AR FF: Fatal End ? Pt 12 Pg 109 11/10 :)

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

they enjoyed together

that's simply great

armaan's reason was really hilarious

yeh sahil kya bakwas kar raha tha.

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unknown.

@unknown.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

hiiii
i jus luved da part
now cant wait for nxt prt :P
lol

harneet <3

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saloni

@angelina_2005

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

hey loved d part................

new twist cmg ...

update soon :)

thnx for d pm

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: bary
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seriously mel u are embarrassing me..lol
u are a cheater tune meri hatrick ka wrat tod diya..hmph

haha..you are not updating your fics..so get embarrassed..btw when are you planning to update it ;P
teri hatrick ke chakkar mein, the part got delayed..you were not online yesterday to main kya karoon..

inteha ho gayi..intezaar ki
aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar kiiiiiii......hmph...😡
*song dedicated to you..in support of your new year resolution of singing..😆*..

PS: btw what is "wrat", mere ko samajh nahin aya😕

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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

hey Mel awesome update loved it ending is soo shocking can ridz b a villian ?? ff is getting interesting waiting for the next update do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.

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Aditi Sharma

@ADITI.SHARMA_03

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#476

hi.....
saw ur ff today only and it's so damn awesome that read it in one go!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
luved it,especially the twists and turns it takes in almost every part,also a li'll confused about this 'sahil' person,but i know everything will b crystal clear as the story unfolds so plzzzzzzzzzz updates soon......i'm waiting terribly😍
u'r a great writer, 👏 i soooooooo luved everything,i don't know but i think that sahil is a liar anyways upadte soon and plzzzz try and don't make riddhima the ultimate "villain" i know i'm asking for too much but plzzz try and make it a 'happily ever after'
bye,take care

P.S. was going through the comments and i think by "wrat" ur frnd 'barry' meant "vrat as in fast"........😊

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disha

@Gloriosaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#477

just read this ff.. n ride date was awesome.... plz add me in ur pm list..

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

awww...that was such a cute part...

loved it alot....

AR enjoying....n armi idea to nt to go for rides...

amazing...

loved the whole part...

bt the end has made me more then curious for wats next.........

thnx for the pm.................

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Jinalee

@Jinalee114

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Posted: 14 years ago

#479

hey mel!

lovely update

it was really sweet of armaan 2 bring riddhima 2 the amusement park eventhough he does like 2 go there n also 2 go on the ride when he was so afraid of thm 😳

the first half of their date was really cute ❤️

n is sahil lying 2 telling the truth abt riddhima?? 😲 i hope something really bad doesn't happen

n noooooo the khadoos armaan is going 2 b back! 😲 i was really liking the caring n sweet armaan 😭...well i hope everything solves out so thn the sweet n caring armaan will come back again 😳

update another part soon!

tc! 😃