mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41)

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

awesome concept and cs

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affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

nice 1 dear.....will be waiting for ur update...

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

here goes the first part

D for director

N for nupur

M for mayank

d-perfect!!!!!!!tum hi mere serial ki arti banogi!!!!!

n-thnx sir aap nahin jaante ki main bachpan se hi bahut badi heroine banna chahti thi!!!

d-lekin haan tum television mein nayi aane waali ho to logon ko tumse bahut expectations hongi aur jaise ki tumhe pata hai ki tumhara character bahut hi bubbly hai to yeh youngsters ko bahut attract karega!!!!!!!isliye u hv 2 live up 2 our expectations!!!!!

n-dont worry sir!!!!aap bhi kya yaad rakhenge ki aapne nupur bhushan ko select kiya tha!!!!!!

d-suno kal tum 9:00 baje tak studio pahunch jaana kyunki kal tum apni co-actors se milogi aur phir humlog title song ki shooting karenge!!!

n-theek hai sir!!!!!i promise aapko mujhse koi shikayat nahin hogi!

next day

d-sab log aa gaye lekin ye nupur kahan reh gayi???

just then nupur arrives

d-kahan reh gayi thi tum?

n-so sorry sir traffic mein phas gayi thi!

d-koi baat nahin chalo tumhe apne co actors se milwaata hoon.

then they both go 2 a place where the whole crew is there

d-attention everyone miliey hamari serial ki arti ko!!!

then the director is introducin everyone 2 nupur and then suddenly he calls a tall handsome guy who was busy talkin with sanaya and mohit<samrat and gunjan>

d- milo tumhare co star se!!!!yeh hai....

m-miss dramaqueen...nupur bhushan

n-mr.cool nerd...mayank sharma

then they both hug each other jaise kitne lambein dinon baad mile hon.both were taken aback!!!

m-kahan chali gayi thi tum?kitna dhoonda maine tumhe!!

n-kya karoon mujhe jaana pada!!!!

m-koi baat nahin ab itne saalon baad mile hain ab tumhe kahin door nahin jaane dunga

nupur was very happy as she thought she wud never be able 2 meet mayank

on the other side everyone were shocked amused everythin at the same time seein them talkin so nicely as if they noe each other very well!!!

then mayur realised tht ppl were staring at them

m&n-aap log aise kyun ghoor rahe hain????

d-tum log ek doosre ko jaante ho????

m-haan bahut achchi tarha se

d-kaise?

n-vo kya hai na ki hum log college se hi ek doosre ko jaante hain hum ek doosre ke best friends the!!!!!!!

everyone-oh

then mohit and sanaya come 2 meet nupur

mohit-hi im mohit aur mein samrat ka role play kar raha hoon

sanaya-main sanaya hoon aur mein tumhari behen ka role play karungi!!!!badi waali nahin chhoti waali!!!!

m-aur mein arjun ka role play karunga jo tumhara bf hoga!!

when nupur heard tht mayank was gonna play his opposite she herself was very happy becs in dis way she cud spend time with him!!!

n-nice meetin u ppl!!!!!

m-to aaj se hum sab friends hain na rite???

everyone-rite!!

then nupur meets other characters like benji uday dia etc

then they r busy talkin and knowing abt each other!!!

then the director comes

d-lagta hai bahut dair ho chuki hai isliye tum sab log kal 7:00 baje aa jana!!!title song ki shooting karni hai!!!!

everyone-ji sir

then everyone leaves for home but mayur still wanna talk 2 each other so nupur tells mayank 2 cme 2 her house for smetime!!!!!

precap-mayur cherish their old moments in college!!!!!first day for shooting!!!everyone enjoyin abt each other!!!!gunur and sayank know more abt each other!!!

thts it for 2day guys!!!

guys plzz this is my first ff so i know it wont be so gud but i promise ill try writing much better!!!!!

comments and chappals accepted!!!!

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

heyyyyyy first to comment
concept was good and even the part is also good but little bit short
please next time when u update make it long..................
and ya the part was really nice/...........

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

very good part...continue it soon...

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Aisha

@mayur_shanak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

awesome update keep it up n ya thanks for the pm n continue soon

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Hi
nice part.
its quite different.
loved both mayank and nups cahr
good job dear.
keep it up
and add me to ur PM list

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

awesome part yr

loved it a lot

cont sooon

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

nice concept dear.. add me to your PM list and Pm me when u update!!

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

part 2:

finally they reach nupur's house!!!!!mayank is happy 2 see tht nupur still keeps her house tht much clean and keeps her movie collections carefully!!!

m-nupur tum abhi bhi nahin badli!!!

n-matlab?

m-matlab yeh ke tum aaj bhi apne ghar ko itna saaf rakhti ho aur apne movie collections ko itne carefully rakhte ho!!

n-haan mujhe apne collections se bahut pyar hai.tum baitho main coffee banakar laati hoon!!

m-lagta hai mere kaan baj rahe hain???nupur bhushan aur coffee???lagta hai aaj suraj galat disha se uga hai

nupur hitting mayank

n-mayank kya karoon karna padta hai akeli rehti hoon isliye!!!tum baitho main coffee laati hoon!!

then she goes 2 the kitchen and brings 2 mugs of coffee.she gives a cup 2 mayank and asks howz it?

m-ummm....iss duniya ki second best coffee hai kyunki first place to mera hai na!!

then they start laughin

n-yaad hai mayank hamare college ke din??kitna maza karte the hum log!!kaise tumne ek baar mere saath class bunk kiya tha,kaise humne princi ke cabin se unke favorite plant ka ek phool liya tha,kaise tumne ek baar kisi aur ko nupur kehke bulaya tha.yaad hai tumhe???

m-haan nupur mujhe sab yaad hai!!!!!mujhe to yeh bhi yaad hai ki tumhara pehla din college mein,jis tarha se tum dari hui thi,hamara jhagde sab yaad hai mujhe!!

n-by god kya din the woh!!!!hamari zindagi ki sabse haseen din the woh!!!

m-haan nupur sahi kaha tumne!!!!!!!aur ab hum mjht ke through apne college ke saare din jee sakte hain

n-haan mayank yeh show hamari zindagi badal dega!

m-main to iss baat se khush hoon ki hum ek doosre ke saath kaam karenge!!!

n-bilkul sahi!

m-lagta hai bahut der ho gayi hai mujhe jaana padega kuchh kaam hai ok bye!

n-bye aur haan kal milte hain!!!bye

then nupur opens the door and mayank leaves

nupur closes the door and goes 2 her room!!!!2day is d best day of her life!she met mayank,her first love after so many years!!thinkin abt all these she slept!!!!

next day:

everyone reaches the studio and r given their scripts

after their makeup nupur and sanaya r learnin in d vanity van

n-by god yeh dialogues achche to hain par apne aap ko hi screen par portray karna kitna mushkil hota hai!!

s-usse kai zyada mushkil to koi aur character portray karna hota hai jisse apna koi mail hi naa ho!!!!!yeh gunjan ka character itna boring kyun hai??

n-vo to director se puchna padega!!!!!

and both share a laugh

then the director calls both the girls for their first shot

d-tum dono taiyaar to ho??

n&s-jii sir!!!!

d-lights camera action

the scene is like in d college when samrat makes fun of gunji and she gets scared and she talks 2 nupur tht yeh mumbai bohat hi bada shehar hai and so on

d-perfect shot!!agar tum log aise hi apne characters ko portray karoge to main kehta hoon ki yeh show aur bhi popular hota jaayega!!!!

everyone smile

mayank comes towards nupur and says:tum to bachpan se hi dramebaaz ho to tumhe complement dene ki koi zarurat nahin hai!!

n-vo to hai!!!

and then they go for preparing for d next scene!!

like this few months go and all of dem r gettin 2 noe abt each other more!!!!

thts it for 2day guys

hope u like it!!!

comments and criticism welcum!

note:guys shud i proceed the story fast becs i want 2 bring sheena and sme twists in d story!!!!

wht shud i do???shud i proceed the story fast or in a slow motion???