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RUBA SIDDIQUI

@RUBA-SIDDIQUI

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Posted: 15 years ago

#751

Hey di
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

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ruts18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#752

hey firstly sorry for not commenting

actually i could not read ur ff as i was in pune and my mother was admitted in hospital

she had a cancer and needed to be operated

today i read ur parts

it was amazing simply amazing

and from now i will definitely comment

I AM REALLY SORRY

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Riddhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#753

heyyy dear,
when r u planning to
update next part
update soon

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#754

PART 16 on PAGE 114

THANKS NOTE

Hey guys,
How are you all?
Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).
I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did make my day, thanks :D

Though, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy and I would get more busy after a month and half. I hope you guys aren't agree with for this fact but once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked this part of the FF and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts too. :)

Everybody who commented, your response was really overwhelming :).

If you guys have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember. :)

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

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Posted: 15 years ago

#755

Hey that was an outstanding FF

Well, I have read all your FFs and one shots only two are incomplete or in process

I have also send u buddy request, so that U can pm me

so dear, please continue soon and add me in ur pm list

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#756

PART 16 on PAGE 114

PART 17

Armaan smiled looking at Ridhima, she had the power to cheer up anyone in a second. "I am so happy that there is at least someone is on my side" Atul said happily and with a big smile.

"Dance?" he said forwarding his hand, waiting for her response.

Smiling slightly, she put her hand in his. The smooth music started playing in the background. They moved closer to each other. Her one hand was safely placed in his and the other on his shoulder, meanwhile his other hand was placed on her waist.

Slowly slowly, the distance between them decreased, her arms were now around his neck and his arms around his chest.

"I love you Ridhima" he whispered near her lips.

She gasped. Looking in his eyes, she confessed "I love you too"

Their lips were a few centimeters away, they could feel each other's breath. That moment was making their heartbeat rise.

***Buzz*** ***Buzz***

With a thumb, he fell down on the floor as the alarm started buzzing. 'Oh My God! Armaan what were you dreaming about?' he asked himself.

Though, he couldn't deny but he loved his dream and was hoping for it to become reality. Even though, he knew it was next to impossible as the girl in question loved someone else and he truly could do anything to see her smiling and happy.

The next day, they went to visit various places along Shekhar. They went to the London bridge, Tower of London. They were completely enjoying.

Rahul and Muskaan roamed together, with their hands entangled. Meanwhile, Armaan and Ridhima walked together, admiring the places. Finally, Shekhar walked behind all of them, making photos of the places as well as of everyone.

It had been so long that they had gone somewhere out and now that they were out, they felt really good. "It feels so good to be out from house after so many days" Ridhima declared while sitting in the back seat.

"I agree" Armaan seconded, fasting his seat belt and looking at her through the rear mirror. She was looking so relaxed after so many days and he liked this fact.

Seeing her like this, he made a mental not to take her out every week for some fresh air. Be it a place nearby if not far.

All he wanted was to see her happy and relaxed. He could see that he was succeeding. Moroever, Ridhima's company was the best for him.

"guys, what about dinner in McDonald's?" Rahul suggested and all agreed.

Armaan drove toward the McDonald's, parking the car, all came out. Making their way in, the girls sat at the table.

The men made their way to the counter, as Rahul and Armaan knew what the girls wanted. They didn't need to ask them, they just knew them so well.

After few minutes, all of three came back. Armaan placed a tray and sat on the opposite side of Ridhima. The same goes for Rahul and Muskaan. Whilst, Shekhar was sitting on the right side of Rahul.

"here is your meal" Armaan said, placing filet-o-fish, diet coke, french fries and Sundae Caramel in front of her.

"thank you" Ridhima said, smile but then she noticed, he had just brought a filet-o-fish for himself. "why haven't you bought Sundae, coke and french fries for you?" She gave him a questioning look.

"because, I am going to share with you, do you mind?" He said, raising his brow as in asking her reply.

"of course, I don't mind" she said with a wide smile.

Rahul and Muskaan looked at them, admiring their bond. They knew, Armaan loved her, they can see it but they can also see some sort of feelings blossoming in Ridhima.

Armaan and Ridhima shared the Sundae Ice-cream, the coke and the french fries while having fun. As is, Ridhima was about to pick up a few french fries but before she could, Armaan picked up the packet teasingly.

This made, Ridhima glare at him. "you look so cute like this" he said, giggling and stuffing few french fries in her mouth.

Her mouth was replete, she chewed them and asked "what was this?"

"you wanted to have french fries so I made you eat them" he said casually, gulping down a french fry.

Ridhima took the packet of french fries from his hand and stuffed few in his mouth. He was looking stunned and so cute with his mouth full that she couldn't help but giggle. All of them joined her in giggling, as indeed he was looking so cute as well as funny.

As Armaan noticed so much eyes on his, he chewed and swallowed them down. "that was a payback" Ridhima grinned.

He didn't mind this sort of payback, if he would get to see her smile. Actually, he was even ready to be a clown, only to see her smiling.

Ruffling his hairs sheepishly, he continued eating and teasing her. Once they were done, they made their way at home.

Few days later, they came from their formation lessons and were now sitting in the sitting room.

"Armaan, I didn't understand few points today" Ridhima said, upset. Hard she had tried but she couldn't.

"there is nothing to be worried in it. Let's go in your room, I'll explain them to you" Armaan said standing up and making his way in her room, with Ridhima following him.

As Armaan and Ridhima had left, Shekhar asked to Rahul "can I ask a personal question?"

"yeah" Rahul replied with a confused look. He wondered what the personal could be.

"Does these two love each other?" asked Shekhar. He had observed the bond between Armaan and Ridhima but he didn't want to jump to the conclusion without confirmation.

"As for now, it's one sided and I hope I will be two sided soon. Shekhar, please don't mention this to anyone" Rahul answered his question, and sort of ordered him the last bit.

Shekhar nodded, anyways it wasn't like he had a choice. He was their employee and he had to follow their orders. Not that he minded as the Mallik's were one of the best employee in the world.

Armaan sat on her bed and took her note-book. "ok here..." he explained her the whole procedure.

"wow, Armaan, you are genius" she said, giving him a hug as she understood what she was trying to do from few hours.

As soon as she hugged him, a current of electricity passed through his whole body. 'breath in, breath out' Armaan told himself, as he felt his breath stuck in his throat.

Only she had this effect on him. He had hugged several female friends but they never effected him in any way and he knew why, the reason was that he loved Ridhima and she was really special for him.

"Ridhima, can I ask you a question?" he asked looking her longingly, wishing to hold her eternally in his arms, but he knew maybe it wasn't in his destiny.

Placing her note-back aside, she said "Armaan, why are you being formal. You can ask me whatever you want" she glared at him fist but then smiled.

Armaan took flashed a smile back and asked "Are you missing Abhimanyu?".

This question was so sudden, she didn't expected this. It left her shocked for a while but then she replied with a smile "I'll answer to you question at the right time."

He was confused at her response but left everything on time. Ridhima looked at him and smiled. He was one of the best human on the earth.

If only, she could realize that he was 'the one' for her. For sure, she'll realize this one day. Be it sooner or later.

Some days later, Armaan and Rahul were in their room getting ready as well as Shekher, to go for formation. Meanwhile, Muskaan and Ridhima were all ready and were sitting in the hall.

"Ridhima, it's Armaan and Rahul's birthday tomorrow" Muskaan said, looking at Ridhima.

Hearing this news, she got stunned, not because it was Armaan's birthday but because it was Rahul's birthday. "I knew it's Armaan's birthday tomorrow but I didn't know about Rahul" she said, admitting the fact which confused her.

Muskaan stood up and made her way to Ridhima "oh my God, you didn't know Armaan and Rahul are nonidentical twins" Muskaan exclaimed.

This news really was truly a surprise for Ridhima. All she knew about Armaan and Rahul was that Armaan is elder and Rahul younger. She never asked anything more neither they mentioned anything.

"nobody told me" Ridhima said with a pout.

"maybe, that didn't crossed their minds. You must have noticed they are among those who don't speak a lot about their life. It's not like they don't want to tell someone about their personal life but they are just not used about it" Muskaan said casually.

Ridhima couldn't agree more. She had noticed, especially for Armaan, he never talked a lot about his life to other persons still he told a lot of things about his family to her. She concluded, he must have forgotten the fact that he and Rahul were twins. Anyways, this wasn't a fact at all to be angry with him.

"so what's the plan" Ridhima asked, knowing Muskaan so well gave her the hint, Muskaan had a super plan cooked up in her mind.

Moving forward, Muskaan whispered something in Ridhima ear. As Muskaan moved back, they looked at each other face with a naughty smile and hi-fived.

Soon they were joined an all left for their formation. Ridhima and Muskaan waiting for the moment when they'll put their plan in action.

It was midnight, Rahul and Armaan were sleeping peacefully. Not knowing what was awaiting them.

Their sleep got broken as they heard something falling down. They stood up, worried for the girls, thinking that some thief might have entered in their apartment.

Both made their way out, and checked their room, which was empty. That added more to their worry. "where are they?" Rahul said, running a hand in his hairs.

"let's check the apartment" Armaan said, concerned.

Rahul nodded and both checked the apartment in quick motion. As they reached in the hall, they heard a shriek. Making Rahul and Armaan scared. Armaan rushed to turn the light on.

As they turned the light on, they were surprised. Nothing had happened the sort of thinks they had imagined a while. Seeing both Ridhima and Muskaan standing there with mischievous smile, they sighed with relief. The hall was decorated, it seemed as it was someone's birthday. Then they noticed a cake placed on the table, with 'Happy Birthday Armaan and Rahul' written on it.

Armaan and Rahul looked at each other and it dawned to them, it was there own birthday they were really surprised. A while back they were so shocked, not finding the girls in their room but now they were pleasantly surprised and happy.

"you both scared us" Armaan declared, pretending to glare at them.

The girls chuckled and Muskaan said "well, we are sure now that you won't forget this birthday of yours"

Both girls moved forward and wished them "happy birthday". They hugged Armaan and Rahul. All they missed at the moment was their rest of family. Still, this moment was like a dream.

Rahul had been surprised by the girl he loved and Armaan by the girl he loved. No matter, if she didn't love him but for sure he wasn't going to forget this birthday.

One minute their breath was stuck somewhere and the next minute they were surprised, happily by the girls.

The next second, the phone rang. Ridhima picked it up and smiled hearing the voice. Armaan and Rahul were confused, they didn't know who was on the phone.

"here" Ridhima moved toward them and out the voice on, so all of them could hear the conversation.

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARMAAN-RAHUL" came the wishes from the other end.

Armaan and Rahul realized it was their parents, along Atul and Anjali. Even if they had something else that day, it would have been granted.
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Hey guys,
Finally, here is the next part, I hope you liked it :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D

Sejal719 asked me if this Ridhima has the same weight as Ridhima of the show? The answer is no, In the show Ridhima is slim but in my FF she weighed 75 Kgs and now she weighs 68 Kgs. So her weight is more than the Ridhima in the show. I hope I cleared this fact, if not then guys down't hesitate asking me questions.

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in August (Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D).

Please leave your comments, even a word, good or bad-Or even please press the 'like' button. As your comments mean a lot to me, they encourage me to write further :).
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Luv u<333
Kashish

Edited by kashishk - 15 years ago

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 15 years ago

#757

Hey Faz

nice update dear ...loved it ... wow !! its Armaan n Rahul's Bday ...
hope it turns an amazing one ...

I wonder if ridz actually has hint that she's in love with Armaan ?

Continue soon.. .

Love
Vini

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517780

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Posted: 15 years ago

#758

wonderful part. hope riddhima tells him ' i love u' on armaan's birthday.

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#759

Hey Sis!!!
A tremendous update!
Truly enjoyed reaeing it!
Surprising to know about Rahul and Armaan!
N when I read the begenning I was like WHOA!!
But it was only a dream! :(
But its k all will be well!!!
Love ya!!

Jinsz!