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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry will try 2 make the next part long
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Hi Sariska
it was short but lovely part.
loved mayur convo and recollection of their college life memory.
beautiful update.
keep updating.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
It was really good strt
Liked both the parts
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
very nice part...continue it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
hey sariska... nice update.. this pace is ok... make the update a bit longer
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3:
NOW IT WAS THE TIME WHEN ACADEMIC MEET MONTHS WERE GONNA BE SHOOTED!
nupur was extremely happy since now she nad mayank had 2 go 2 sme different sets<remember on woman's day sbs segment they showed arti and monaya in different sets>so they will be away from monaya for somewhat 2 months!and she will be able 2 know mayank's feelings!!
after sometime
mayank came 2 nupur's vanity van.
at tht time nupur was giving a final touch up 2 her make up!!!!
m-nupur tum pehle se hi itni khoobsurat ho to itna make up kyun laga rahi ho!!
n-jaise ki mujhe make up lagane ka bahut shauk hai!!!kya karoon make up artist ne kaha hai to karna padega!!!yahan kahan meri manmani chalti hai!!!
m-koi baat nahin!!!achcha suno....
n-hmm bolo
m-kya kal tum thodi jaldi aa sakti ho?
n-par kyun?
m-kuch kam hai isliye!!!
n-theek hai aa jaungi!
then the director calls them for d shot
m-chalo sir bula rahe hain
n-haan chalo
after they complete their shooting they go 2 their respective houses.
tht night
nupur was lying on the bed thinking mayank ne mujhe kal jaldi kyun bulaya hai????kya vo mujhse kuch kehna chahta hai??kya vo bhi mujhse...ab bas mayank mujhse aur sabr nahin ho raha hai chahe kal jo kuch bhi ho main mayank se apne dil ki baat keh kar rahungi...to kya hua ki agar har baar ladke apni dil ki baat kehte hain kal shayad history mein pehli baar hoga ki kisi ladki ne ek ladke ko apne dil ki baat pehle kahi!!!!!main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon mayank bahut pyaar!!!!!😳😳
and thinking about mayank she goes 2 sleep!!!
next day
nupur reaches half n hour early and goes 2 her make up room where she finds mayank already waiting for her!!!
m-kahan thi tum kab se tumhara intezaar kar raha tha??kahan reh gayi thi tum??/
n-vo....main traffic mein phas gayi thi isliye....srry
m-koi baat nahin
n-tumhe kuch kaam tha na?
m-haan mujhe tumhe kisi se milwana tha
n-kisse?
m-ek min ruko
then he goes out for sometime and comes back with a girl with him
m-nupur isse milo yeh sheena hai aur sheena yeh nupur hai!!
sh-hi
n-hi....mayank ye tumhari...
m-gf hai!!!!!
at tht moment nupur feels that the world is crushed for her and she cudnt believe her ears for what she was hearing!!!she thought tht mayank loved her but....
n-tum..tum..hari ...gf?
m-haan nupur aaj tak kisi ko nahin bataya tha vo kya hai na main tumhe sabse pehle batana chahta tha kyunki tum meri best friend ho na isliye!!
n-haan magar....yeh sab....kab hua?(she was trying 2 speak in normal tone as 2 try hiding her tears)
m-vo main aur sheena ek shaadi mein mile the aur tabse hum dost bane aur phir ekdusre se dheere dheere pyar karne lage aur maine ek din usse apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya!!!!!yehi thi hamari kahani!
n-oh...jaanti ho sheena tumne iss duniya ke sabse achche ladke se pyaar kiya hai!!vo tumhe bahut khush rakhega!!!!
sh-i know nupur....isliye to main isse bahut pyaar karti hoon!!!finally hum aaj mile nupur pata hai yeh kitna tumhaare baare mein bolta rehta tha!!main kabse intezaar kar rahi thi ki main tumse kab miloon!aur finally vo din aa gaya!!!tum bahut achchi ho nupur!!!
n-achcha ab mujhe taiyaar hona hai varna phirse daant khaani padegi!!
sh-ya sure tum taiyaar ho jaao baad mein milte hai!
and then mayank and sheena leave from there!!!
nupur closes the door and starts crying badly!she cudnt believe that the person whom she loved loved someone else!
n<while crying>-kyun mayank kyun kiya tumne mere saath aisa kyun??kya tumne mujhe sirf apna best friend maana tha???kya tumne mujhe kabhi uss nazar se nahin dekha???kyun mayank kyun tumne mujhe yeh sab pehle kyun nahin bataya kyun mayank kyun????tears were continuously rolling down from her eyes!!!she was sobbing and there was a knock in d door
she wiped her tears and tried 2 speak in a normal tone
n-kaun?
ma for make up artist
ma-nupur tum taiyaar hui ki nahin???mujhe make up shuru karna hai
n-ji bas 15 min
ma-theek hai and she leaves from there
nupur again starts crying
n-agar tum mujhse pyaar nahin karte to kya hua main tumse hamesha pyaar karti rahoongi chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye main tumhare aur sheena ke beech mein nahin aaungi!!!tumhaari khushi mein hi meri khushi hai!!!
and then she goes 2 get ready
precap-nupur getting emotional seeing mayank and sheena romancing
nupur finds out about sheena's plan!!
thts it for 2day guys
comments and criticism appreciated!!!
do reply!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear thanks for the pm was a nice update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
gr888 update....
feeling sad 4 nupsy...
continue it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
hey nice ff..
add me to pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
wowowow tht was different but i like it

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