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Posted: 15 years ago
vry nice ud
My sammy bicharaaaaa
plz dl continue asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonerful part povs were beautiful father son scene where father go caught redhanded via his son and nupur was planning to kill both brother loved it continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesooome....
wonderful........
loved it.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
verry verry niceeee
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do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update dolly
loved it
thanx a ton 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Bas ????????? Ini soti ???????? Nof fair !!!!!!!! But great update dear !!!!!! Loved it esp , " Mood tha ones " hahahahahahahahaha !!!!!! I laughed my head off on that dear !!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Finally read it. But ye thoda chota nahin tha. Actually I have a habit of reading ur big uds. It's as usual superb. The starting is hilarious. The kid was too much. Ab mom dad me fight laga di na. Last part is serious. Hop sammy soon gets well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyy dolly
really nice update
loved mayur n sam
so continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
heya guys
extremlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sorry for being soo late
par exams projects and everything ughhhh
just soo simply sorry guys
but here is an update
will try to regulate myself in updateing but cant promise
since have ongoing exams
n now a days my college is the most pathetic thing in the whole dang worlf ughhh
kher enough of my cribbing
guys i made a new banner for this sweeeeeet ff of mine hee hee
my three s's
this banner n update is as usual for u three
lovvv u guuys immenslyy
n this banner was also a sigg i made so many of u have already seen it hee hee😆
N NOW THE UPDATE GUYS
>>>>

Part10>>>

Scene 1(flashback , by nupur)

N="oh no mayank , he Is hurt badly"

He was indeed .. a faint trickle of the red fluid ran down his cheek..

This was not god so not good…

Without wasting any time I used my kerchief n placed it on his forehead after removing his head band

What we saw beneath the head band was enough to make me n mayank speechless

A long gash ran just above samrat's left temple.

Its edges looked jagged n raw..

I quickly placed my kerchief over it n averted my eyes from that ghastly injury..

I looked at mayank n what I saw stunned me further into silence…

The way he was holding samrat, with extra tenderness,

Emotions that played across his features

Ranging from shock to pain to fear to guilt, made me worried about him ..

I wanted to stand close to him n make his pain end right there, I even moved closer to him a little bit..

But then I realised that at this moment samrat was the one needing our help..

God wasn't I just being pathetic???

What the hell was happening to me??

M= samrat.. samrat aankhen khol..

Nupur ise kya ho gaya hai??

Yeh sab

Yeh sab kab hua??

Mayank was literally freaking out, so much like me..

But I should control my self

As a matter of fact ,there should be at least one among us who should take care of this situation???

The most important thing right now was to take samrat inside n call medical aid.

N= "mayank its fine.

Listen to me , hold him mm going to break that damm lock on the door ..

N yahan koi security guards nahi hain kya????

Had hai

Kher hold him .."

N saying so I left the arm of samrat I was holding to support his weight.

N wend ahead, picking up a large pavement rock from the garden

I approached the door n banged he stone over the lock with all the force I had

It broke

Phew one problem solved atleast

One tiny winy problem…

………………………………………………………………………………………….

Scene 2>>

(flashback, at the same time mayur took sam inside the house, we see a hospital n a boy pacing here n there in the waiting room)

(by narrator)>>>

The day been a wreck for ranvijay..

It had started with that ominous call from his dad, telling him that he would no longer get any financial aid from his dad's funds as long as he kept any relation with his fiance..

Great… simply great ..

Next on his list of tortures was his boss..

He got almost kicked out of his job..

Why???

Because he got late by say 3 minutes ….

So obviously according to his bald, highly egoistic and tragically ugly boss

He was irresponsible n apparently responsible for all the loss the company had procured..

Wasn't that seriously amazing???

Well whatever ..this forced rv to do some serious shoe licking to his boss in order to save his job…

Then finally he got home around midnight.

(well obviously his kind boss made him overwork for 6 hours)

He received this call from phoenix hospital ….

They had obtained his number from a paiteint of theirs..

Which according to them had turned up at hospital bleeding profusely

And who had apparently blacked out after mentiong his number to the hospital…

At that time ,rv was really angry n piised of at this stranger girl..

He had no idea who she was, or why did she gave his number…

But now that he had reached the hospital, and was standing outside the emergency ward..he realised that the stranger girl was no other then the sister of his fiance..

The injured girl was gunjan bhushan ,a news channel reporter..

Sister of his fiance ms nupur sehgal ,the great novelist….

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SCENE 3>>>

(by mayank)

This was the most terrible one of my life…

No matter what ,, no matter how Many good times come after this.. no matter how much longer I live..

This day would be something I would never forget…

Well these thought came into my mind when samrat finally gained consiousness the next day …

Till that time …

My thoughts were so muddled up by worry

That it was soo difficult to distinguish horror from reality..

At night, nupur finally managed to break the lock..

After that everything went in a fast forward…

I took samrat inside and laid him on my bed..

(well his bed was full of dirty clothes, his old broken guitar strings,pizza boxes, unpaired socks and

Well and under wears .. so I obviously had no option )

Nupur went in the kitchen n brought a tumbler filled with water,

She managed to follow my hazy instructions, to retrieve the first aid box and bring all that stuff to me..

Meanwhile I removed samrat's jacket n got the shock of my life seeing so many scars running the length of both of his arms…

Momentarily I was shocked into silence

But nupur took my shivering hands in hers and kissed me lightly on my head…

N="its ok…everything will be ok… I am with you..lets get through this..

Ur brother needs you and now is nt the time to feel afraid"

Those words…those few magical words made me strong.. a little bit..

But that was enough for me to regain control..

This was not the time to break up and cry my eyes out like I wanted to do so much…

Samrat needed me

My brother needed me ..

N that was enough to make me regain my sanity for a few seconds more…

I soaked some cotton in warm water n washed down all the wounds on his body..

He winced a little when I tried to stench the bleeding on his head…

Meanwhile nupur called in her family doctor,, with his team..

They asked why the patient can't be hospitalised if his condition was so bad…

But nupur managed it..

How she did that, I didn't care….. I didn't even notice..

Both of us understood that samrat couldn't be hospitalized..

Samrat told no one about his condition …

That meant that he wanted it badly that no one comes to know about his accident

I didn't have even the bleakest of idea about the reason ..

But I would wait for samrat to wake up and clarify all…

Till then I would go by his wishes

No matter how much insane they seemed …….

The pain for samrat's wounds, fear for him was numbing..

Now, now I was mostly angry at him for doing all this..

For being in soo much pain that he couldn't even regain his consciousness..

I was angry at him for going through all this..

I was angry at him for making me see this

I was angry at myself for letting my brother down

For not being with him when he needed me most

For not being able to save him…

I was soo angry that my eyes were wet as I cleaned my brother's wound…

N="mayank"

I stopped in my desperate attempt to stench the bleeding from his head wound.

Still keeping the wet cotton over the injury I looked at my side.

Nupur was sitting alongside me..

She too was busy cleaning samrat's wound…

But now seeing my condition she diverted her attention lil bit to my side..

Her eyes were wet tooo….

And the way she looked at me made me realise something else..

She cared for me.. too much

I cared for her too

May be a bit more then too much

The last six months had tied me to her with invisible threads..

My pain was reflected clearly in her eyes…

I should stop being so pathetic

It would hurt her

It is already hurting her …

I averted my eyes from her gaze..

Her penetrating gaze…

N spoke=

M="I am fine nupur, just waiting for him to get fine too"

I wasn't fine not at all.. but I tried my best to hold my self together

It wont help her if I scrambled into pieces in front of her…

N= "mayank pls… I …I"

Her voice broke n she couldn't complete her sentence ,

I looked towards her once again..

She bit her lip ,obviously trying her best not to cry..

She kept her hand on my shoulder, trying her bet yet again to strengthen me..

Once again making me hyper awars about the bond in between us..

I don't know what changed in that one second …

But suddenly I could no longer lock my emotions inside of me

I broke

N hugged her

Tightly

As tightly as I could..

Had no idea what would I have done without her..

Samrat had been my life since I could not remember how long..

N now seeing him in this condition had shaken me up completely..

I could take it on no longer

Terrible , unbearable and heart wrenching that was, what this incident was for me..

And nupur seemed to be the only person alive who could actually see and relief me from my pain ..

I hugged her more tightly still.

She hugged me back too. Her hand caressing my hair n the other one holding me tightly from my back

That second changed me some more

Now apart from samrat their was one more person who was becoming my life at a fast pace..

Hjer name was nupur sehgal..

The strange thing was ,that she was already engaged

To ranvijay rathore

Smallest Son of a leading industrialist….

Life is full of complications….isn't this what they say???

……………………………………………………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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seriously dolly i loved it

and even more i loved the banner

its aweeeeeeesome
trust me i am loving it
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