NEW SS - ONLY FOR REVENGE(MN) last part

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HI FRIENDS I AM WRITING A SHORT STORY ON MAYUR AGAIN WELL I KNOW I HAVE SOME FF TO WRITE BUT I LOVE THIS STORY .AND WANT TO SHARE THIS WITH YOU ,THIS STORY HAVE ONLY FIVE OR SIX PARTS ......

ONLY FOR REVENGE

TERE PYAR MEIN MAR GAYI

SARRI DUNIYA SE LADD GAi

APNE KE NIGHO MEIN MER GAYI
TERE PYAR MEIN ,BUS TERE PYAR MEIN.....


HERE IS THE PART FIRST HOPE YOU LIKE
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INDEX ******** PART 1 -PAGE 1
PART 2 -PAGE 5
PART 3- PAGE 9
PART 4- PAGE 14
PART 5- PAGE 19
PART 6-PAGE 24
FINALLY UPDATED
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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after alot of efforts yes i find her ,i know she can't die she is alive ... maynk was laughing because he was happy after the news.....
he open his cupboard and where we saw alot of pictures of nups ....he was very happy .....

maynk- nupur i know this ,you can't die how can you die when i am here ......after 2 years ,6 months ,12 days ,i am eagerly waiting for the day when i will find you ..... he was happy really happy after a long time ..

his smile was echoing in his huge mention....

he was impatient to hide his happiness...

shilpa and evrybody was very happy when they saw him , he was laughing ,like every normal human being this is simple act but for maynk ...he just forget to smile but he was smiling........

sam- maynk .aaj tuje aise dek ker acha lagaa......per kya baat hai koi kajana haat lag gaya hai kya ?

may- ha sammy aaj mein bahut khush hoon ,itni jyda khusi to muje life mein kabhi bhi nahi hue hogi jitni aaj hue hai....

shi- arre mayu ,kya khusi ke baat hai ,jaldi bataa na beta....

gunj- ha ,maynk plz bato na.....

shilpa shoot a angry glare to gunjan.......which gunjan saw and she did not say anything after that. 😡 😡

may- bhai humne us company ko take over kar liya hai.bus ab mein wait nahi ker sakta mein jaldi se jaldi waha janna chata hoon
is liye mein bahut khush hoon.........

shi- beta tuje khush dekhker hum bhi khush hai ...

may- bus maa muje ashirwaad do ke mein jo chata hoon vo paa loo .

shi- ha maynk tuje jo cheez chaiya vo jarur milegi......

sam- congrats ,they both hug each other....

gun- congrats maynk.......

may- thx bahbi .

gun- maynk tumhe koi help chayia packing mein.....

shi- gunjna mein maynk ke help ker doongi ........she said rudely........

gunjan was hurt by shilpa's behaviour.but her face was not showing this hurt expression....

may-he smiled.it's ok mom and bahbi ,i can do this myself..... so don't bother for me ok....and he went outside..with sammy to discuss some details for their project ......

there only left shilpa and gunjan.....

shi- gunjna mene tumse kitni baar kaha haike tum mere or mere bete maynk ke life mein koi interfare mat karo it's none your business.....tum is ghar mein mere bete ke wife ke hesiat se ho is liye bus wahi banker raho mere maynk ke bahbi bane ke koshish mat karo ,aaj poore 2 saal baad mein maynk ko itna khush dekha hai or vo bhi tum nahi tolrate ker sakti ,tum or tumhari bahen ne hamari sari kushiya to cheen he le hai ab or kya chati hoon ,ek ne marr ker bhi saath nahi choda or ek tab tak nahi chodgi jab tak mar nahi jaygi......

shilpa was saying this ,she was not like the jagdalu saas ,like ekta's serial ,she was very sweet but circumstances changed her .......

gunjan was hurt by her words......shilpa's word pireched her hard ,.....

she open her room's door and she was sitting on floor her head on her knees...

gunjan pov
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her koi ye soctha hein ke maynk ne ye khoya ,maa ne maynk ke khusi ko khoya lakin meri bahen ne to apni jindgi he kho de,kya galti thi uski ,jo usse ye sazaa mili ,kissi ne nahi suna uski baat yahaa tak ke mein bhi nahi papa ne bhi nahi ,papa to kabhi suntein he nahi they ,bachpan se he usne papa ka pyar nahi paya ,papa ko laga ke vo maa ke death ke liye responsible hai, is liye papa ke liye to vo vasse he mar chuki thi, sirf mein thi jis ke liye vo jee rahi thi or phir ye sab ........

maa aap mujse nafrat karo muje koi problem nahi lakin aap meri bahen se nafrat kartin ho muje is baat se dard hota hai,jisna aap mein hamesha apni maa ko dekha aap se bus vahi pyar chaha jo vo papa se chati thi........

mein jisse vo jaan se jayda chati thi,uski baat bhi nahi suni apne payr ke liye mein itni andhi ho gayi thi ke muje kuch or dikhyi he nahi diya .kuch bhi nahi .. uski baat bhi nahi suni mene .........

nupur vapas aa jao ,muje phir se apne gale laga lo plz nupur....vapas aa jao..........


she was crying..................
the whole day passed ,she was sitting in same position.not moving inch.

it was night .....sam open their room door and saw see was sitting her knees was near her head .
he slowly moved and sit beside her ......

sam- gujna ,gunjan.....

no reply .

sam- he shook her.....and storked his finger through her hair......

gunjan saw sam and hug him and started crying.

sam know the reason behind this he hugged gunjan .

sam- chasmish don't cry plz don't i know mom's behavior hurt you but she need time.....

gun- no sam ,mom is my mother too and her words never hurt me. i was feeling sad ,i was missing my father.i want to go there.plz sam plz i want to .

sam- gunjan ,agar tum papa ke pass jana chati ho to koi baat nahi mein tumhe unke pass le joga per gunjan ab tum janti ho na maynk bhi one month ke liye shimla ja raha hai ,or phir agar tum cahli gayi to mein apne office work per concentrate nahi ker poaga..plz tum mere liye thoda sa wait karo.

she was confused ,how sam's office work and she related with this...

sam understood this .

sam- meri payri patni ab dekho agar tum cahli gayi to muje roz acha kahna kaun banaa ker kahilyga ,kiski godd mein sir rakh ker soiga,or kisko raat ko apni bahoo mein laker soga, or kisse apne office ke baato se bore karoga..,kisse good morning or good night kiss doga ,lakin ye bandaa apni sweet wife ke liye ye ker sakta hai ke vo usse apne papa ke ghar regular drop or pick ker lega.

gujan she was feeling lighter now after sam's hug she was set ..and sam's cute and sweet words again make her to smile.

gun- sam papa's house is so far from your office you have to drive alot ,don't do i will handle ok. don't worry i will stay for two days and your lunch will alwys on time boss .she smile saying this.

sam- dekha tumhe kissi ne kaha hein ke tum smile karti ho to badi hi cute lagti hoon bilkul teddybear jassi.

gun- ha ,kissi ne mujse kaha tha .

(sam know this whom she was talking ,he does not want that she again feel guilty ,he was equally guilty for this ,his heart know this nupur can't do this )

sam- gunjan tum usse jitna miss karti ho,utna he mein bhi karta hoon ,lakin shayd vo hume itna miss nahi karti thi ,isliye shayd khud he humse door ho gaye. chod gayi to bus kuch yaadien or vo bhi kadvi sirf kadvi. gunjan ab tum plz us past ko mat yaad karo ,jis se sirf pain he milega or kuch nahi .plz gunjan .

gun- sam ,hume uski baat sun ni chayia thi ,she was telling us but we are so adamant to listen.

sam- gunjan plz ,ab hum baat nahi karinge is barre mein .plz.

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next day
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all were happy because maynk was going their to set their new business,no body know his true interest ,his true motive.
he was very impatient and his flight was delay for two hours and these two hours was like a big big punishment for maynk .every passing mintue was increasing his heartbeat to meet the girl whom he was searching for almost two years ,whom everybody thought that she is no more.

and the plane arrived and he waved his hand and smiled at everybody ,everybody was there expect gujan,
he know why she was not there.so he just turned becoz he want to reach his destination.

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here in shimla we saw her she was working there in a office as P.A. . but now she want to leave this job because some another company take over this company and she was afraid of working with new bose ,yes she was no other then nupur ,she was afraid of any new person becoz now she does not want any body to enter her life.

(mr.mehta- he was like father figure for nupur ,he was going u.s .so he just sell his company he know that she was afraid of new bose.)

mr.mehta- nupur beta ,i know you were thinking about new bose ,but don't worry i talked with him and he was very nice ,no staff will change here he said to me,and as i talked with him .and also meet with him too ,you miss the meeting so you don't know but don't worry he is very honest and loyal too.

nup- but sir you know ,i am not feeling comfortable why i don't know the reason,but plz sir.plz accpet my resignation letter..

mr.mehta- dear nupur,i can understand your problem too,but as you know the term and condition you have to give this resignation to your new bose and if he accpet this then you will regine .

nup- sir ,plz sir .

mr.mehta-nupur he is nice guy ,why you ingrain this that everybody will hurt you,beta "ache logo ke saath to acha he hota hai or tum to bahut ache ho is liye tum bus apna work karo or kuch mat socho ,itna ke tumhe kuch ban ker dikahna hai,apne mom dad ka har dream porra karna hai . " so you have to do this job .

hearing this word she thought for her parents her family ,which was now .......


she feel something hot on her face .tear drops .she was crying ,missing them who just disown her,her family she love them miss them ,but for them she was nothing ,she was just ..... no body given her any chance to explain her .

mr.mehta notice that she was lost somewhere.

mr.mehta- nupur where are you .. ?

nup- no where sir i was just thinking whatever you said ,you are right sir i will do this .sir where is the detail of our new M.D.

mr.mehta- well nupur ,he is coming today .....suddenly his phone ring..
nupur we have to go airport to recieve him he is coming ....

nupur - ok sir.i will tell every body that our new boss is coming today .but sir i want to tell one thing that we will never forget our favourite boss who inspire us alot.

mr.mehta- he smiled and bless nupur.

ok we are geeting late and punctuallty is most important for everything.

nup- yes sir.she smiled
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nupur pov-

i don't know but after two years i was feeling the same saddness same loneless in my life which i feel two years ago,the fear of lossing again ,fear of loosing my self...fear of being hurt by loved ones ,accused by them . btu i have to face it mein apni vo life bahut piche chod chuke hoon ha shayd ye dard ha jo pass reh gaya ,vo naam jo muje mila bus vo pass hai or kuch nahi ,per aaj phir se kissi tofaan ke aane ka asar lag raha hein jassie vo tofaan muje phir se vahi le jayga jahaa se mein .bhag rahi thi. lakin muje isse face karna hoga.i have too,kyo mein unke liye karo jin logo ne mere sach per trust nahi kiya ,muje muje he nahi mere dil ko mere aatma ko bhi nahi choda ....nafrat hai muje un sab se ,nafrat hai....i hate them .. per kyo bus ye sach mein keh nahi pati ke mein sab se nafrat karti hoon ,us insaan se nafrat karti hoon jisse pyar karti thi....

mr.mehta- nupur come ...

nupur was turned but she collided with someone and other persons whole coke spilt on her dress....
nup- omg ,ab kya hoga .

per- plz sorry.

nup- it's ok it's my mistake too.

mr.mehta- nupur i think you should change so you may leave i will handle ok.

nup- thank you sir,actually she was thankfull to god too because her heart was telling that something is not good and she was relieved ,she need a brake and now she get whatever she want.

she leave the airport
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mr.mehta- welcome mr.maynk sharma nice to meet you.

maynk- me too sir .

mr.mehta- i am very glad to meet you one of the most eligble bachlor and intelligent business man ,happy that now my comapny is under you and it will reach the highest level.lets go.

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they reached the office where every staff member meet with maynk and happy to know about there new boss.

and soon he sign the papers and the deal was confirmed ..

mr.mehta- well tonight there is a party held by mr.maynk and you all Are invited.


Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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hey Myanak and NUpur wow plz cont soon post intro
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Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sweetyyyyyyyyyy

Congrats for starting a new ff

big hug 4 u.


i finished this part just now and yaar i must say it was awesome.

Mind-blowing

Fantastic

Super-duper update.

Every body thought that nups died only maynk knew that she alive and lives in shimla.

But what was the incident for which everyone they blamed nupur and didnt trust her.

i loved gunjans feelings for nups.

she really loved her sis

and sajan convo was also good.

but it was difficult for me to imagine shilpa aunty in such way.

but u told that there was a reason behind it.

i feel really bad for nupur.

she had to face lots of difficulty and pain.


very very interesting ff.

i m eagerly waiting 4 ur next update.

Adi plz continue it.

Aur ff ki tara ise adhura maat chod.

i really loved this ff.

So humare liye Update karte rehna.

Take care buddy


Love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu


Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaa70

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dear faria meri ye ss taotally tuje or tapoor ko dedicated hai
shayd mein ye write karna bhool gayi
per tune comment kiya mere liye ye matter karta hai or kuch anhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow...amazing
continue soon....
and add me to u r pm list...
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Originally posted by: Tarana

hey Myanak and NUpur wow plz cont soon post intro
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hi tarana
i just add you in my buddy list
well i just post the part first
this ss not contain any intro becoz this is short story
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Originally posted by: Niharika.S

wow...amazing

continue soon....
and add me to u r pm list...

thx niharika i will add you to my buddy list
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fantastic ss......
add me to your pm list.........
it sounds very interesting

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