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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#331

wow i was happy after reading both the parts

It was tooooooo biggggggggggg update

double treat

I loved Samrat and mayank's Twin idea

They are very caring for each other

Raj professor is dam handsom

Loved concern nu[ur they are un aware of the newly dev feelings

too good

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jyotika

@-Jyotika-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

awesomeeeee updt dear..
mindblowinggg..
loved it to d core..
pllzzzzz do cont soon

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Mehek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#333

awesomeee upd.yaar..

Loved it to the cre..

so sweeet loved Sammy's Shayari..😳

n SaYank were so cutee..

Do cont.soon

n thnx for the pm..!!

-Mehek-

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Iram

@SaVni

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#334

amazing part dolly and sanu.. I loved it ..

Continue soon.. i'm waiting

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#335

Hey Guys!

tell u wat
m speechless! Amazing Update!
Whoah there were so many things which had me ROFL!😆

The gang scene, wen mayu threatens adhi and tells benji he will kill him...n benji's dialogues..tandav..OMG🤣

everytime u write RV fell on his butt! a savage pleasure i feel..tht guy deserves it🤢

I loved the scene...wen the bas***ds are forgiven and gunjan walks towards the gang..AWESOME scene!!

And yeh kya train main hi itna kuch..SAYANK injured *sigh*

The dialogues are fab! :D

Totally awesome blossom!

I had been waiting for u to update since loooong!!! finally i get a nice long chap:D

m so happy..Fab!

u guys are amazing writers!:D:D

Keep It Up!

&

the word speechless holds an altogether different meaning wen i use it lol

luv

~ZeeJay~

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Lipsa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

terrific update!! I loved the SG scenes and BenIa nokjhok an the way Sam protected Gunji 😳

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: SaVni
amazing part dolly and sanu.. I loved it ..
Continue soon.. i'm waiting

its only written by dolly jaan dear.....😳

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
its only written by dolly jaan dear.....😳

babes u know agar tune yeh line dubara boli to tu mujh se jutte khayegi n vo bhi bade size kkk

n well thanku sooooooooooo much guys for liking our part we r really glad abt it

lov all of ya loads n loads n loads

dolly n sanu😳

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: dolly18
babes u know agar tune yeh line dubara boli to tu mujh se jutte khayegi n vo bhi bade size kkk

n well thanku sooooooooooo much guys for liking our part we r really glad abt it

lov all of ya loads n loads n loads

dolly n sanu😳

oppos sorry

but i just cleared her doubt

i mean i just let her know the truth

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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#340

hey twinnies dolly and sana superb updates yar loved it to the core both parts were superb can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm, can't wait for sajan's confrontation after RV's mess 😊

Edited by aashizin - 15 years ago