Dancing in the Moonlight:Shahid-Amrita ff - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Oh he is back woow great part pl conti soon . thank you of rpm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Dancing in the Moonlight Part 16


The patient is Koel. The Doctor is surprised to see Pallavi.
DR:What a wonder.Ypu both are twin sisters?
P:Yes.
Dr:Nice thing that you came here.I saw your sister on the roadside.She was not normal.So i took her here.
P:Thankyou so much Doctor.My sister Koel was missing for a long time.
Dr:Was she abnormal?
P:No.But she was depressed due to certain problems.
Dr:How did you know that Koel is here?
P:Somehow i got to know that.We were searching for her.
Dr:Your name?
P:I'm Pallavi.How is Koel's condition Doctor?
Dr:I think your presense will make her normal.She will be ok if her dearest people are with her.
She thinks about Giri:But Giri is out of control,its better to inform Raghavji. She calls up Raghav and tells everything. Raghav is shocked.He calls up Giri.
Amar:What's the matter Giri?
G:Come,we have to go to a place.
Amar,Giri and Raghav go there.They see Pallavi.Pallavi never expected Amar there. A:I'm sorry Pallavi.
P:Its ok Amar.We have to bring both Giri and Koel ot a normal life.
R:Giri has become normal Pallavi.
She is surprised.
G:Sorry for all the troubles Pallavi.
She smiles:I don't think your dad has told everything to you.Otherwise you would have rushed into that room.
Giri does'nt understand anything.
P:Go to that room,there is a surprise.
Everyone goes there.All are surprised to see Koel there.
G:Koel!
He goes near her.
G:Why are you silent Koel?
P:I'm sorry to tell you that Koel is not in our control.
G:What do you mean?
P:She can't recoginise anyone.
Giri is shocked.
P:Don't worry Giri.With your presense you can bring her back to a normal life.
Giri cries.
G:Koel,look at my face.Can't you recoginse your Giri? See.. i came here to see you,you don't want to see me? Please speak Koel.I can't bear this.I will go mad. If you don't speak 2 me,i will think that you don't love me.So please Koel...
Giri screams..He goes beyond the control.Koel's eyes become wet.Her tears falls on Giri's hand.Giri looks at Koel.
The Doctor comes.
P:Doctor,this is Giri..Koel's husband.Koel is crying...
The doctor is surprised:This is a good symptom.This shows that Koel is conscious. Everyone smiles. Koel's lips start moving.Everyone is anxious.
Koel:Giri!
Everyone is surprised.
G:Koel!
Dr:Its really a pleasant surprise.I never thought that Koel will be normal this fast.Giri had great influence over Koel.That shows how much she loves Giri.
Koel and Giri smile. Koel is surprised to see Pallavi who looks like her.
G:Are you shocked? This is Pallavi.She helped us a lot to reach you.
Koel smiles. Koel goes to Pallavi:Thanks a lot Pallavi.Now i feel that i have one more person in my life,a sweet sister.
Pallavi and Koel smile at each other.
Koel gets discharged from the hospital.
P:Nakul tried to destroy your lovely life.So Giri and Koel..you have to inform the police.
Koel is tensed.
P:You don't have to get tensed.This is to protect yourself...for your love.
They complain against Nakul to the police station with Pallavi and Amar.
Giri,bid good bye to Amar and Pallavi.
Amar and Pallavi walk together.Nakul sees it with his wicked eyes:Koel who claimed that she is only Giri's is with another man now?Then why did she do this drama to me?She avoided me in the name of Giri and is enjoying with another man now.If she did'nt want Giri,why did'nt she come to me?I won't allow her to do that.I will finish her.
He stands before Amar and Pallavi.Pallavi gets scared.
P:Amar,this is Nakul.
Amar is shocked. Nakul laughs loudly:This is your last moment Koel.I'm going to kill you.
Nakul. takes out the gun.They are nervous. Nakul points the gun at Pallavi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
wowo i am glad pallavi find koel and now she is feeling good i hope they Teach lesson to nakul


Thank you for update dear and pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Dancing in the Moonlight Part 17


A shoot's sound...Pallavi screams.Amar stands i front of her.But they realise that nothing happened to them. They are surprised to see Nakul falling dead.Behind him there is a police who was catching gun.They are relieved.
Amar is going to do another show.Pallavi thinks:Will he call me as his dancing partner?Or like last time he will avoid me?
Amar comes:Pallu,i want you as my dance partner.
She is so happy that she jumps with joy.
They start the practise.Pallavi is not catching up the steps fast.Amar becomes angry:Pallu,be sincere and don't be lazy..
She tries her level best,but she is so tired that she is not able to concentrate .Amar is fed up. Pallavi does a turning round step and faints. Amar is shocked. He takes her in his arms. She gets admitted to the hospital.
Amar is tensed:Pallavi was not well,that's why she could'nt dance well.But i was so rude to her.
The doctor comes:Pallavi poened her eyes now.
Amar is relieved.He runs to her room. Pallavi's eyes are full of tears:Because of me,your rehearsal is not going properly.I'm sorry Amar,i know how important is this for you.But i don't know why,somewhere i was going wrong.
He becomes sad:Sorry Pallu..i only did the mistake.
The doctor comes:Without knowing why Pallavi fainted you rushed into the room?You know how serious you both should be about her present condition.
Amar and Pallavi are tensed.
A:What's Pallu's problem Doctor?Why did she faint?
Dr:She fainted during the dance rehearsal.Right?
A:Yes.
Dr:She has to stop doing it.
P:Why doctor?My condition is that serious? I cannot dance again?
Her eyes get filled up with tears.
P:Anyway i will dance.Nothing can stop me from dancing. Amar,don't worry,i will dance for your show's success.
Dr:What rubbish?If you dance in this condition,it will hurt another person also. P:Amar won't be hurt.He will be happy if i do his show.Because he needs me the most.I will never break his dreams.
Dr:It will not hurt Amar,but will hurt another person.
They noth look at him without understanding anything.
Dr:A person person who has to reach this world.
A:What do you mean?
The doctor smiles:Pallavi does'nt have any problem like you think.She is ok.
They become happy.
A:You scared me.
Dr:I was keeping a suspense.Now i'm going to break it.Your wife Pallavi is pregnant. They are surprised. A:Oh,Pallu...i love you.
She smiles.She whispers:Amar,control yourself.Our Doctor is still here.
The doctor smiles:No dance..nothing.Take rest for your sweet baby.
They smile.
The doctor leaves the room. Suddenly Pallavi thinks:Amar dreamt a lot about this show.He wanted me to be there. He even thinks that audience will be completely satisfied only if i'm his partner.Since i'm pregnant,i won't be able to dance.So is he really happy about my pregnancy?Or will he feel it difficult to accept this baby in the future?Will he be angry with the baby?Will he think about an abortion?
She goes mad thinking like this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Iss pallavi mad or lost her mind she is thinking for abortion amar give her tight slap ...awesome part they should welcome their baby ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Dancing in the Moonlight Part 18


Pallavi is getting tensed:Amar,do you love our baby?
A:What question you are asking Pallu?
K:You are ambitious about your career.So since i'm pregnant i can't dance. Do you see this baby as a burden?
A:Pallu!How could you think like this?Yes,i really value my career.But for me,you and our family are more important.I don't care if my career goes down,because of your pregnancy.I'm eagerly waiting for our baby.Do you know...in a few moments i saw a lot of dreams about our child.
She is relieved:Really?
A:Yes,you did'nt understand your Amar till now?
Pallavi is emotional:You are gret.But if i'm needed,then we can approach Koel.People won't know that its not me.
A:What rubbish!Koel won't be you eventhough she resembles you.She cannot replace you.Let her live peacefully with her hubby.
P:So your dance show?
A:If we work hard ,we will win.If not... i will think that it's my fate.
She smiles.

Pallavi is given a grand welcome by Amar's family.They make Amar and Pallavi sit together.Everyone including Amar feeds her sweets.She is really enjoying her pregnancy period.
Megha comes.She hugs Pallavi:Congrats Pallu.I came back again to congrat you and also to replace you.
Pallavi stares at her.
K:Don't worry,i'm going to be Amar's dance partner.No one can replace you in Amar's heart.
Pallavi smiles.
Pallavi tensed about the show.He is not seen in the midnight also.Pallavi gets tensed again.
P:Last time also he came late...when he tasted failure.God...i hope it does'nt repeat this time.
Then comes Amar with a lot of joy.
A:The show was successful Pallu.
She is relieved.
A:I have brought lots of sweets to celebrate the success.Your favourite chocolates and icecreams are also there.
Pallavi smiles.Amar shares happiness with Pallavi.

The End
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
👏Awesome , Mind Blowing So sweet ending thank you do much for this FF..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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