AR FF: Fatal End ? Pt 12 Pg 109 11/10 :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

hahahah...mein kya karoon. i can't update this fic when I am in a very funny mood nahin to yeh fic bhi funny ban jayegi.😆😆😆..aur yeh kaisa idea diya hai mere ko...Ekta kapoor ka serial..they were my dose of laugter..voh dekha to update aur late ho jayega...😆😆😆

ufffff tu naa... main kya karo tera😛.... kaise din aagaye hain... mere dost mujhse request kar rahe hai ki main usse udaas karo... 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: kavyaa

ufffff tu naa... main kya karo tera😛.... kaise din aagaye hain... mere dost mujhse request kar rahe hai ki main usse udaas karo... 🤣

mere kucch mat karo...aur mujhe udas karne ka to sochna bhi mat.😆. I just want a pheeling of udaasi not the whole udaasi..I guess it's time to listen to my playlist of dard- bhare songs..😆 to get the emocions...😆

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462044

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

mere kucch mat karo...aur mujhe udas karne ka to sochna bhi mat.😆. I just want a pheeling of udaasi not the whole udaasi..I guess it's time to listen to my playlist of dard- bhare songs..😆 to get the emocions...😆

hehehe lol yeah i guess dat can giv yu d pheeling of sadness.... lol jaldi update kare nai toh main kattee ho jaongi...😈😆😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

heyyy
sry for not commenting before
was busy
but i jus luved da part
cont soooon

harneet <3

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anumeha khanna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

my my....awsum part...

loved drunk ridz soooo much...

she looks so adorable teaching him hw to say sory...

n he finally confessed his feelings...

i dont want her in grey shad plzzzzzzzz.........

thnx for the pm..............

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Angel_shilpa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

just read ur ff

luved it

add me to ur pm list

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: repercussion
Awesome lol...awww...she did't even bother considering that Armaan just confessed his love to her!lol...that was pretty clever of you! And like you said most probably Riddhima is just a part of web of deception not a female with grey shades.Well, let's hope so...but it'd be interesting to find how it all began in the first place within the upcoming parts. The prologue pretty much puts firth that Armaan, while in his doubts, has been unfair to his wife all along. Take your time... but i wudn't mind slipping in a "Continue Soon" nonetheless. Have a nice day!

thanks dear..she was total talli, so she had no idea what she was saying or hearing.😆. "clever of me"-I like it..😛😳..Definitely she won't remember the confession in the morning, that's the reason of making her drunk in the first place..😛..the grey shades, on Reader's demand has taken a back seat but the misunderstandings will be there..aur uske liye Sahil hai na...lol..I hope I have not disclose the story now..😆..glad to know you enjoyed the update..

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: princess_rashmi
the part was fabulous, luved the Ar moments
it was too romantic

continue soon

thanks for the pm

thanks Rashmi..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
me too, enjoyed writing the AR moments..😳

loads of love...
Mel..

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: Medzi_ARian...
OMG this was very nice! I loved it! Riddhima better NOT be a grey character. I can't imagine Riddhima Mallik being bad! I really liked the drunk part. Poor Armaan. Riddhima ke ishaaron par naachna pad raha hain. LOLzzz! But that 'I am sorry' part was really cute. Ahhhhhhhh! Armaan accepted his feelings! Yippa! Flashback ke andar flashback? Yeh kaisi story hain yaar? LOLzzz! Anyways, please update soon, and thanks for the PM.

Note: DO NOT MAKE RIDDHIMA A GREY CHARACTER!

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update...not making her a bad character, but misunderstandings will be there, I hope that's okay..if not, let me know, I'll put on my thinking cap to come up with something else..😆
Totally when Riddhima is drunk, Armaan has no other option but to follow her orders..😆..yes he accepted his feelings..what a relief to the writer..😆.. yippaaaa! from my side too😆...
arey the intro is the present when Riddhima is in the hospital, the after marriage is the flashback and the before marriage scenes are the flashback within the marriage flashback..I hope the confusion is clear now..nahin to main confused ho jaongi..😆..

loads of love..
Mel..

PS: I loved your way of writing note so here's my reply in PS "won't make her grey character..chalega na?"

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
hiiiii
awesome update

lovedit

poor armaan

feel bad 4 him

loved da drunken ridzy

cant wait 4 ridzy past

con soon

good luch with exams

thanks 4 da pm

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
totally, poor Armaan
you know reading "poor Armaan" made me realized that in most of my fics, the guy suffers a lot and reason being none other than Riddhima..kucch karna padega mere ko..😆..
Riddhima's past will be out from the next update..
thanks for the wishes,😳 I am done with the exams..oh gosh what a relief..😆

loads of love...
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
OMG such cute update..gosh i hope ridz is not bad and she is not hurting armaans feeling....and their drunk talking was so cute...cant wait to read more..update soon and thankx 4 the pm..
❤️MONA

thanks Mona..glad to know you enjoyed the update..she was supposed to have grey shades but on reader's demand, I have dropped the idea..but Armaan's feeling are gonna get hurt..how? that you'll get to know as the story progresses.😉.even I enjoyed writing the drunk scene..😳

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG
Nice Update

and totally loved the drunk riddhima and also, the last scene. Adorable! loll and gluck for exams..and lets hope we get an update from you very soon

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..the drunk scene was fun to write..even I enjoyed it..
thanks for the wishes😳..papers were good, Now waiting for the results..😃..

loads of love..
Mel..

Edited by Caramel_21 - 14 years ago