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Posted: 14 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: imshveta
Cool update. But I think I liked the last one better where both of them did so much masti.
Good luck for your exams.
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Shveta

thanks Shveta..glad to know you enjoyed the update..me too, the last one for me was much much much better then this update but the drunken scene in this update was fun to write..😊..
thanks for the wishes, my exams went well..😃

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

Awesomeee part! Cont soon!

thanks Ashu...glad to know you enjoyed the update..

loads of love...
Mel...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: Suvarna....
Oh yes, Ridz cannot be a negative character. In the intro, she is hurt and Armaan is crying shows that she is a positive character. Though, am not understanding why Rahul-Riddhima love story and engagement stuff was introduced. Am sure you will tie it back.

Why is Sahil trying to create a rift between AR? And why is Armaan so negative about his true feelings for Riddhima?

Phew many questions and a long wait. All the best for your exams.

Cheers,

Suvarna

thanks Suvarna..glad to know you enjoyed the update..going with the majority, I am not turning her exactly into a negative character but misunderstandings may come up in their relationship, I hope it's okay now...if still not liking the storyline, do let me know and I'll change it..😳..
About Rahul- riddhima , as I'll be starting with the flashback from the next update..you'll get to know it pretty soon..
Sahil's history and what happened in the past will be out in the next couple of update..so keep reading..😉..
thanks for the wishes, I am done with the exam for the time being and the papers went well..😃

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: lil_mizz_shawty
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Hey great update! Can't believe Armaan's confessed!!! So happy though, ohhh bet Ridz isn't going to remember...
She seemed really cute when she was drunk though, lol I always love the way a drunk riddhima behaves.

"I love you nahin baba.."

This was really cute, she's completely oblivious to the fact that he's confessed instead she's obsessed with him saying sorry lol

Ugh this Sahil is getting on my nerves, he had to fill crap in Armaan's head, although I like angry Armaan I don't want Ridzy crying again...I mean their love story has just started

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update...when I started writing this part even I didn't knew that i'll be writing the confession in this update😆..
totally, she won't remember at all..that's why I made her have drinks in the first place..😆..
Writing about drunk Riddhima and Armaan's patience level was fun, can so imagine how Armaan must be feeling seeing Riddhima drunk..😛..
Sahil is getting on everybody's nerve 😆but he is the baddie, so I can't let him go other wise who is gonna continue the story and AR's love story, I need a character to bring them closer and in this fic it''s Sahil..so...I have no other option but to make him stay...😉😆...

loads of love..
Mel..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: arshluver_15
Hey Mel
that was great part.........so finaly armaan said I love you to ridhima i hope that she rember what she did and heard while she was drunk............i hope that the truth comes out soon............

cont soon

thanks for the pm

nruti

thanks Nruti..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
yes, he confessed but to a drunken Riddhima and she won't remember it for now..😳..
the truth will be out soon as the story will progress..

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome update
loved it
armaan said i love u
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

thanks dear...glad to know you enjoyed the update..
yes he confessed but she was not in her senses as she was drunk..😊..

loads of love..
Mel..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#544

oye r yu updating abhi??

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Posted: 14 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: swetha10
lovely update.. liked AR moments.. continue soon

thanks Swetha...glad to know you enjoyed the update...

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: MizAngelz
OMG!!! Awsum part !!! luvd it!! AR r sooo cuteeeee!! just luv dem!

Fanx 4 da PM nd cont soon..😊

thanks Megha..glad to know you enjoyed the update...Definitely..AR make a very cute couple...😳

loads of love..
Mel..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: kavyaa
oye r yu updating abhi??

I am stuck in the middle of the update...that sadness feeling is not coming,😆 so I don't think I'll be able to update today..
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#547

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

I am stuck in the middle of the update...that sadness feeling is not coming,😆 so I don't think I'll be able to update today..
😆

okay i'll kick yu so dat yu can move ahead & update... here comes mah kick...

so hw do yu feel nw?? better na😛😆😆.... nw i guess yu'll be able 2 write easily & so update...😈😆😆

btw nw yu can get d sadness feeling easily... nai??🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: kavyaa

okay i'll kick yu so dat yu can move ahead & update... here comes mah kick...

so hw do yu feel nw?? better na😛😆😆.... nw i guess yu'll be able 2 write easily & so update...😈😆😆

btw nw yu can get d sadness feeling easily... nai??🤣

why is everyone so interested in kicking me?😕...and if just this simple kick was enough to get the idea.. I would have done it long time back...so this kicking won't help in this case..kucch aur idea hai to batao...😛
idea nahin chalega to pheeling 😆bhi nahin ayega...and more than feeling sad, I am laughing...seeing the emo..😆

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Originally posted by: Caramel_21

why is everyone so interested in kicking me?😕...and if just this simple kick was enough to get the idea.. I would have done it long time back...so this kicking won't help in this case..kucch aur idea hai to batao...😛
idea nahin chalega to pheeling 😆bhi nahin ayega...and more than feeling sad, I am laughing...seeing the emo..😆

mommeee u'v left m speechless😛😆😆😆.... abe ya hasana toh mujhe aata hai... par rulao kaise?? hehehe ja ekta kapoor ka koi serial dekh rona aa jayega....🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kavyaa

mommeee u'v left m speechless😆.... abe ya hasana toh mujhe aata hai... par rulao kaise?? hehehe ja ekta kapoor ka koi serial dekh rona aa jayega....🤣

hahahah...mein kya karoon. i can't update this fic when I am in a very funny mood nahin to yeh fic bhi funny ban jayegi.😆😆😆..aur yeh kaisa idea diya hai mere ko...Ekta kapoor ka serial..they were my dose of laugter..voh dekha to update aur late ho jayega...😆😆😆

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