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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: kavyaa

shock lagaaaaa hayyee lagaaaa 😆

awesomeeeee😃... shooo cute ya..... luved d AR date part... hayye amy's shooo cute😉... luv dis sweet amy.... such a sweetheart😊...
& ridz as a villain hmmmmm interesting😉.... i wn mind her 2 be a villain bt she shud be a positive villain i mean she shud hv a justifiable reason 4 her act of villain... i wn mind seeing ridz as d villain bt dn make her character wid negetive shades... i hope u r getting wat m trying 2 say...
anyways it wud be interesting 2 see ridz as a villain... in d end it'll be ur call 2 turn her character any howsoever ways... no pressures hun,... m sure i'd luv watever u'll write....
& one more thing u nvr fail 2 shock me wid ur awesome updates😃... hw do u write so gud?? raaz bata he de aaj ya😆😆😆... hehe lol..

hey tanvi..shock lagaaa na..😆 glad to know you enjoyed the update...me too enjoyed writing AR's date. "armaan and cute"..I am sure after the next update I won't hear this at all..😆...
Riddhima is the villian..well that's what the ending says isn't? but let's see how the story shapes up from now on..😉
I was thinking of turning her into ekta's serial kinda vamp..you know making those big eyes and playing with hair all the time..😛😆 and you want me to make her a positive villian..hmmm sochna padege mere ko..😆..
mere awesome updates..hayyyeee..itna accha compliment..😍...I love you sooo much for this..😆...
raaz bata diya to gadbad ho jaaeyegi...someone can take advantage of this Raaz..😆.yeh Raaz, Raaz hi rehne dooo..shhhh..😛😆..

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

thats all i can say

i'm speechless

thanks Ashu..glad to know you enjoyed the update..so you like the new twist??

loads of love...
Mel..

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: imshveta
Are you actually going to show Ridhima in the negative? But why? I am sure there can be many other turns and twists that you can think of. But this. It was something I never expectEd. But can't say I did not like it. I loved it. But I still have some apprehensions about it.
But I loved the way Armaan took her onthe first date. I live thrill rides too. I can totally feel Ridhima's excitement. Please update the next part soon
Love
Shveta

hey Shveta..glad to know you enjoyed the update..hmm about Riddhima playing a negative character, that's what I have thought or I should say- I had planned initially.
Off course there can be different ways and.. well I can't say much right now coz the story has reached to a point from where I can take it in any direction..let's see what finally comes out from this small brain of mine.. ;P ..As you loved it, so I think I am on the right track? let me post few more parts and if you don't like the storyline, let me know and I'll change it.
I love amusement parks, though I avoid sitting on the high-speed round ones coz by the time the ride ends, my head starts spinning but I have never puked on anyone ;D..Looks like you love these kinda thrilling rides..isn't? So you full-on scream while riding or enjoy sitting silently?

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: lil_mizz_shawty
Great update! I can't believe Ridzy is gonna be negative! Please don't make it too heart wrenching cuz I don't want to see their love story taking two steps back! Btw the whole amusement park date is totally unique it was great! Cont soon!

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update and the date..yes, for the time being, she'll be having some grey shades and this is just the start.😛.the love track will develop as the story progresses but it won't take the story back for sure..😃

loads of love..
Mel..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Great update! I can't believe Ridzy is gonna be negative! Please don't make it too heart wrenching cuz I don't want to see their love story taking two steps back! Btw the whole amusement park date is totally unique it was great! Cont soon!

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Medzi_ARian...
Awesome update! Armaan and Riddhima are soo cute! Armaan is very sweet. He really took her to an amusement park? That is soo sweet of him! Like really. He's scared of rides? That IS a breaking news for me! Armaan Mallik-the business tycoon is scared of RIDES! ROFL! Riddhima is very cute. I loved the way she pulled his cheeks. That was a very cute gesture. What on earth is up with this Sahil? Has he been filling his ears or what? I can't imagine Riddhima being the bad one! I really can't! Please make Sahil a liar, please? With a cherry on the top? LOL! And yes, is this FF gonna have a sad ending like 'Lucky... Who? Me?' Please say no. Anyways, thanks for the PM, and please update super soon.

thanks dear...glad to know you enjoyed the part..yes he took her to an amusement park in spite of the fact that he is scared..he is so in love with her..but I won' t let him admit it so easily.😆..
Sahil is the villain of the fic which I am sure you must have guessed by now.😉..let see whether he is actually filling his ears or Riddhima is the biggest player.😉..
no i won't kill them in this fic..that was just one time..not Again..😳

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
Hiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved AR date
So armaan is scared of rides
Soooo cute
Loved Armaans story of vomiting on his friend
Hilerious
Can't wait 4 da karoos armaan
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
He puked on his friend two times, so now he is very scared of rides..
me too..I love writing "khadoos Armaan"..😆

loads of love..
Mel..

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: rising_angel
yayyy u update ....update was super awesome....and their date was just so much fun ....lol armaan scared of rides...

Last part was unexpected...I dont belive ridz can be villian ...but why is armaan playing games...I wont belive anything now..because u will give us something totally unexpected and out of world..

thx 4 pm

yayyyy..I updated..😆..thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..even I enjoyed writing about their date..yes..he is scared of rides.😆..
last part was unexpected...totally na? yipeee..😆..Riddhima is playing a baddie in the fic.. now I have officially told you.so yeah..believe it.. "expect the unexpected", I love this line so there's going to be twist and turn in future also😉..

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
wow, that ending left me thinking lol..can ridz really be a bigger player than armaan lol??something surpriding to think abot lol..well the amusment park was cute lol haha armaan puked on his friend twice cause of silly rides, but despite that he did it for ridz how cute...cant wait to read more...thankx 4 the pm..update soon.
❤️MONA

thanks Mona..the last line depicts this only, so Riddhima 'a bigger player' maybe or maybe not.😉..you know I won't let it out so easily and quickly..😆..the date part was fun to write...glad to know you enjoyed the update.

loads of love..
Mel..

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Caramel_21
omg i think i am gonna get heart attack..lol
bas jab dekho...want Dr. Armaan, is baar I am sending Dr. Shubhankar 😆chalo kaam chala loonga shubankar se,u know usse Dr.Armaan ka number poochonga😆
editted,uff it good to be first n wanna do hatrick for this ff,so help me n do say the exact moment or some moments before u update,cheating is allowed if it makes me happy😆...let me see what I can do..usually I update at this time only..so Online aa jaana..this time..if you want to come first..😉yeah next time pakka😉
expect the unexpected,the new slogan of mel😆...totally man..cool na..😛
ok on the whole sweet part,really not much happen,u are too inspired by the serials i bet n i miss my flash backs n khadoos😆....when I was in school, I enjoyed and loved K-serials..so I am very inspired by them..okay the truth is-my t.v. timings coincided with her shows, so I had no other option available..😛 don't worry khadoos Armaan is coming back very soon..😉
Abhi is the reason why armaan lost his faith in love,now why is that,bechare ne aisa kya kiya armaan ke saath,i hope not balatkaar😆 sorry poor joke ... now you are reading in between the lines, I thought nobody will notice this line...hmmm..kucch karna padega mere ko...😆...u know i wont leave any thing back😆 and your joke is seriously very poor... aur koi line nahin milli then making Abhi rape him... hai rabba..😲 ..shocking man...what are you watching now-a-days?actually when i wrote this,i was watching Big Boss😆 but see itna soch ke main joke maara kam se kam mazaak toh mat banao🤣
not even when she got to know about the truth of sahil-well need an explanation in next part,u cant release tid bits of ur in-saneness like this n making us the same as u😆... didn't you read my line- it's the silence before the storm..waah..waah..kya line boli maine..😛.. we are just about to know the truth anytime in any update.. Expect the unexpected..😆kuch suna suna lag raha hain
the catching hand was sweet but the bit flash back of bed scene took the cake😆...thank you..glad to know you enjoyed it..😳Flash back holds a freshness in your story they are like small oxygen releases
OMG,i am so ashamed to confess but i do the same,i duvet never be on me in morning,my mom says i pull hers after throwing mines n all the nights we guys drag each other for our parts of duvet,i am like are u serious n she is like video lagao,i shouted NO n gave up agreeing what ever she said😆

this happened with me once and the whole night I was like- why my cousin sis is pulling my duvet and not using hers which got cleared in the morning when I came to know that I had thrown mine on my other cousin sis and I was pulling hers all the night..the whole night got over in pulling the duvet😆we both are two hope less girl i say,damn i shiver like hell in winter n all because i am so serious in covering the floor than my self😆
where did he took her?ofcourse i know u wont say me😆... you know still asking..bata do kya?😉i do talk about this in next reply
u too many updates making me feel shame n thinking i should update mine too,uff am i turning in to like mel??😕😆..
don't turn like me..this is just a temporary phrase..ek baar my professors get into their groove..I'll be back to my usual self of lateness..😆...
one more LOL day😆
love u
swetha😊

loads of love..
Mel.. 😆 *From my side too.*😆

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swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

haha..you are not updating your fics..so get embarrassed..btw when are you planning to update it ;P
teri hatrick ke chakkar mein, the part got delayed..you were not online yesterday to main kya karoon..

inteha ho gayi..intezaar ki
aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar kiiiiiii......hmph...😡
*song dedicated to you..in support of your new year resolution of singing..😆*..

PS: btw what is "wrat", mere ko samajh nahin aya😕

ab toh new year resolution bhi copy kya zamana aagaya😆
arey wrat,u know pooja wrat,upawas wrat,how do i say in K-language(Ekta Language)😆actually this spelling may do some good Vrat
How Cara"mel" of u to u choose Amusement park when all the readers(well commonly,but i do think many specimen can possibly reading this one)are thinking of one romantic beach night dinner
but u are damn good at surprises,i love this one,amusement park indeed fresh thought over romantic dinner
ARMAAN MALLIK afraid of rides???😲😲😲
oh god the darkest secret ever😆
HELL NO FOR UR FEMALE LEAD TURNING BADDIE,as i said i can even like armaan as a baddie but not riddhima not becoz she is heroine or any thing,but it just takes away the feel of story because all this time is for a not right person n u did wrote on her version in start,it totally changes the feel of it also ofcourse make armaan one dumb witt one to fall for a lady like her if she is like one u want to create,hope my lecture is enough for u to get back to ur senses,well do make riddhima baddie infront of armaan,so u know i can have arrogant armaan😍 but yeah dont make her bad in real u know misunderstanding with interesting turns are always welcome😳
uff i need some water after this big class😆
so signing off from the page
love
swetha😊

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jannat4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#488

just read this ff
AWESOME ................
i totally loved the concept n the story!
nd plz add me to ur pm list......

lots of love!
take care!
jannat

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome update
loved it
riddhima negative
loving it
armaan is scared of rides
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
Riddhima and negative..yes..that's what the ending said..😉.
Armaan scared of rides..yes totally..😆..

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG
AWEEEHH loved AR's date but the ending is a SHOCKER and a CLIFFHANGER!
You better update soon missy lol

i wonder if sahils lying or riddhima is villian...but oh well the storys getting veryy interesting so w.e it is...im excitedd :)

and lovedd armaan in here...and i can totally understand his fears on not sitting on rides since ive got the same problem loll

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
I wanted the ending to be unexpected and shocker too..😆, so my work is done here..
let see, who is the liar here- Sahil or Riddhima😉...who do you think?
don't tell me you avoid sitting on the rides. So only the fast ones or all the rides?I avoid the fast- round ones, rest I can handle..😆

loads of love..
Mel..

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: Cutiepie_KSG
awesome update ... wow wat a date😳 ..armaan scare of rides😆...and ridhimas excitement wow wow ..but end is confusing ridhima in a bad light🤔...update soon please...thanx for the pm :)

H@rry

thanks Harry..glad to know you enjoyed the update..
yes, Armaan is scared of rides .something new isn't?😆..
Riddhima and negative..why not? I am sure the next few updates will clear your confusion😊 , if not you are free to ask me.😳

loads of love..
Mel..