AR FF: Fatal End ? Pt 12 Pg 109 11/10 :) - Page 50

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

EDITED
hayye hayyye...ghor paap..... kya zamana hai...larki or villan.....😆😆.. let me add some dramatic effects from my side .. Hai Ram..yeh kya ho gaya..Larki aur Villia..Larki aur Villian..Larki aur Villian..Nahin..Nahin..Nahin..🤣
sorry Mel just wanted to add these dramatic effects...lol..maine bhi add kar diye hai..😆
Hey Mel..how r u...:) I am okay..how are you? (in a somber mood now...) well wah wahh i'm shocked to see the update soon..:) shock laga na..haha..I am sooo Happy...😆
the part was amazing...:) it was really cute..awwwwwwwwww AR..<3 they r adorable....<3 Armaan planned out a date for her..n took her to amusement part..wowww i'm impressed...:) i luv it..<3 glad to know you enjoyed the date😳
but how cute.he's scared to go on rides cuz he puked on his friend on the ride...lamo😆😆
luved his antics to avoid the rides...lol but can't believe he agreed..awwwwww luv when he confessed his fears from rides on the ride...Ridz laughed at him...hawwwwwwwwww😲 lol just wanted to show some light moments between them..I was tired of writing the rondu riddhima in the previous updates..😆
but omg...the shocking part...the end... Ridz as villan...can't imagine..isn't her looks r too sweet to be a villan..but they say that look can decieve..they can kil n never judge a person from looks...:)... Riddhima as villian..shocking to hona hi tha..aakhir idea kiska tha😆.. and your blessings were also with me..😆.. about looks..when I write I don't picture their image so it may be a bit difficult to assume them as playing baddies..😊
but omg...is she really...i don't want her to be...:( i want AR love story................... (where is my AR LS demanding squad...bhag gaye...dhoke baaz....!!!!!!!!) if she doesn't play a villian. how am I gonna continue with the story..think about the writer also.. *making a puppy face*
luved the part...:) have to give credit to ur shatir dimaag...wahh wahh..:).. ohh I love this word "shatir"..when it comes to studies ,I don't know where it goes..chalo koi nhi..I am happy using my shatir brain in fiction..😆
(i dont know why am i soo hyper to day...sooo forgive pleaseee).. it's good to be hyper sometimes...a change is always welcome..😃
thanx for the pm n cont soon..:)
tc :)
Preet <3

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: repercussion

I had loved the stability that came along with the last 2-3 parts after the kidnapping scene....but then it was too early to say "COUPLE" for Riddhima...I don't get her..her inner thoughts don't quite match your baddie thing...but then the story is yet to unfold...or maybe Riddhima would retreat later on once she realizes that special something budding between them! Well...I'm eager to read more... but I'd expected that something's up with the way they are finally finding solace in each other...but the last bit was still unexpected! Continue soon..nd pls consider putting me on ur pm list...!Have a nice day!

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss

Originally posted by: sammy4u

they enjoyed together

that's simply great

armaan's reason was really hilarious

yeh sahil kya bakwas kar raha tha.

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg

hiiii
i jus luved da part
now cant wait for nxt prt :P
lol

harneet <3

Originally posted by: prachi_mjht

mindblowing update

Originally posted by: angelina_2005

hey loved d part................

new twist cmg ...

update soon :)

thnx for d pm

Originally posted by: amruta04

hey Mel awesome update loved it ending is soo shocking can ridz b a villian ?? ff is getting interesting waiting for the next update do continue soontake care and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: aishar

Confused!!
nice part though!!!

continue soon!

Originally posted by: DRarmaanfan

hey nice part

Originally posted by: ADITI3310_AR

hi.....
saw ur ff today only and it's so damn awesome that read it in one go!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
luved it,especially the twists and turns it takes in almost every part,also a li'll confused about this 'sahil' person,but i know everything will b crystal clear as the story unfolds so plzzzzzzzzzz updates soon......i'm waiting terribly😍
u'r a great writer, 👏 i soooooooo luved everything,i don't know but i think that sahil is a liar anyways upadte soon and plzzzz try and don't make riddhima the ultimate "villain" i know i'm asking for too much but plzzz try and make it a 'happily ever after'
bye,take care

P.S. was going through the comments and i think by "wrat" ur frnd 'barry' meant "vrat as in fast"........😊

Originally posted by: disha4life

just read this ff.. n ride date was awesome.... plz add me in ur pm list..

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

awww...that was such a cute part...

loved it alot....

AR enjoying....n armi idea to nt to go for rides...

amazing...

loved the whole part...

bt the end has made me more then curious for wats next.........

thnx for the pm.................

Originally posted by: Jinalee114

hey mel!

lovely update

it was really sweet of armaan 2 bring riddhima 2 the amusement park eventhough he does like 2 go there n also 2 go on the ride when he was so afraid of thm 😳

the first half of their date was really cute ❤️

n is sahil lying 2 telling the truth abt riddhima?? 😲 i hope something really bad doesn't happen

n noooooo the khadoos armaan is going 2 b back! 😲 i was really liking the caring n sweet armaan 😭...well i hope everything solves out so thn the sweet n caring armaan will come back again 😳

update another part soon!

tc! 😃

Originally posted by: arshluver_15

Mel..
that was great part.........truly loved it...........cont soon
thanks for the pm
lods of love
nruti

Originally posted by: bary

ab toh new year resolution bhi copy kya zamana aagaya😆..I wasn't copying your new year resolution, I was supporting it..but what is this? you haven't sung a single song after that.. resloution gaya bhaad mein ?😆..itni jaldi..😕
arey wrat,u know pooja wrat,upawas wrat,how do i say in K-language(Ekta Language)😆actually this spelling may do some good Vrat.. samajh aa gaya mere ko..Ab I was pronouncing it with "w", so got a bit conphused..😆..Vrat complete karti hoon na in this update..tension nahin lene ka..apun hai ha?😆 *munna bhai got into me*
How Cara"mel" of u to u choose Amusement park when all the readers(well commonly,but i do think many specimen can possibly reading this one)are thinking of one romantic beach night dinner
but u are damn good at surprises,i love this one,amusement park indeed fresh thought over romantic dinner.. I know it's so caramelicious of me😆 to chose Amusement park. I wanted to avoid the candle night, to park aya mere dimag mein and I wrote it..glad to know you enjoyed it.😳.
ARMAAN MALLIK afraid of rides???😲😲😲.. three times shock..don't tell me you were watching some Drama this time while writing this..😆
oh god the darkest secret ever😆... hai na..like Dark chocolate. Hai rabba..😛
HELL NO FOR UR FEMALE LEAD TURNING BADDIE,as i said i can even like armaan as a baddie but not riddhima not becoz she is heroine or any thing,but it just takes away the feel of story because all this time is for a not right person n u did wrote on her version in start,it totally changes the feel of it also ofcourse make armaan one dumb witt one to fall for a lady like her if she is like one u want to create,hope my lecture is enough for u to get back to ur senses,well do make riddhima baddie infront of armaan,so u know i can have arrogant armaan😍 but yeah dont make her bad in real u know misunderstanding with interesting turns are always welcome😳

your this whole para, made me think about my storyline and..ab mein kya boloon..zor ka jhatka de diya mere ko.. I need to work on my strategies again.😆.let me see what I can do..but very ishmart hain..Arogant Armaan ke liye, it's okay to make her baddie..😆..sahi hai..😛..you read the next few parts and if not liking the storyline, let me know and I'll change it.. don't worry our favorite Khadoos Armaan will be there.😍.I can't let go of him..
uff i need some water after this big class😆.. hai rabba me too.., I want some water now..😆
so signing off from the page... 😆 me too😛
melove
swetha😊

loads of love..
Mel..

PS: where are the SRK's siggies..you removed all of them??why?? kyun?? aisa kya kar diya SRK ne?😆