fallen in love with you forever(SG MN)part19 pg139

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: samrat_anki
awesome pragya...
loved it
do continue soon
thnxx for pm

thnxxx yaa anki.... yup i will continue asap... 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

awsomeeeeeeeee ff dear...

loved it a lottttttt

keep it up...

plzzzzzzz bring sajan together nd nt majan...

i wnt b able 2 c majan together...

nd no kabab me haddi also....

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ridhima1_gunjan
awsomeeeeeeeee ff dear...

loved it a lottttttt

keep it up...

plzzzzzzz bring sajan together nd nt majan...

i wnt b able 2 c majan together...

nd no kabab me haddi also....

hhhaaaaahha.. thnx yaar. kabab main haadi huh... lets see what happens i suppose i am gonna dissapoint u guys a lil.... lolz.. lets see.. will continue asap and sajan meeting in next part...... chill at the end u knw main sajan ko kuch nahi hone dungi....

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: marisol45
fantastic update.
cant wait for sajan meeting.
continue soon😊

thnxx...

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: kajol95
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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

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PART 3

SHERGILL MANSION
Nupur and Shilpa Aunty were in the living room.. they were just chatting ki the door bell rang
N: lagta hai mayank agaya
shilpa aunty smiled at her and she blushed and went to open the door
when she opened the door she saw a guy at it was indeed MAYANK
N: so monkey agaye tum (teasingly)
M: ha jhasi ki rani main agaya... aur agar ab tum mujhe side dogi toh kya main andar ja sakta hoon
nupur opened her mouth in shock
N: ha ha jao na tumahra hi ghar hai.... 10 saal ho gaye par ekdum nahi badle... sadu akdu....
M: theek hai theek hai ab mujhe apni itni tariif sune ki adat nahi hai and he went in.. and then touched shilpa aunty's feet
S: khush rahi beta.. tu
a girl was standing at the door
N: yeh kaun hai(was shocked and was very impatient for the answer)
M: oh main toh bhool hi gaya.. yeh gunjan hia meri dost.. yeh mumbai kis imp kaam se aayi hai... yahan koi rehne ka jagah nahi hai toh maine sicha usse yahan le aao
N: oh. hi gunjan aao na andar aao
Gunjan comes in.. goes and meet shilpa aunty touches her feet
G: namaste aunty
S: hello beta.. toh tum dono ek saath parte the
M: nahi maa. woh hum abhi bas airport pe mile the... aur baat karte karte hum ache dost ban gaye
N: acha mayank.. kitne ache ho gaye tum.. itni jaldi sab ko dost banalete ho...(she was really jealous)
M: kyun tumhare siva mera aur koi dost nahi ho sakta kya
N: nahi..... mera matlab hai mujhse acha dost tumhe kabhi nahi mil sakta...
N: haina( she asked with a doubt)
M: right (said with a smile)
nupur was happy
N: btw. hii gunjan tumse milke acha laga
G: hi nupur mujhe bhi...
S: ummm.. theek hia mayank beta ja kar ready ho joa phir samart bhi ajayega...aur hum sab milkar dinner kar lenge.. aur nupur beta please gunjan ko uska kamra dekha do... woh hamare saath hi rahegi
G: aunty mere yahan rehne se aapko koi problem toh nahi hogi na
M: nahi gunjan.. tu7m meri dost ho maa ko kya problem ho sakti hai...
nupur was just staring at him
n(in her mind): meri toh itni kabhi parwah nahi karta.. pata nahi.. kahi issie gunjan se,, nahi nahi nupur shuubh shubh bol...
N: ha gunjan chalo main tumhe tumhara kamra dekha deti hoon
G: ha chaloo...

after sometime. every1 was down.. nupur was in the kitchen and shilpa aunty was taking rest in her room
MAJAN
G: mayank
M: ha
G: tum samart se kay kahoge
M: i mean main toh yahan unse hi milne aayi hoon.... agar unhe mere baare main pehle pat cghal gaya aur woh meri baat sune bina
M: gunjan tum please chinta mat karo.. main hoon na tumhare saath main tumhe support karunga.... bhaiya jitne strict dekhta hai utne hai nahi.. unka dil bahut acha hiai.. i am sure woh tumhe zarur samjhenge... _he kept her hand on hers)
both smiled at each other just then nupur came out of the kitchen...
saw that and her face was green of jealosy... seeing nupur. mayank moved his hand...
Nupur came and sat with them
G: toh gunjan um yahan mumbai main kaise
M: maine kahan na woh personal kam se aayi hai
N: maine tumse puch kya mayank... main gunjan se bat kar rahi hoon na....tumahre beech main bolne ki aadat kabhi nahi jayegi.. by god...
G: nupur woh main yahan.... ( gunjan didnt understand what to say)
M( he understood gunjan's feeling): tumhe samjh main nahi aata nupur.... maine ek baar kahan na.. woh apne kaam se aayi hai.. kyun bechari ke peeche pari hoon (he shouted)
nupur was in tears.and went from there
G: mayank tumhe nupur par nahi chilana chahiye tha.. usse kitna bura lag hoga
M: ha.. i am sorry
G: sorry tum muhe nahi nupur ko bolo
M: ha main abhi gaya
by the time shilpa aunty also came she was chatting with gunjan
and here
MAYUR
M: nupur i am sorry.. mjhe tum par nahi chilana chaiye tha
N:.......................................
M: i am sorry sachi main... plss gussa ma ho
N: jao na apni gunjan ko manao na mere paas kun a rahe ho
M: woh kya hai na.. jitni achi dost tum meri ho utni achi dost gunjan nahi haina..
N:........
M: sachi.. god promise
N:.........
M: acha toh yahi teri dosti yehi tera pyaar.. beech main agayi gusse ki dewwar ab plss mujhe maaf kar do na mere yaar( full nautanki stlye)
nupur smiled...(her face was not towards him)
N: she turned acha theek hai theek hai.. bahut ho gyai nautanki.. maaf kiya tumhe.
M: sachi...
N: muchi...
M: friends
N:forever (they shake their hands)

after sum time.. phir se sumone rang the door bell
M: bhiyaa hinge main ja kar dekhta hoon
mayanks opens the door
M:bhaiyaa... he hugs.
there was a smile on every1's face
S: so agaye sahab zade...
samrat enters
he sees gunjan... he was just starung at her.. she was imple but even in her simplicity.. he found her the most beautiful person on earth...
shilpa aunty saw that
SH: ahem ahem.. kaha kho gayi samrat
S: kahi nahi mom bas asahi...
SH: oh... (with a grin)
S: ummm... yeh kaun hai?
M: bhaiyaa woh yeh meri dost hai...gunjan.. woh apne kis kam se yahan mumbai aayi hai
S:ohh
M: gunjan yeh mere bhai hai samrat.. samart shergill..
S: hii...
G:helloo..
N: acha ab main chalti hon mujhe der ho raha hai
SH: arrey hamare saath dinner karke jana na..
N: nahi aunty woh
S: ha nups... hamare saath dinner karke jana... waii bhi MAYANK.. itne dini baad aya...
nupur giving him a angry look for emphasing on the word MAYANK
M: ha nupur ruk jao na...
N: theek hai
S: wah.. mayank ne kaha toh ha.. humne kaha toh na.. said in nups ears...
nupur gave hum a killing look and he had a grin on his face
S: gunjan tum bhi yahan dinner kar lo
SH: samrat ..gunjan hamare saath yahi ruk rahi hai.. yahan uska koi relative nahi hai na isleye..
S: oh acha...
gunjan just smiled

everybody sat on the dinning table...
unfortunately or fortunatley gunjan sat beside samrat
and mayur sat together and shilpa aunty between both the couples. like the head of the family...
(its was looking like a perfect family picture 😉 )
everyone was having food.. somtimes they talked in between sometimes there was complete silence... and gunja nand mayank were very frequently sharing glances. since gunajn was nervous she knew that she had to confront sam today only...
after dinner nupur left..
shilpa aunty went to her room..
mayank was leaving.. he inacted and told he was in nearby room listening to sajan's convo.. if any problem would occur... she could call him..

so everybody left and sajan were alone
samrat wanted to talk to gunjan but diodnt understand what to.. so he was about to leave
G: mr shergill
Sam stopped
S: plss call me samrat...
G: ok....... (after a pause)samrat woh...
S: ha boliye...
G: mujhe aapse kuch zaruri baat karni thi..
S: mujhse(he got sought of a shock)
G: ha.. infact main mumbai aapse hi milne aayi hoon
S: main kuch samjha nahi
G: kya aap mr rajesh sharma ko jante hai..
S: woh fraud
G: please aap unhe fraud mat kahiye
S: kyun aur fraud kyun na kahon. us insan ne hamare company ke saath dhoka kiya hai
G:woh actually
S: ek mint.. aap unhe kaise janti hai...
G: main unko beti jaise hoon. un hone ho mujhe pala posa hai..
S: oh toh tum yahan isleye aayi hoon taki tum unki galtiyon ka justifiaction de sakoon.. then i suppose mujhe is baare main baat nahi karna.. main rtum par aur tumhare uncle par ek mint ke liye bhi vishwas nahi kar sakta
sam was abt to leave
G: par woh sab mere wajah se tha(she shouted and was into tears)
S:matlab...
G: unhone jo kiya mere liye kiya mere wajah se kiya taki main khush reh pau...mere parents ke accident ke baad unhone mera khayal rakha (she told him everything.. abt the situation and circumstances)
S: wajah chahe jo bhi ho dhoka dhka hota hai
G: main janti hon par unhe uski saaza mat dijiye dena hai toh mujhe dijeye(she was crying very badly)
S: tumhare kehne ka matlab hai.. kisi aur ki galti ki saaza main tumhe doon
G:nahi meri galti ki saazamujhe dijiye agar main nahi hti toh eoh yeh kaam kabhi nahi karte.... plss.. aap unhe jail main mat bhejiye...aap jo kahenge main uslke liye tayar hoon.. par unhe jial main mat daliye...
S: mujhe in sab ke baare main sochen ka waqt chaiye... hum iske baare mainkal baatein karenge. raat bahut ho chukkih iaaap jaake ane kamre main so jaye....
sam and gun got up..
gunjan became mentally weak.. which affected her physicaly too and she fainted..
sam went to her.. tried to wake up she didnt.. he carried her in his arms and took her to her room... he made her lie on the bed .. made her sleep properly and left...
(and guess what.. ko i tha jisne yeh sab dekha aur suna... any guesses kaun tha...
okay i will not keep u all waiting till the next part.. it was shilpa aunty... she already loved gunjan cahtting with her and all.. she felt she was really a nyc girl and after all this she started respectng her too.. sumthing was going in her mind for gunjan what only she knws...)
thats it for now.. lets see aage kya hota hai.. kya sam gunjan ko saaza dega? aur dega toh kya hogi wpoh saaza? kya chal raha hia shilpa auty ke man main? kya nupur ane pyaar ka izhaar karegi mayank se.? kya maynk karta hai nupur se pyaar ya hogay hia usse kisi aur se pyaar..kya gunjan ke life main aane waala hia tufaan.. kya woh bardasht kar payegi yeh sab?
jaane ke liye tune into the next part...

Edited by pragya_luvsajan - 15 years ago

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charmee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

for previous updt...

sorry for late rply..

awesome updt..

really loved it..

so gunji sam ke ghar pe rahegi..hayeeeeeeeeeeee

actually gr888888 waha wo apni hone waali saas ko bhi impress kar sakti hai..!!!

so waitng for sajan meet...

Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

sorry for late rply..

awesome updt..

really loved it..

so gunji sam ke ghar pe rahegi..hayeeeeeeeeeeee

actually gr888888 waha wo apni hone waali saas ko bhi impress kar sakti hai..!!!

so nxp updt sajan meet...

eagerly waiting..

plz do cont soon..

thanx for d pm..

THNXX YAAR .wwell i ahve update the next part.. thnx a ton.. and ya i have givenm a saja nscene i hope u love it....

Edited by pragya_luvsajan - 15 years ago