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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
part 9

I love chocolates,,,,so sweet part i love it ...

part 10...

necklace scene so sweet and nice both are made for each other..thank you for pm. i love to read more dear awesome Ff

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dancing in the Moonlight Part 11


Amar takes chocolates from his bag for Pallavi:Eat your favourite chocolate.
Pallavi becomes very happy.
They practise nicely for the show.Pallavi tells Amar:Before the show,we will go to the temple.Goddess' blessings are needed.Then it will be a good twist in our life. He smiles.
They go to the temple.
They get ready for the show.Both of them dance together.The viewers are excited.They claps their hands during each item.They really enjoyed.
The People tell:Amar and Pallavi rock!
They become happy about the success of the show.The viewers carry Amar and Pallavi everywhere.
They get more offers to do shows.
A:People avoided me,no one trusted me.So i had to sponser.But we got profit.Now the people who avoided me are begging me to do their shows.Its because of you Pallu.If you were not there with me,it would not have become a huge hit.Now people need you too with me.They liked our pair very much.
She smiles.
The Grandmother comes:Get ready for Navrathri.
P:Ya...we will make it great grandmom.
A:Yes,we will do dandiya dance nicely.
Amar and Pallavi go for shopping to buy nice dresses for the dandiya party.They search a lot ,but they don't get satisfied. They are irritated when they come back. The grandmother smiles:Did you get dresses according to your tastes?
Both become dull.
A:No grandmom.
G:Before going for shopping and wasting your time,you both could have used common sense. They can't understand.
D:You both could have asked me to stitch dresses for you both.
They both smile.
dadi:Don't feel funny.I'm serious.
She takes them to her room and takes the dresses she made for them. They are surprised.
P:Pretty and perfect. A beautiful white shervani for Amar and an orange salwar kameez for Pallavi.
A:Its so pretty.
P:Amar,why did'nt you tell me that our grandmom is a great artist.
The grandmother smiles.
P:You are so sweet grandmom.
She hugs her.
P:Grandmom,what are going to wear on Navrathri?
G:Its a suspense.
Amar and Pallavi are wondered.
Navrathri....
Amar and Pallavi are really rocking.Everyone tells them:You two are made for each other.
They become really happy.
A:The people who disliked our pair at the time of our marriage had to admit that we are the most wonderful pair.Thats our magical power.
She smiles:Thats true.
Grandmom comes in a superb maroon salwar kameez.
Amr and Pallavi want to give her a compliment.But before that they are called for pooja.Pallavi gives prasad to Amar.
After the pooja,they both go near the grandmother.
P:Grandmom,you look so young.
G:Really?
A:You are so hot.Will you dance with me?
G:Why not?
She dances with Amar.Everyone laughs. Their grandfather comes.He pretends to be irritated:Enough.Give me a chance to dance with my wife.
He laughs and others also. The grandparents dance together.Amar and Pallavi look at them and enjoy.
A:What a nice pair!
P:You are right.True lovers are like this.They always rock despite of their age. Unexpectedly Amar pulls Pallavi towards him. Pallavi is shocked:Whats this Amar?Leave me alone.
He laughs and leaves her. She becomes sad.
AS:When i catch you,you pretend to be angry with me.Now i left you .but now you are sad that i left you.
P:Who said?
Amar pulls her again.Pallavi does'nt react.
A:Your eyes tell.
They smile and run out.They are alone.Amar holds her arms. Somebody calls them:Amar...Pallavi...
They both go there.
Grandmom:Its time for the dandiya dance.
They all do dandiya. Unexpectedly,a guy comes and announces:We have chosen the best dandhiya dance pair.The best pair is ....
Everyone is anxious.
He:Amar and Pallavi.
They become very happy and receive the prize.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowoowo soo sweet they won so cute ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Dancing in the Moonlight Part 12


Amar and Pallavi go for boating.They enjoy a lot.
A:How is boating?
P:I had a lot of fun.
A:Even i had fun.But for having fun i don't have to go for boating.
P:I no that.For having fun,you can just dance.
A:I don't even have to dance.If you are near me,i will have the biggest fun.
P:You are lying.
ANo,i'm telling the truth.
She smiles.
A:I will not know the time passing when i look at your eyes.
He looks at her eyes.
A:What is inside your eyes?
P:Nothing.
A:I can see the ocean of love in your eyes.
She laughs.
A:The waves of that romantic ocean is covering me.So i'm becoming romantic.
He is going closer and closer to Pallavi. Somebody comes and hits him.
He:How dare you?
Amar and Pallavi are stunned. He shouts:How could you misbehave with Koel?
A:Koel? She is not Koel.She is Pallavi;my wife.
G:Your wife?How did she become your wife?You are finding out reasons to get Koel.It will not happen.When i'm alive you cannot do anything to Koel.
P:Stop it.
One oldman comes there:Giri,what are you doing here.
He is shocked to see Pallavi.
P:I'm Pallavi.This is my husband Amar.This man is talking rubbish and even beat him. G:Koel!
The old man:I apologize for my son Giri.
He takes him away forcefully.
G:Dad,how can i leave Koel alone with that beast?
Dad:Thats not Koel son.
A:Strange.
Amar and Pallavi are in the room.She puts plaster on the wounds of Amar.He looks at her deeply:You look nice.
P:You just had a narrow escape from a danger.But you have wounds on your body.Then also you are thinking only about romance.
A:When you are with me,i don't care about wounds.
P:Oh Amar..you are never serious.
He smiles.
Giri's dad thinks about Pallavi:Strange!
He sees Giri hugging a photo and crying:Koel,i'm sorry.i could not save you.
His dad becomes sad.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome part , i love the way they both share their feelings so sweet .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dancing in the Moonlight Part 13


Amar and Pallavi go out.She sees Giri following them.She gets tensed. P:Aman,we will go back.
A:Why?Whats the matter?
Giri's dad appears before them:Do you guys remember me?
P:You are ..his dad?
He:I'm Giri's dad Raghav.
P:You are such a nice person.How did your son become like this?
R:Giri is not wrong.
P:After happening this also you are telling that...?
R:Please come to our house.I will tell you everything.
Aman and Pallavi follow them to his house. Raghav takes a big album and shows it to them.It was full of the wedding photoes of Giri and Pallavi.
Aman ae Pallavi are shocked.Aman stares at Pallavi.
P:Please believe me.Its not me.They are fooling you.Both the son and the father are big frauds.
R:I did'nt tell that its you.Its Koel,Giri's beloved wife.They had love marriage.Giri loved her like anything.
P:Koel?
R:Yes,she looks like you.
A:What happened to her?
R:Nakul was Giri's most trustworthy cousin.He is the reason behind everything. Raghav's eyes burnt with his anger for Nakul.he tells them about their past.

Koel is working in the kitchen.Sudddenly Nakul touches her from back. Koel smiles:Giri....i have to cook.I'm busy.
N:If you are willing will catch you forever.
She turns back.She is shocked to see Nakul.She gets tensed and moves away from him:Whats this Nakul?
Nakul goes closer to Koel:I love you Koel.
K:What rubbish!I'm Giri's wife.
Nakul laughs:Thats not a problem for me.
K:You want me to desert Giri and to come with u?
N:I'm not that traditional to think of a marriage.I want only a liv in relation. Koel feels wierd.
N:You live with Giri and me.Thats what i wanted.Let us not hurt Giri.
Koel loses her control and slaps him:I'm only Giri's .i hate you.I love Giri more than myself.
When she goes out of the room,he catches her hand forcefully.
K:Leave my hand Nakul.
N:No,i won't leave you.I want you.
Koel's tears come out of her eyes.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow what a part great going i love it ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Dancing in the Moonlight Part 14



Koel shouts at Nakul.Nakul laughs.Unexpectedly Raghav comes there.He is shocked at the sight. Koel cries:Daddy...
Raghav's eyes become red with anger.Nakul leaves her hand.Raghav shouts at Nakul:Get lost.
Nakul goes.Koel cries.
Raghav consoles her:Nothing happened no,so be relieved.He won't desturb you again. K:If you had'nt come...he would have....
R:Please don't tell Giri about it.He may lose his control.He trusts Nakul that much.But if he comes to know what he tried to do with you...can't imagine the situation.
Nakul keeps desturbing Koel,luckily she escapes from him.
Nakul calls up Raghav:Don't be happy that i failed.If Koel is not mine,she is not Giri's also.I have planned an accident.Koel is travelling by car.Something is wrong with its brake now.Because i worked on it.It will lead to a heavy accident which will cause her death.
Raghav is shocked. Giri comes:Whats the matter dad?
Raghav cries:Please forgive me son.I did a mistake by hiding a big secret from you. He explains everything.Giri is shocked.He screams:Koelllllll1!!!!
He goes running to save Koel.But the car goes rolling down the mountain.
Giri goes crazy.
Amar and Pallavi become sad.
P:Why did this happen to a happy couple?
A:Nakul?
R:That rascal escaped.I don't know where he is now.Otherwise i would have killed him.
Amar and Pallavi go back.She is losing her peace of mind thinking about Giri's sad story.
A:What are you thinking about?
P:I was thinking about Giri.How sad!
A:Why should we spoil our peace by thinking about a stranger?
P:Now i don't think Giri and his family are strangers.
A:Anyways,don't spoil this lovely day with horrible thoughts darling.
She smiles.
Diwali.... Amar,Pallavi and others use fire crackers.Amar takes her to a room .
P:While others are celebrating outside,sitting here alone is awkward Amar.
A:Its ok..
he takes diwali sweets from the fridge:This i bought for you.
P:Really?I love diwali sweets.
They both feed each other with sweets.
Amar,Pallavi and others dance.
The next day,when the calling bell rings,Pallavi is very happy:Maybe Amar.
She opens the door.She is shocked to see Giri there. He enters the room. G:Koel..
P:I'm not Koel,i'm Pallavi.
G:I know that you are angry with me,because i could'nt save you from Nakul.But please don't give me such a big punishment.
Giri holds her arms. Amar enters the house at that time.He is shocked to see the sight.
P:Amar...
A:Enough!When you had sympathy towards Giri,i did'nt expect this much.I really doubt whether you are Koel?
P:What?
A:You changed your name to escape and came to me.
P:What nonsense.I'm your Pallu.
She weeps.
A:If you were Pallu you would not have gone to Giri.There is no person called Pallavi.Koel entered my life as Pallavi.
P:No.Believe me Amar.
A:No.
He goes to his room and closes the door.Pallavi cries.
G:What is he talking Koel?
pallavi cries:Because of you i lost my peace of mind.
He becomes upset:I'm sorry.I know that i gave you pain.I could not save you from Nakul.But anyway you are back.I'm so happy..Come to our house Koel.
she gets fed up. Raghav comes:Sorry Pallavi.He came here without my knowledge.
He forcefully takes him away .He is screaming:Dad...Koel is alone.She is in danger.I want to save her.
Pallavi is upset.
Amar does'nt speak to her at all.She is really worried. She cries. She comes to know that Amar's team is going to take part in a dance competion. She hopes that she will be his dancing partner. But Amar does'nt talk to her about that. She hears Amar talking to someone on the phone:I asked Megha to come to India for this competition.Immediately she agreed.Afterall she is my best pal who underatands me the most.
He stares at Pallavi.She sheds tears:Amar avoided me.
2 days later Amar comes to his house with Megha. Megha and Pallavi smile at each other. Megha began to move towards Pallavi:Hi Pallu.
But Amar pulls her back. He puts his hands around her shoulders.
He:This is not Pallu,this is Koel who is the wife of a rich mad person named Giri.She cheated me as Pallavi with her artificial love.Her true love is only Giri.I think she is scared of that mad guy.That's why she is still staying here.
Pallavi loses her control and cries.She goes to her bed and continues crying.

Amar goes for the dance competition.Pallavi sits waiting for him to come after the competition. Pallavi sees Megha carrying the drunk Amar from the car. Pallavi weeps:What happened Amar?
She begins to touch him.
A:Don't touch me.You are my bad luck.That's why i failed for the first time.
She cries.Megha keeps him on his bed. She goes near Pallavi.Pallavi stares at her. M:Don't be angry with me Pallu.Amar pretends to be closer to me to make you jealous.You are the person who is in his heart.Bye.I'm going back.
Pallavi catches her hand:Megha!
M:You called me to apologize,right?No need of that.
Megha hugs her.
M:Amar will understand the truth.Don't worry.

Pallavi goes to temple.When comes out of the temple,someone catches her hand.She stares at him.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
awesome part kaun hai amar i am sure pl update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30

Dancing in the Moonlight Part 15


Pallavi:Who are you? Leave my hand.
He:You did'nt recoginise me?
P:No,i don't know who you are.
He controls his anger:Ok,fine.I'm Nakul.
She is shocked:Nakul!Why did you come back?You won't give Giri peace of mind.Leave my hand.Let me go.
N:No Koel.
P:I'm not Koel.I'm Pallavi.
N:If you are not Koel, why were shocked seeing me.
P:I was not shocked at seeing you.But i was shocked to know that you are Nakul.Because though i have not seen you,i'have heard about you.
N:You are learning to lie.But you can't escape from me.
Nakul kidnaps her.
Raghav tells Giri:Giri,thats not Koel,That is Pallavi.Because of you,their family life is getting destroyed.
Giri's eyes is filled with tears:Thats not my Koel..then Koel..?
R:You know that she is dead.
G:Koel is dead?No..
R:Yes,she is dead.
He cries loudly calling out 'Koel' and hugging her picture. He falls into sleep dreaming about Koel.
He wakes up.Raghav comes.
G:I decided to talk to Amar,i must make him understand that i'm the one who did the mistake.
Raghav becomes happy:Son...after a long time i got my son back.
He hugs him.
Giri goes to see Amar.Amar becomes angry and turns back:Your Koel is not here.She has gone out.
G:She is not my Koel,but your Pallavi.I was not in a normal stage,so i mistook her for Koel.Sorry...but Amar..please don't blame your sweet wife Pallavi.Blame me.Believe me.
Amar looks at him.His eyes are full of tears.
A:Oh God,poor Pallu.I wounded her heart.I wan't to apologize.But where is she?

Pallavi escapes from Nakul's place.She reaches a mental hospital.Everyone stares at her.She gets inside a room.She is shocked to see the patient who is staying there.

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