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Posted: 15 years ago
kab kar rahe ho update waiting for it cont. soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dolly loved your ff!!
gosh you are amazingggggggg yaar!!
i ,oved every bit of this ff!!
totally rockinggg updates
and i really like the dorks and their morons
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i am loving thiss ff of urs
all the parts are amazing
awsome
plese cont soon
and pm when u do
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally finally guys i am posting the next update of this
and promise aaj k baad is ff ki and sayank drunk and when dreams cume true
in teeno ff's ki aapko regular updates milengi
because i need to finish them in two weeks
pls read and doooo comment
hope u guys will like it
and finally with next update the mystery of the accident will be cumpletely solved

part 5>>>

(by samrat)

Finally we were out 'finally

And I was still alive .. still conscious

We were walking slowly to mayank's jeep..

Or to be more precise I was moving slowly and mayank was just trying to keep up with me.

I could feel , mayank's stares at me from time to time

Mayank knew me only too well.

I knew that he knew that I was angry

I knew that he knew that I was exhausted

I knew that he knew that I was basically feeling like complete bs.

I looked sideways , caught him looking at me and then I glared back at him..

Terrified he started looking straight ahead of us..

How dare he. He had this girl in his life .. what was her name??

Noor nahin I think its was numur

Pata nahin kya naam tha uska ??

Jo bhi tha

Mayank ki zindagi mein vo ladki pata nahi kab se thi

N mujhe uske twin ko pata bhi nahin???

And the way she was talking to me

The samrat shergill- mayank ka official twin

How dare she ??

Dusron pe mein kya gussa karun?? Jab mere khud k bhai ne hi mujhe is kabil nahin samjha k vo mujhe uske bare mein bata sake ???

How dare he???

Did I ever till date hide even a single thing from him??

Then why did he????

I froze..

I did hide something from him

I hid something from him for twenty long years

Something that till yesterday I had already forgotten

So wasn't I more wrong then him

He just hid nupur from me for a few months??

Nupur yup now I remember that was her name..

Mayank stopped a few paces ahead of me , when he finally noticed that I had turned statue and wasn't moving any longer,,

Guilt held me captive there'

M= kya hua samrat?? Tum ruk kyu gaye??

M== samrat!!! Kya hua ?? tum mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho

He was standing in front of me holding from my shoulders..

S= mayank , vo nupur ka phone aaya tha , she needed to talk to you

{by mayank}

I looked at him completely stunned, hardly knowing how to react..

That meant he knew abt nupur.. but how??

Oh so that was the reason for him being so angry??

But then why did suddenly he looked so so guilty??

For what

As far as I knew, if he knows abt nupur, he knew that I knew her for abt few months..

And that must have made him hell angry with me..

But then why so suddenly he looked so guilty so afraid for what???

M= samrat kya hua tum aise kyun'..

But my sentence was cut short by a cell ring,, actually by my cell ringing in one of his pockets..

Scene 2>

{by nupur}

Ok I don't know why but I was worried for that akdu .. I mean I seriously have no idea who had picked up mayank's phone , but then when the boy said he was mayank's twin,I was frozen in shock'.

I seriously had not expected him to be online

And the way I was getting possessive about mayank over phone was just plain weird

Patanahi samrat kya soch raha hoga, kahin usne mayank ka murder to nahi kardiya??

Nahin nupur shubh shubh bol'

Aur mein bhi yahan is airport par fasi hun , benji , uday bhaiya n dia, kisi ka mobile nahin lag raha .. mayank is my only hope..

Use dubara call karun kya??

Aur koi chara bhi to nahin hai ,vaise bhi ab tak to samrat ne mayank se mere bare mein questioning kar hi li hogi

Mujhe call kar lena chahiye.. by god in dono bhaiyo k beech mera kachra ho jayega

Cell kahan hai mera??

Yeh raha

Scene 3>>

{by mayank}

Completely confused at samrat's condition and behaviour, I saw him picking up the cell.

He looked at the screen and then looked at me..

M= what???

S=its nupur, I think she needs ur help

Again I was stunned to silence. And then suddenly I realised what he was saying.

Nupur needed my help, was she ok??

I quickly snatched back my phone from him and switched it on

M= hello hello nupur , tum theek ho na..

N= haan mujhe kya hona hai??

M=huh?? Vo samrat keh raha tha k tumhe help ki zarurat hai.

N= haan mayank , actually mein yahan Mumbai mein hun , airport par,, kuch vajha hai jiske karan mein gunjan k ghar jaa nahi sakti and mere baki koi friends phone nahin utha rahe , so if its ok with u can I .. can u cume n pick me up

M=bas !!that is the help u needed from me??

N=haan kyun??

M== kuch nahin .. ok we r cuming to pick u up.

N=we??

M= me and samrat'actually nupur I think I should first drop samrat at our house, he doesn't look well then I'll cum and pick u up.

S=its ok mayank, tell her we both r cmg . I want to meet her too

I sighed.

M=nupur we r cmg don't worry

Scene 4>>=

{in mayank's car outside the airport, by narrator}

M=chal , chalte hain ..

Saying so mayank started to open the door of his side.

S=nahin mayank tum jao. Seriously agar mein andar aaya to it wont be good.

M=tu mujh se abhi bhi naraz hai kya?? Maine tujhe sab bata to diya!!

Nupur nahin chahti thi k mein tujhe ya masi ko uske bare mein kuch bataun .usko lagta tha k agar koi hum dono ki friendship k bare mein jannenge to sab galat samjhenge

S= explain the term "galat samjhenge"

M= matlab unko lagega k mere n nupur k beech mein kuch chal raha hai

Samrat smiled, his brother and this nupur were really nutheads

S= to tum dono ko sach mein lagta hai k tum dono k beeh mein kuch chal nhai raha??

M=matlab??

S=matlab ..apni shakal dekhi thi jab maine kaha tha k nupur problem mein hai??

Koi nursery ka bacha bhi samjh jayega k kuch to hua hai n kuch ho gaya hai..

M=shut up twin

Aisa kuch ni hai

S= seriously u go and bring her . I am too tired to cum , I'll just drop dead if I even moved a little, moreover mujh mein bilkul takat nahin hai ek aur bunch of fans ko sehne ki

M=(worried again)u are not fine r u??

S= no I am not.. yet u go and bring her .then we go home

M=k

Scene 4>>

(inside airport by narrator}

Mayank is running like hell, trying to find nupur, he was really worried abt her.

Was she fine,, patanahin kitni der se vo yahan pe akeli thi, agar kisi n uske saath badtamizi ki to.. to kya nupur saale ka muh tod degi..

Mayank smiled

His nupur was like this only..

His nupur//????

Suddenly samrat's words ringed in his ears.

Kya uske aur nupur k beech mein kuch tha??

Nahi nahi , samrat pagal ho gaya hai..

Which braught him back to samrat

Samrat ko aakhir ho kya gaya hai?

Itna ajeeb kyu behave kar raha hai, and this is the first time k usne concert k baad kapde bhi change nahin kiya..mayank didn't think k he was well .

And he was worried abt him too

Thinking all these things mayank hardly noticed where he was going and banged straight into a girl

And both of them fell..

Well not points for guessing that the girl was nupur'

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res
kamal hai aaj kal main first hi post kar deti hun😆😆
now update:
lovely
par samrat ne mayank se aakhir kya chupaya hai ???
that to 20 years se
bechara ki halat kitni kharab hai
aur mayank shayad realize karde ki usse nupur se...............................
u know naa😉
Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserve oh no simi sush i hate u guys u took my place of first n second😭😭😭😭
dolly this is not fair😭😭😭😭
not fairrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
mummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😆
edited
hmm kahan sa shuru karun hmm
ley me think hmm
ok bahut sxch liya
well lets say it was mindblowing terrific awesome out of world fantastic as usal this words r nothing after reading ur update i mean they cantstill just desribe ur update i meant it was just wow he he heee now im confuse which word will suit ur update hmm i think koiwored abhi bana nahi hain to let ur update define
so it was awesome but i m confuse what the hell samrat was saying i mean that he hided something from mayank about a girl thing im sure but 20 years ago something happen which mayank dont know but what..????????
urrgh....im confuse dam it anyways im sure next update will break my every confusion so i will justsay continue it pretty soon
n keep ur promise of updatation plz
n thanx for the pm
lots of love
ur'sn only ur's
sanu😉
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

reserve oh no simi sush i hate u guys u took my place of first n second😭😭😭😭

dolly this is not fair😭😭😭😭
not fairrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
mummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😆

sim ka maine re kiya hee hee
as usual
and tu bhul kyun jaati hai
mere liye tume teeno humeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssshhan sabse aage hi rahoge luv uuuuu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

sim ka maine re kiya hee hee

as usual
and tu bhul kyun jaati hai
mere liye tume teeno humeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssshhan sabse aage hi rahoge luv uuuuu😳

i know that just thought ki simi aur sush ko staun😉
n is simi ol or did u re her place instead of her
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

i know that just thought ki simi aur sush ko staun😉

n is simi ol or did u re her place instead of her

as usual i took her place
*sisghs*😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

as usual i took her place

*sisghs*😆

i knew that he he heeee🤣
kabhi kabhi sahi guess karna bhi waoooooooo hota hai😆

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