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MOHABBTEIN PART 4>>>

Update 4>>>>>>>>>>

SCENE 1>>

(by samrat)

As chashmish lost her balance n stumbled forward, I too instinctively bent down , catching her from her waist just in time..

She held me from my collar, her other arm wound around my neck'

I heaved a sigh of relief, as I saved her..

The Tiffin box she had been holding, fell down on the compartment floor with a clatter'..

I looked towards her, she was looking at me too.

N then my heart beat stopped for a complete second before getting kicked started again at very high speed'.

She was beautiful.. without any doubt the most beautiful girl in the whole world '

Even with her nerdy specs n dorky dressing sense,,, she was the most angelic being I had ever seen''.

There was something about her terrified eyes that made my muscles freeze n held me captive .. I was holding her with my right arm,, my left hand clutching the pole for support..

I was so lost in her eyes n in her innocence that I didn't even realise that the way my left hand was hurting , it must mean that It was injured badly'..

She didn't move either , '

It was as if the whole world had just stopped for the two of us,'..

It was then that we heard the sound of someone clearing his throat..

Both of us looked in the direction of the sound ,distracted n saw an elderly couple occupying one of the berths in the compartment '.

The whole compartment was empty except those two..

The clearing sound was apparently made by uncle'

They both were looking at us n smiling ,, as parents would do on seeing their newly married daughter n son 'in 'law'

Me n gunjan straightened up in the next second'

I finally looked at what was hurting my left hand so badly..

It was bleeding profusely,, may be I had injured it while fighting with those stupid guys from another college ''

I immediately shoved the injured hand behind my back n moved forward a little in order to stand in front of the pole which was stained with my blood around the area I had holded it for support'.

Gunjan had already been so nervous n frightened after the accident'

She didn't need to freak out any more seeing me injured as well..

I looked at her then n saw her blushing real hard , while smiling sheepishly to the elderly couple in the compartment..

She looked so januable ..

Apparently her blush made me forget all the problems I had '

:- my injured n profusely bleeding hand,, the killer headache tht I still had due too the terrible hangover from last night, my empty stomach as I hadn't eaten any thing since morning'

Everything got erased from my mind n I just remembered her..

I was really feeling dazed , never b4 someone had this magnitude of effect on me'.

No no samrat ..

Its ur headache that's making u dazed,, it has got nothing to do with this chashmish standing besides u..

Even if seeing her blush makes ur heart jump everytime'

I told my mental voice to just shutup at that point'.

She bend down n picked up the fallen tiffin n stood beside me, blushing really hard n looking down..

Uncle finally laughed n said to us

'bachon kya pura safar vahin par khadde reh kar guzaarana hai????aao idhar baitho humare paas'

Scene 2

Benia>>

BenIa scene

Benji and dia were having an eye lock

They were not able to broke the eye contact between them for few seconds..

every thing, around them got disappear only the two of them remained ..they thought as if an electric current was passing through their hands, as if their hands were meant to attach with each other ..

an unknown feeling was arising within them which is sure they don't know but what it is something which had brought a smile first time on their faces seeing each other

Benji's pov>>>

"Yeh'yeh ho kya raha hain mai dia ka ankhon mai iss tarah kyun kho gaya hoon ..dude just break the eye contact tu bhool gaya kya yeh kitni nakchadi khisam ki ladki hain.jab dekho tab attitude dikhati hain''. just than his heart said yaar c'mon woh diva hain college ki toh thoda attitude toh dikhna padta hain but u cant deny the truth she is BEAUTYFULL"

Dia's pov>>>>

"yeh benji ki ankhain kitni acchi hain hayye just kho jaane ko man kar raha but mai toh already khoyi hui hoon isiliye toh mera nazrain uski ankhon sa haath hi nahi rahi I must admit he has really beautyfull hazel eyes awwwwwww im going ga ga gaaaaaaaaa on his eyes omgggggg yeh mai kya soch rahi hoon benji ka barain main' ok ok let me correct it im not thinking about benji im thinking about his eyes hmm but eyes bhi toh ussi ka haina oh god plz yeh pal yahi tham jayeeee kyun ki I really love HIS eyes"

Benji pov

Just than I heard some noises which forced me to break the eye lock n turn to look in compartment .

I was shocked to see so so so sooo''many women seeing towards us' some of them were between age of 30 to 35 and they were continuously eyeing me from up to down I turned to see towards dia as she is the only one person who can help me in this compartment in this situation.. damm it I was in a ladies compartment..

But to my another shock dia was BLUSHING but y than I followed her gaze and was to my another big shock I was holding her hand tightly '.

omg I just left her hand as when we leave wire when we get shock n I get y that moti moti womans were smiling seeing us dam I will surely die today in embarresment hey bhagwaan aaj yeh dharti phath jaye aur mai nahi nahi mai kyun hmm?? han yeh train iss mai sama jaye bas dia train ka saath nah sama jaye another shock I got 'what the hell im saying DAM.

Dia pov

I noticed that benji is really embarrassed getting caught by these women holding MY hand as I was too don't know y but I was blushing like anything ..god well as we cant stand here till we reach Shimla so I took hold of benji hand and went in and made him sat beside me on empty seat I can see how shocked benji was but if I have came inn alone he would have never been able to come inn alone and than he have to stand till we reach station which I don't want so I have took his step.

Benji pov

"meri toh sansa hi rukh gayi the way dia took me inn I was flying in air I was on cloud 9 than I noticed again she was blushing but y than I got it my continuous gaze on her making her feel like blushing I immediately moved my gave to other seat where I saw 2 gals waving towards me I too waved back feeling really good".

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Scene 3>>

{mayor}

Mayur

Mayank pov

I wasn't able to think anything as if my brain had stoped working(a first time in my life)..

It was as if we were freezed there.

But than nupur continuous struggle to get up made me come back out of my own beautyfull world.

I myself stood first up and than made her stand straight ,

Nupur was to too embaressed she was not meeting my eyes I can see that clearly but y than I noticed that she had started gathering her bangels which had fallen down when we got into the empty compartment.

Phir pata nahi kab mai uski ankhon mai phir se kho gaya uska chehra bahut cute lag raha tha kyun ki miss nupur bhushan Sharma rahi thi by god'

pehli baar mana usse bak bak karna ka alava kuch aur karte hua dekha hain.. sharmate hua.. I smiled suddenly.

But yeh meri taraf kyun aa rahi hai ???????

Nupur's pov

As my bangle was stuck in mayank's collar button i started to walk towards him to take it off.

As I can clearly see that mayank is engrossed in his own thoughts and not at all paying attention to what I was telling'.

I had sasked him to give me back my bangle about thousand times but he didn't listen??
pata ni kya sochta rehta hai yeh ladka'.

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So I went upto him to take my bangle'but suddenly I realised that we two were really close..

we could feel each other's breath on our faces ..

with shivering hands I took the bangel back and just than my gaze went on mayank face'..

I saw that he had closed his eyes and was smiling god knows y

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Scene4>>>>

{sajan}

We both moved forward slowly n sat in front of the elderly couple,, gunjan took the window seat n sat on her side being very careful to keep my injured hand out of any one's sight.

'..

Uncle broke the silence once again..

'to tum dono ek dusre se kab se pyaar karte ho??'

S n g in unison=='jii.. nahin nahin uncle aisa kuch nahin hai..'

The couple laughed at us once again as we looked at them being really embarresed..

'beta tum dono ka naam kya hai , aur tum log kahan ja rahe ho?????'

S='ji sir mein samrat hun aur yeh hai chashm'. Mera matlab hai yeh hai gunjan ,, hum excel college Mumbai se hain aur shimla ja rahe hain inter university meet k liye'

'oh ,, best of luck guys'

Aunty too wished us.. they were really good ,, I was really liking them even chashmish was feeling less nervous now''

'samrat tum ne yeh apna haath kyun peeche rakha hua hai.. aaram se baitho beta '

I gasped' but recovered..

'nahin uncle mein theek hun'

Aunty=='kuch chupa rahe ho kya beta,, hmmm ab to tum dono ki chori pakdi gayi ,, dikhao kya hai tumhare haath mein????'

I looked at chashmish then n she looked back at me confused..

I gulped once before bringing my hand forward '.

I heard three shocked intakes of breadths '

'samrat yeh .. yeh aapko kab lagi''

Chashmish took my hand in hers n was looking so worried..

Even though my hand till now had really started stinging badly yet still I was more tensed about her reaction..

As I had anticipated she was freaking out..

'chashmish .. gunjan mein theek hun bas ' yeh to aise hi kahin se lag gayi hogi.. I am fine'

In the mean time aunty came to wards me n sat on my other side..

She had a water bottle in her hand '

She along with chashmish then washed my injured hand...

Aunty=='beta itni gehri chot tujhe lagi kaise??'

G=='meri vajha se aunty.. I am sorry samrat ..aapko ..'

She said sobbing a little' oh god this was not good'..

S='chashmish pls ismein tumhari koi galti nahin hai.. mein keh rha hun na ,, mein bilkul theek hun.. bas thodi si chot hai'

Uncle='samrat aakhir hua kya tha??'

I looked up at uncle.. he too looked really tensed on seeing my wound ..

I sighed n narrated the whole story to them'.

in the while chashmish had torn a piece of her white dupatta wetted it with the water from bottle aunty had given .. n tied a crude bandage on my hand..

I looked at her thankfully..

''''''..

Scene 5>>

{benia)

Dia pov

How dare the gals can wave at him??.. cant they see he is with me phir bhi khulam khula line mar rahe hain oh god yeh logh nah but y im getting so angery'??

he is benji on which this gals r drooling like anything leave it she turn her head to see out of window but again she turned around not wanting too but to her shock he found no benji beside her than she saw he was sitting with those stupid ugly girls dam.

Benji pov

I can clearly feel dia looking towards me continuously ofcource with anger and im liking it,the angerness means jealously im loving it and this gals r not too bad. But to my shock dia came upto us and said

D:hi darling yaha kya karrahe ho apni flirting phir shuru kardi nah tum kabhi nahi sudhar sakte(what the hell is dia saying benji thought)

Gal1:darling (she ask confuse)

D:yup apna BF ko darling nahi toh kya kahun

B:BF what ???????(omgggggggggg koi mujhe sahara do mai faint ho jaunga he thought)

D:ofcource janu ab bahut ho gaya itni bhi narazgi kaisi chalo aao(she holded my hand and we went back to our place wherewe sat)

B:yeh sab kya tha dia

D:kya'kya tha benji(she said flattering her eye lids and acting innocent)

B:don't act as u don't know anything mai kab sa tumhara BF ho gaya

D:itna bhi nahi samjh aya ki mai jhoot bol rahi thi(she replied in same anger)

B:toh jhoot bola kyun sari setting kharab kar di

D:accha kiya

B:u I iii just want urrgh I HATE u

D:I too hate u more than u HATE me

They turn in opposite direction in anger.

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Scene 6>>>

{mayor}

Mayank's pov

She was so close to me.. I had no idea why I felt so overwhelmed .. I closed my eyes n inhaled her scent deeply '

Suddenly I heard a loud scream and I jerked'

I was astounded by her sudden shriek and opened my eyes not understanding y I had closed them in first place'

Than I saw y she had shouted'.

she had shouted because her maya pari magazine had just messed up nafter felling in a muddy wet pool at the other end of the compartment'.

thank god I signed in relief '..

now since her mayapari was destroyed she won't be able to readnwhole maya pari book and make me go mad over it '.

Now she won't be able to talk about her heroes n latest films n what not and irritate me'.

But she shouted again to make me jump on my own feet in horror'

again dam on her cant she pick them up quitly well I must admit she looks cute while picking up those books but her shouting is making go mad over her,

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Scene 7>>

{sajan}

I sighed yet again'

''''''

G='samrat tum hein bhook lagi hogi na??'

I looked at her stunned'how did she know????

She smiled at me..

G='vo kya hai na jab uday bhaiya ko bhuk lagti hai na to unki shakal bhi bilkul tumhare jaisi ban jaati hai''

I laughed out at that..

She offered me the tiffin she was holding . n I tried holding it forgetting that my left hand was injured..

N I winced audibly as the tiffin touched my crude bandage'.

G='ohh sorry samrat'

Uncle='are gunjan yeh kaise khayega??? Iske ek haath pe chot lagi hai aur dusra haath kitna ganda hai.. paani bhi khatam ho chukka hai to hum ab iske haath dhula bhi ni sakte'

I looked at my right hand then ,, it was muddy n streaks of my own blood (from the other hand) too ran across it.

there was no way I was going to be able to eat with them'

I sighed..

Meri kismet'''

Aunty== 'gunjan tu khilade na samrat ko apne haath se,, use bhuk lagi hogi'

I looked up at aunty shocked ,, n then looked at gunjan,, she was eyeing me nervously..

She had already opened the tiffin(it had gajar ka halwa in it , my favourite)..

N I realised that even if aunty had not asked her to do this for me gunjan would have herself offered her help with this'.

She looked nervous just because she was afraid that I might not like eating from her hands'

I smiled encouragingly towards her..

She took out the spoon n filled it with some of the halwa , n braught it close to my mouth .. I leaned forward n ate it'

N then

S=='oh freak chashmish yeh kitna tasty hai'

I spoke all this when my mouth was still full of the halwa'n well I must have looked like the cartoon because both uncle n aunty started laughing madly at my reaction ..

I looked at chashmish it looked as if she too was bitting hard on her cheeks ,, trying clearly not to laugh at me n yet she looked really pleased when I said that I liked the halwa'

She was simple ,, way too simple , n yet it felt as if the other girls were nothing in front of her''''..

No no samrat how can that be ,, I tell u this is just ur headache .. the hangover is making u feel these strange things,,,, go n find benji n kill him'..

I asked my mental voice to shut up once again'

Scene 8>>>>>

{mayor}

Nupurs pov

Mai jaan bujh kar phir sa chilayi kyun ki yaar kuch bhau hi nahi de raha tha atleast bol sakta tha nah ki jane do its ok next station par kareed lainga but no attitude attitude sadu kahin ka'

Yeh atleast bolta ki kyun pagalon ki tarah chila rahi ho..

Ok ok mai admit karti hoon kafi dair sa maina baat nahi ki nah toh mera paith mai dard ho raha hai kaise samjaoo isse..

Pehla toh yeh sadu itna boreing class mai bhi gungon ki tarah baithta hai ..pata nahi kaise'.upar sa meri akhiri umeed meri mayapari bhi kharab ho gayi.. yeh india ki trains kabhi saaf nahi reh sakti kya?????

I mean jisse mai zor zor sa padh kar isse indirectly baat toh kar sakti thi woh bhi chance gaya by god *sign* hayye ram yeh kuch toh bole I shouted more loudly making to start a fight with him anddddddddddddddddd I succeed "yes"''..tera lakh lakh shukar hai bhagwaan

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My pov

M:tumhara dimag kharab hai kya ???chila kyun rahi hoon

N:arry dikh nahi raha meri maya pari

M:tumhri maya pari gayi bhadh main samjhi chilana bandh karo

N:meri'meri mayapari ko bhadh mai kyun gayi??? Tum jao bhad mein .. mai zaroro chilaungi

M:dekho mai bekaron sa baat nahi karta

N:oh hello apna aap ko kya bahut hero samjhte ho??? sahi sa do words nahi bol sakte aur chale dosron par ungli uthane

M:dekho tum

N:dikhao

M:mai pagalon ka muh nahi lagta

N:oh yeh right tum jaise pagal ko sab pagal hi dikhanga nah' sadu kahin ka

M:mai aur sadu

N:haan sadu

M:toh'toh tum kya ho bak bak karti machine

N:tumhari toh mai

She started beating him on chest and mayank cant take it anymore he took hold of nupur hand tightly and nupur strrugled to make herself free..

mayank was already lost in nupur eyes as they were too close yet again yahi haalat nupur ki bhi thi

n dono phir se ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho gaye..

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Originally posted by: humz_786

First to comment :D!!

Love the ss guys!!

The way u show the pov's awesome!!

hey humz after long time yaar
wow im glad u liked it
how r u first of all
keep commenting
n reading

lots of love
dolly n sanu

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Dolly n Sanu
the update took away my heart
everything was so cool, n cute n romantic
awesome
thanks for the pm

Sanuuuuuuuuuuuuu and dolyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
sanu ye kya hai tum log update karti ho and then first comment k liye tum he reserve karke rakhti ho.(sanu specially you)
tou hum log kya karenge? aur kya baad mai comment karenge.lol
anyway loved ur update,]
it was awesome mind-blowing part as susal.
loved all the couples-specially mayur(hehehehehe sanu already knows that i m a mayur fan).
but i have a serious complain to both of u- mayur part was too small then the other.
kyun, kyun ,kyun ????????????????????????????
mujhe explanation chaiye.
plzzzzzzzzzzzz mayur ko thoda aur space de do.plzzzzzzzzzzz
keep updating

FANTASTIC update Girls

Awesome....
Liked the couples....
I enjoyed the BenIa and SaJan scenes very much.....
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