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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Great update.....
Shocked at Shilpa Aunty's behaviour....
Waiting for Mayur meeting....
Pls continue soon...
Pls add me to your pm list....

thx yaar
i will soon update and pm you
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Adi

congrats for ur new ss
main kitna late hogayi comment ke liye 😭 😭
keya karu power jo nei rehta 😡

Its a mind blowing update jaan
very very interesting
or aise bhi tu to meri sab se favo writer haina
jo bhi likhegi best hi likhegi

i want to know what happened to nups????????
mayank inta bechain hai nups ke liye
srif pyaar ke khatir keya?
phir ss ka naam only for revenge kiyu hai?
revenge kon lega mayank ya nupur?
shilpa aunty or aise???????
i m totally socked yaar
but loved the gunjis felling for nups
and sajan convo was nice

but age keya hoga adi??????
pls do cont soon
love u sooooo much

dear tapoor yaar tera comment read karne ka main
bhi bahut wait karti
hoon
i love it jab tum dono comment kartein ho mere liye to tum dono ka ek hi bhi bahut important hai
yaar tuje farii ne bata to anhi diya usne iska part read ker liya hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
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may- he was sitting in his flat. they have a flat in shimla .and he know nupur was his p.A.
and he was eagelry waiting for her ,he want to saw her .to tell her .
party started but there was no sign of nupur.maynk was waiting and now he know he will meet her in the morning.
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in office
he was impatientlly waiting for nupur , it was 8 'o' clock and he was there becoz whole night he can't sleep properly ....he want to see her ,want to saw the shocked expression on her face.
time pass and the clock strike ,he saw her she was coming .....
he turned his face and covered it with a file.
nupur knocked the door and she entered.
nu-good morning sir ,i am nupur ,your P.A.
he was not responding.
( she was standing there,but he was so engrosed in file ,and this was irritating her the most so she finally speak again.)
nup- sir ,plz tell me about my work.and now he remove the file and showed his face.
and he smiled .
may- to akhir mein tumhe donde liya na .
when she heared the voice her file fall from her hand she looked in horror and saw maynk's face.
she was in state of shock ,how he find her....
may- kya hua nupur ,tumne kya socha ke tum logo ko yakin karwogi to vo mann lenge ke tum mar gayi ho,nupur tum kassi mer sakti ho ,kassi tumhari her sanse per mera hukk hai,or nupur itni asaan maut nahi hai tumhare nasseb mein ,nupur tumhe to til til ker marna hoga jssie ke itni saal mein mara hoon ,nupur mein tumhe kaha khaa nahi find kiya ,mein janta tha ke tumhe maut nahi mil sakti jab tak tum apne her galti ki sazaa na paa lo.jassi mein apne pyar ke liye tadapa hoon tumhe bhi jab tak mein vass nahi tadpa doonga tab tak muje chain nahi mil sakta .
nupur was in state of horror only listening maynk's word and crying . she just forget where she was .only she know one thing that he was there and his eyes only showing hate no other emotions .
nup pov-
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aaj bhi itni nafrat ,vahi gussa ,vahi chera per kuch badal gaye ho tum ,kyo tum muje samaj nahi sake pehle bhi or muje pata hai tum kabhi nahi samaj ge. nahi samjoge ke mene kuch nahi kiya .
may- kya hua nupur kahi phir se apne sapno ke duniya mein to nahi kho gayi .mat lo nupur kyo ki ab tumhara her sapna totne wala hai ,bus totne wala.or tum kuch nahi ker sakti ,or if you are thinking to leave the job then i want to tell you that you have signed 2 years contract so you can't leave ,otherwise you will face trouble or agar mein tumhe yahaa find ker sakta hoon to kahin bhi find ker sakta hoon.to ab kya yuhi dummy bane khadi rahoge .
nup was know that his words true and now she have to face everything .
nup- tum kya chat ho mujse ,ab mere pass kuch nahi hai khone ke liye ....
may- nup tum kyo bhool jati hoon ki tumhare pass bahut kuch hai ,kya hua tumhar pass apna surname nahi hai, per tumhari smile to hai ,tumhari sannse to hai .or jab tak tum jinda ho nupur mein tumhari life ko hell banane mein koi mauka nahi chdoga.
nupur fall on floor and she brust into tears and saying "maynk mine kuch nahi kiya ,tum sab ne meri baat nahi suni maynk plz mera yakin karo maynk ,yakin karo ....she was hicuuping
may- trust or nupur per ,nupur you are homewrecker ,tum per trust ,trust kya hota hai tum janti ho is ka matlab ,nahi nupur you are a s****.such a cheap .....
nup- she just closed her eyes ,so she can't again remember the horrible moment.....
maynk gave her a hanky plz nupur apni aansu pooch lo ,kyo ki agar tum abhi he aansu bahaa loge to bakki ke zindgi kassie katogi.
nupur was not uttered a word only looking at his face.
may- nupur aaj itni saal baad muje itna sukun mil raha hai ,mein bata nahi sakta nupur.....
nupur i think you should leave now ,aaj ke liye to itna kafi hai ab tumhe bhi kuch time chayia hoga na ,apna dard batne ke liye.or ha mere liye coffe bsj do or mera taste to tumhe yadd he hoga.
nupur was standing there like statue .maynk was only inch away from her ,his breath on nups lips .she was feeling very uncomfortable by this act ,and she moved back....and her back touched the wall no space to escape.
may- kya hua nupur tumhe darr lag raha hai kya ,
nupur he said in his husky voice which alwys increase nups heart beat..

nup said nothing she shut her eyes so tight not want to face anything,
may- nup open your eyes ,look at me nupur .....nupur and he just put his mouth on hers.....
maynk was hardly kissing her but she was not responding ,she was pushing maynk ,but
maynk's grip was hard on her hands, and her hand hurt and blood ozz from her hand
may- nupue you don't forget na our first kiss,and now you will never forget this kiss, did i say this our second kiss or you find someone else here too ,which fullfill all your n***.
she can't listen more she just slap maynk hard ...
nu- maynk ,first i thought i was guilty for everything which happen but know you deserve this maynk ,you are not the one whom i love ,i hate you i hate you,maynk mene tumse kabhi nahi kaha ke mein tumse payr karti hoon aaj mein bahut khush hoon ke mene tumse vo teen shabd nahi kahe kyoki you don't deserve
tum jo kuch sochna chatein ho socho karo muje koi effect anhi hoga maynk,or agar tum ye sochtein ho ke tumhari presence se muje koi fark pegda then let me tell you ,mein tum sab ke liye ,mar chuki hoon or died person feel nothing,or ab tumhe kuch nahi milega maynk,tum jo karna chatein ho usse tumhari takleef badegi meri nahi.... lakin agar tum sochtein ho ke muje is tarah torcher karne se tum khuch paa sakt ho to maynk you are wrong........you are wrong
and saying this she left the office......
maynk was listening her words he was sitting on his chair......and she was on floor crying ......
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nupur was sitting in her cabin and now she was feeling very low ,she was thinking about her life and her black past ,which she never want to remember...

suddenly the phone ring .it was amynk he call her in his cabbin.......
she knocke the door and open it when he permit her to enter......
may- miss nupur ,do you know your work ,i think you did not ,because there is alot of work pending ,do you know about this.saw this file i know you are p.a and office manager too.....but i think you are not worthy for both jobes...... and he throw the file on nups face ,,,,
she was shocked with thsi sudden attack the file hit her ahnd which was already injour........she winched in pain but maynk was feeling nothing.....

maynk was shouting at her and the whole office was stunned to listen this he was behaving very badly with nupur ..
nupur was feeling very hummilated with this........

but she controlled her self ,,,she clamly asked sir what you need in this project i will do the correction as your reqirment.....
may- i need this now so ,you have to complete this today ,or jab tak tum isse complete nahi ker leti tab tak tum office se a\nahi jaoge ....
nup- sir i will complete this today ..... and saying this she left maynk's cabbin.
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nup- maynk mein ajnti hoon ke ye sab tum muje pershaan karne ke liye ker rahay ho ,but ab mein jitna ro sakti thi ro chuki hoon ab nahi mein phir se anhi vo sab hone doongi...and she brushed of the thought and start to work.......
she did not relaize that it was quite late almost 12 'o clock .
she complete the project and then she relaize that it was qutie late ......all office was
empty.she pick her bag and sad the watchman to lock the office.......
she was very tired mentaaly and physically too....and her hand was hurt too....this day was very tough for her ,,her life just show her the worst nightmare.....
she don't relaize that she was walking alone lost in her thoughts, some boys were just behind her,suddenly she tripped over a stone ,and her hade was hurt and bleeding to ..soon she feel someone was playing with her hands ,she tried to free her self from the grip of unknown person .she try hard to scream but one hand coverevd her mouth ,she was trying to hit the person with her leg but in vain ..
her duppta were laying on road and she was so helpless ......strugling to free herself.....
suddenly one boy who covered her mouth fall on ground she was unconcious due to fear not know what happen rest.......
but when she open her eyes she found herself safe an secure her duppta in her neck.....she saw she was lying in someone's bed....she was trying to figure out what happen previous night......

she hear someone is coming she want to know who save her and want to thank her....but when she saw the person was no other than maynk ......he was smiling when he saw she was awake......
giving her coffee,nupur was staring at maynk in amusment like she saw the next wonder of earth......
may- nupur tum ye soch rahi hogi why i save you even i want to hurt you too,but nupur let me clear tumhe hurt karne ka rite sirf or sirf mera hai or kissi ka nahi ,or agar koi iske beech mein aayga then i will never leave that person.....
nupur's touge was glud what she say she does not know ,some time before she want to thank him but now......
may-acha to ab coffe pio or jao......
nupur - maynk tum janti ho tum ye jo apne dil ke andhar ka sab dard hai usse hata do tumhara dil to bilkul coconet ke tarah hai,kyo vo banan chatin ho jo tum nahi ho,maynk badla kabhi kissi ko kuch nahi deta ,kyo tum us maynk ko marna chatein ho jisse sab pyar kartin hai....kyo she was asking him the question....
maynk just grab her and this sudden push they both fall on bed maynk was over nupur ......
may- nupur ye tum kah rahi hoon ,sab kuch to chin liya mujse tumne ab kyo achi hone ka dikva ker rahi ho,kyo meri itni pervaah ker rahi hoon.nupur kyo nupur........
nupur was undernath maynk and was feeling too uncomfortable by this........she can listen maynk's heartbeat and can feel his breath too.
nu- maynk muje chod do ,plz plz maynk......
may- nahi nupur saying this ,he gave a love bite on nups neck ,she pushed maynk ,and she open the door......
but this was the last mistake she did......
she dosenot know that her life is not easy to live their is something more there....
there was press at the door and they just click her picture with maynk....... the love bite which maynk give her was visible to press and her clothes was also telling them something else.........
maynk also come there ,he was shirtless . and this was enough for media to make a page three news......
media people were asking her some questions ......but she was to deaf to hear anything only tears coming from her eyes.......maynk grab her hAnd and he closed the door.........
nup- she was crying bitterely.....
may- waht happen nupur ...kya hua tum yahi to chati thi,ke log jaanne ke humne ek saath bahut time enjoy kiya hai ...or bahut ........
before maynk say anything further she slapped maynk......
nup- you did this na,so everything was your plan .......your plan na tell me it's all your plan na........
may- he was laughing ,,,yes yes this was my plan......i think you must thinking ke ye brilliant idea tumhari mind mein kyo nahi aaya..hai na .
nup- you are sick maynk ,tum apne is revenge mein itne aande ho joge mine socha bhi nahi tha .....kya chayia

tume maynk mera sab kuch chala gaya ,ab to kuch nahi tha or jo kuch tha vo ab chala gaya......
she was hiitng maynk's chest ,why maynk why maynk?
kya chayia yahi na tum mujse badla lena chatein ho to just rape me maynk just rape me ...... nothing bad happen to girl like this......
just rape me your revenge will be complete .........
she was in so much wrath ,she couldont know what she was saying .......she throw her duppta and just kill me maynk take your revenge ,take your revenge .......
saying this she collapsed.......
maynk who was responisble for all this he just pick her in his arms and laid her on bed and cover her with blanket........
may- nupur aaj muje bahut sukun milna chayia tha lakin pata nahi muje ye acha nahi leg raha hai,hum dono to dost thay na,aaj hum kiss mod per aa gaye ke mene tuhme media ke samne itna insult kiya .tumhe kahin ka nahi rakha ......meine two years tak wait kiya ke kab muje tum milo or kab mein tumhe itna majboor kar do ke tum bahut tadapo lakin aaj kyo tumhari ye halat mujse bardast nahi ho rahi tumne galat kiya lakin mein bhi to vahi ker raha hoon....
(he saw her face ,she was frowing like watching some horrible
dream )
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sorry for the delay here is the part 2
if you don't like maynk's behaviour in next part you will know the reason why he behave so badly with nupur
with love
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aditi
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

wow......

first to comment.......
mindblowing update......
wonder wat happened in the past.......
feeling bad for nupur.......
plzzzzzz update soon......
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
that's gr8 dear....
but i srsly didn't like Mayank's behavior...twas ridiculous...
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
juz wanna kil mayank rite now...but 1 question???? did mayank love nupur now????
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
hey
awesome update
bt mayank hurting nupur ....
feeling bad for her
bt liked the ff
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Adiiiiiiiiiiiiii janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
How r u?
ye tujhe kabhi kabhi kya ho jata hai?
tu gayab ho jati hai-phir acahank vapas aa jati hai.
dekh plz try to connect with us.
anyway update ki bade main tou pehle he bata diya.
phir kehti hu - mindblowing part sweet heart.
it was awesome update.
loved it so much.
i felr very bad for nups.
she had to face lots of difficulty and pain
nobody trusts in her-neither mayank nor gunjan,
everybody blame her- but whats the reason behind it?
me eagerly waiting for it.
plz try to update 3rd part asap
take care buddy



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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr888 prt
feeling realyyyyyyyyyy sad 4 nups
update nxt prt sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
great update....
waiting to know about their past....

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