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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Robin_M
hey sookie, another wonderful day :)
very interesting interpretations, i was quite enthralled! i am not a huge poetry reader, but i enjoyed the few versus u included.
poetry is really like a self help book! it can work as therapy and as a motivator!
loved his parting message for her, very sweet! :)
now before i give a "name" to this thursday, i want to know what u were going for?
now on to friday!

Yep, isn't the day grand? All with Autumn poetry and everything? Strange that its spring yet feels like autumn for me. (If you have not realized it by now, I am obsessed over autumn. Don't ask why. Its weird and absolutely unhealthy. 😆)
Poetry being self-help was something I discovered in highschool and exactly the same way how the girl in this story realizes. :-)

Hmm, its "Therapeutic Thursday" what say? Since we are talking about self-help and all? 😆

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scarlett.lady

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

^^ I suppose it would turn to someone you fear being when mocked at ... and if that's yourself - its a twisted question. Cause then the boggart would become you, seeing yourself mocked... right?

Btw, I realized my comment got misplaced in lines and I fixed my original - just so it makes the right sense that I was hoping to!

Edited by scarlett.lady - 15 years ago

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imshveta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

I got that the moment I read it that this poem must be your inspiration for "infinity...."

Nice part. But it seems they have reached two different points in their relationship . One has gone a bit ahead of the other. One is still unclear and uncertain and the other is almost there.

Or is it just a matter of perception. The fears within are holding her back but her curiosity takes the better of her and she opens up.

Thanks for the PM.

Love

Shveta

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: scarlett.lady
^^ I suppose it would turn to someone you fear being when mocked at ... and if that's yourself - its a twisted question. Cause then the boggart would become you, seeing yourself mocked... right?

Btw, I realized my comment got misplaced in lines and I fixed my original - just so it makes the right sense that I was hoping to!

I think I did fill in the blanks correctly. :-) My question is sure twisted but is rational and logical, yes? 😆 There is this line I remember, "I fear my own mind". Its from Criminal Minds series where one of the character muses what differentiates a serial killer and the man who catches serial killer. :-)

What will boggart look like then?

Edited by -Sookie- - 15 years ago

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: imshveta
I got that the moment I read it that this poem must be your inspiration for "infinity...."
Nice part. But it seems they have reached two different points in their relationship . One has gone a bit ahead of the other. One is still unclear and uncertain and the other is almost there.

Or is it just a matter of perception. The fears within are holding her back but her curiosity takes the better of her and she opens up.

Thanks for the PM.

Love

Shveta

Hi Shveta,

Thank you for your comment and reply.

You are right on about the imbalance in the scale. The shift is heavy on the guy's side. If you observe, their individual personality is heavily influencing this scale. While he is a confident business man with a byronic soul, she is little cynical and a tad introvert. So, it would take time for her to reach there. But her curiosity (as you mentioned) and her intelligence is making her ask questions which is invariably making her to open up to him.

Its a give-n-take relationship which both are honoring without laying it out as an obvious rule between them.

you are most welcome for the PM.

Sookie

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krazyboutkaran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

yup...........amazing part once again............:)

luvd it!!

btw hv u completed infinity in the palm of my hands??
nd can u plzzz give me d link......i was inactive for a couple of weeks and i didn't follow d ff....thanks...

urvi

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran
yup...........amazing part once again............:)

luvd it!!

btw hv u completed infinity in the palm of my hands??
nd can u plzzz give me d link......i was inactive for a couple of weeks and i didn't follow d ff....thanks...

urvi

Hello Urvi!

No, I haven't completed it yet. Still two more parts to go! 😊 Will buzz you when I update it next!

Thanks for your comment.

Sookie

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

hey sookie..nice part..the lines in the beginning are really good!

He came to visit her again n this time her employee was also there..n they both just stared at him!..

he had got coffee again..n she wanted to know him this time..he didn't like parties?.gosh, i love them!..

they started talking about poetry..n autumn..it surely is a beautiful season,i feel. The verses were pretty good..

n he left her again, buying a bookmark which he returned, lol but what he wrote in was sweet..she's surely feeling something for him..

will wait 4 d next part

-aish

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Garima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

No wonder, why you are one of the most cherished writers present. It was a complete bliss while I read every word of it. It seriously, is one of the best works I've ever gone through. It was a calm, soothing, satisfying.. (give it whatever synonyms you want..) experience for me. Far away from certain usual ups and downs other 'somethings' posses, there is one though! ;)

I, at first, thought that I would read one chapter in a go... but I don't know what kept me attracted to it all the while... I just can't get it out of my wit, it surely has made its place down there. :)

Besides a comfort level of reading.. your story provides a good plot, two great characters, and good information about some chosen books, which is a pleasure to read.

The verses, you included in part 4, actually touched something deep down there... which so certainly inevitable. ;) You seem to be a combination of both the protagonists here! Lol.. :P

Btw, I just loved the way you're choosing different topics to talk about on different days... its just great! and one thing.. I've not read such stuff in eternities... where they would talk about not so general facts... without even knowing each other's name, yea.. it isn't so necessary at all; just new to me!

Anyways, I just could wait for the next one...
just keep us entertaining! :)

Thanks... sweetie! :D *I hope you don't mind me calling you that!*

Take care!
and add me to the PM list, if you have.. no I'm sure you have it! ;)

P.S: Not gonna edit the one I popped in before, hope you don't mind!

and I just forgot to add.. I'm just intrigued to the lines you include at every start, just so incredible! :)

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

hey Sookie i am sorry i didnt get back after tht first part
but i had some problems

anyways

just finishd reading the three parts

and trust me

again, i am short of words

to be honest, i was again lost in the beauty of the words and their relationship

well, u say u're not a writer, i believe u,

coz sometimes even writers fail to write this beautifully,

well, i wont analyse the parts, coz according to me, it wud be an insult to ur words

but, i admit again that i am mesmerized by ur work

all these 3 parts make me realised wht i had missed in these 3 days

thank u for sending the pms even when i did not comment

i shall look forward for the next part

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