both her sisters were trying to lighten her mood)== tu gunjan ko pasand karne lagga hai na???

S==(llooks at mayank completely shocked)== what?????

M== bata na, mein sahi hun na??

S== oh pls twin .. tu kya baatein kar raha hai.. mein aur chashmish?? Is journey mein agar koi cheez badli hai to vo yeh k chashmish meri dost ban gayi hai...

M== to tu us se baat kyun nahin kar raha ???

S== mein .....nahin mayank aisi koi baat nahin hai??

M== samrat just tell me the truth..

S(sighs)== usne ranvijay ko kyun jaane diya mayank??i reallyy really wanted to kill that guy n gunjan ne use bina kisi sazaa k jaane diya.. dunno why but yeh baat mein seriously bardaash nahin kar paa raha hun..

M== tujhe kya ho gaya hai samrat ??

Itna gussa.. aaj tak meine kabhi tujhe itne gusse mein nahin dekha

Kya ho gya hai tujhe??

S== mein nahiin janta n my head hurts like hell ..

M== huh oh god mein to bhul hi gaya samrat tune to subha se kuch khaya bhi nahin hana???

S== nahin mayank gunjan ne mujhe gajar ka halwa khilaya tha..

M== but u look paler.. u need more food twin.

S== I am really not in a mood to eat chips n stuff..

N== to kisne kaha tumhein chips khanne ko samrat???

Both mayank n samrat look up to see nupsi standing in front of them with a tiffin in her hand

She sat just in front of saynk n opens the tiffin to reaveal kheer..

M=== oh god kheer

N he practically lunges forward n snatches the tiffin from nupur

.. this makes samrat laugh out aloud n everyones attention is shifted to them

N== mayank yeh tumhare liye nahin hai.. yeh samrat k liye...

But by then mayank had already started gulping down the kheer

S(still laughing)== nupur tum mere bhai ko nahin jaanti... kheer iski jaan hai .. n yeh meri jaan hai to ispe yeh kheer kurbaan hai....

M(through a mouthful of kheer)== wah wah mere shayar sahab kya poem thi....

Samrat(bowing a little)== thanks sir my pleasure..

Raj(smiling)== but mayank u know what samrat should eat something too

S== its ok sir

N== no its not ok .. mayank do tiffin idhar tum saari kheer nahin kha sakte kuch samrat k liye bhi..

M== mein saari kheer khaunga.. maa ne mere liye allu k paraanthe bheje the vo samrat ko dedo..

Vaise nupsi kheer tasty hai,, kaunse hotel se li???

N== kheer meine banayi hai akdu..n i am not nupsi..

This freezes mayank

M==tumhe kheer banana aata hai???

Dia(cmg forward n sitting with nups)== mayank gunjan n nupur ko ghar ka saara khaana banana aata hai.. n dono bahut acha khanna banati hain

N== haan n mayank giv me the tiffin(she tries snatching the tiffin from mayank)

M== nupur mein tumhein yeh tiffin nahin dunga.

N== aise kaise ni doge,,,

M== nahin dunga

N== tumhari too.... do mera tiffin idhar

N n m in unison==== AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

In the tiffin fight they had apparently lost their balance n fell over the mettalic lurch beneth the berth .. mayank was down n he practically kept his hand over protruding nails of the lower berth seat in order to save nupsi from the injury...

An well as we would have expected .. both of them got lost in each other

.

Mayank had never found himself held so captive in anyone's stare before

Neither had nupur for that matter..

Nupsi's pov=

Kuch to hai is ladke ki aankhon mein .. kuch to ..

Nupur tu kya bak rahi hai n get up from the damm floor sab k sab log tum logon ko dekh rahe hain..

Mayu's pov=

Mein nupur ki taraf itna khichav kyun mehsuus kar raha hun???

Aakhir yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai??

N yeh sab achanak mere saath ???

N why the hell is my hand hurting like hell

That's when I looked at my bleeding hand

Oh damm .. yeh kya kiya meine ab???

Par agar mein apna haath vahan na rakhta to nupur ko chot lag jati

N mere hote huye nupur ko mein kuch kaise hone de sakta hun????

Mayank yeh tujhe kya ho raha hai???

pvs ends.........

S==ummm tum dono mein se kisi ka uthnee ka iraada hai k nahin???

See seriously agar tum dono pura raasta vaise hi guzarna chahte ho to we have no problem ..

(samrat was looking at mayur,, smiling now n then ,,, both mayu n nupsi stood up within seconds n both of them were blushing red)

Benji== hii dekh to sahi samrat apna mayank miss morena express k jaise sharmata hua kitna handsome lag raha hai

This is to kodak moment hana dia??

D== bilkul correct benji mnnnn soo we have to take a photograph ..

N even before mayank or nupur or any one else could react , dia took out her mobile phone n took a photograph of mayur....

N== (blushing even more furiously n looking completely embareessed)= dia tu yeh kya kar rahi hai.. de mujhe vo cell idhar

D== no babes yeh photo is journey ki first precious moments ki hain .. abhi to aur bahut kuch hona bakki hai..

N== dia pls de mujhe vo photograph

Nupur moves forward n slips yet again n this time was about to fell over when raj(their prof ) saved her

N== huh oh god sorry sir I mean thanks sir

Raj= its ok nupur lekin kabhi to dekh k chala karo n tum log mujhe bataoge k tum sab idhar se udhar kyun bhag rahe ho??

N yeh kheer zameen pe kya kar ahi hai

Nupur turned n saw that whole of the kheer she had made was splattered across the floor

N== hey bhagwan yeh .. yeh sab meri saari mehnat

Yeh sab tumhari vajha se hua hai mayank..

M== meri vajha se??? jhansi ki raani ki tarhan to tum mujh se lad rahi thi..

(mayank is really feeling angry , why though he has no idea...whn nupur fell over raj sir n he helped her to get up,, something inside mayank burned.....jealousy???)

N== haan tumhari vajha se

Mein yeh kheer samrat k liye layyi thi..

M== galti ho gayi mujh se .. aage se tumhari di hui koi cheez nahin lunga samjhi ..

Saying so n sounding really pissed mayank goes past nupur towards the farthest berth in the compartment

But just as he was about to go someone caught his hand(the injured one)

He winced lightly n turned around to see nupur standing there, holding his hand n looking at his injured hand completely shocked..

N== yeh tumhe yeh chot kaise lagi mayank????

Nupur looked soo worried abt mayank that mayu instantly forgot all his anger n moved forward towards her,....

M== kuch nahin nupur yeh to bas aise hi

S==(cmg forward)dude tere haath pe bhi chot lag gayi.. I know hum dono twin hain lekin iska matlab yeh nahin k humare saath similaar tragedies ho....

M== samrat tu kyun ghabra raha hai.. kuch baat nahin bas choto sa scratch hai..

S n N in unison== chota sa scratch???

N= mayank tumhari aankhen kharab ho chuki hai .. tumhe yeh chotta sa scratch dikh raha hai??yahan aao abhi first aid kar deti hun

(she holds mayu by his handn takes him forward to one side while mayu protests)

M== nupur maine kaha na ,kuch nahin hua mujhe tum khamakha tension le rahi ho..

Raj== mayank I think nupur is right ..nupur pehle make him wash his hands n then to the bandaging .

N== yes sir

Raj (to rest of his students)== guys I think ek din k liye bahut zyaada exitement ho gayi..

N u all rest kuch hi hours mein hum agle station pahunch jayenge ..

Vahan the first thing that we will doo is get samrat some stiches n then we'll board our train to delhi.

(everyone scatters off to their respective berths,,,raj goes n sits beside samrat n benji..

Dia goes n sits with gunjan .. she is still trying hard to make gunji forget the awful incident... Mayank n nupsi is in one corner where nupsi is blabbering abt this n that n bandaging mayank,, mayu is just lost in her eyes again.....)

{WELL IT LOOKS MAY BE THS TRIP HAD ALREADY STARTED CHANGING THEIR LIFES}

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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awesome update dolly😊
i read it but
will comment a long one later on😳
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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hey jaan hiii thanks for reserving
hum dono ka bhi bhadiya hi hai apni hi ff pe sabse pehle hum dono apne aone places re karte hain hee heee
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Originally posted by: dolly18

hey jaan hiii thanks for reserving

hum dono ka bhi bhadiya hi hai apni hi ff pe sabse pehle hum dono apne aone places re karte hain hee heee

haan aur sab complain karte rehte hain ki ff bhi tamhara hain aur first reserve place bhi he he he
by the way dolly did u liked my baner signature
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that fear is the key if u dont find the lock one???
yup i liked this one good choice babes i was going to cmt on it
n i dont believe we both r actually spamming our own topic hee heeee

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