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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kris97

Please update next part soon....ASAP....

Sorry for making u wait sooo long. Will update soon.
Thanks!!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ThIsgalluvSAJAN

wow wow wow i m loving dis ff so so much awesome da way u described samrat's POV for gunji n gunji's POV for sammy wow loved it to the core dis ff loved all 3 updates da way u go in deep n all da way u describe it its just amazing good work keep it up n plz update soon n plz pm me

Thanks a lotttt dear. I'm soooo touched by ur sweet reply. I'm sooo glad that u like it and i'll try my best to make it interesting..
Will surely add u in my PM list..
Thanks again. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

Hi dear! I have made it a habit to read SAJAN FF's in my tiny mobile screen before sleeping😛 so i was surfing thru the forum and found this one..! and i cant believe tht this is ur first!! Its absolutely stupendo fantabulously fantastical jaana!!

I loved it to the core!!!
Its totally rocking!👏👏👏
continue soon dear!!
waiting for ur next update, and add me to ur pm list
luv
ZeeJay!

Hey Zee Jay!!
I'm seriously at a loss of words to thank u. Well, its my honor and pleasure that u found my FF, read it and liked it. I'm soooo glad to have u here.
Its sooo encouraging when one gets such amazing appreciation, though I don't think that my FF is this much praise worthy.
Thank u sooooo much for such nice comments. I'm extremely touched by it.
I've added u in my PM list.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

awesome ff......

u write so well,does nt seem 2 b ur 1st time......
n also read ur os picture perfect moment, it was jst perfect....
plzzzzz add me in ur pm list n cont soon.......

Awww!!! Thanks a lotttt dear. I'm sooo glad that u liked my OS and r also liking this FF.
I'll surely add u in my PM list. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello everyone!!!

I'm extremely sorry for being soooo late in updating the next chapter of my FF. As i told u eaelier, i cudn't do it coz of some personal reasons. I'm soooo thankful to u all for all the suuport and love that u've given to me. I'm sooo touched by it and I feel bleesed to have u all, my dear friends. A special thanks to my mETcian's. I'm back here bcoz of u ALL, and espcially Mads and Diya, writing this chapter has been possible bcoz of u girls. So, this one is for u both.. Love u all loads!!!! *hugsss*

And Drishti, Zee Jay and Kris, i read ur posts and believe me, it felt greatttt to know that u are waiting for the next part. Thank u soooo much. U guys rock!!!
Coming to the FF, i'm finally posting the next chapter. It is again a boring one 😕, but i HAD to add it, coz i feel that its important as its describes, and gives an insight to, the character(s). I know u'll find it uninteresting and for that i apologize beforehand. I know i say this for every chapter, but i'll try to do away wid this boring stuff from the next chapter onwards.
Looking forward to ur comments, replies, and above all criticism.
Love,
Ayesha
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Chapter 4

He had been working as a professional for quite some time now, but this job brought a wave of enthusiasm within Samrat. As he stood at the rostrum, he was all confident and was ready to face this challenge whole heartedly. He looked towards everyone sitting in the auditorium, cleared his throat and while maintaining an eye contact with his audience, he started:

"Hello everyone!"

He didn't use the formal words, like "respected seniors, dear students..etc," because be it the seniors, or juniors, he respected everyone and always believed that respect should come from the heart and not just by merely saying. Besides, hello seemed to b a general and a decent manner to address everyone.

"I am Samrat Shergill. Dr. Khan has said a lot about me, and I'm extremely thankful to him for all his kind words. Mein apney ap ko is laiq nahin samajhta and Sir (looking at Dr. Khan), I'm very grateful to you for the confidence that you have shown in me. Mein puri koshish kerunga ke hamesha na sirf apki expectations pe pura utrun, bulkey unhein exceed kerney ki puri koshish kerun ga".

Dr. Khan knew that he had made the right decision by bringing Samrat as the HoD. With a smile on his face he said, "I'm sure Samrat. We all are and will be proud of you".

These words gave Samrat more confidence and with an increased spark in his eyes he continued:

"Well, some of u know that I am an Ex-Excelian and I consider myself extremely lucky to have been able to get a degree from such a prestigious Institution. Excel, is undoubtedly one of the best institutions and I owe a lot to this place. Mein yahan per bohat se apney professors ko dekh ke bohat khushi mehsoos ker raha hun, kyonki mein aj jo kuch bhi hun, in sab ki wajah se hun. (Looking towards the place where faculty members were sitting) Sir, Ma'm, I've indeed been very lucky ke mujhey ap jaisey teachers miley, jinhon ne hamesha mujhey guide kiya. Ap ne meri studies ke time pe bohat help ki, mujhey bohat encourage kiya. Pehley ki tarah, mein ab bhi apsabki support aur apki guidance ke baghair kuch nahin ker sakun ga. I'll try my best never to disappoint you. And I'm sure ke ap sab ke hotey huey mujhey her terha ki guidance miley gi".

He continued with addressing the students:

"Mein kabhi soch bhi nahin sakta tha, ke mein kisi aisi capacity mein yahan aonga. But life mein hum kuch plan kertey hein magar destiny ka kuch aur hi plan hota hai. So, here I am. I know ke ap sab life mein kuch achieve kerna chahtey ho. Mera yahan aney ka maksad yehi hai ke main apke is mission ko achieve kerney mein apki madad ker sakun. Mehnat apki apni hogi. Mein sirf apki mehnat ko direction deney ki, apko guide, help, aur facilitate kerney ki koshish kerunga. Is ke saath saath hum sab mil ker Excel ko India ki best University bananey mein koi kasar nahin chodein ge. I assure you, ke mein her step per apka saath donga. Is ke badley mein apse sirf ek cheez chahta hun. Woh yeh ke ap sab puri hard work aur dedication ke saath study karein ge. Mujhey meri studies ke time pe Dr. Khan aur baki sab teachers ne ek advice di thi, jo aj tak mere kaam ati hai. Wohi mein aj ap sabko dena chahta hun. Wo ye keh, always believe in your self, aur life mein jo kuch bhi kero full confidence ke saath kero. Put in your best efforts, because hard work and determination always pays off."

All this while, everyone was getting impressed by Samrat. Every word of his carried a lot of weight and depicted his determination to achieve his aim of leading Excel.

Gunjan was no exception. Though her mind was still wavering due to the first encounter with Samrat, still she was getting impressed by his thoughts. By now, she knew that he was a thorough professional and also understood the reason of Dr. Khan being always full of praises for him.

Samrat continued, "In the end, mein apko ye assure karana chahta hun ke mein yahan sirf ap logon ke liye, aur is Institute ke liye aya hun. And I assure you all of my full cooperation. Apki koi problem ho, koi issue ho, ap mujhey directly inform ker saktey hein, mujhsey discuss ker saktey hein. Apsabke saath kaam kerna merey liye ek honor ki baat hai aur ye mere liye bohat bari learning opportunity hai. We will all work together and will take Excel to the top. I hope ke ap sab mera saath dein ge. So, let's start working to achieve our goal from today itself. God bless u all!!!"

The whole auditorium stood up and gave Samrat a huge round of applause. He was elated and was very happy with the way his new journey had started. He had never received such an encouraging response ever before. He thanked everyone by smiling and nodding his head and then turned to go back to his seat. Here also, Dr. Khan and the other faculty members were standing and clapping for him, except……………HER.

"Where is she gone? Abhi kuch minutes pehley toh wo yahein bethi thi. Ab kahan chali gayi hai? Ufff Samrat..phir us ka khyal??? Yeh tum kya ker rahey ho?? Kyun baar baar ussi ke baarey mein soch rahey ho??? Wo yahein kahein ho gi. Lekin…"

While thinking about her, he reached near his seat. Dr. Khan and others shook hands with him and appreciated his speech, his thoughts, his dedication. With this the session ended and everyone went for refreshments.

Gunjan was sitting on the stage almost till the last minute of his address, and then she had to go to check the refreshments area. Everything was done by the canteen people, but Gunjan never took any chances and always used to monitor everything herself. So, she went to the adjoining hall where refreshments were served to see everything was perfect.

Unlike the auditorium, the hall presented an informal environemt. All the students and staff members were interacting with each other. Dr'. Khan introduced Samrat to the remaining faculty members, staff members as well as to the head's of the various students' socities. When these introductions were done, Dr. Khan took Samrat for taking something to eat. While walking, he could hear remarks about him, which reminded him of his own student life.

The girls were full of awe for him, "hai…Sir kitney handsome hein". Another girl started, "mein toh kuch sun hi nahin payi jo ye bol rahey they. Mein toh sirf inhein dekh hi rahi thi." Yet another one telling her boyfriend, "kash tum bhi itney smart hotey" (and the boyfriend getting jealous). "Mein toh roz inke office mein jaon gi", another one exclaimed. A girl in one corner, "hai..mein to mar gayi yar. Ab perhai kaise ho gi?"

Not only the girls, most of the boys were also appreciating him, "toh ye hein Samrat. Dr. Khan in ki sahi tareef kertey they". Another one, "kash hum bhi inki tarah bun sakein". A third one, "is age mein inhon ne kitna kuch achieve kiya hai". His friend interrupted, "haan yaar. Mein toh Sir Samrat se bohat impress ho gya hun. Hopefully, ye humari problems ko sahi se address aur deal kerein ge".

There were a few jealous ones also, "aisi bhi koi khaas baat nahin ki." Another one said, "ye toh waqt hi bataye ga ke jo inhon ne kaha hai, wo kertey bhi hein ya nahin." His friend shared his thought, "her koi yehi kehta hai, ye sirf kehney ki baatein hein. Kher chodo humein is se kya. Let's enjoy the food".

All these remarks brought a smile on Samrat's face and he remembered the time when he and his friends also used to discuss every new person caming to Excel. He thought in his mind, "typical student life".

Samrat took a sandwich and a cup of tea and stood near a table, where every now and then, a student, or a faculty member, or a staff member, came and welcomed him. He was mainly saying hi…thankyou..and bye, when all of a sudden, someone came from the back and put his heavy hand on his shoulder.

"Hey Sam".

Samrat turned around and saw Uday and Riya standing there. Uday suddenly realized, and in an apologetic tone, "Oh, I'm sorry. Hello Samrat Sir". Riya didn't, or couldn't utter any word, instead, just shook her head for a hello.

Samrat understood where Uday was heading to, so before he could say anything, Samrat said, "Hey dude, kaisa hai? Aur ye, Sir Sir kya laga rakhi hai? And Riya, how r u?" Both Uday and Riya got Samrat's message. Uday took a sigh of relief, "O' Sam, mujhey laga ke ab tu HoD bun gya hai, is liye shayad tu bura na maan jaye". Samrat interrupted, "Uday, ye tu kya keh raha hai? Tu kab se itna formal ho gya hai? Hum friends hein yar. Sabke samney aur classes mein toh aur baat hai, magar abhi, yahan per mein tum logon ka Sam hun. Got it u two?" All three shared a smile and Riya said, "Sam, it's so good to see u here". Samrat asked, "Really?" They didn't understand what he was talking about, but before they could inquire, he said, "toh phir aisey kyon kharey ho? Mana humara group toh ab yahan nahin hein, per hum tenun to hein. So, humari hi hug ho jaye, apni dosti ke naam". Uday and Riya immediately clinged onto him as if they were just waiting for him to say this, and all three of them hugged each other.

Uday, though was physically very strong, from inside he was like a small kid. "Sam, mujhey laga tu mind kerey ga, per tu toh bilkul bhi nahin badla yar." Samrat replied, "tum dono bhi toh waise ke waise hi ho. Mein tu yahan wapis aya hun, per tum dono toh yahan se kabhi gaye hi nahin" and smiled. Uday and Riya knew that Samrat was pulling their legs, so Uday had to reply to this one, "haan na yar, afterall consistency bhi koi cheez hoti hai", and all three of them laughed again.

Since the day had started, it was the first time Samrat was being his own self. And it was at this time that he realized, that being in such a profession, and at such a position, does not mean that one has to remain serious all the time. He was very happy to see Uday and Riya. They were sharing the good old times that they spent together and were interrupted by Dr. Khan's voice.

"Tum dono yahan pe ho. Chalo acha hai, Samrat ko company de rahey ho". All three of them looked in the direction from where Dr. Khan was coming. Uday and Riya smiled at him, while Samrat was again astounded. Gunjan was accompanying Dr. Khan and as soon as their eyes met…again…the same unknown feelings started emerging within them. They both were trying to figure out why this connection developed everytime they met, but couldn't find any answer. She tried diverting her attention, by sometime, straightening her dupatta, sometime pushing her hair back, and sometime by looking and smiling at Uday and Riya. And he, he was being disturbed by Uday's hand that sometimes patted on his shoulder, sometimes hit his back. All in all, they were finding reasons to look away from each other…till….they were standing right in front of each other.

Dr. Khan started, "Samrat, is se milo. Ye mera support system hai. Is ke baghair yahan sab kuch bekaar hai. Ye hai toh yahan kabhi koi problem nahin ho sakti. Ye humarey department ki, Excel ki backbone hai. Jaise ek insaan ki agar back bone mein koi problem ho toh woh chal to kya, seedhi terha kerha bhi nahin ho sakta. Issi terha, is Excel ki backbone ke bina, Excel bhi na toh khara ho sakta hai, aur chalna toh dur ki baat hai".

All this while, one shade of pink appeared on Gunjan's cheeks and another faded. She was blushing and was feeling very uneasy listening to so much praises.

On the other hand, Samrat's anxiousness and curiosity were at their peak. And finally he was close to getting the answer with Dr. Khan's words, "Tum shayad isse jantey ho, Mein ne kal is ke baarey mein tum se zikr kia tha." Samrat took a quick recap of all the happenings of yesterday, but his mind refused to focus on anything else except this very moment.

Finally, Dr. Khan told him, "Samrat, is se milo, ye hai Gunjan Bhushan".
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Posted: 15 years ago
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edited....ashu....u mean creature....how cud u stop here😡

ashu it was as usual brilliant part re.⭐️.....what i loved abt this chap was the way u captured the hulchul amongst students abt a new prof or hod's entry....typically like all of us do n u captured all their emotions so rightly....10/10 babes....i also liked sam's word....he was so being the cool porf of this generation...no over the top gyan but yet thot provoking in his own way...ability to reach the audience with simple words.....i can clearly see ashu u must be a star prof as far as ur students r concerned⭐️...coz only one can write about the other😉

awww i was so looking forward to SAJAN interaction....kab milwaogi unhe😍

LMAAAAOOOOO uday's consitency dialogues had me in splits🤣.....speaking of consistency i am also somehow maintaining mine....god knows how though😆

brilliant ud ashu👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
HOW can you stop like this????!!!!! 😲
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Since I still feel the same way, I'm gonna let my first comment stay 😆😆😆

First of all, I warn you I'm a very picky reader ... so I went back to your last chapter, and reconfirmed what I wanted to check ... you have NOT let on whether Samrat and Gunjan knew each other in Excel earlier ... although you made it clear that they haven't recognized each other ... yet! I was trying to figure out whether they were at Excel at at the same time ... were they? Or is that part of the suspense? 😆

This FF is very much my cup of tea, so I warn you I'm gonna keep coming up with questions like this! 😆

I loved your update, brought back my college days, especially the comments on the teachers 😉 and the way you built up the college atmosphere. Uday is so cute ... loved his "consistency" dialogue!!! And yes, teachers can be fun too ... agree completely on that one!!!

And now I'm WAITING for the Sajan meeting ... will hound you till you update the next chapter!!!

Edited by DiyaS - 15 years ago
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sorry posted other comment.Forget that i have res this one.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
how can u stop like this pllzzz continueeeee plzzz plzzz cantwait 4 the nxttttttt
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uff how could you stop like this ohhh😔

ok as usual it was awesome.Really nice.The way you showed different students different responces towards new HOD was typical like all of us.You showed there emotions very nicely.Sam was really kool n simple yet impressing.he had ability to reach the students with simple words.Was really waiting for sajan interaction but I guess have to wait.Continue soon plzzz.Thx 4 the pm.
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