Yoon Shabnami (mix FF)~UPDT pg. 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Liked the upfate but it was short
It wuld be fun to read AA also
Update soon with both😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
yeah sure. i know it was short coz I was busy so thats why.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Hi everyone!! All iz Well??

Ok as I got positive answers about my question of joining both FFs, I am from now on starting this. Another surprise is there that I have added Jennifer and eijaz in my FF too. What will happen to both of them, will be revealed as I write the story. I know in this update I am not keeping my promise on focusing more on MN but it is because I have to introduce the new characters. please bear with me. Next time more MN of couse.

2days Update

The day starts in a hospital. A doctor is shouting at a nurse. Its none other than seniour doctor Keerti.(haila har jagha paunch ja thi hai apne anger to nikalne ke liye). She is hoping that the interns arrive at time because she hates latcomers(just like my teacher).

Scene changes to MN. 2day is college sports day. Nupur is standing in front of the wardrobe and has no clue whatsoever what she should wear. Mayank on the other hand is ready and is eating breakfast while reading a book. His mother takes the book away saying that its not good to read too much. Scene changes. Someone is lying in the bed. The phone rings. He gets up and he starts talking about why someone has phoned him at 8am in the morning. Someone shouts"Kunaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal !!!!!! Scene changes to the hospital where AA are getting briefed about their 1st day work. Dr. rhiddhima walks into Dr. keertis cabin and is introduced as senior doctor of sanjeevani. She wishes everyone a wonderful day and goes out. She talks on the phone with someone.

Scene changes to MN. Nupur is sitting with her friends on the bench. She sees mayank but ignores him. Mayank is playing basketball against the lower class. His team wins. Nupur thinks yeh to chuphe rustam nikle. She claps hard and when he comes to her she hugs him. Mayank is shocked. They get off each other. She tells him that he is very cute and a excellent Basketball player. He just says thnx and goes away. She keeps blushing.

Scene changes. Kunal is walking down for breakfast. He tells his family that he going to the hospital and he will be home late as there are 2 surgeries. He gets his stuff and drives away with his car. He reaches hospital where he sees rhidz. She ignores him but he walks to her and says hi. She just goes away to attend her patiants. Kunal is doing a suregery and looks very concentrated. He completes the operation and says Operation successful.


Episode ends

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Wow vedika ..
mayur hug ...me like it ...!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
She claps hard and when he comes to her she hugs him
OMG u made my nite super special with this line.. luv it..! Oh can so imagine MaYur hugging..😍
n wow.. u got Ejoo in as well.. now this is gonna b super exciting... so is Kunal gonna b someone like Dr. Armaan?? m intrigued to knw...
keep it coming Vedika ..ur gud..❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
@achoose: thnx a lot

@shabz: thnx

@tanu: thnx. thats a mystery how kunal turns out to be. u will have to wait for this. How could I leave eijoo out
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

and mayur hug..ui can imagine it



😉 was sweet do update soon...... 😳
Edited by afshanafreen - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
@sarika: thnx
@afshanafreen:thnx. I'll update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

UPDATE
Hey u all. All iz Well??


Episode starts with Kunal coming out of the OT. He takes off his operation clothes and washes his hands. Dr. Keerti comes there and the talk to each other about the patients health.

Scene changes to Nupur. She is sitting in her room and thinking about Mayank. She remembers how he was playing basketball. Someone wakes her out of her dreams. Rhidz has come to meet Nupur. They hug each other and gossip for long until midnight.

Next day. Anjali is getting ready. On the other hand Atul is already on the way to Sanjeevani. Nupur has already reached college. Mayank is talking to some college mates. They see each other but Mayank just ignores her. She tries to talk to him but he goes away leaving her confused. Kunal is getting into his car. He looks in a good mood 2day. Rhidz has already reached the hospital where she is reading through the case files. Kunal enters and says "yooo basket whats up". She gives him a nasty look and goes away. Dr. Hitler Keerti comes and tells him that he has to do the briefing for the interns 2day as she has an important surgery. She goes away and he waits for the interns to arrive.

At the college MN are sitting in the class. The teacher reminds everyone that they have to submit their projects in 2 weeks. MN look at each other and have an eye-lock scene. They get distracted by the teacher who starts talking loudly. The rest of the lesson they just sit and don't even look at each other.

Kunal is tired of waiting and sends a pager to inform them to report to the reception in 2mins. AA and the rest of the interns arrive. He gives them briefing about 2days work and just goes away.

AA are examine patients in the general ward. Atul tries to ignore Anjii but all in vain. She smiles at him leaving him in dream land. Kunal is in the OT (again!!!!). He finishes the operation in a nick of time and goes away.

Nupur is trying to ask Mayank whats wrong with him but all in vain. Nupur is walking while thinking something and suddenly falls down as she bumped into Mayank. Mayank holds her and they have another eye-lock scene.

Episode Ends


Note: Hey guys my b'day is coming up on 18th may. please wish me😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

nice part dear...and advance birthday wishes dear............

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