mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41)

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

nice update dear.. aur uss Sheena ke gande iraade sabke saamne lekar aana next update mein...

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

part 5-

after some days nupur is on the way 2 the studio when she sees sheena going towards a hotel.the hotel is quite a big hotel.she tells the driver 2 stop the car.she comes out of the car and follows sheena.she enters the hotel and she sees sheena talking to the receptionist.she hides and hears their conversation. sh-kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain ki room no 266 kahan hai? re-ji maam vo 2nd floor mein hai. sh-thank u!!! nupur hears all this and starts wondering"aakhir sheena ko yahan kya kaam hai??"

then she follows her through the stairs and reaches room no 266.she was just goin 2 knock when she sees tht the door is already open and sees that sheena is hugging another guy.she is completely shocked and hides herself so tht she is not caught hearing their conversation.

sh-sorry ankit aaj main late ho gayi.kya karoon traffic tha.

a-koi baat nahin babes tum aa gayi naa mere liye itna hi kaafi hai.vaise mujhe tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi thi.

sh-mujhe bhi.

and then they both were talking casually unaware tht the door is open and nupur was hearing everything outside.suddenly nupur moves a bit and bymistakely breaks a glass vase.sheena and ankit hear the sound and come out but by tht time nupur was already out of there.

a-lagta hai koi hamari baatein sun raha tha.sheena tumne darwaza band kyun nahin kiya tha???

sh-sorry bhool gayi thi.khair chodo main chalti hoon bye.

a-bye and ya i love u.

sh-i love u too baby!!and they hug each other

on the other side nupur comes out of the hotel in completely shocked state!!

n-aisa kaise ho sakta hai????sheena kaise kisi doosre ladke ke saath....hey bhagwan iska matlab sheena mayank ko dhoka de rahi hai!!lekin mujhe abhi bhi poori sachchai jaanni padegi!!

then at tht time she sees sheena coming out of the hotel and she goes 2 her but does not tell the driver 2 start.then she sees tht sheena got a call and she is talking 2 sme person.she tries hearing their conversation.

sh-kaam hone hi waala hai sir.main mayank sharma se shaadi karne ke baad uski property apne naam karlungi aur phir usse chhod dungi.vaise bhi kuch dinon baad hamari engagement hai aur phir uske kuch dinon baad hamari shaadi.aap chinta mat kijiye jaise hi mera kaam ho jaayega main usse chhod dungi aur yeh kaam bahut jald ho jaayega sir main aapse vaada karti hoon.vaise bhi mayank mere pyaar ke jaal mein phas chuka hai aur vo mujh par aankh band karke bharosa karta hai.bechara usse kya pata ki uski aisho aaram ab bas kuch hi dinon ki hai uske baad vo sab hamara hoga sirf hamara!!!

after finihing her conversation she turns behind and finds nupur standing beind her.she is shocked and is scared tht whether nupur has heard everything or not.

sh-n..nu...nupur .....tum....yahaan??

n-haan main kyun mujhe dekh kar tum hairaan kyun ho???mujhe yahaan nahin hona chahiye tha kya?

sh-ai...se...koi...baat....nahin...hai

n-sheena apni bakwaas band karo mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai.tum mayank ke bholepan ka faayda utha rahi ho.main keh rahi hoon aisa mat karo varna anjaam bahut bura hoga.

sh-kya karlogi tum zyaada se zyaada tum mayank ko sab kuch bata dogi aur tumhe lagta hai ki vo tumhara yakeen karlega.agar aisa soch rahi ho to aisa shayad tumhare sapnon mein hi hoga kyunki vo mujhe par aankh band karke bharosa karta hai aur vaise bhi tumhare paas kya saboot hai mere khilaf???kuch nahi isliye din mein sapne dekhna band karo aur chupchap apne kam se matlab rakho!!

nupur is fuming in anger but she controlled herself.

n-dekh lena sheena main tumhara aisa haal karungi ki kisi ke saamne tum muh dikhane layak bhi nahin rahogi aur yeh mera vaada hai tumse dekhlena.

sh-dekhte hain!!

and then they both go in the opposite direction.

nupur goes towards the car and starts thinking wht she has 2 do 2 save her best friend,the love of her life from going in a wrong way.she sat in the car and told the driver to go towards the studio.

precap-nupur gets 2 know tht ankit does not know about sheena's plan and gets 2 know tht she is doing two timing with ankit and mayank!!!

she makes a plan to trap sheena!!

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hey that was nice update but it was really short ......................and ya i am the first one to comment.👏.........do update sooooon...........

Edited by mayurg2010 - 15 years ago

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affu123

@affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

was a short 1 but was a nice1...lol sheena doing 2timing....thanks for the pm...

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Hi
lovely update
so sheena wants mayanks property, actually she doent love mayank
nups hearing all the conversation.
but i hope she could do something and maynk belive on her not sheena
great update.
keep updating

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

tht was a nice update.. ab aayega maza..

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

part 6a:

after 3 days nupur already knows about sheena's truth and has tried telling mayank so many times but he wasnt even ready to listen anything about sheena.and sheena was extremely happy about this.one day nupur and sanaya's shooting gets over fast and they decide to go for shopping.in the mall they are roaming and nupur sees ankit in front of her.she tells sanaya 2 go and she will be back in a few minutes.sanaya leaves and nupur starts following ankit.she stops ankit. n-ruko. ankit stops and turns behind to see nupur standing. a-ji aap kaun??are haan yaad aaya aap to kisi serial main aati hain rite????aapse milkar bahut khushi hui.vaise main hoon ankit. n-jaanti hoon.mujhe aapse kuch zaruri kaam hai a-kaise???aur aap ko mujhse kya kaam ho sakta hai??? n-kya hum coffee shop main bethkar baat kar sakte hain??? a-sure. then they both reach the coffee shop.they sit in a table and order 2 mugs of coffee.

n-aap sheena ko jaante hain na???

a-haan vo meri gf hai kyun???

n-kya???vo aapki gf hai????ab mujhe samajh mein aaya asli maajra kya hai.

a-ji mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha???😕

then nupur tells the whole story 2 ankit about sheena doing 2 timing with both of them.

a-aisa ho hi nahin sakta.meri sheena to bahut achchi hai aur vo mujhe kyun dhokha degi.jaanta hoon ki main thoda ameer nahin hoon par phir bhi vo mere saath aisa kyun karegi???vo to mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai,phir vo aisa kyun karegi??lekin main aapki baaton ka vishwas kaise karloon???

n-dekhiye main bhi jaanti hoon ki aapke liye in sab baaton par vishwas karna bahut mushkil hai lekin plzz aapko sachchai jaanne ke liye meri iss plan mein meri madad karni padegi.aap karenge na??

a-ji haan bilkul karunga.

n-thanks.

a-no probs.ab aap batayenge plan kya hai???

then nupur and ankit discuss a plan about revealig sheena's truth.

n-theek hai to yeh hai plan to aap theek 2 dinon baad sharma mansion aa jayenge vo bhi evening mein.

a-ji theek hai.

n-thanks aap nahin jaante ki aapke iss madad se aapne do zindagiyaan barbad hone se bachai hai.

a-koi baat nahin.maine sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki sheena mere saath aisa karegi.mujhe to sharm aa rahi hai ke maine iss ladki se pyar kia tha.

n-main aapke feelings ko samajhti hoon.then she sees tht sanaya is calling her in d cell.

n-achcha ab mujhe chalna hai,meri dost mera intezar kar rahi hogi.

a-achcha theek hai bye.

n-bye and she leaves the coffee shop.she reaches the place where sanaya is waiting for her and sanaya asks-kahan thi tum???pata hai itne mein maine kitni shopping kar li???achcha ab tujhe kuch khareedna hai???

n-nahin mujhe kuch nahin khareedna hai.sorry tujhe intezaar karna pada.

s-koi baat nahin vaise tu thi kahan?

n-tujhe sab kuch baad mein samajh aa jayega.ab chal bahut dair ho chuki hai.

s-haan chal.

and they go 2 their respective homes.

after 2 days

the director has given a holiday 2 all of them on account of mayank's engagement.mayank's parents come from delhi 2 mumbai as mayank had said that he wants his engagement in mumbai only.many relatives and friends have come.ghar aisa lag raha hai jaise bilkul shaadi ka ghar ho.

on the other hand nupur is ready with her full proof plan 2 reveal sheena's truth but is scared if the plan does not work out.but still she is 101% sure that this plan will work out.then sheena comes and taps nupur's shoulders.nupur comes out of her thoughts.

sh-kya hua nupur???itni pareshan kyun ho???

n-trying 2 control her😡says kuch nahin main to bahut khush hoon kyunki pareshan to tumhe hona chahiye kyunki tum hi to galat kaam kar rahi ho.

sh-main jo kuch bhi karoon tumhe isse kya???vaise bhi ab mayank mere jaal main phas gaya hai aur itni buri tarha se phasa hai ki nikal hi nahin paayega.tch tch tch bechara.

n-dekhte hain sheena.

sh-haan haan dekhte hain.

and she leaves from there.

n-ab main bhi dekhti hoon ki tum mayank ki zindagi kaise kharab karti ho kyunki isse pehle tumhara to.....tch tch tch.

and then in the evening

everyone is ready with colourful clothes.

mayank is wearing an orange sherwani

nupur is wearing a blue lehenga

sheena is wearing a yellow lehenga.

will nupur be able to break the engagement???

will mayank get 2 know the truth???

will nupur's plan be successful???

jaanne ke liye padhte rahiye sirf dosti ya kuch aur😛

thts it for 2day guys

hope u liked it

cmments and criticism appreciated

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

nice part...waiting 4 mayank to know the truth...

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affu123

@affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

thanks for the pm...was a nice part....lol sheena tch tch tch 😛 ...do pm me next time...

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

part 6b:

everyone are enjoying the party.after sometime mayank's dad announces

md-aaj ka din mere bete ke liye sabse khushi ka din hai.aakhir usse uska jeevansathi jo mila hai.sheena ek bahut hi achchi ladki hai aur main in dono ke liye bahut khush hoon.to der na karte hue sagai ki rasm shuru karte hain.

on the other side nupur is getting worried as ankit has not come yet.

n-yeh ankit kahan hai???abhi tak to usse aa jana chahiye tha.agar usne aane mein dair kardi to mayank ki zindagi barbaad ho jayegi aur sheena jeet jayegi.main aisa hargiz nahin hone doongi.par ab main kya karoon??agar maine sheena ki sachchai aise hi boldi to koi mera yakeen nahin karega aur mayank mujh par pehle se hi naraz hai.ab main kya karoon???and then she sees tht sheena and mayank r proceeding towards the centre of the hall and are holding the rings.

n-hey bhagwan yeh ankit kahan reh gaya???hey bhagwan koi chamatkar kalo bhagwan plzz koi chamatkar karlo.

and then when sheena and mayank were going to exchange the rings someone shouted "ruko"from behind interrupting the ceremony.it was none other than ankit.mayank and sheena turned and sheena was hell damn shocked seeing ankit.nupur thanked god for bringing ankit at the rite time

a-yeh sagai nahin ho sakti.yeh ladki dhokebaaz hai.aap isse sagai mat kijiye.

mayank was fuming in anger hearing all this from a stranger.he went forward and held ankit from his collar and asked him"kisne tumhe paise diye hain yeh sab meri sheena ke baare mein yeh sab batane ke liye???main tujhe usse 10 guna zyada paise doonga.aur teri himmat kaise hui uske baare main yeh sab kehne ki???tu hota kaun hai uska??"

a(freeing himself from mayank's grip)-main uska boyfriend hoon suna tune vo tujhe dhokha de rahi hai aur mere paas iska saboot bhi hai.

he takes a big bag from behind and opens it and starts dropping out all the things.

a-ab in sab cheezon ko dekhne ke baad dekhta hoon ki tum usse kaise sagai karte ho.

mayank and sheena both r hell damn shocked seeing the things which ankit had dropped from the bag.they were cards and photos.mayank saw all the photos of ankit and sheena close 2 each other and much more.he just couldnt believe what he was seeing.was it tht sheena whom he loved??

then ankit spoke-main jaanta hoon sheena ki main mayank ki tarha ameer nahin hoon magar haan aaj tumne saabit kar diya ki tum kisi insaan se nahin balki uske daulat se pyaar karti ho.sharm aa rahi hai mujhe ki maine tumse pyaar kiya tha.

sh-mayank yeh sab jhooth hai.main jaanti hoon yeh sab kisne kiya hoga.zarur nupur ne hi aisa kiya hoga kyunki vo hamesha se hi hamare relationship ko todna chahti thi.placing hand on his shoulders,mayank main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon yeh sab jhooth hai.

mayank removing her hands from his shoulders-jhooth nahin yeh sab sach hai.tum ek dhokebaaz ho suna tumne.vo to main hi tha jo tumhare pyaar ke jaal mein phas gaya.tumhari vajah se maine nupur ka vishwas nahin kiya.nikal jao yahan se isse pehle ki main tumhe ghar se bahar phek doon.and he leaves from there

sh-mayank plzz ruko and was going 2 follow him when she gets stopped by someone.yes,it was none other than nupur.

n-tumne suna nahin usne kya kaha.get out varna mujhe guards ko bulana padega.

sh-tumh to main and she raised her hands to slap nupur but mayank's mom stopped her hand and said

mm-theek kaha usne.just leave.

and sheena leaves angrily.

mm turns towards ankit and says thnx to him for saving her son's life from getting destroyed but ankit says that she shud thank nupur because nupur had planned all this.mm went to nupur and thanked her.

n-plzz aunty aap aisa kehke mujhe sharminda kar rahi hain.mayank mera dost hai.yeh to mera farz tha.

mm-jaao beta mayank ko tumhari zarurat hai.

n-par aunty....

mm-jaao beta

n-ji...and leaves from there

she goes to mayank's room and sees him tht he is heart broken and is crying very badly.nupur sits near him on the bed and puts her hand on his shouder.

n-mayank.....

mayank just hugs her and nupur hugs him back and is trying to console him.

m-aisa mere saath hi kyun hota hai nupur kyun??

n-mayank sheena achchi nahin thi aur tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki vo chali gayi

m-par nupur maine usse kitna pyaar kiya tha aur usne mere saath kya kiya....i hate her just hate her.

n-main jaanti hoon.vo tumhare layak nahin thi.

mayank breaks the hug and says sorry to nupur for not trusting her

n-its ok mayank aur vaise bhi dosti main no sorry aur no thanks.achcha ab bachchon ki tarha rona band karo and smile

m-thanks nupur

n-kisliye??

m-meri sabse achchi dost banne ke liye.

n-dost bhi kehte ho aur thnx??match nahin hota...

and they start laughing...

precap-mayank is realising tht he has started liking nupur(i know thoda jaldi ho gaya lekin mujhe unka romantic scenes likhne ke liye bechen hoon)

thts it for 2day guys

comments and criticism plzz

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