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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Hi neetu
Sorry for late reply.
actually i was little bit busy with study.
u know what -Tapoor told me (over ph )
that ,u updated this ff and she also told that it was wonderful part.

now i read this update and found it truly awesome.
hey neetu it was reallly very nice
sweet
cute
mind blowing
i loved it so much
loved mayurs romance and maynks naughtiness.
they r so sweet.
thank u so much for ur lovely update
and also thanx for ue special dedication to me
u r so sweet.
plz do write more.
take care

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
ok.. tell me something... were u blushing while writing... coz it was that romantic..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Hey guys I got an idea after seeing precap (fri) I got an idea. Its an os about reunioun of mayur……………. Guys it is some what big but please bear with me. Do read and comment guys please……..i am waiting for ur comments…………

Romantic treatment

After that Friday's episode girls were setteled in dia's house and boys are staying in sam's house………….

Boy's convo:

B: hey bhagwan hamare khilaf kitna bada saazish…… ye ladkiya bhi na…….

S: ha benji…. Ham sab ko ullu bana diya….ab hum chup nahi baitenge………

M: nahi guys humko aaram se sochna chahiye tha……….ladkiyon ka koi galthi nahi thi …..bas vo log hamare liye kuch zyaada hi possessive the and when they got to know that baby first came to us tho vo log thoda insecure feel kiya aur us detective ko hamare khilaf laga diya…………

S: mayank tum ladkiyon ki taraf bol rahe ho? Achanak tumhe ho kya gaya hai………ha?

M: nahi sam tum hi socho riya ne mere saath aisa kuch nahi kiya phir bhi tum itna possessive ho gaye aur tum gunjan ke saamne kisi aur ladki ko kiss karne jaa rahe the……..tho usne kaisa feel kiya hoga………..aur nupur vo meri patni hai aur kisi ajnabi ladki raath ko mujhe library bhula ke mere aankhe bandh ke mujhe seduce karne ki khoshish kar rahi thi aur main chup chap tha…….pehle se hi nupur mere liye kuch zyaada hi possessive hai aur thoda insecure bhi……..isiliye ye sab hua………..

Every one listened to mayank silently and after a long silence samrat broke……..

S: ha mayank tum sahi bol rahe ho magar hum abhi kya karsakthe hai pura gang hum se naraaz hai aur koi bhi hamse baath nahi kar rahe hai………

M: are bhai agar nahi kar rahe tho hum hai kis liye……….hum karva denge…….

S: magar kaise………

M: samrat this should not be your question ……..ladkiyon ko patana koi tujhse sikhe ……aur tum abhi muhe puch rahe ho……not fair……….ok phir bhi main batatha hu…….i think there is only one way………….romance…………

S: wah dude tum to mujhse bhi aage nikal gaye……….

Girls:

N: ha hum tum logo se bohut aage nikal gaye. Galthi tumhari hai to uski kimat bhi chukani hi padegi…………

All girls: ha…………..

Next morning:

Every body came to the college and there was a cold attitude between the couples.

In classroom mayank entered first and waiting for nupur. When nupur entered she behaved as if she did not even notice him. She went and sat on the other row with some other girl. During the whole class mayank was staring at nupur and this did not went unnoticed by nupur. And soon after the bell rang everyone dispersed as quickly as possible because it was devdhar sir's class and nupur was arranging her things in her bag and mayank was waiting for her to complete and when she finished she started moving towards the door but mayank came infront of nupur and tried to stop nupur but nupur is nupur…….. she wont give up that much easily……she glared at him very angrily to which he silently gave her way to go but to her bad luck and to mayank's good luck she tripped and fell in mayank's strong arms and there was a cute eye lock shared between them. She gained her senses and stood up making mayank also to gain his senses and she did not speak a single word and when she was about to move mayank held her and pinned her against the wall which was just behind the door and with one of his hands he closed the door a little bit so that no one can see them. Now we can see nupur's expressions all scared, shocked whatever u may say….actually it was mixture of everything………..while mayank was just smiling seeing her cute and funny expressions……….

N: mayank…..ye kya kar rahe ho…….hato mujhe jaana hai………..

M: showing his cute dimples……kya kar raha hu matlab?.... main apni biwi ke saath romance kar raha hu………..moving closer to her and nupur spoke in order to stop him to do what he wants to do………….

N: ma….ya….nk ……..dekho …..tumhare liye yahi behthar hoga kit um mujhe abhi yaha se jane do……warna ………warna main tumhe nahi chodungi………..samjhe………..

M: main bhi tho yahi chahtha hu ki tum mujhe kabhi nahi chodo……….again in his nautanki tone………..vaise bhi mujhe pata hai ki meri nupur ko mujh par pura vishwaas hai aur vo ye bhi jaanthi hai ki uska pati aisa koi kaam nahi karega jis ki vajhe se uski nupur ka dil dukhe…………..

Mayank ne aaj tak aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya taaki uske biwi ko uspar shak karne ki zarrurat pade aur kabhi karega bhi nahi……………mujhe pata hai ki tum mujh par thoda gussa ho aur vo jald hi duur bhi ho jayega……….right?...........

N: wrong…………ab mujhe jane do ………..she was about to go out of his grip but mayank saw her move and moved even closer to her and kissed her cheek, eyes which were closed long ago………….he smiled at her fearful expression…………he slowly kissed her neck line which made her go weak and with his touch on her she lost the grip on file which was in her hands and she dropped them. Mayank was shocked to see his wife behaving this much strange with him. He thought 'she is behaving she wasn't aware of my touch on her and this is the first time I am kissing her….god what happened to her……why is she behaving like this…….'

Mayank spoke in order to get her back to this world……….

M: relax nupur………main tumhara pati hu and I have right to kiss you and y ru behaving in such strange manner as if I am stranger to you……….she opened her eyes and she scolded herself for behaving in such manner……she gained her senses and she saw mayank aiming at her lips he moved forward and just rubbed his lips with hers and nupur pushed him hard and went out of the room leaving mayank behind………

M: tum aaogi nupur mere paas zaroor aaogi………he smiled at his own sentence………

On the other side nupur started talking to herself " nupur tujhe ho kya gaya hai……achanak aise chup kyu ho gayi…….kuch to bol sakthi thi na……kyu nahi bola?...." she questioned herself but she got an answer from mayank who is behind her and listening to her silently……he whispered in her ears making her shiver………

M: kyunki tum mujhse pyaar karthi ho……bohut pyaar..........

Nupur turned suddenly and said

N: tum mere picha karna nahi chodoge kya?....

M: actually main tumhe apna file vapaas karne aaya tha……….looking into her eyes he continued again……jo tumhe meri kiss ki vajhe se niche gira diya…….he saw nupur blushing……

But she controlled herself and took her file from his hands….

M: ok then ab main chaltha hu…..baad main milenge…….

N: koi zarurat nahi hai baad main milne ki……..

M: aise kaise nahi hai……..aakhir mera kiss tho abhi bhi incomplete hai jo tumne complete karne nahi diya………

Nupur does not respond to his reply and taking as an advantage mayank gives her a sweet peck on her cheek and runs away before her speech starts by saying bye…..

Guys iam rushing as it is becoming very long and I don't want u people become bore……

Night :

Nupur forgot that she was staying with gunjan and dia after the drama but she was lost in her thoughts and she went to her house. After coming home she realized but now as she don't have any strength to go again there so she called up and informed them that she was home. After that she received another call and no one answered even though she asked who is that several times so she got irritated and disconnected the call and laid down on the couch. She was constantly thinking about mayank and the incident took place in the class room.

Guys I am so tired now and I cant even write a single word so please I will complete this in next part and I will update it as soon as possible ………please bear with me and I know I have to update my ff also …….but wait I will update that one also ………

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
nice nice..
really liked it dear
i hope ye mjht ka baby track jaldi khatam ho jaye..its getrting on my nerves..
and such an OS during such bad times is always wecome..
thanx for the pm
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hey bhagwaan.. kya ladki hai.. jaldi update maar.. achcha toh tha... kya kharabi dikhi issme tujhe.. ab jaldi complete karde isse..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
wonderful update!!!!
mayank was sooo cute.....loved him
kash aisa kuch serial mein dikhate.......par yeh namumkin hai!!!!!
anyway....really enjoyed it......waiting 4 ur next part...continue soon
thanks a lot 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
cont soon
thnx for pm
me waiting

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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
awseum blossom yaar....kaash serial mein b aisa hi ho....update it soon....eagerly waiting 4 da next part....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
it waz awesome do write more
luv
Fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Nice yaar
eagerly waiting for the next part
pls do cont soon

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