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part 5
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now nupur was in her flat......everybody was looking at her face......
she can't face .she was feeling this time she want to dig a hole and hide herself from whole world......she want to leave this world......everybody's eyes their thoughts were hurting her most.and then the betrayal
of her best friend......she was feeling like a blot .

nup- i can' tolrate this , god plz forgive me .......
she want to recall all her lovely memories which was inside her heart.....
sorry di ,because of me again you have to face trouble but today i will finish the reason of all this .i will kill my self.......
she made her mind to end her life
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maynk was sitting in his flat and pondering whatever happen in his life........
someone was pressing the door bell continuesly .he carelessly open the door ..........

slap.........slap.........

gunjan slap him........
maynk know this ,this will happen ,he know this ........
gunjan grab maynk's collar where is my sister what you did with her ........?
where is she .....?

sam was watching first time he saw her in so much wrath ......ready to kill maynk.......he hold gunjan 's hand........

sam- gunjan plz hold your self i will ask .....plz ........

gun- sam i don't want to see his face plz ask him where is my sister if anything happen to her i will kill you maynk.........we all hurt her alot by not believing her......now you have crossed your limit ........

may- we have hurt her..he mocked.......bhabi i know she is your sister ,,,but no body hurt besides me.......she hurt me..snatch my love........ and here you are saying we hurt her.....

sam- maynk we don't came here to listen your rabbish plz tell us where is nupur........we want to meet her...........

may- bahi i can't believe you asking for her,because of her ma want to stop your wedding ........

sam- because you don't know the truth which i know.....plz maynk i will explain everything but first tell me where is she......

mayn gave them her address........

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nupur was writing a note.......

" no body is responisble for my death ,i do not want to live my life where is no body to love me to trust me, no friend ,no family ,no one ......so i am ending my hopeless life........."

she placed the note on the table .......

she closed her eyes .......and cut her wrists........
blood was ozzing from her wrists...... she felt sleepy and she closed her eyes.........

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sam and gunjan reach the same palce which maynk told them .......maynk was also with them he also want to see nupur........

gunjan not want to accompany maynk but sam tell her that they will tell the whole truth infront both of them........so she agree to accompany maynk......

sam and gunjan knocked nups door .they were standing there almost half an hour .......

gun- sam nupur door kyo nahi open ker rahi....... muje darr lag raha ke kahi usse kuch ho to nahi gaya.....

sam- gunjan tum aisa kuch mat socho ho sakta hain vo so rahi ho........

gun- nahi mein usse janti hoo ,samrat muje darr lag raha hai tum plz kissi tarah ya door open karo.....

maynk bring the watchmen and tell him to open the door with duplicate key........

when they open the door they saw she was laying lifeless their her duppta was covered with blood......

gun- nupur she kneel down ....she was crying bitterely .....nup you can't do this........you have to live you have to live nupur you can't die.....samrat kuch karo plz usse bacha lo.....bacha lo........

sam- gunjan nothing will happen to nupur..........we will save her .......sam console her.....

maynk was so dumb to beleive what he was watching he can't believe nupur can do this........he can't saw her in this condition...he run and sit near nupur........

gunjan saw maynk and her anger rise.........

gu- you killed her ,maynk you killed her........if anything happen to my sister i will kill you........aaj ye sab kuch tumhari wajah se hua hai,,you are the one who is responsible for all this not my sister...go away from here i don't want to see you face ......go away ........now you take your revenge now get lost.......leave me and my sister alone........

maynk was aghast to hear this "he is responsible for this"........

sam pick nupur in his arms and gunjan follwed her in car.......

they reach hospital...............

maynk was watching both of them .........

doctor was examine nupur and sam was consoling gunjan...

doctor - she is out of danger ........if their is some minute more delay then she was no more but now she is fine....... but she is unconcious......and she loss alot of blood .......so you have to take care her..she need your love and trust.......

maynk pov-
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i was frozen when i saw nupur she was laying in blood ,her condition was unbearable for me........she is my best friend ........how can i see her in this condition........
she is fine nothing can be as good as this news.........i don't know whether i am happy why i feel i was lossing someone precious in my life.........

gun- maynk kya soch rahy ho ,yahi ke nupur bach gayi bahut bura hua na....... tumne to usse marne mein koi kami nahi chodi na.......meri bahen aaj vaha hai to uski reason sirf tum ho.........

sam- gunjan control your self ...i know what maynk did was wrong but we have to tell him the truth ...........

maynk was watching both of them ,he was puzzled they both were behaving strange......

sam- maynk i want to tell you the truth.....plz came with me...

gu- sam you go with him i want to stay with my sister.....

sam- ok ,,i will , take care her.......

gunjan was sitting with nupur her hand was running through her hairs.....she was crying ......

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sam- maynk whatever we saw that was not truth.....it was all lie........all planned.........

sam tell maynk everything.........

maynk could not believe everything which was unknown to him..........he was fumming ..he want to hit himself ,to kill himself for not believing her.......
she was pleading him.telling that she can't do this.....
but he was too adamant to believe her...
he doesn't know what will he do know.he was too ashamed to face her....... he hugged sam ........

sam- maynk i know you are feeling guilty ......we will set everything ,she is fine now and you have to face her you have to tell her......apologize her.....maynk she face alot ,now we have to fight for her........

he remeber every moment where she was there to help him...every time he spend with her.....

may-bhai today because of me she is in this state ,i hate my self.........i hate.........

sam- maynk don't i know you did this because you think she is responsible for this........maynk you have to help her ,to attain her pride back ,kya tum usse hurt karne walo ko punish nahi karna chatien...nahi chatein ke uska self respect usse vapas mil jaye ,vo phir se sab ke samne sir utta ker chal sake......you have to help her........

may- yes bhai i will do this..........

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nupur slowly open her eyes........she was unaware of the fact she was in hospital..........

nu- where i am.........

gu- nupur.........

nupur saw gunjan she thought this was a dream.......she smiled and closed her eyes so the dream will not broke.......

gun- nupur kya tu meri chera bhi nahi dekhna chati...... itni nafrat hai apni di se......

nup open her eyes she saw the room .......
nup touched gunjan's face gunjan's tears touched nups hand......

nup- di ,aap aap yahaa......

gun- ha nupur ,plz forgive me for not trusting you, hurting you.......i don't believe you and.......i am too bad.......

nup- no di you are world's best di.........saying this she hugged gunjan........

gun- nupu kyo nahi batya ke tu zinda hai ,kyo apne aap ko humse door rakha..........kyo.or aaj bhi mujse hamesha ke liye door jana chati thi........kyo......

nup- di ,mein aap li life mein koi problem nahi chati thi........meri wajah se aap ko koi problem ho ye mein kasie hone deti or phir papa bhi to muje face nahi karna chati they akhir meri wajah se unka sir sab ke samne jukk gaya ...

gu- is liye khud sab kuch tolrate ker rhai thi itni time se........

sam and maynk was watching both sister was talking and crying in each others embrace......this moment was reliefing both of them........

sam enter the room...........

nupur was shocked to see him........she lowered her face.........

sam- nupur muje nahi lagta ki mera face itna kharab ho gaya hai ke tum muje ek look bhi nahi de rahi ho.....he chuckled.......

nupur was surprise to see him she can't believe her eyes......her sister and jiju..

nup- jiju aap ........

sam- thank god tumne muje ek look to diya varna muje laga ke in two years mein to tum bilkul bhool gayi thi muje.......

nupur hugged sam and cried her heart out.........
nup-i am sorry jiju.......

sam- you better be,agar aaj tumhe kuch ho jata to tumhari sister bhi rah nahi pati,ye two years gunjan ne kassie spend kiye hai main janta hoon,kabhi teri tasveer ke saath baat ker kabhi ro ker.......ab kabhi hume chod ker mat janaa or aise stupidty bhi mat karna,he hit her head slightly........ gunjan koi or bhi hai jo nupur se baat karna chata hai...........

gu- samrat jisse milna tha ab vo mil chuki hai or koi nahi hai jisse usse milna chayia.......

sam- sometimes you behave like a small child......gunjan plz come with me..........plz ........

after pleading for ten minutes gunjan and sam left .....nupur was in state of shock she can't believe after two years she was meeting with her di and jiju .......
when she was on verge of death she meet two person who was her life.......

she smiled heartly after two years........

maynk entered the room he was glad to see her smile......

nupur saw maynk and her smile turnes into disgust....she turned her face.......she doesn't want to see his face........she hate him .........

mayn saw her turning her face ,he was so hurt but know this will happen.......

may- nupur i know i hurt you alot.......you self respect too...... but plz if you can forgive me..........

nup - maynk i don't have anything to give you,no forgiveness ,i don't have anything.......
she shut her eyes so her tears .....could not show the pain inside her heart.................

may- nupur plz just listen me once..........

nup- maynk if you need your forgiveness ........i forgive you now just go from my life ..........just go..........


she turned her face..............

maynk left the room .......

maynk pov-
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i know i did worlds biggest mistake by hurting her not believeing her.......
he start his car and leave on the way their was some lines which was playing on radio........

"tera yakin kyo mine kiya nahi
tujse raha kyo juda..........

tuje per ye zindgi karti rahi sitam.....
tune he di hai panah............

tera mera rishta purana........"

he switch off the radio......it was making him more guilty........ every word of the song telling him the pain which was she faced........and he was only cursing her for every thing which was happen........
he was driving not know where he was going ....where his heart was taking him..............

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here nupur was crying .......

nov pov-
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maynk i don't know why your eyes speaking that you actually feeling guilty but now i can't trust you.......maynk now i don't trust .......your forgiveness can't give me back my pride ,my self respect .......i lost everything............i lost .........

mene apni life se kuch jyada nahi manga the ek tumhara pyar ,papa ka pyar or gunjan ka saath .......lakin shayd ye bahut jyda tha is liye aaj mere pass kuch nahi hai....... aaj di ko or jiju ko dekh ker bahut khusi hue ............ lakin janti nahi ki ye pal bhi kab tak hai mere pass........

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here sam and gunjan was thinking there everything will be solved between maynk and nupur..........

sam- gunjan i think you shuld also forgive maynk......

gu- sam i can't he hurt my sister because of his my sister was near her death........ i can't

sam- gunjan plz listen ......like ma and others he also don't know the truth so he did this .even before knowing the truth you also has anger for nupur same as for her maynk ....gun he lost his love so he done this plz understand him toooo..........

gunjan inside her heart she know he was right...she smiled......

gu- sam you are right .i forgive him ,ok now lets go to meet both of them........

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gunjan and sam enter nups room they were shocked to saw her bed empty..........gunjan was shocked.......

gu- sam , where is she..........

sam- may be with maynk wait i will call maynk and ask him...........

maynk cell was buzzing sam's name flashed he want to disconnect but he pick the call..........

sam- maynk is nupur with you..........

may- what ......... no way where is she ......... he was so worried.........where she was.........

after this gunjan was more worried ........

gun- sam plz do something i don't want to loose her ,where is she ........if she did this again........ if we will not able to save her..plz sam..........
sam was too worried.........

maynk too came there he was looking lost toooo...

may- bhai where is nupur ........what happen to her.....plz say something.....

gunjan was crying ......

may called the nurse and he was shouting at the nurse.........

may- you don't handle a single patient .......you say this a hospital...where is the patient ........

nurse- sir after giving her the injection ..i left the room.....

may- what injection.........so she can sleep properly.......
bhai vo jyda door nahi gayi hogi we can find her .....
bhabi plz hold your self nothing will happen to her.....i will never let anything happen to her.......

one word boy tell them he saw her outside the hospital..........

nupur pov-
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today my all wish fullfilled i saw my di ,she was so happy and my jiju ....... they were fine nothing best happen with me in my hopeless life........
sorry di i am going because now when you know i am alive you will insist me to go with you i can't do this .....i can't i am going don't know where but i am going.........

almost dark outside .........

maynk and samrat both chacked her appartment she wasn't there.........

gunjan was fearing that she will lose her again.....

sam and maynk both chacked all the railway station and ...all place where she can be.........

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nupu r was sitting infront of a temple she was feeling sleepy ,does not remember nurse give her injection....she fall asleep...........

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next morning when she open her eyes she saw her self in the same place where her life changed...........

she closed her eyes to remember what happen at night ....something which she remember she was sitting on the stare of temple ....now she was here ...... she was confuse.......

she saw three figures apporaching ........

no other than her sister who was looking totally mad.....and her jiju and third was maynk........

gun- kya ker rahi thi....kaha ja rahi thi.......phir mujse door ja rahi thi na ........kyo .......bata kyo ........ agar tuje kuch ho jata ...nupur agar aaj ke baad tune aisa kuch kiya to mein apni jaan de doongi tu muje maa kahti hai or apni maa se he door ja rahi thi........kyo.....

nupur hugged her

nu- di .....i don't want to make your life hell .......because of me your marrige was on stack but i don't want now anything will happen to you and your happiness because of me.........

gunajn saw her eyes,she was feeling guilty her sister who alwys think first for others ,how she fall in the trap of believing that she can do anything wrong.......

sam intrrupt both of them.....
sam- nupur how can you thought about this.........now we have to stop everything here and i have alot of thing to tell you so listen to me carefully...........

maynk was behing the door he was watching her crying ...he felt sad...........he can't saw this so he move outside.........

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sam tell whole truth to nupur..............

nupur can't believe everything which was happen ........before she thought .....how this happen ......but now she know she was innocent ...nothing more make her happy ........she brust into tears....hiccuping ...........
and hugged gunjan ..............


nu- di ...........why me why me.............

gu-nupur don't cry bachaa we will not leave her ....she have to pay what she did.........don't worry your di is alwys with you and your jiju tooooo.......

sam- gunjan you forget to mention maynk's name .....

nupur was feeling sad for maynk tooo..she want to see him but she can't see any glimpse of her........

she was looking here and there.....

gunjan and sam sensed her feelings.........

sam & gun- i think tumhe kissi or se bhi baat karni hogi ........saying this they both left..........
but first drink this juice because your are still weak.....
we are going somewhere see you tonight .......

saying this sam and gunjan left........leaving maynk and nupur alone.........

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she slowly walked in another room he was not their........

she saw the door of washroom was open and water was running she know he must be sitting inside the shower so he must forget all the thought.......his old habbits........
she open the door saw he was sitting on the floor his tears and water of taps was mix ......there was some paper in his hands.......(he was wearing clothes don't misunderstand ok)

she sit beside him........knowing what he was feeling ....... her hand touched his shoulders ..........she saw this was the same paper which she write when she commite suicide..........

just she touched he saw her ......he hugged her and cry.......she know this his reaction.........she caresed his back .........

nu- she said softly ......maynk............

may-
he read the note her word just pirched his heart ....her best friend was doing becoz of him...... he saw her eyes which was showing only love.......
nup plz forgive me i don't know the truth.........i hurt you ....you are right i am the bad one so my love leave me.and now you also want to leave me......nupur don't leave me........i will die i will die......... nupur put her hand to cover maynk's mouth....

nup- maynk never say this i am always there for you what ever happen it was n't your or my fault it was destiny who did this now plz forget this........
maynk plz for my sake..........

may- nupur do you love me................maynk asked her...........

nupur was not ready for the question .........this was not the right time to ask this type of question......

she stammered ........maynk broke the hug and direct saw her eyes ......she left , maynk went behind her.....

may- nupurrrrrrr.........

nupur turned ..........

may- nupur tum bhi muje chod ker chali jaogi .......his voice was full of pain.........his eyes was showing only emptyness........

nupur saw this and she hugged maynk...........

nup- maynk i will never leave you .....i love you .....more then anything more than myself sirf tumse hi pyar kiya hai meine or kissi se nahi .......

she does not know it was their pain or her love for maynk or the moment .........

thier wet clothes were hugging there bodies .......maynk looked in her eyes .......and saw love no hate...........he saw tears in her eyes..........he licked them....
he kissed her eyes she closed her eyes........he cupped her face and kissed her rosy pink lips.......
she surender herself .........she want to take all his pain ......for this she can do everything ...not know whether its right or wrong but if her body can make maynk to forget his pain she can do this.....for him......
she was laying on bed and maynk was kissing her.......
soon maynk undressed her ........and making love with her.........

she want to sooth maynk by giving all her love........
she kissed maynk's eyes.............

he want to forget everything which happend in past two years all his pain.........and he kissed her hard ....every kiss was telling her his pain ......

she want if she can die to sooth maynk she did this too for maynk........ she make nail marks on maynks back he pulled her .........

there cloth was scattered here and there .......she was weak to handle all this soon she fall asleep.......
they both covered in a sheet........maynk open his eyes and saw her and him ..........

he relaize what he had done she was lying naked ....and he was toooooo..........

he watch her face.....was he regreat making love with her....... he don't know what happen to him it was the moment which made him to do this.........
or what................

he open the cupboard and took some clothes for wearing..........and also collect his clothes .......which was on the floor.............


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very long part na.....i think i never write so long part like this.............enough for me.............
hope you like the part ,dear faria and tapoor plz don't kill me for not updating mama's boy i will start writing soon so plz forgive me ok
plz press the like tab everybody one request plz press the like tab .......so i know you like the update or not.................
now only two part left............
plz write your comments so i know you liked the update or not..........
when i write this part i was in dilema whether it was right nupur surender her self or wrong ....just give me my answer .......only for my heart becoz i don't know either this was right or not............

with love
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ADITI




Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous part adi
at last both of them know the truth
mayur were just ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
update soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
i was eagerly waiting for u to update this ss..was nice part..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
meri jaan
keya chakka mara hai tune
dil khush kar diya by god
i loved the update to my core
is was amazing
fabulous
outstanding
mind blowing
jitna kahu utna kaam hai
i loved gunjaan so much in this ff
she is such a sweet sister
sam was sooooooooooooo nice
gunjaan slapped mayank
maynk deserve it
thanks tune meri baat manliya
per last part to.............😳 😳
what will i can say
u make me blushing yaar ☺️ ☺️
but pls dont show this that mayank regret himself to making love with nupur
if u show this i will kill u
adi tune aaj bhi nehi bataya ke huya keya tha
pls jaldi se ye raaz khol de
but i think its riya . isn't it????????
lovely update adi
pls do cont soon
love u


Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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awesome part yaar............loved it to the core.....i dont know whether nupur did is rite or not????? now why the hell mayank regret making love with her..?????? if he even think that for1 min i am gonna kill h......im 4 sure
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wow.........
glad mayur forgave each other......
sorry for the short comment.......
i am in a hurry.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey adi

im happy becoz u updated

i was waiting for this

the update was soooooooo good

mayur were just😳😳

awesome as usual

loved this update

and a reall really hearty and big thank you

for updating itna lamba part

update mamas boy soon

as well as this

love pebbzzyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
fab update adi....
want to read more...
please update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG.......i was blushing while reading it....☺️☺️☺️
lovely updatee......
continue ittt s000n.....
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nice part adi..quite a lit of emotional turmoil in their minds and in the whole part, so i dint find the end odd.

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