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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: funkybratz
yaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! i am the first one i cant belive it.... 😃 😃 😃

omg that was an awesome update 👏 cant belive that anyone can write soo beautifully and i totally agree no need for romance in it. this ff is the best as you have shown i am falling in love with it again and again every update force me to wait for another one. and yesterday i was up till 4 30 am to see the next part 😳 😳 cant wait to read the thusday one.
love maleeha ❤️

Hello Maleeha,

Thanks for your comment. And many thanks for appreciating my writing.
I am sorry to hear that you had to wait for such a long time. I will be updating around 9 AM IST. I thought someone would have caught on the pattern by now. 😆

Thanks again!
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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey sookie..nice part..

He had visited after a month..n there was complete darkness..so he wasn't sure she was still there..n she was surprised to see him..

its so weird that how such a simple topic got them talking on inner fears..n that too with a person they hardly knew..

she was scared of the dark..lol..n she even liked spy fiction..though she seemed to be losing interest now..n he liked the horror genre..yay..me too!..not exactly books, but i love the movies!

n lol at those b-grade movies..they're seriously all the same..but some horror movies are just classic!..

so she had taken a road trip..n what she discovered wasn't something great..it wasn't supposed to be i guess..

so next topic is poems..huh..am not a great fan of that..i wonder what the good news is!

will wait 4 ur update

-aish

👏 So you have watched enough B-Grade horror movies too? Awesome! Though they are b-grade, few of them have become classics over the years.
Again, excellent update from you :-)

Thanks Aish!
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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: imshveta
Hi Sookie,

Its almos the same genre as "infinity in the palmsof my hands"

But loved the different situation.

If I may say so, i was sad when you dint update the other ff for so long.

But i am happy you have started this one. Yyour style of writing is different. as if the protoganists are sharing their deepest thoughts and true feelingswith each other, something threy have not done with anybody else before.They are growin and maturing together.

please add me to the PM list

Shveta

Hi Shveta,

Fancy seeing you here! Yeah, this series is written along the lines of Infinity. Though it was written almost four to five months earlier than that. This series inspired me to write Infinity. So you will see shades of Infinity in this series but never in detail.

Updating Infinity will take time.

Bang on! They are growing together and maturing together. They make a connection and they find that "this is it for me" at the same moment. Its something I find very beautiful and one thing I would cherish.

Will PM you tomorrow.
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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
such an amazing story soo far.. it was simply brilliant, look forward to tomorrow's part!

Thanks goddess! :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Robin_M
wow sookie! before anything, the comparison of darkness and silence was brilliant! cant tell u how much i enjoyed this whispering wednesday :)
this part really stimulated my brain cells with the deep messages and double meanings!
i feel like their little meetings work as therapy for them (without having to pay a huge bill!) they are like each others therapists and patients!
glad your updating daily :) looking forward to tomorrow!

hahaha sorry sookie cant say im a fan of jap/korean horror flicks! yes the poster is of tere naam...which reminds me that i think its time to change it lol (thats pretty funny how u remembered me after seeing the actual movie poster!)

Hey Robin!

I was going for worrisome wednesday and you (as usual) made it something cool and cute. 😆
I am glad you figured out subtle nuances in this chapter. Even thought the characters are being open with one another, they are drawing a line between familiarity and intimate.
You said it right. Its therapy 😆

Talk to you again tomorrow. For some weird reason, I associate Tere Naam with Robin 😕 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Hi Sookie

Read ch-2 just now...

This is one series which is entirely made up of conversations and yet is never boring. Its what you call being "preachy" but honestly, it brings my brain back to work.

The philosophy behind road trips was really good. I have never been on one really but it does sound interesting. The realization why brunettes are better than blondes was good...:)

The insecurities of leaving home were very nicely described. This is another reason why I like your writings so much- they are so natural.

The fact that the world wont stop operating in absence of one person is definitely true. Lost in our ego, we forget to take out time for ourselves!

Very well written as usual

Good that you are updating daily

Sur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

fabulous part sookie............luv how dis ff distinguishes it frm d rest...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
Hi Sookie
Read ch-2 just now...

This is one series which is entirely made up of conversations and yet is never boring. Its what you call being "preachy" but honestly, it brings my brain back to work.

The philosophy behind road trips was really good. I have never been on one really but it does sound interesting. The realization why brunettes are better than blondes was good...:)

The insecurities of leaving home were very nicely described. This is another reason why I like your writings so much- they are so natural.

The fact that the world wont stop operating in absence of one person is definitely true. Lost in our ego, we forget to take out time for ourselves!

Very well written as usual

Good that you are updating daily

Sur

Hi Sur!

Thanks a lot for your comment. I am glad you find this series not to be boring. Since this has mainly dialogues and less time for anything descriptive, I was wondering how people would take it.
It is something that was told to me by a very dear friend. Not to beat myself much and live under the assumption that if I skip few days of work, the world around me will come crashing down. I always remember those words.
Thanks again for commenting.

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#49

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran
fabulous part sookie............luv how dis ff distinguishes it frm d rest...:)

Hi!

Thank you very much for your comment. :-)
See you tomorrow with new part!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Because its wednesday

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It's Tuesday - 2nd

Not taking a road trip is like your passage to adulthood is incomplete. I am not talking about the romanticized road trips that you see in movies and read in teen novels.

Sure you had to burst the pink bubble, here's my grudge, why? Why not? Why can't it be the romanticized road trip??

But seriously, Sooks, why are the Armaan's the way they are?? I understand the context in which that guy is who he is, but don't you think, a normal person not subjected to such harsh realities everyday dealing with life-death on a daily basis would have a lot more life in him? Just a thought, can't help thinking about this??

So the financial troubles kick in, its a common problem everywhere- and an interesting one at that. It's odd, I was in the midst of a very busy, beautiful european city bustling with life, cafes, and other restaurants all around and yet this American family came up to me, asking me, if I could tell them where McDonald's was! I was like really? You'd think, they'd travelled across the ocean to discover a new culture and taste their cuisine, but I guess not.

"Your bookstore gives me a feeling of home. Its strange how I have not felt this feeling after moving out of my parents' house but in my second visit, I feel I am at home here."

I wonder if it's just the book store or a certain non-blonde :P

Another common between all your characters, almost every protagonist seems to enjoy lonliness, do you think most people are like that? A lot of people cannot be alone for too long. Again, just something random I noticed.

Leaving sheltered life and being in open for the world to see and judge is a brutal experience.

ooOohh, this is so true!! You have to experience it yourself to understand its meaning, nothing like a self realisation. It can be quite a thing to take when that realisation hits you, suddenly you grow more and appreciate everything that your parents did that much more.

Here is a question, what exactly is being normal?

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