Mayur FF-Nafrat se Mohabbat #2 Part 17-pg72

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Shivani

@SHINKI

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

wow

it was ausam

rocking

emotion

lovely

funny

sab kuch thaa

and pls

itna tareef ke iska matlab ye nahi ke saat we aasman par pahuch jaoo aur update late karo

so pls update it soon

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

brilliant update hun....i m speechless.plzzz bring back my romantic mayur asap.dying to see them..😊update soon hun..

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#443

promise that u'll update soon
and yr reveal the truth of that dreaded day
wat happened between adhiraj and nupur??

continue REAL soon

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#444

Finally...u r back ......thank God.......i was missing ur updates sooo muchh.......coming to the part.....it was super gr88.......love arjun so muucchhh..........

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

lovely update
it was so touchy
hope nupur will forgive him soon
do cont soon

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Marium

@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#446

superb part

especially Arjun roller no loller🤣

loved it

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#447

Hey MayuLLati.... that was a superlb update... i really wish that they open their heart out and speak and they come together again... and the LRollelr Coaterl Lllllllllrrrrrrride was just LOLfing....

Very nice and cute update!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#448

very nice dear...but dont take much time next time....update sooner.....okay... love ya jeni!

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#449

amazing update nidzy .............loved it lots ....................

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fahi

@fahi91

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#450

Hey Nidzy,

Wonderful update... it was sooo cute.. I like how Mayank spoke from his heart and Nupur heard it..

And Arjun... how ever much i talk about him is not enuf.... he is the sweetest, cutest lil thing ever... have never seen the kid but the way u describe him, i love him.. he is just adorable..

The way he unknowinglly embarasses Mayur is the best... all that stuff at the dining table had me in splits.. 😆

Aww man Nupur is still determined to leave Mayank? 😒

Rati and Arjun are a great pair... they are a bundle of joy.. i love reading their parts.. their fights and arguments and Arjun trying to pronounce 'R'.. i tell u the way u wrote all that was just fabulous. Do u have any small kids of that age in ur house by any chance? coz u have written his way of talking so perfectly.. 👏

Coming to the last part.. was nice that Nupur was opening up to him about Arjun but was all the more sad coz of the effect it had on Mayank.. his guilt is eating away at him and even Nupur feels bad now... when is she gonna forgive him? Even she was waiting for his touch on her skin and was disappointed when he backed off so why is she holding her heart back? She knows how much he loves her and he is sorry and she also loves him deeply.. i wish she could just put the past behind her and move on... if not for the sake of her love then at least for Arjun who is so attatched to his dad now..

Anyways.. fabulous update.. continue soon..😃

Edited by pagli91 - 15 years ago

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