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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

awsome update do cont soon

-Lina-



thx lina for your comment 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

I am so glad at last they are together, Nupur has struggled and been through a lot, i hope M doesn't regret all of this and make her suffer more.

Very well written adi!


hi senny
how are you buddy well happy to see your comment
thx for your sweet comment 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swarnima123

nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

heyy it wass too gud........

i read all parts today.. cant imagine i missed this ff...

add me to yur pm list.... pl.z..




thx pari happy to read your comment thx for like this one
😛 😛 ]well i will pm you 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii -itna jorr se mat ker
meri jaan
keya chakka mara hai tune -thx thx
dil khush kar diya by god -ab kya kaho tuje acha laga to mein khush
i loved the update to my core
is was amazing
fabulous 😛 😛 😛
outstanding
mind blowing
jitna kahu utna kaam hai 😳 😳 😳
i loved gunjaan so much in this ff -just like you and farii
she is such a sweet sister
sam was sooooooooooooo nice
gunjaan slapped mayank -it was my favourite scene
maynk deserve it
thanks tune meri baat manliya
per last part to.............Embarrassed Embarrassed -me too 😳 😳😳
what will i can say
u make me blushing yaar ☺️ ☺️
but pls dont show this that mayank regret himself to making love with nupur
if u show this i will kill u -yaar tu kitni baar mergi muje maar maar ker vasse hi muje half ker diya hai 😃 😃
adi tune aaj bhi nehi bataya ke huya keya tha
pls jaldi se ye raaz khol de
but i think its riya . isn't it????????-well abhi pata lag jayga 😡
lovely update adi -thx hunter wali sis
pls do cont soon
love u


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Posted: 15 years ago
WELL DON'T ANGRY WITH ME IF SOME FRIEND DON'T LIKE MAYNK AND NUPUR DID BECOZ MAYNK DON'T LOVE NUPUR SO PLZ FORGIVE ME FOR SHOWING THIS ,HERE IS THE LAST PART HOPE YOU WILL LIKT IT ....I HAVE READ IT SEVERL TIME FOR READING ANY MISTAKE TO FIND OUT HOPE YOU DON'T FIND ANY MISTAKE OR IF YOU FINE THEN PLZ FORGIVE ME.........
WELL I WANT TO DEDICATE THSI PART TO THE MOST MOST HATEFULL PERSON IN MY LIFE WHOM I HATE CORE OF MY HEART THIS IS FOR HIM I JUST HATE HIM.OR HER..................
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part 6
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she was feeling exhausted ,when she opened her eyes......she remember what ever happened few hours ago........ she surender her self to maynk....he was the man who touched her.....he was the one which she want .......she know this was her love for maynk she can't regret the moment which she spend with him....she can spend her whole life with this moment ...this was enough for her..becoz deep inside her heart she know he does n't love her.....and she does n't want him to feel guilty for everything........

she covered her self with sheet and collect her clothes .....
maynk hear the door open.......he know she must be wake up.........
may- nupur was weak enough she must need some juice and some fruits to eat........he searched fro fruits but fridge was empty so he left for bringing some fruits for her.......
nupur open the door and saw he was nowhere .....where he must be....it was difficult to face him after this ........
he must be regret this na........
maynk pov-
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i don't know what i will tell her i don't love her ......but i want to be with her .....i want her to be forever mine ....i want her as my soul .....i want her as my life.......
but why ...........
the moment when i saw her .....i wish this moment never die ......i want to take her in my arms .....or make her mine again......i want to cross my all limits ......why when i don't love her.........
i don't know what she was thinking .....if she was regreting this moment what will i do how i will face him..........
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both were thinking.........
the same........
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he entered the room and saw her wearing the same clothes.....
he saw her and she they both looked in each other's eyes...not know who will start or say first.........
he brake the ice........
may- nup vo tumhe weakness ho rahi hogi is liye tumhari liye juice or fruits lane gaya tha...........you need this too.......
he gave her the juice.....she was looking at his face....
maynk want to say something .....before he speak door bell ring.......
he open and saw gunjan and sam.....both were standing there with beg full of something..........
they both enter .....and saw nups she was drinking the juice.........
sam- sab kuch theek hai na......
may- kyo tume kuch gabad lag rahi hai....... 😕
sam- vo kya hai na itni shanti jo hai ,kya hua abhi tak cold war
gun- shut up don't you see my sisters eyes.......her shining eyes and maynk's shining face everything is fine.........
sam- well if their is everything fine ,but now aisa kuch hoga jo kissi or ke life ke liye acha nahi hoga........
nupur look at sam's face ......
sam- nupur jisne ye sab kiya hai usse bhi ab sazaa milgi........
maynk and nupur both stood and said together "yes"
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now we are going to mumbai.........
nu- but jiju .........
gu- nupur don't worry i am with you........
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they were sitting in plane.....
sam and gunjan together and maynk and nupur...but both was not speaking to each other..........
may pov-
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nup i will not leave them who did this with us.......
you are very precious for me ,and she will have to pay for hurting you.......
nup-
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i don't know what will happen after this .....
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they reached according to their plan........
nupur went to their father's house ....
maynk's mom don't know anything about nups incident ........
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nups house.......
as she enter the house .....all memories flashed .....
her childhood memories.....all her memories good and bad ones.....
all humiliation too which she faced......
gunjan know what she was feeling .....
gun- nupur kaha kho gayi ....ander chal tera koi or bhi intezaar ker raha hai........
nupur hesitate to move inside......her feet stop in mid...she remeber her fathers words.......
she denay..........
a voice ......rukk kyo gayi......beti
it was her father......she saw him........he was looking so weak.......
her father run towards him and hug her......
her eyes became moist her entire life she wait for this one hug .......this moment.......she was waiting for the moment when her father will call her his daughter....today her life was complete......
nup fa- beta apni papa ko ek baar papa keh ker bula ...... mein janta hoon ke mein tuje kabhi ye right nahi diya lakin aaj mein chata hoon ke tu muje papa keh ker bula........

she was heavenly blessed when she hear all this.....
gunjan was watching this beautiful moment which she want to watch all her life for she wait long period...
nupur hugged and faint in his father's arms........
gunjan realize she was weak and all this will effect her health toooo.......
nupur was unconcious.......
doc- she ia fine nothing worry only she need rest ...
gunjan was watching her father who was walking like a student whose board result is coming in ten minutes ....walking all tensed......
gu- papa relax she is fine only need some rest .....
nupur was sleeping.......
sam was waiting for gunjan......he called her......
gun- she picked the phone and tell her she was not coming..........
after knowing this that nupur faint maynk was very restless.....
sam notice this he want to ask maynk but waiting fro maynk to tell me something..........
may- want to meet nupur but he don't want to face her father.he was feeling guilty.....
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maynk and sam reach their home .
maynk mom was happy to see maynk back......
he was back to his present self........
happy as he was before..........
maynk mom also notice the change in his behaviour....
may mom- beta i am happy to see you happy after a long time......... my bachaa........
my- me too mom........
mom i want to tell you something......mom you always said move on in your life.......mom i decided i will mom.....i am ready .......mom..........mom i want to meet her.........
maynk mom 's happiness was no bound.......her wish was granted......

she kissed maynk's forehead....
mein abhi teri pasand ke khirr banati hoon .saying this she left.........
sam was watching their plan's first step was accomplished.......
now the sceond one........they have to meet the person...........
maynk tell her mom he have to meet someone.......
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maynk and samrat both was sitting in car .sam was driving.......
he want to ask maynk ..so he thought he would ask....
sam- maynk i am happy after this plan everything will be disclose so everybody know the truth so nupur will easily move on.......
i think we have to find suitable match for her......
you know purab my friend he is too perfect for nupur... infact he was the one who tell me about all this what you done in shimla....he live near nups apartment and you know he like her toooo......and after knowing everything.he want to marry nupur.....
sam was saying all this to know maynk's reaction....
he saw his face .......maynk was silent what will he say don't know.......... but he want to ask someone.....
may- bhai stop the car plz..........
sam- what happen maynk why ....you stop the car.....
may- i want to tell you something......bahi how can nupur marry someone ......
sam- why she can't marry maynk.......
may- because she love me........bhai she tell me she love me........
sam- but maynk you don't love her than why she wait for the person who don't love her.........
may- yes i don't love her but she love me isn't this enough for not marrying anyone else.......
sam- but maynk why she can't ,tell me one reason why she can't marry anyone else........
may- because i kiss her.........
sam- maynk are you mad because of one kiss why anybody not marry ........
may- bhai i mean ......i kissed her.......it is not important..........
sam- may what you want to say .tellll me.......
may - (was not know his own feelings....the moment when he touch her she was not touched his body she touched his soul tooooooo.......)
i just don't know bhai but i can't ........
i touched her.....bhai i just
he hugged samrat......
sam understand he was also unaware of his own feeling......
sam- maynk don't think ok just relax do whatever your heart say ok........
may- bhai i want to meet nupur........i just want to see her..........
sam- what this time ....maynk .......
may- i don't know bhai..i want to see her i want to see her........
sam -ok relax i will do something.........

but first maynk we have to meet the person.......
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11 pm maynk and samrat complete their plan......

sam- maynk it was quite late do you want to see her ......
may- yes bhai..
sam text gunjan and tell her that he was coming with
maynk.....
gun- sam it was quite late and with maynk ......you know papa is still angry with maynk........
sam- i know but he want to meet nupur.....what will i do......
gun- ok i will open nups room's window let him in ok.... but only for ten minute ok....only ten minute......
gunjan open the window .....
maynk jumped inside her room .....she was sleeping.... he want to take her hand in his hand and want to hold her for forever.....want to touch her soft skin but his act will disturb nupur's sleep........
in these two years his night or day end remebering nupur he hate her for two years and now suddenly a new feeling was blossom inside his heart......
what was this ........but the most important thing was he have to prove her innocent.......
he gave a last look to her face and left........
gunjan also sensed change in maynk's behaviour.....
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night passed according to their plan everything was fine.......
maynk mom want sheena to be her bahu ......
maynk was happy with this........
sheena's parents meet maynk's mom gunjan was also their.......
everything was fixed...........
sheena- maynk i can't believe you said yes......after whatever happen........
may- sheena i want to move in my life and no one better than you.........saying he hugged sheena......
sheena- i can't believe our engagement fixed in three days .......

may- even me too........sheena i want you to call ria to for our engagement party ....i want to show her if she can move in her life than why not me........i will call our whole group......but you did this one work....i love it if you do this......saying this he kissed her cheeks.........
shen- anything for you maynk........saying she hugged maynk.......
maynk show a thumb to sam........and sam to gunjan...
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whole day was passed sam and maynk was searching for the person atlast they find the person who was involve in this.............and yes they get the proof too........now they was waiting for the day too come.......
nupur was at her home.she was enjoying her time ,with her dad...doing all the work which she missed in her childhood......like eating chapti made by his father........every work which she missed........
maynk was missing her badly ......want to see her again but he decide to keep these feeling away....
suddenly his cell buzz ........the name flashed on screen brought a smile on his lips.......
it was benji...... his college friend benji.......who is and C.I.D. OFFICER. means their work done....
sheena called maynk and tell her that ria is ready for coming to the party........
maynk smiled...........he know now everything will be soon setteled.......
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benji ,gunjan and sam ,maynk now know everything..
may pov-
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can't wait for today morning nupur i want to see you ... i know you will be happy when everything will settle... when every body will saw you again when i tell everybody that you are not dead ,alive.........
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nup pov-
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pata nahi kal kya hoga .......sab kuch sahi hoga na..... maynk kessa hoga i know vo thoda nervous hoga kya muje usse phone karna chayia........
vasse bhi aane ke baad mein ek baar bhi nahi mil payi........
she dialed maynk's mobile number........
nupur's name flashed on his mobile ....he was very happy to saw her name.......
he recieved.......

nu- hi maynk.......

may- hi nupur .... kassi ho tum....
nu- mein achi hoon vo tum theek ho na........
may- ha nupur muje kiya hua hai....

nu- ok phir bye..saying this she cut the phone......
may pov-
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maynk you are such a idiot she called and you .
tu usse poch sakta tha ke vo kassi hai....uski health ke baare mein pooch sakta tha.......
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most waiting day
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maynk's mom was totally enjoying every moment she was the one who was unaware what was going to happen here..............
gunjan was also helping her........
soon the guest arrived.......
all maynk;s college friends and everybody only one was missing nupur......
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sheena came with her parents......and ria with his fiance r.v.
maynk was happy to see her.......
samrat signal maynk to start their plan.......
sam he was with a mike-

sam- hello friends aap ko vasse to batne ki jarorat nahi hai lakin phir bhi aaj hum sab college friends or relative yahaa hai kyoki vo jo ek bechara vaha kahda hai aaj uski bhi bali chad jaygi........vo bhi sahed ho jayga saying this sam point towards maynk....is liye mene soch ke kyo na maynk ke kuch azadi ke pal yahaa show kiye jayee.....takki sab ko pata lag jaye ki shaddi ke baad hum kya kya kho dete hai...............
presenting our college life........
their was a big screen and a handicam........
everbody gathered their ....
sam- so start .......
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every picture was showing their happiness ......
maynk with sam......maynk with his college friends with his family........
and suddenly the photo changed maynk with nupur.....
he was laying on her bed......unconcious.......

everybody was shocked to see this.......but no body was saying anything......
maynk and nupur was laying there ......nupur was on bed and maynk on floor..........
soon they saw some shadow .......who just lift maynk and he place him on the bed......the face of the person was not shown.......

everybody was glued when they saw this.......soon we saw a girl who was open nupus dress a little so it seems she was naked..........and covered her with blanket and open her whole dress....
and then she did the same with maynk ......his shirt and then his jeans.........
and then they both put maynk over nupur so it seem like they were doing something.........
and then she with the help of boy put nupur on maynk's chest .......and click pictures.........
and they did this with some pictures..and leave them.....
now everybody saw the face of shadow no other then r.v and sheena.............
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everybody was looking at both of them .........all their friends ,dia ,suhanni,adiraj ,uday and all their relatives......who thought tha nupur was the one but now the truth revealed...........
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maynk slapped sheena .........and sam grab r.v's colloar........
benji was also their with police......

sheena in my life i never ever slap a girl but because of you i hurt my best friend..........why you did this...
why did you do this
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sh- maynk this is all fake anybody can make this ........i can't do this .somebody is trying to trap me....... plz believe me ,why i will do this to nupur and you ......you are my friend...........
ma- just shut up sheena ....stop your drama i know the truth and tell you if you think i have only this proof then i tell you i have an eye witness too.......
benji bring the man who clicked the pictures of nupur and maynk.........
sam- sheena you know i also saw you the day with rv and you were saying him that some person is blackmailing you that he will tell maynk about this photograph he made some c.d of your and r.v ..... i saw she was showing you the photograph........
then i know your plan ..........you did this na.........
r.v and sheena know they were now exposed .......
ria could not believe her eyes .......what she saw......
she slapped r.v......
ria- why r.v why did you do this ...why .you are my friend then why.......she through the ring her engagement ring..........
gun- why you did this to my sister why rv...........
rv------ becoz i love ria.............i love ria ...i can't see her with maynk so i did this..........
gun- but why my sister tum to kuch or bhi ker saktien they............kissi or girl ko chosse ker saktein they
sh- kyoki mene usse din nupur ko washroom mein kehtien hue sun liya tha ke vo maynk se pyar karti hain.........
to mene or rv ne socha ke kyo na ek teer se do shikar kare.........jisse muje maynk mil jaye or rv ko ria...........or nupur is liye kyoki ria ko nupur or maynk ki dosti pasand nahi thi ye baat r.v janta tha is liye humne socha ke nupur he sahi hain..........
is liye us din mine nupur ke drink mein alchol mix ker diya or maynk ke drink mein bhi sleeping piles mill di this
hume or .rv. ko pata tha agar nupur ke tabiat kahrab hogi to maynk usse drop karne ghar per jayga ..or luckily gunjan or uncle bhi us din nahi they ......mene nupur ke pocket se uski ghar ke key nikal le or uski room mein pehle se he is photographer ko betha diya.......or phir jaldi se jaker nupur ke pocket mein rak di..........
phir jab maynk nupur ko drop karne ghar gaya to mein or rv bhi kuch excuse kerke vaha se aa gaye....
or ye sab kiya .........
rv ne pehle he doctor se concern ker liya tha ki sleeping peels kab tak effect karti hei is liye hum sure they ke maynk nupur ko ghar tak le ja sakta hai.....
hamra plan bilkul perfect tha ......bus is greedy photographer...ne sab kuch gadbad ker diya......isne vaha ek handicam chuup diya or maynk or nupur ke saath muje or rv ko bhi capture ker liya.......
phir humne next day college mein vo pictures paste ker di.........
r.v - bus ab sheena ka work reh gaya tha kissi tarah maynk ko ye yakin dilana ke nupur ne uski drink mein sleeping peels milayi thi.........sheena ne ye kaam asani se ker diay usne maynk se kaha ki nupur usse se pyar karti hai........
ria ka brakeup or ye sab maynk ne bhi sheena ke baat ko sach maan liya........kissi ne nupur ke baat nahi suni.......
is tarah hamra ye plan successful ho gaya..........
everybody was looking them with disgust ......

maynk's mom was the one who was crying.....
ma mom- nupur meri bachi meine usse kya kya nahi kaha ......kitna bura kaha vo khati rahi ki mein kuch nahi kiya per mein us per trust nahi kiya......uski death ke baad bhi mein usse kosa .........nupur .....saying she hugged gunjan........
ria was also guilty for not trusting maynk .........
benji arrest both sheena and rv.........

now only thier college friends , maynk's family and ria left there...........
(everybody was crying guilty for not trusting nupur.....)

may mom- gunjan mine tuje bhi bahut torcher kiya ....kabhi aisa koi moment nahi tha jab mine tuje nahi galat nahi kaha......muje maaf ker de beta.......
gun was also sheeding tears........
gun- ma aap aisa mat kaho ek maa apni beti se sab kuch kah sakti hai....mine aap ki baat ko kabhi bura nahi mana........
may mom- nupur chali gayi mine maar diya usse .....mine ...........
everybody was emotional thinking about nupur.......
dia and suhanni was crying ....uday toooo
su- aunti we are not worthy for her friendship .we are the one who don't trust her.......we are the bad one's like sheena.........
uday was also emotioanl ........
sam notice all the environment......
sam- guyes plz stop ab sab ek hi dialouge or ek hi scene karti rahoge......
tum sab ko kissi se milwana hai......
gunjan suuported maynk's mom for standing.......
and the lights off..........
they saw a spot light .......some one is coming ........
they saw a girl no other than nupur...........
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everybody was just can't believe .....she was there.......
maynk mom hugged her.......kissed her forehead.....
may mom- nupur meri bachi........
nupur broke into loud cry all her emotions flow ........

may mom- muje maaf ker de mine.......
nupur- ma.........muje apne gale laga lo ....muje or kuch nahi chayia..........
sam saw the enviroment was too emotional.....everybody was crying........and also notice maynk and ria was missing............
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maynk was standing on terrace.........
ria also there ........
may- he was crying........
ria- maynk plz i am sorry ,i know sorry is not enough ...plz maynk look at me........maynk not only you hurt i am also hurt......maynk it was not easy for me to see you .....in ...maynk i love you alot so thought of your going away from me scared me.......alwys your closness with nupur make me uneasy.......
it was my mistake too i have to trust you........
i am sorry ...........plz maynk forgive me.......
these two years i spend was like a punishment for me maynk without you i am none.....incomplete........
now maynk and ria was looking into each others eyes......
ria hugged maynk......
ria- maynk now i don't think bad......i know maynk you and nupur was just best friends.....
she kissed maynk's tears.......
maynk was looking in his eyes......but why today it was not effecting him.......two years he tolrate the pain of her sepration but now it was not effecting him why ........?
she kissed maynk all over his face......and captured her lips with his......
she broke the kiss ....and saw him he was looking confuse........
ria- maynk make me yours cross all the boundaries just take me in your embrace......maynk aaj mein apni vo sarri limits cross karna cahti hoon........aaj ria or maynk ko ek ker dena cahti....hoon......
they both went to maynk's room..........
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sam- aare ab sab rotein he rahoge ya phir koi mithai bhi kilyga kal se itna kaam ker raha hoon lakin kissi ne muje kuch bhi khane ko nahi diya.......
every body laughed ..........
because today he was talking like uday.........
nupur hugged everybody.......suhanni dia......everybody her father was also there.....
may mom- aare maynk kaha hai tuje dekh ker vo bahut khush hoga........

gun- maa maynk janta hai ..infect maynk ki wajah se hi....tu aaj nupur hamera saath hai...........
may mom- kya per ye sab kassie ........
sam- mom aap sab ab purani sab baatein ko chod dijye or new life ke bare mein sochyia.........
is liye no aansu no sad talk only khusi.......ok
may mom- acha ja tu maynk ko bulkar laaa...........ja nupur........or mein abhi sab ke liye sweet latein hoon.....
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nupur know he will be on terrace.........she chacked but he was not there.........
nu- shyad apni room mein hoga........
here maynk was confused about his thoughts........ ria and he was sitting on bed.......
ria unbuttoned maynk's shirt .....and she kissed maynk's jaw line........
but maynk was so engrossed in his thoughts he can't know .......
nupur open maynk's room door ........and saw him and ria...........
nupur was dead shocked to saw ria and maynk in this condition........her heart ...........was........ broke into pieces...........😭

perhaps her heart was meant for broke......
ria and maynk both
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continue.....
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ria saw nupur and she was shocked to saw her alive..........

maynk also come back to his sense...when he saw her........looked at her face which was showing pain....he want to hug her .want to console her....but why why..........he was ........

ria- nupur you are fine.........
she was very happy to see her..........glad ......nupur i and happy plz forgive me for hurting you because of me you and maynk faced alot of trouble.....

nup- ria i know what you faced don't be sorry ,i am fine .........actually aunti was searching maynk and calling him ..........sorry i distrub you ....saying this she left.........

maynk watch her going .......

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downstairs
everybody was eating sweets.......

nup- aunti ab jis function ke liye aay they kya vo function nahi karna kya .........

sh- kya beta.........

nup- aunti maynk ki engagement.aap bhool gayi maynk ria se or ria maynk se pyar karti hai........

everybody was shocked when they remember about ria.......gunjan was watching her sister ..and sam toooo

may mom- beta mein maynk se baat karogi.......


nup- aunti kyo na abhi usse surprise de....usne or ria ne bhi bahut kuch saha hai.....ye unki liye sab se best gift hoga..........

mayn mom want something else she looked at gunjan's face........
gunjan understand what she want.........

gunjan came near maynk's mom - ma aap or mein kuch nahi ker saktin sab kuch maynk per depend karta hai.........

maynk and ria came..........

ria was looking sad........
everybody thought may be because of all this.......

may mom- mayu to beta aaj jis function ke liye hum yahaa they kyo na usse accomplish ker liya jaye.....

may- what mom.......

may mom- beta teri or ria ki engagement........

ria run from there.......and maynk was now more confuse..........

may mom- lagta hai sharma gayi.......

nup- arre aunti ria kaha hai mein to ye ring lane gayi thi.........

may was watching nupur why she was doing this ...does it matter for her....he was ......

may- mom today was enough for surprise and now i need some rest plz not today........saying this he went again in his room.........
everybody thought he must be tired........
only sam know that he must be struggling for his own thoughts................
now it was night ..........and sleep was far away from his eyes..........
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the moment he spend with nupur again coming in his mind .......he want to know what's going on and he was hurt she was not speak to him properly .she saw him and ria .........
he was angry she said his mom for his and ria's engagement.......the moment they shared it does not matter for her.........why he need all the answer.........

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here nupur was sitting on the floor her face was covered with tears......

nup pov
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i saw maynk with ria.......ria was kissing him.......i know maynk only love ria.........and whatever they do it was not wrong.........i am happy for maynk .he love ria and now he get what he want.......
per mein apne is dil ka kya karo maynk jo tumhe kissi or ke saath nahi dekh sakta kyo mein tumse pyar karti hoon.kyo tum meri rooh mein bus gayi hoon .........kassi mein tumhe ria ke saath ..maynk jab tum usse chogi to kahin na kahin mera dil bhi tadapega mein aisa nahi chati ki meri dost ki khusi mein mein khush na hu.....mein kya karo jisse muje koi rasta mil jaye...kyo mera her rasta tumhari taraf jata hai...........

"bahut pyar kerti hai tum ko sanam.....
kasam chae le lo khuda ke kasam..........."

kyo itna pyar hai.......
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she saw a figure near her window........
with great vigour.she open the window and saw he was standing there.........

he saw her ....after watching her face he know she was crying..........she was confused to see him here.....
nu- maynk what are you doing here.......?

may- nupur mein tumse kuch pochna chata hoon......


nu- itni raat ko maynk tum kal subah bhi pooch sakti ....phone ker sakti they.......

may - nahi nupur kuch sawal ke jawab muje abhi chayia vo bhi tumhari in aankho mein dekh ker.......

nup- maynk itni raat ko agar kissi ne dekh liya to koi galat samaj lega.........

may- i don't care anybody..he step forward and nupur back........


she was scared the way he was looking at her.....
nup- may tum kya ker rahye ho........

may- nup tum kyo ker rahi ho aisa........

nup mein kya kiya maynk.........

may- kya nahi kiya tumne ........nupur mere liye lakin mein he samaj na sakaa........ nupur kya jo kuch hua vo tumhare liye kuch mayne nahi rakhta.......

nup understand he was upset because of that day.....she does not want he feel guilty for those moment.........

nup- maynk jo kuch bhi hua........she paused for a minute........vo bus ek galti thi......or kuch nahi hum dono shayd apni dard se bahar aana chatein they...or un pallo mein shayd hum bahak gaye......
she close her eyes.........it was difficult to tell lie......

maynk know this she was lying.........
his anger rise.....why she always scarfice her happiness for others........why............
may- he grab her hand both was on bed nupur beneath maynk.......
nupur tum kyo jhoot bol rahi hoon...kyo......kya sach mein vo sab kuch mayne nahi rakhta........

nup- maynk it was truth not lie........i was......

may- nup meri aankho mein dekh ker kaho.......

nup- it does not matter that i look in your eyes or not.... maynk don't feel guilty for this ...... i am fine plz move on ......ria is your life......spend your life with her...........

may- nup tum mujse pyar karti hoon......

nup- maynk it does not matter .i know you don't love me.......i accpet this two years before........
ria tumse pyar karti hai or tum usse se.......

may- nupur mein nahi janta per mein ria ke saath apni life nahi spend karna chata ......... nupur vo konse moment tha mein nahi janta lakin ab mera dil uski liye vo mehsuus nahi karta jo ....he stop........

nupur looked at his face..........why he was looking different.......

may- nupur i never regret the moment when we did.... infact it was the most beautifull moment in my life........you thought it was just a mistake........yes before i was confused towards my feeling but not now .....nupur i want to tell you........these two years i missed you like hell ...i spend my time for hateing you ....this was my revenge who was making my heart not to think about anything.....
i don't know when my anger cross the boundary of hate ..and enter into love line.......

yes nupur i was confused all these day but now i am not i know your are the one who meant for me......
i love you ....i love you............

nupur could not believe he was saying this....... she was benath him......looking straight in his eyes......

nup- maynk it hurt me alot to see you with anyone else..it hurt me........ i just can't see anybody with you......can't.........

may- nupur no body can spare us..........no body........we are two body but one soul........

nup- maynk i need breath.......

may- what.........😕

maynk relaize he was over nupur........relaize their closeness......he smirked.........😉

may- nup what you said.........i heard you was saying .......before he complete they hear knock on door.......

both stand from there current condition......


maynk hid behind the bathroom.........
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nupur open the door and saw her whole family include dia ,suhani ,adi everybody was their........she maynk mom toooo........

sam he enter the room .

sam- maynk kaha hai mere bahi aa ja bahar muje pata hai tu yahi hai aaja mere bahi varna mere sasurji aa rahey hai tuje lane ke liye........

hearing this maynk come out from bathroom.......
everybody was laughing but maynk and nupur was....

may mom- muje pata tha tu yahi aayga is liye to humne sarri preparation ker li thi ......ab chalo bhi varna muhrat chal jayga.........

may and nup- both kaha .......

may mom- arre ab tumne shaddi waddi karni hai nahi ......ya sarri life window se hi aatin rhoge.......

may- but mom aap ko kassie.....

may mom- muje ria na batya tha ke tu usse shadi nahi ker sakta .......or bakki mein samj gayi aakir i am your mom or ye sab preparation sam or gunjan ne ki hai.......

ab chalo ready ho jao ......
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their marrige was done............

she was sitting in maynk oops their room......

nervous..............

maynk enter the room...saw her now he was perfect his life was perfect ........

he touched her shoulder.......

may- nup .........


nup saw .......

nup- maynk muje bahut need aa rahi hai.........mein sone ja rahi hoon.....


may- what ...................
aaj bhi koi sota hai kya..........

nup- kyo aaj kya hai..........

may- nupur aaj hamari shaddi hue hai.....or tum aaj.....

nup- maynk mein bahut thak gayi hoon ........

may - ok nupur i understand ...ok go to sleep.........
nup- vo mein change kerke aati hoon........

may was sad becoz he want to talk to her .......want to share a lot of thing with her........

she open the door .....and saw maynk 's back....he also change in his lower........

nup- maynk ..........

maynk- maynk turned to saw her........

she was ......she was ..........

nupur...............

may- he can't believe this time she can do this........she was wearing maynk's shirt the same when they first time surender each other..........

nup- kya hua maynk tumhe need nahi aa rahi ..muje to bahut aa rahi hai.........
she said with a naughty look.........😉 😉
maynk - nupur why are you doing this........

nup- only for revenge......... maynk you have done alot of for me.......now its my turn.............how you thought i will not punish you........

maynk touched her shoulder.........

nu- no way maynk you can't touch me......your punishment ..........
may- nupur can't do this to me..... ......

she seducingly touched maynk's face..........
near his ears......maynkkkkkkkk.........
ready for your punishment..........

may- nupur before he complete..........
they were engrossed in kissing..................

and two soul become one.....................
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THE END.........

wow i can't believe yaar this end i love to write this ss......every part i enjoy alot writing this.......
hope you like it...........
thanks for reading it and commenting........
thanks everybody
plz yaar press the like tab don't for get ok........
tell me you like the end na
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with love
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ADITI

Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely ending adi...
Aww this got over...
But i love the part....
It was awesome...
Do write more..
Love,
akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
😡adiiiiiiiiiiiiii janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
itna bada update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haye dil khush hogaya.
main abhi padke tujhe batati hu kaisa hai???????

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wah wah adiiiiiiiiiii
kya update tha
totally super-dupar
awesome
mind-blowing

so ye sab RV and Sheena ne kya.
Un dono ko tou main-😡😡😡
Thanx GOD end main sab kuch thik hogauya.
adi u expresed maynks feelings and j\his confusion whether he loves nups or not in a beautiful way.
He loves nups a lot but buddhu hai na- iliye samjah main nehi aya.
sam ko uska feelings ki bade mai pata chal gaya , lekin ye buddhu ko pata nehi chala.
Hayr mayur ek hogaye- mayur r married now.
oye hoye party time.
loved when nups want to punish maynk
accha punishment hai- he cant touch her. hehehehehe lol
tu bhi apni real life main aisa punish dena hamari jiju ko.
lekin maine tujhe ye sala diya ye kabhi batana use.
nehi tou jiju mujhe maar dalegi. 😃😆😆😃


Wonderful update janiiiiiiiii
loved it to the core.
Mujhe tou pehle mayank par gussa aya tha, lekinab nehi hai.
tune sab kuch thik kar diya.
thank u so muchhhhhhhhh januuuuuuu
tapoor khush ho jayega.................

i loved ur updte so much
tu upate kare aur mujhe accha nehi lage ye ho he nehi sakta.
u r my all time favorite writer.


my januable sis- i m little bit sad because of quick ending of this ff.
but i know purna kuch khatam hoga tabhi tou koi naya shuru kar payenge.
so ab tu konsa ff start karne ke bade main soch raha hai- mujhe jarur batana

Aur ha mujhe lagta hai- tu "Kuch Pal " ke bade main bhul gaya
ab mamas boy, kuch pal update karo-.
secret tou tera secret he reh gaya.
mujhe nehi lagta tu wo update karne wali.

my GOD yaar miane tou comment par ek chota sa 1 shot likh diya
sorry ha.
plz dont angry with me.
thik hai main aab apna muh ya haat ok-tere liye dono he stop karti hoon
take care
love uuuuuuuuu
muahhhhhhhhhhh


😡
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Adi
amazing update yaar
tune bilkul aisa hi likha jaisa main chati thi
u r an fabulous writer adi
loved the whole update
maine to socha tha ye sab ria ne kiya
bech me sheena kaha se aagayi?
aaj or kuch nei kahoongi
main bohot hi sad hu
mom bohot bimar hai adi
pls pray for her
love u

Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago

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