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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
HIII SHREYAAA..
GREAT UPDT..
REAALLY GOOD MAYUR MEETING
THEY WERE TALKING NICELY
LIKE GOOD FRIENDS
DONT WANT MAYU-SHEENA 2GETHER
HOPE WILL ALL GOOD IN NEXT PART
HOPE MAYANK AGREES
CONTINUE WHEN U CAN
SEE YAA
LOVE UUUU
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
lovely start dear.waiting 4 the next part.nice concept!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Hi, friends.. Here is the update. Any ways, many of you misunderstood that Nupur told Mayank to reject her. It is not like that. Nupur just told him that if he was going to reject then do that on the same day, because as days pass, her mama-mami hope for positive answer and when NO is there, they become all panicky and upset. Hope you understood the situation. Ok, now I am posting update without further blabbering...






At Night::


Mayank's home:


Mayank told Gunjan that he didn't like Nupur. So Gunjan informed everyone else about his decision... Then Shilpa Sharma called at Bhushan mansion.


At Bhushan Mansion...


As the phone rings..


Mrs. Ratna Bushan went and picked up the phone.


Ratna: Hello..


Shilpa: Ji. Mrs. Bhushan?


Ratna: Ji. Bol rahi hu.


Shilpa: Vo me Mrs. Sharma baat kar rahi hu.


Ratna: Ji boliye, boliye..


Shilpa: Ji vo mene ye kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ki... hame is rishte se inkar he.


Ratna: Kya?


Shilpa: h, I am sorry.


Ratna: Magar, Mrs. Sharma, esi kya baat ho gayi? Yaha to aap log esse baat kar rahe the jese rishta pakka hi ho.


Shilpa: Hamare bete ko Nupur pasand nahi he.


Ratna: (Angrily): To phir aap ka beta hamari beti ka hath kyu pakd raha tha tab?


Shilpa cuts the phone...


Ratna is angry like anything.. "Ajeeb log he.. Aur unka beta.. pata nahi kis tarah ka ladka he vo?"


Nupur was standing in the lobby upstairs, and she listened to everything. Her dadi came to console her. But she had no problem by this 'NO' as she already knew that. But her mama, mami, Adhiraj and Diya were angry with whole Sharma family.

They discussed till late night about this issue and next morning, Adhiraj went to Samrat to tell this all this.


Adhiraj: Tum log esa kese kar sakte ho?


Samrat: Ab ye faisla Mayank ka e ki vo ye shadi ke liye taiyar he ya nahi. Us me ham kya kare?


Adhiraj became even more angry.. ":Agar mera bas chale to tumhgare business ki to me.."


Samrat replied.."Jo karna chaho kar lo, magar pehle ye hamari industries ki jameen se bahar jao. Get lost.


Adhiraj left angrily from there and told everything that happened to his dad.


Here, in Temple


Gunjan and Shilpa met Ratna and Diya.


Ratna started.."Kese sanskar he aap ke bete ke?"


Shilpa cooly replied, "Agar aap ki beti ko sanskar ki itni hi smaj hoti to voo divorce le ke aap ke ghar pe nahi bethi hoti..."


Ratna: Kese log he aap, mandir me khade he aur esi ghatiya batein kar rahe he?


Diya: To aap ke bete ne Nupur ka hath kyu pakda tha?


Gunjan: Jaroor koi baat hogi, varna Mayank esa kabhi nahi karta.


Ratna: Baat he, aap ke bete ki niyat ji kharab he.


As Mayank's dad knew all this, he called Nupur's mama.


Mayank's dad: Mr. Shashi Bhushan.. Aap ke bete aur biwi ko kahiye ki galiya dena bandh kare, varna ham bhi chup nahi rahege.


Shashi Bhushan: Hum log vo hi keh rahe he jo sach he.


The fight continued in this way between both families... But strange na.. the two persons for whom everyone was fighting were not even speaking a single word.. 😆 😆


After 1 week of this:


Nupur was sitting in her room and just going through a magazine, while Diya came there. "Hey, Nupur chalo na, ham shopping karne chalte he."


Nupur was ready with this.. "Ha, sure, chalo di.. Chalte he.. Magar aate waqt mujhe classes ke liye University jana he, to aap ko akele vapis ana hoga"


Diya: Koi baat nahi. Chal.


They went to the mall and were looking at the different accessories and clothes.


Diya: Nupur, me jara udhar perfumes dekh ke ati hu.


Nupur was looking skirts and tops. "Ok, di.."


Just then someone bumped in her.


Person turned, "Oh.. sorry.. Umm.. Nupur. Right?"


Nupur smiled.. "Yes. Mayank Sharma, he na?"


Mayank complimenetd, "Sharp and intelligent"


Nupur: Thanks.


Mayank: Listen, tum ne kaha ghar jate hi mana kar dena aur mene kar diya. Aur uski vajah se hamare ghar me itni problems hui he. Mafiyas ki tarah lad rahe he vo log..."


Nupur: I know.


Mayank: Magar tumhe to koi problem nahi he na?


Nupur: Nahi to, mujhe kya hoga?

Mayank: Good.


Nupur smiled.


Mayank: So, tum phir koi aur ladko se mili?


Nupur looked around, "Listen, hum yaha baat nahi kar sakte."


Mayank got frightened, "Kyu? Mafiya he yaha par?"


Nupur laughed, "Mafiya? h.."


Mayank turned around, "Ok, bye.."


Nupur stopped him, "Listen, tumhari girlfriend.. Kya naam tha?"


Mayank: Sheena


Nupur: Hmm.. Ghar valo ko bataya us ke bare me?


Mayank laughed.. "Ghar valo ko?? Mene ab tak Sheena ko bhi nahi bataya."


Nupur: What?


Mayank: Matlab ye to pata he ki vo mujhe pasand karti he, magar ye thodi na pata he ki mujh se shadi karegi ya nahi?


Nupur: Kya tumhe 3 saal me ye pata nahi chala?


Mayank: Nahi chala.


Nupur laughed, "Dhakkan ho tum to.."


Mayank: Kyu?


Nupur: Us ne kabhi kaha nahi tumhe?


Mayank: "Kya? I love you Vo to har koi har kisi se kehta rehta he." He said in mocking voice, "Tumne mujhe kitni achhi gift di.. I love you., Thanks for the help, I love you.., us me kya he, mene bhi kai logo se kaha he, I love you"


Nupur: Mayank, 3 minute ladki se baat karne se ye pata chal jata he ki us ke dil me kya he?


Mayank: Wow yaar. Tum to kafi smart ho?


Nupur: Haan.


Mayank: T tum 1 kaam karo, abhi me Sheena se milne jaa raha hu. Tum mere sath aao, use mil lo, aur phir mujhe batao, thik he?


Nupur: Ok.


Just then Mayank got a glimpse of Diya and hid behind a stand full of clothes. Nupur pretended to check some jewelleries on nearest rack. As Diya passed, Mayank went to Nupur..."Listen, kya tum sach me chalogi mere sath?"


Nupur thought for a minute.. "Magar tum mujhe baad me university drop kar doge?


Mayank: University? Oh, h, thik he, kar duga.


Nupur: Ok, to me Di ko bol ke ati hu. Pichhle gate pe stairs ke pas milti hu.


Mayank: Ok, See ya


After 10 minutes, Nupur was standing where she called Mayank and was waiting, while Mayank came, his face hid behind the news paper... and he was speaking aloud.."Ek taza khabar.. Mumbai ke do naami parivaro me jang chhidi... Ladki ke ghar valo ne ladke ko marne ki dhamki di he, magar ladki bahot hi bahadur he,... Aur vo chhip chhip kar usi ladke se milne jati he... Dhen ten en.." He showed his face and they went together to the restaurant where Sheena as waiting for Mayank.






What will be Sheena's reaction on meeting Nupur?


Aur kaha le jayegi life in tino ko..


Ek esse safar pe jaha bahot kuchh hone wala he, jo socha na tha...


So Keep reading..




Ok, now, I am waiting for your response... So comment. Criticize and give suggestions.


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Love,

$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
AWESOME
FANTASTIC THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
HUMMMMM GR8 PART
WOW I AM SECOND TO COMMENT
COOOOOOOOOOOLLLLL
Edited by SHINKI - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
lovely update!!!
waiting 4 ur next update....continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
I keep saying I love to read this cos i love the dialogues of the movie :)
so cheers yaar :) gr8 work..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
baap re!yahan dono parivaaron ke beech mahayudh chal raha hai aur idhar yeh dono chupchupke mil rahe hai....shayad kaafi gehri dosti hogi inke beech! 😉
thanx 4 PM shreyu!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
hey awesome update, i so don't want so many people between MN but i guess true love gets tested when our loved ones meets others but still comes back to us and loves us hai na? Great work, do update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
update is fantastic par sheena mujhe hajam nahi ho rahi hai 😭

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